Chapter 383: About the Plot of the Myriad Heavens
About the Plot of the Myriad Heavens
About the Plot of the Myriad Heavens
How to put it, regarding the recent chat group and the Myriad Heavens plot, writing it is still too strenuous...
Moreover, reading it myself feels very unsmooth!
Plus, this time when the new members joined the group, I happened to be outside, time was relatively tight, I didn't collect opinions when selecting personnel and entry points, so the writing was very hasty, and the entry point was also very poor.
So next, the plots of Journey to the West: The Aftermath and the Great Tang world will mostly be glossed over like in Sword of the Brave and Romance of the Three Kingdoms.
As for those who just joined the group, I will still write a little bit about them in the future, probably only some major scenes within A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality, Covering the Sky, and The Unending Chaos.
Besides that, there are two more issues I want to consult everyone on...
First, regarding the treasure prepared for Lei Huan Zifeng Zunzhe, some readers at the time said it was too precious, just like Luo Feng in the original work at the Immortal stage (having just killed the King of the Mirror of the Howling), becoming a mobile treasury, causing Lei Huan Zifeng Zunzhe to be unable to go out for training in the future.
At that time I was outside, truly had no mind or energy to revise the text, now time is abundant, so I started to wonder whether to change it to ordinary supreme treasures weapons and armor, top-tier palace-class heavy treasures, everyone can leave a comment below;
1: Just use the current one;
2: Weaken the supreme treasures a bit.
The second is the selection of people joining the group for The Unending Chaos, I wrote Beishan Master Baiwei mainly because when I read The Unending Chaos back then, I found many readers saying Seeing Seeing Ji Ning owed a debt to Beishan Master Baiwei, isn't that nonsense! Later on, Beishan Master Baiwei's name definitely appeared, if it wasn't for Seeing Seeing Ji Ning, how could he possibly live until that time?
Just like the Swallowed Star later stages didn't mention the Jinjiao race, but Luo Feng's small universe did provide a portion of the area for alien races to breed and live, among which there definitely would be the Jinjiao race.
But today reading the comments, some readers said those joining the group are all supporting characters with no immersion.
If it were just a brief mention, it would be fine, but I have read The Unending Chaos many times, so I still quite want to write some of the plots, if in the future I want to write plots outside the Three Realms, continuing to use Beishan Master Baiwei as the perspective is undoubtedly not very suitable, so I am wondering whether to change it to Seeing Seeing Ji Ning, everyone can also leave a comment below;
1: Keep as is;
2: Change to Seeing Seeing Ji Ning.
Finally, the Myriad Heavens plot will definitely be written a bit next, but not as much as most Myriad Heavens novels, after all I am far less familiar with other novels than Swallowed Star, so most of the time I will only briefly write some places I find exciting.
Actually, I often think, if this book had started as a simple Swallowed Star fan fiction, like "I Achieve Greatness Late in Swallowed Star", perhaps writing it would be smoother.
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