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Chapter 243: Chat Group Related Plot

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Chat Group Related Plot

Chat Group Related Plot

How should I put it?

When this book first started, Swallowing Star served as the main world, and the plot outlined in the outline accounted for roughly one-third.

I believe many veteran readers are clear that this book was originally titled (Swallowing Star: Cowering, All Realms: Punching Hard).

In the original plot, Yue Buqun, Tianmeng Bingcan, and others joined the group right from the start, and the world they inhabited was also suitable for the protagonist to punch hard.

However, my understanding of other worlds is obviously inferior to that of Swallowing Star, so when writing about other worlds, it is much more strenuous than Swallowing Star, and it also consumes a vast amount of time.

As for focusing mainly on Swallowing Star later, it is primarily because the protagonist's strength has not made a significant breakthrough; rashly joining other worlds would mean the protagonist's strength fails to reach the first tier, making it impossible to punch hard.

Even the Sword Inquiry World was written at the King Sealed Realm because the protagonist was invincible at the King Sealed Realm, invincible within the small world, and other great figures could not act within the small world.

According to the original outline, the plot of the myriad heavens was originally intended to be more abundant in the later stages.

But because when I wrote about the myriad heavens before, I discovered that compared to Swallowing Star, writing about other worlds is very strenuous.

So I also changed some of the outline, increasing the Swallowing Star plot from the original one-third to one-half, then cutting down a portion of the myriad heavens plot, and also changed the title to the current "Myriad Heavens: Starting to Become a God from Swallowing Star".

Up to now, I have seen many book friends give me suggestions, telling the protagonist to obtain the Enlightenment Tea Tree, to seize the Nine Secrets of Covering the Sky, to rely on the Devouring Demon Art to elevate his life gene level, to find the Void Devouring Flame to accelerate his cultivation of the Space Origin Law, and so on...

But Lu Qingshan's strength improvement is destined not to be too fast; it is destined to serve the plot.

So I have always used an uncertain time flow rate to control the speed of point acquisition, thereby controlling Lu Qingshan's strength growth speed, to serve the main plot.

As for what everyone says about suppressing Lu Qingshan, suppressing other group members as well.

On this point, I cannot agree.

When Xiao Xun'er returned to her family in the original Battle Through the Heavens, what was Xiao Yan's strength? What is it now?

And Han Li, Pang Bo, and others are many times stronger than in the original work during the same period!

There are also suggestions that whenever the protagonist takes action, he must gain benefits, and so on.

In the Sword Inquiry World, before Lu Qingshan went, he had already obtained a large amount of points from Meng Huan, but just after killing the Star Destroyer, because returning treasures requires points, readers had opinions again; before I could even say that Meng Huan, to thank Lu Qingshan, would give away everything he could give, they started calling the protagonist a nanny...

Alright, the protagonist won't be a nanny anymore.

Today, obtain many treasures from Battle Through the Heavens; tomorrow, raid Covering the Sky and snatch over a dozen Emperor Weapons; the day after, return to Swallowing Star, use the Emperor Weapons to exchange for many resources from the Human Race Treasury, make a great leap in strength, rely on these things to gain a large amount of points, and become invincible in strength.

Traverse the Universe Sea, exterminate the World Beasts, head to the Origin Continent, finally become a Lord, and the entire book ends!

The story is that simple; a story everyone can think of, what meaning is there in writing it out?

I have already written one Swallowing Star fan fiction that pushes through everything in a straight line; Time Simulation, and the results were decent.

Later, I also opened two more Swallowing Star fan fictions; the results were slightly better than Time Simulation at the beginning, and I could earn some money, but as I wrote, I lost passion, precisely because the homogenization with Time Simulation was too severe.

This book, which I have written up to now, in terms of the Swallowing Star plot, still has a big difference from Time Simulation, and I am personally quite satisfied with it.

So, when I write the subsequent plot, I will also try my best to separate from the invincible path of Time Simulation, or other fan fictions.

Everyone says they want to read a different fan fiction, but every day they still think about what strength the protagonist has, still think about the protagonist being far ahead of everyone else; clearly, the protagonist has only created the fourth form of the peak secret technique, which is merely at the top of the mid-tier Venerable Realm, yet everyone always feels the protagonist already possesses the strength of a High Venerable.

In everyone's eyes, the protagonist, after all, must be stronger than others, but in reality?

With my understanding of Swallowing Star, I flipped through materials for a whole day before finally writing out the approximate strength of the Venerable Realm level; a bunch of people are saying it's water, saying I don't need to popularize knowledge just to make money, saying everyone understands.

In fact, when everyone says these things, did they seriously look at that one chapter?

Luo Feng's experiences at the Venerable Realm level are simply insufficient to serve as a reference.

And I wrote that chapter mainly based on Xiluo Duo's "Seven Transformations of the Divine Origin".

Some people say the Universe Hegemon's standard equipment is an Ultimate Secret Technique; some say this, some say that...

But everyone can go look at the plot related to "Seven Transformations of the Divine Origin", especially Chapter 32 of Part 13; what Xiluo Duo relied on to traverse the universe was the Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing (weapon) and the "Seven Transformations of the Divine Origin".

The Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing (a supreme treasure of the mental force weapon class (I think it is High Tier)) has already been lost due to Xiluo Duo's fall; what the Hun Dun Chengzhu gave Luo Feng was merely a mass-produced imitation weapon (a heavy treasure level, useful for Universe Venerables, enough to make Universe Venerables kill each other).

"Seven Transformations of the Divine Origin" includes "Beast God Run" (movement technique), Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing (mental force weapon attack method), Beast God Roar (soul defense secret technique), and "Beast God Change" (body amplification type secret technique).

From this, it can be seen that Xiluo Duo must have cultivated a non-self-created soul amplification secret technique, very likely the Divine General inheritance.

Among these items in "Seven Transformations of the Divine Origin", both "Beast God Change" and "Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing" are divided into six forms; the original text mentions it, and the plot regarding Luo Feng killing Nuolanshan mentions the first form of the Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing—'Beast God Descent'.

By the same token, when Xiluo Duo used the Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing to fully unleash the sixth form of "Beast Lie Lie Shen Bing", that was his strongest attack method, a peak secret technique, a Universe Hegemon.

When I spent a vast amount of time and energy to write out that chapter, seeing some people say it was water, my mood was undoubtedly very disappointed.

What does everyone want to see?

See the protagonist Lu Qingshan kill alien Universe Venerables, see the protagonist seize heavy treasures and supreme treasures?

To be honest, these are too easy to write; it's just swapping the Borderlands for a Secret Realm, and swapping King Sealed enemies for Universe Venerables.

Some people say I write about the myriad heavens because I don't know what to write about Universe Venerables; others suggest I skip the Venerable Realm and go straight to Universe Master; others feel I should meet Luo Feng quickly...

I told everyone before that I had already planted foreshadowing, but everyone didn't notice.

For example, Xiluo Duo's fall, how a common race became a vassal race of the Humans;

For example, the establishment of the Eleventh Battlefield of the Borderlands;

For example, how the Meng Yao Zu's current sixteen Imperial Families became the eighteen Imperial Families in the original work, and so on...

These matters, everyone skimmed over them, and most didn't notice, but many are things I wanted to write at the Venerable Realm level...

Additionally, just after finishing Li Yunlong and Gao Yao joining the group, some people said I copied and pasted the original work, or even used AI to write;

Alright, where is the original work?

Can a TV drama be copied?

Let me tell you how I write!

The time I spent today was more than three hours longer than usual.

For the Bright Sword plot, I watched the TV drama and wrote it bit by bit; the dialogue is from the original text, but I skipped over many places, keeping only the most exciting dialogue;

Besides that, the character psychology and character actions were all added by myself.

I thought people who saw the relevant plot would smile knowingly, but instead, a bunch of people came saying I copied and pasted!

The plot of the mythological drama was also something I typed out bit by bit while watching the TV series; three thousand words took me four hours.

For this, I even specifically opened a Youku membership just to watch the related plot and read comments to get some good inspiration.

I can now even say which episode Gao Yao and Yi Xiaochuan reunite in, yet some people say I use AI.

If AI were truly that powerful, authors would have lost their livelihoods.

The mythological plot is indeed just a story outline, but I injected my own emotions into it, making Gao Yao slightly more "noble."

For instance, he did not report Princess Yu Shu; perhaps because reporting her to Qin Huang would have been useless, but I wrote it as repaying kindness with gratitude.

In the early part of the original work, nowhere did it indicate that Gao Yao was not someone who repaid kindness; at most, he only took revenge on those who had bullied him.

Moreover, when I read the comments, especially regarding those specific plot points, many commenters felt Gao Yao was not wrong, and I felt the same, so I wanted to write about Gao Yao.

Gao Yao was something I had decided on beforehand: a brief treatment for Gao Yao, and a detailed treatment for Pan Long.

As for "Sword of Brightness," it is because I often rewatch it; I originally planned to write more, but someone reminded me it could easily get reported, so I spent a bit more ink in that last chapter to conclude it; as for the subsequent plot, it will leave room for imagination, but it should become marginalized like Tianmeng Ice Silkworm;

As for the marginalization of Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, it is mainly due to power-level issues; some say gods are not even as strong as planetary-level beings, while others feel that if counted as a concept, gods are not that weak; I truly didn't know how to write it, so I marginalized it; I originally planned to spend some ink writing about Huo Yuhao.

Overall, the mythological drama and "Sword of Brightness" should, like the Three Kingdoms, basically serve as background mentions, while also altering the original plot to remedy my own regrets.

As for "The Smiling, Proud Wanderer," I originally wrote about the Huashan Sect and the hand-washing ceremony; although the ink was not heavy, it was roughly written, and naturally, it was also marginalized subsequently.

Saying these things counts as me complaining to everyone.

I am quite helpless when something I carefully wrote is called intentional filler.

Actually, I would prefer everyone to settle down and read a story, rather than just a process where the protagonist crushes everything and constantly grows stronger.

Of course, it may be that my writing ability is limited, and what I produced is unbearable to read.

Additionally, if anyone has not read the worlds written in the Chat Group or is not interested in the Chat Group, they can simply skip it.

This Chat Group plot will probably continue for about three to four days; everyone can wait until returning to the original world to read further.

Besides that, regarding the question of how long the protagonist will stay in the Venerable Realm.

At least ten billion eras!

The protagonist will experience a Primal Star once during the Venerable stage, but I have not yet decided how often the Primal Star should open.

One cycle era is one hundred trillion eras.

Luo Feng should be around twenty-something trillion eras, because from when Luo Feng obtained the Duan Donghe to dealing with the Boundary Beasts, there was a hundred million eras; after dealing with the Boundary Beasts, another sixty-something trillion eras passed before the end of the Primal Universe, and Hun Dun Chengzhu also said that when Luo Feng rose, the Primal Universe was still in the early stages of evolution.

So I set one cycle era to be one hundred trillion eras.

Originally, I set the Primal Star to open once every one hundred billion eras, but some people felt the time was too long, so later I set it to one hundred billion or ten billion eras.

In this case, the protagonist will stay in the Venerable Realm for one hundred billion eras or ten billion eras.

Of course, the specific flow of time will, as before, skip vast amounts of time once the related plot is written.

In fact, breaking through to Universe Master in one hundred billion eras is absolutely quite fast among Universe Venerables.

Finally, I wish everyone happiness.

(End of this chapter)

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