Chapter 751

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Let's craft: "【1】 Earth fire extraction completed, entered the Pill Refining Hall, the Pill Refining Hall itself is a Spiritual Artifact, can completely Protector earth fire's ravages, moreover, it is not a one-time extraction of a lot of earth fire, these earth fires will continually forge the Pill Refining Hall, enhance the Pill Refining Hall."

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Let's craft: "【2】 The Pill Refining Hall, by absorbing earth fire energy and the spiritual qi of heaven and earth, can complete its own evolution; this is a Spiritual Artifact, requiring no control, it automatically devours, the more Pill Refining, the more benefits the Pill Refining Hall gains—this is Chen Chuyang's original intention in refining the Pill Refining Hall."

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Translate: "This is not only said for the convenience of Pill Refining, but also to let the Pill Refining Hall gain benefits, achieving multiple gains at once."

We need to use "Pill Refining". Also "Pill Refining Hall". Let's craft: "【3】 This is not only for the convenience of Pill Refining, but also to let the Pill Refining Hall gain benefits—achieving multiple gains at once."

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Translate: "Such operation can also let Longshe Shan gain many benefits; for example, later Longshe Shan will also rise with the Pill Refining Hall's improvement, altering Longshe Shan's mountain body, though the improvement is slight, it is still a benefit."

We need to use "Longshe Shan". Also "Pill Refining Hall". Also maybe "Protector"? Not here.

Let's craft: "【4】 Such operation can also let Longshe Shan gain many benefits; for example, later Longshe Shan will also rise with the Pill Refining Hall's improvement, altering Longshe Shan's mountain body—though the improvement is slight, it is still a benefit."

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Translate: "In short, no matter what is done, there will be benefits; when Xiao Qian'er becomes a Pill Refining Master, continuously refining pills, the benefits she gains will increase, Xiao Qian'er's pill refining experience will improve, and the pills she produces will also enhance the strength of personnel in the Chen Clan and Longshe Shan, including her own strength, various feedbacks."

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Let's craft: "【5】 In short, no matter what is done, there will be benefits; when Xiao Qian'er becomes a Pill Refining Master, continuously refining pills, the benefits she gains will increase, Xiao Qian'er's pill refining experience will improve, and the pills she produces will also enhance the strength of personnel in the Chen Clan and Longshe Shan, including her own strength, various feedbacks."

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Translate: "The benefits are too many, countless benefits; Chen Chuyang naturally has no reason not to refine such a Pill Refining Hall for Xiao Qian'er—this precious apprentice of his lets him relax; as Master, he cannot let the disciple always give out, the due rewards should still be given."

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Let's craft: "【6】 The benefits are too many, countless benefits; Chen Chuyang naturally has no reason not to refine such a Pill Refining Hall for Xiao Qian'er—this precious apprentice lets him relax; as Master, he cannot let the disciple always give out, the due rewards should still be given."

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Translate: "\"The Pill Refining Hall is settled; from now on, Xiao Qian'er will be the master of this place. \""

We need quotes? The original includes Chinese quotes. We'll keep English quotes. Use double quotes.

Let's craft: "【7】 \"The Pill Refining Hall is settled; from now on, Xiao Qian'er will be the master of this place. \""

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Translate: "This place is Xiao Qian'er's territory; besides him and Shang Hongxue, no one else may approach or enter without Xiao Qian'er's permission; the Pill Refining Hall is also one of Longshe Shan's forbidden zones—this was deliberately set by Chen Chuyang, who arranged a series of formations to protect the surroundings; without permission, no one may approach."

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Let's craft: "【8】 This place is Xiao Qian'er's territory; besides him and Shang Hongxue, no one else may approach or enter without Xiao Qian'er's permission; the Pill Refining Hall is also one of Longshe Shan's forbidden zones—this was deliberately set by Chen Chuyang, who arranged a series of formations to protect the surroundings; without permission, no one may approach."

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Translate: "Looking at the Pill Refining Hall before him, Chen Chuyang was extremely satisfied; Longshe Shan also now has a Pill Refining Hall; in the future, this place will become the turning point for the rise of Longshe Shan and the Chen Clan, and Xiao Qian'er will also rise because of the Pill Refining Hall."

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "Longshe Shan", "Chen Clan", "Pill Refining Hall". Also maybe "Protector"? Not.

Let's craft: "【9】 Looking at the Pill Refining Hall before him, Chen Chuyang was extremely satisfied; Longshe Shan also now has a Pill Refining Hall; in the future, this place will become the turning point for the rise of Longshe Shan and the Chen Clan, and Xiao Qian'er will also rise because of the Pill Refining Hall."

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Translate: "Chen Chuyang's future days will have fewer troubles; he will no longer need to worry about the Chen Clan's pill usage; many low-grade pills can all be handed over to Xiao Qian'er—this is Chen Chuyang's initial idea, but of course it's not possible now."

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er has not yet taken the first step, but Chen Chuyang believes she can definitely do it."

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er", "Chen Chuyang". Let's craft: "【11】 Xiao Qian'er has not yet taken the first step, but Chen Chuyang believes she can definitely do it."

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Translate: "She is so intelligent, so clever, and likes Pill Refining; she will soon enter the door."

We need to use "Pill Refining". Also "she". Let's craft: "【12】 She is so intelligent, so clever, and likes Pill Refining; she will soon enter the door."

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Translate: "Having settled everything, Chen Chuyang returned to Xiao Qian'er's side; she was brewing Hundred Herbs Pill, the scent was extremely rich, a familiar fragrance—it had been a long time since he smelled the aroma of Hundred Herbs Pill; upon smelling it, Chen Chuyang knew it could not be wrong, Xiao Qian'er's first refining should have succeeded."

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Translate: "Shang Hongxue stood beside her, saying nothing and not disturbing Xiao Qian'er, but kept staring; she smelled the familiar scent, her face showed the expected expression—the scent was overly familiar, she could not forget it, having been soaked who knows how many times, it had long become a bodily memory."

We need to use "Shang Hongxue", "Xiao Qian'er". Let's craft: "【14】 Shang Hongxue stood beside her, saying nothing and not disturbing Xiao Qian'er, but kept staring; she smelled the familiar scent, her face showed the expected expression—the scent was overly familiar, she could not forget it, having been soaked who knows how many times, it had long become a bodily memory."

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Translate: "\"Chuyang brother, have you settled it? \""

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Translate: "The commotion of the Pill Refining Hall could not be hidden from her; seeing Chen Chuyang appear, Shang Hongxue immediately ran over, linked arms with Chen Chuyang's arm, shaking and saying: \"Chuyang brother, did you see? Xiao Qian'er will succeed. \""

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Translate: "\"Directly start making Hundred Herbs Pill, instead of as you did before, first making Hundred Herbs Pill liquid. \""

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Thus: "\"Directly start making Hundred Herbs Pill, instead of as you did before, first making Hundred Herbs Pill Item. \""

Let's craft: "【17】 \"Directly start making Hundred Herbs Pill, instead of as you did before, first making Hundred Herbs Pill Item. \""

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er's talent is truly not bad; with Chen Chuyang's guidance, the《Spiritual Herbs Hundred Grass Classic》has specific steps and proportions; following the refining method above, it is basically impossible to go wrong."

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Translate: "That is Chen Chuyang's repeatedly deduced and revised final version after countless modifications; there cannot be any problem."

We need to use "Chen Chuyang". Let's craft: "【19】 That is Chen Chuyang's repeatedly deduced and revised final version after countless modifications; there cannot be any problem."

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Translate: "Being able to succeed on the first try, Chen Chuyang felt greatly relieved; looking at those liquids before him, they gradually began to condense into pills."

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er's movements are quick and steady, she will not be anxious."

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er". Let's craft: "【21】 Xiao Qian'er's movements are quick and steady, she will not be anxious."

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Translate: "Nor was her spirit shaken by joy; she is naturally happy, but at the crucial moment Xiao Qian'er instead becomes even calmer; Chen Chuyang saw this and was quite satisfied."

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "Xiao Qian'er". Let's craft: "【22】 Nor was her spirit shaken by joy; she is naturally happy, but at the crucial moment Xiao Qian'er instead becomes even calmer; Chen Chuyang saw this and was quite satisfied."

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Translate: "\"Remaining calm in the face of events, not letting joy and excitement control body and mind, at such a young age to have such temperament is a rare Pill Refining genius. \""

We need to use "Pill Refining". Let's craft: "【23】 \"Remaining calm in the face of events, not letting joy and excitement control body and mind, at such a young age to have such temperament is a rare Pill Refining genius. \""

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Translate: "\"This girl's Pill Refining talent is strong; she is a natural-born Pill Refining seedling. \""

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Translate: "\"With proper training, she can definitely become a qualified Pill Refining Master. \""

We need to use "Pill Refining Master". Let's craft: "【25】 \"With proper training, she can definitely become a qualified Pill Refining Master. \""

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Translate: "Shang Hongxue said proudly: \"That's natural; Xiao Qian'er is practically my half-disciple, she is naturally not lacking. \""

We need to use "Shang Hongxue", "Xiao Qian'er", "disciple". Let's craft: "【26】 Shang Hongxue said proudly: \"That's natural; Xiao Qian'er is practically my half-disciple, she is naturally not lacking. \""

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Translate: "Saying it as if she herself, Chen Chuyang naturally would not spoil the fun; he touched Shang Hongxue's forehead, gently saying: \"You've worked hard, Lady. \""

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "Shang Hongxue", "Lady". Let's craft: "【27】 Saying it as if she herself, Chen Chuyang naturally would not spoil the fun; he touched Shang Hongxue's forehead, gently saying: \"You've worked hard, Lady. \""

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Translate: "At the word \"Lady, \" Shang Hongxue's heart was fully entered, the corners of her mouth rose, she could not hold back."

We need to use "Shang Hongxue". Let's craft: "【28】 At the word \"Lady, \" Shang Hongxue's heart was fully entered, the corners of her mouth rose, she could not hold back."

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Translate: "\"This is what I should do; Xiao Qian'er is the husband's disciple, naturally also my disciple. \""

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er", "husband", "disciple". Let's craft: "【29】 \"This is what I should do; Xiao Qian'er is the husband's disciple, naturally also my disciple. \""

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Translate: "\"Chuyang brother, you need not praise me. \""

We need to use "Chuyang". Let's craft: "【30】 \"Chuyang brother, you need not praise me. \""

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Translate: "Though she says so with her mouth, her body is quite honest."

We need to keep pronoun? The subject is Shang Hongxue? Actually line 31 follows line 30 where Shang Hongxue spoke. So "she". We'll keep "she". Let's craft: "【31】 Though she says so with her mouth, her body is quite honest."

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Translate: "Chen Chuyang, seeing this, tapped her cheek, affectionately saying: \"Tonight, as husband, I will properly reward you. \""

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "husband". Let's craft: "【32】 Chen Chuyang, seeing this, tapped her cheek, affectionately saying: \"Tonight, as husband, I will properly reward you. \""

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Translate: "Shang Hongxue's cheeks turned red, she gave Chen Chuyang a white-eyed glance, softly saying: \"Husband, someone is here. \""

We need to use "Shang Hongxue", "Chen Chuyang", "husband". Let's craft: "【33】 Shang Hongxue's cheeks turned red, she gave Chen Chuyang a white-eyed glance, softly saying: \"Husband, someone is here. \""

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Translate: "\"It's fine, no one can hear. \""

We need to keep quotes. Let's craft: "【34】 \"It's fine, no one can hear. \""

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Translate: "Shang Hongxue gave Chen Chuyang a white-eyed glance; inside she began to anticipate tonight's reward, while saying various excuses with her mouth, her body was quite honest."

We need to use "Shang Hongxue", "Chen Chuyang". Let's craft: "【35】 Shang Hongxue gave Chen Chuyang a white-eyed glance; inside she began to anticipate tonight's reward, while saying various excuses with her mouth, her body was quite honest."

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Translate: "An hour later."

We need to keep as is. Let's craft: "【36】 An hour later."

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er successfully refined pills; the Hundred Herbs Pill was successfully refined, a total of five pills, dark and dull pills, effect not bad, quality not bad."

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Translate: "Chen Chuyang glanced and roughly confirmed the quality of these Hundred Herbs Pill: medium quality; with a little more practice, it is easy to reach high quality, even top quality."

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "Hundred Herbs Pill". Let's craft: "【38】 Chen Chuyang glanced and roughly confirmed the quality of these Hundred Herbs Pill: medium quality; with a little more practice, it is easy to reach high quality, even top quality."

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er has a promising future; Chen Chuyang felt relieved in his heart, having such a disciple makes his future days much easier."

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er", "Chen Chuyang", "disciple". Let's craft: "【39】 Xiao Qian'er has a promising future; Chen Chuyang felt relieved in his heart, having such a disciple makes his future days much easier."

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Translate: "\"Master, disciple has not disgrace the mission, refining succeeded. \""

We need to use "Master", "disciple". Let's craft: "【40】 \"Master, disciple has not disgrace the mission, refining succeeded. \""

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er excitedly held the five pills and came before Chen Chuyang, her face unable to suppress a smile, her whole body trembling with excitement."

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er", "Chen Chuyang", "pills". Let's craft: "【41】 Xiao Qian'er excitedly held the five pills and came before Chen Chuyang, her face unable to suppress a smile, her whole body trembling with excitement."

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Translate: "The first refining succeeded, but she was worried she would fail and also worried she would disappoint the Master."

We need to use "Master". Let's craft: "【42】 The first refining succeeded, but she was worried she would fail and also worried she would disappoint the Master."

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Translate: "Fortunately, she succeeded."

We need to keep pronoun? The subject is Xiao Qian'er. Let's craft: "【43】 Fortunately, she succeeded."

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Translate: "Chen Chuyang nodded in satisfaction, praising: \"Very well done, as Master I am very satisfied. \""

We need to use "Chen Chuyang", "Master". Let's craft: "【44】 Chen Chuyang nodded in satisfaction, praising: \"Very well done, as Master I am very satisfied. \""

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Translate: "\"Xiao Qian'er, you have already taken the first step; although Hundred Herbs Pill is only a low-grade pill, it is still a pill; your ability to refine it successfully shows you possess the most basic condition to become a Pill Refining Master; if you can later skillfully refine Hundred Herbs Pill, you are a qualified Pill Refining Master. \""

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er", "Hundred Herbs Pill", "Pill Refining Master". Let's craft: "【45】 \"Xiao Qian'er, you have already taken the first step; although Hundred Herbs Pill is only a low-grade pill, it is still a pill; your ability to refine it successfully shows you possess the most basic condition to become a Pill Refining Master; if you can later skillfully refine Hundred Herbs Pill, you are a qualified Pill Refining Master. \""

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Translate: "\"Yes, Master. \" Xiao Qian'er's face was bright red, she was too excited, the feeling of being acknowledged by the Master was truly exhilarating."

We need to use "Master". Let's craft: "【46】 \"Yes, Master. \" Xiao Qian'er's face was bright red, she was too excited, the feeling of being acknowledged by the Master was truly exhilarating."

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Translate: "She has worked so hard, isn't it just for this sentence?"

We need to keep pronoun? The subject is Xiao Qian'er. Let's craft: "【47】 She has worked so hard, isn't it just for this sentence?"

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Translate: "She did it."

We need to keep pronoun. Let's craft: "【48】 She did it."

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Translate: "Xiao Qian'er clenched her fists, her face holding back a smile, not letting herself become too smug."

We need to use "Xiao Qian'er". Let's craft: "【49】 Xiao Qian'er clenched her fists, her face holding back a smile, not letting herself become too smug."

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Translate: "\"If you want to laugh, just laugh out—this is what you deserve. \""

We need to keep quotes. Let's craft: "【50】 \"If you want to laugh, just laugh out—this is what you deserve. \""

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Translate: "\"Yes, Master. \""

We need to use "Master". Let's craft: "【51】 \"Yes, Master. \""

Xiao Qian'er opened her mouth, laughed out loud.