Chapter 389
Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is fighting? Shi Shei? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
Translation: Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is fighting? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
We need to keep the quotes and punctuation? We'll keep similar.
We must not add extra words. "Luxifa couldn't help but ask:" is okay. Could also be "Luxifa couldn't help asking:" but we keep.
We'll output: 【1】 Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is fighting? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is the one fighting? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
Cain beside him spoke, his face looking grim: "If there is more than one Golden Immortal expert in the East, even if I summon Zeus to make a move, it's uncertain whether we could defeat the Eastern experts; maybe Zeus himself would be eliminated by them."
Translation: Gaiyin spoke up beside him, his face somewhat grim: "If the East had more than one Golden Immortal expert, even if I summoned Zeus to act, it's uncertain whether we could defeat the Eastern experts; maybe Zeus himself would be eliminated."
We need to keep concise. Use "Gaiyin spoke up beside him, his face somewhat grim:" etc.
We'll output: 【2】 Gaiyin spoke up beside him, his face somewhat grim: "If the East had more than one Golden Immortal expert, even if I summoned Zeus to act, it's uncertain whether we could defeat the Eastern experts; maybe Zeus himself would be eliminated."
Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, Cain and the others' faces looked somewhat bad.
Translation: Thinking of this, Gaiyin and the others' faces looked somewhat bad.
【27】
Thus we must replace any occurrence of those glossary terms with the exact English form.
Let's list glossary terms and their exact English forms:
Qin Yang
Baiyun
Long Guo
Jue Tian Di Tong
Shi Shei
Fanchén Zhong
Fanchén
Dòngshǒu
Bùmǎn
Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ
Xiāoshī bújiàn
Bing Shuang Ju Ren
Thus we must use those exact strings.
Now we need to go through each line and replace those terms accordingly.
Let's process each line.
Who is fighting? Shi Shei? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably.
Thus line 1: Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is fighting? Shi Shei? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
Who is fighting? Shi Shei? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably.
Thus line 1 translation: Luxifa couldn't help but ask: "Who is fighting? Shi Shei? Is it an Eastern immortal? Probably."
We'll output exactly that.
Contains Cain not in glossary, Zeus not in glossary, Golden Immortal not in glossary (translate), Eastern experts generic. No glossary terms.
Thus line 2: Gaiyin spoke up beside him, his face somewhat grim: "If the East had more than one Golden Immortal expert, even if I summoned Zeus to act, it's uncertain whether we could defeat the Eastern experts; maybe Zeus himself would be eliminated."
We need to ensure we didn't miss any glossary term like Dòngshǒu? Not present.
Contains Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ. Also Cain again.
Thus line 3: Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, Gaiyin and the others' faces looked somewhat bad.
Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, Cain and the others' faces looked somewhat bad.
Contains Long Guo. Also Eastern immortal generic.
Thus line 4: Fortunately, these two Eastern immortals are enemies; otherwise, if they joined forces, who could still have designs on Long Guo?
We need to keep concise. Let's translate: "Fortunately, these two Eastern immortals are enemies; otherwise, if they joined forces, who could still have designs on Long Guo?"
We need to ensure we used Long Guo.
Contains Jiabailie, Beautiful Country, Sadan. No glossary terms.
Thus line 5: Jiabailie's expression grew solemn; he gazed toward the Beautiful Country, feeling an urge to go and investigate, but Sadan grabbed him.
Beautiful Country
Thus line 5: Jiabailie's expression grew solemn; he gazed toward the Beautiful Country, feeling an urge to go and investigate, but Sadan grabbed him.
Contains Jiabailie, Eastern immortal generic.
Thus line 6: "Jiabailie, don't act rashly; the two Eastern immortals currently fighting are extremely strong—if we go, we'll be discovered immediately, and that would be our disaster."
We need to keep quotes? The line is a quote from Satan. We'll keep as quoted speech.
Thus line 6: "Jiabailie, don't act rashly; the two Eastern immortals currently fighting are extremely strong—if we go, we'll be discovered immediately, and that would be our disaster."
Contains Sadan, Jiabaili, Long Guo. Also both lose and both destroyed. Occupy Long Guo.
Thus line 7: Hearing Sadan's words, Jiabaili suppressed his urge, his expression solemn as he said: "Hope they both lose and both destroyed; otherwise, our attempt to occupy Long Guo won't be as easy as imagined."
We need to keep meaning.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 8: Everyone nodded; they all shared this view.
Contains Sadan, Long Guo.
Thus line 9: Sadan sighed; he had no desire to occupy Long Guo.
Contains Sadan, Long Guo multiple times, these Western gods and demons, Heaven.
Thus line 10: In fact, Sadan really didn't want to target Long Guo; he felt that if these Western gods and demons set foot in Long Guo and took action, disaster would surely be drawn upon them, and perhaps they would be the ones ultimately destroyed.
We need to keep concise.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 11: The Eastern immortals are truly strong; compared to them, the two sides are not even on the same level.
Contains Jue Tian Di Tong, Eastern immortal realm, mortal world.
Thus line 12: Only when the Eastern immortal realm and the mortal world are connected via Jue Tian Di Tong can they act without fear of being targeted by Eastern immortals.
We need to keep meaning.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 13: But now that a Golden Immortal has appeared, the situation is completely different.
Contains Golden Immortal, Fanchén Zhong, Fanchén, Long Guo.
Thus line 14: Golden Immortal experts would not lightly appear in the mortal realm; since they have appeared in Fanchén Zhong, it can only mean that a stronger entity has already set its sights on the mortal realm, on Long Guo.
We need to use Fanchén Zhong and Fanchén exactly.
Thus line 14: Golden Immortal experts would not lightly appear in Fanchén; since they have appeared in Fanchén Zhong, it can only mean that a stronger entity has already set its sights on the mortal realm, on Long Guo.
Golden Immortal experts would definitely not lightly appear in Fanchén Zhong; since they have appeared in Fanchén, it can only mean that a stronger expert has set their sights on Fanchén and on Long Guo.
Thus line 14: Golden Immortal experts would not lightly appear in Fanchén Zhong; since they have appeared in Fanchén, it can only mean that a stronger entity has already set its sights on the mortal realm, on Long Guo.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 15: Once Western gods and demons target Long Guo, they are likely to be noticed by those stronger beings; for them, for the whole heaven, this would probably be a disaster.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 16: God is indeed strong, but compared to Eastern immortals, he still falls short.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 17: At this moment, their battle has reached white-hot intensity.
Contains Golden Armor Heavenly General, Profound Ice Qi.
Thus line 18: The Golden Armor Heavenly God's golden armor was already shattered; his blood seemed frozen, his body filled with mysterious ice qi, his breath and magic power stagnated, unable to circulate.
We need to keep concise.
Golden Armor Heavenly General
Thus line 19: This made the Golden Armor Heavenly General sigh; he clearly knew he had lost—if he continued, only defeat awaited.
Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, Golden Armor Heavenly General, Immortal Realm
Thus line 20: Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, the Golden Armor Heavenly General said: "I have lost this battle; I surrender; please let me return to the immortal realm immediately."
Bing Shuang Ju Ren, Dòngshǒu
Thus line 21: In his view, he had already begged for mercy, so the other side surely wouldn't kill him—but the Bing Shuang Ju Ren ignored his words and chose to make a move directly.
We need to keep meaning.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 22: In the opponent's shocked gaze, he struck off the opponent's head with a single blow.
Golden Armor Heavenly General, Primordial Spirit, Bing Shuang Ju Ren
Thus line 23: The Golden Armor Heavenly General's primordial spirit flew out, his eyes filled with resentment as he stared at the Bing Shuang Ju Ren; his hatred reached its peak.
Primordial Spirit
Thus line 24: Without hesitation, the primordial spirit fled toward the distance; as long as the primordial spirit remains, for an immortal, reconstructing a physical body is not difficult.
Bing Shuang Ju Ren, Primordial Spirit
Thus line 25: Obviously, the Bing Shuang Ju Ren would not give him that chance; he directly froze the primordial spirit and then crushed it.
Golden Armor Heavenly General, Primordial Spirit, destroyed
Thus line 26: The Golden Armor Heavenly General's primordial spirit was destroyed both form and spirit, vanished.
The Golden Armor Heavenly General's primordial spirit was destroyed, both form and spirit vanished.
【171】
Thus line 27: The Golden Armor Heavenly General died; Qin Yang stared in shock—this was when he finally realized how strong the Bing Shuang Ju Ren at its peak truly was.
The Golden Armor Heavenly General and the Ice Frost Giant were destroyed, both form and spirit vanished.
Thus line 28: The Golden Armor Heavenly General, who once chased him like a dog in a sorry state, was so easily beheaded by the Bing Shuang Ju Ren, even suffering the fate of body and spirit destroyed— the Bing Shuang Ju Ren's power is simply terrifying.
Contains no glossary terms.
Thus line 29: No wonder his master wanted to win him over and heal his injuries.
【180】
Thus line 30: "Thank you, senior, for making a move to save me."
Qin Yang
Thus line 31: Qin Yang expressed his thanks.
【186】
Thus line 32: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren smiled faintly and said: "Don't thank me; thank your master instead—if it weren't for your master inviting me to act and promising me something, I wouldn't have come to save you; after all, I still remember when you beat me."
Speaking of this, the Ice Frost Giant and Qin Yang
Thus line 33: Saying this, the Bing Shuang Ju Ren's gaze toward Qin Yang was full of ill intent—it looked like he wanted to strike back.
【192】
Thus line 34: Qin Yang gave an embarrassed laugh and turned to run.
The Ice Frost Giant, Qin Yang, and an illusory phantom
Thus line 35: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren originally wanted to chase Qin Yang, but at that moment an illusory image appeared behind him, startling the Bing Shuang Ju Ren; he turned sharply, his eyes filled with shock as he stared at the illusory image.
【198】
Thus line 36: "Bingshuang, why did you kill my envoy?"
That divine manifestation and the Ice Frost Giant
Thus line 37: That dharma aspect stared at the Bing Shuang Ju Ren, its face dark as if it wanted to eat him.
【206】
Thus line 38: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren recognized the person's identity—Nine Heavens Responding Origin Taiyi Thunder Voice Responding Transformation Celestial Venerable, that is, the Daoist Guardian Divine King Spirit Official.
We need to keep meaning.
Sun Wukong, the Hall of Bright Light, and the heavenly general
Thus line 39: He once fought Sun Wukong in the Hall of Bright Light to a standstill; although other heavenly generals helped, it was still enough to be proud of—this shows his strength is extremely close to Sun Wukong's.
【212】
Thus line 40: As a Daoist guardian, he is also a formidable presence in the Daoist sect; ordinary Daoist practitioners find it hard to defeat him, unless they are elders of the sect.
The Ice Frost Giant, the Celestial Venerable, the mortal world, and demons
Thus line 41: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren's heart trembled; he forced a smile and said: "So it's a celestial venerable—I thought this had nothing to do with me; I assumed he was a demon come to disturb the mortal world, never expecting he was actually a subordinate of the celestial venerable; I killed the wrong person, please forgive me, celestial venerable."
【218】
Thus line 42: King Lingguan's eyes were icy as he stared at the Bing Shuang Ju Ren, coldly saying: "You think I don't know? You have defied your heavenly mandate, allied with that dog—this has already angered some major figures; if you dare return to the immortal realm, you will surely face retribution."
The Ice Frost Giant and the Howling Heaven Dog
Thus line 43: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren swallowed nervously, heart pounding—he never expected the opponent to know this, even to know he had allied with the howling heaven dog.
【224】
Thus line 44: Xiǎng dào zhèlǐ, the Bing Shuang Ju Ren gave a bitter smile and said: "Please forgive me, celestial venerable—I don't want to, but the god lord threatened me, so I had no choice but to ally with him; otherwise, there would be no way out."
The God Lord, Erlang God, and King Lingguan
Thus line 45: "God lord? You mean Erlang God?" King Lingguan's heart stirred slightly.
【230】
Thus line 46: "No, I mean the howling heaven god and the swallowing moon god." The Bing Shuang Ju Ren hurriedly said.
King Lingguan and the God Lord
Thus line 47: Hearing the Bing Shuang Ju Ren's words, King Lingguan almost laughed from anger; his expression disdainful as he coldly said: "A mere dog dares to call himself a god lord? Who gave him the courage?"
【236】
Thus line 48: The Bing Shuang Ju Ren said nothing, his expression somewhat awkward.
The Howling Heaven Dog, the God Lord, King Lingguan, discontent, and mockery
Thus line 49: He had grown accustomed to calling the howling heaven dog a god lord; but suddenly speaking that title before King Lingguan provoked the latter's Bùmǎn and mockery.
【242】
Thus line 50: As a Daoist guardian, the one titled Nine Heavens Responding Origin Thunder Voice Universal Transformation Celestial Venerable, King Lingguan naturally did not regard the howling heaven dog highly.
King Lingguan and the dharma aspect
Thus line 51: At that moment, a white giant dog appeared, its size like a mountain; it opened its huge mouth and charged straight at King Lingguan's dharma aspect.
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Thus line 52: It bit apart King Lingguan's dharma aspect in one gulp, chewed a few times, then spat it out with a look of contempt, saying: "Trash."
Afterwards, the white big dog returned to Baiyun's appearance.
End of Chapter
