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Chapter 1560

~9 min read 1,673 words

On Longshe Mountain in Cangzhou.

Translation: "On Longshe Shan in Cangzhou." Actually "On Longshe Shan in Cangzhou" means "On Longshe Shan of Cangzhou". So: "On Longshe Shan in Cangzhou."

Chinese sentence.

The Chinese line is actually the same as 【4】? Wait 【5】 line is the English explanation, not Chinese. But maybe they mistakenly placed the Chinese line at 【4】 and the English explanation at 【5】. So there is no Chinese at 【5】. However they said each line still contains untranslated Chinese. So maybe 【5】 actually contains Chinese that we missed: Let's look at the original prompt snippet:

Check we kept all: yes.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "However, in this battle the Pasture Dragon Clan lost many disciples' lives and several elders died, which also counts as heavy losses; after returning this time, they will fall into a relatively long period of silence, at least they will not easily set foot in the Mangshan Mountain Range."

We need to keep "Pasture Dragon Clan", "Mangshan Mountain Range". Also "disciples' lives" -> "disciples' lives". "several elders died" -> "several elders died". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Indeed, the Mangshan Mountain Range's resistance to human forces exceeded his expectations, making it impossible for them to infiltrate or directly enter the Mangshan Mountain Range; even if a single person entered, they would be targeted and killed."

We need to keep "his". The subject is ambiguous; but we keep as "his". Also "Mangshan Mountain Range".

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "In the eyes of demon beasts, there is no such thing as worldly etiquette or righteousness to speak of; humans and demon beasts are enemies, and any human who steps into this place is their enemy, especially True Realm cultivators stepping in, which is a provocation to them; cultivators below the True Realm who step into the Mangshan Mountain Range, these demon kings will not act rashly, leaving the fight to the lesser demon beasts below."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The war between humans and demon beasts is beneficial for wearing down both demon beasts and humans, and it can forge stronger Strong Ones, rather than greenhouse flowers that cannot withstand wind and rain, nor can they endure……hardship."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Tsk tsk, this time the Pasture Dragon Clan can be said to have suffered heavy losses; it's a pity, we cannot act, otherwise it would be great to kill the Mu Long people. \" Elder Xinran said with some regret."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "After killing the Mu Long people's elders, we can then act against other members of the Pasture Dragon Clan; ideally, we would wipe them all out."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The people of the Pasture Dragon Clan are exceedingly hateful; their world has been enslaved by the Pasture Dragon Clan for so many years, how many have died? Just the Spirit Sword Sect alone, at least half of its people have died at their hands, directly or indirectly related to them; this grudge, Xinran Zhanglao has always kept in her heart, never forgotten."

We need to keep "Spirit Sword Sect". Also "Xinran Zhanglao". Also "Pasture Dragon Clan". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The grudge against the Pasture Dragon Clan springs from deep in the marrow; upon seeing a member of the Pasture Dragon Clan, they must be killed without pardon—this is her most direct belief."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Tianlian Zhenren's expression was rather conflicted; it's not that they didn't want to kill the Pasture Dragon Clan's people, but……they cannot act for now."

We need to keep "Tianlian Zhenren". Also "Pasture Dragon Clan". The ellipsis stays.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"The Pasture Dragon Clan's people have come for us; they won't give up. I estimate they learned of our existence and want to confirm whether we came from that world, then wipe us out in one sweep. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"They must have discovered something, Qinglong Daoren—you need to be careful. According to my understanding of the Pasture Dragon Clan, they will next resort to any means to act, and will definitely launch an attack on us here. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "A frontal attack is not frightening; what's frightening is their sneak attack from behind."

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The people of the Pasture Dragon Clan are all this shameless, resorting to any means."

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Qinglong Daoren nodded: \"Don't worry, I won't fall for it. Besides, if they want to enter Longshe Shan, they must at least pass through the heavy defenses of the Luotian White Snake Clan; even if they can avoid the Luotian White Snake Clan's people, they cannot break through our formation. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Even Tribulation Realm cultivators cannot break through this formation, let alone these ants; the safety of Longshe Shan you can completely rely on, there will be no problem. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The strength of this formation, Qinglong Daoren is well aware; after several upgrades and enhancements, it is no longer comparable to the original formation, and with the strengthening of the main body, this formation can trap the Mangshan Demon Emperor Zhang Mang, making it impossible for him to escape as before."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"That's fine, but still don't be careless; the Pasture Dragon Clan has many methods, they will certainly enter Longshe Shan. \" Tianlian Zhenren reminded again, fearing that Qinglong Daoren would be overconfident and thus underestimate the Pasture Dragon Clan."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "So far, their main enemy is still the Pasture Dragon Clan; once targeted by them, it truly becomes a fight to the death."

We need to keep "Pasture Dragon Clan".

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Actually, we can go and intercept them as Elder Xinran said; the Second Elder of the Mu Long people is injured, and other elders of the Pasture Dragon Clan are also injured—this is a good opportunity. Kill them, and even if the Pasture Dragon Clan becomes furious, it will be useless. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"These people should be the backbone of the Pasture Dragon Clan; if we let them return easily, I estimate—\""

We need to keep "Pasture Dragon Clan". The line ends with a question mark; we keep as is.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Tianlian Zhenren felt killing intent, but their side's strength is not strong enough; otherwise, they couldn't let them leave."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Diewumeng and the others will no longer pursue them; simply driving them out of the Mangshan Mountain Range will suffice. Diewumeng is at a critical juncture, possibly able to breakthrough that realm at any moment, and cannot afford to take risks."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Below the Tribulation Realm, leaving the Mangshan Mountain Range is very dangerous."

We need to keep "Tribulation Realm", "Mangshan Mountain Range".

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The Demon Kings of the Mangshan Demon Palace cannot act, but we can go and take action, intercept and kill—however many we can kill, that's how many."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Qinglong Daoren raised a hand: \"Enough, don't have this thought; you two are too weak, not a match for them. Even if we all go out, we couldn't kill them, and would only expose our whereabouts. They haven't confirmed it yet; we, meanwhile, will continue hiding in Longshe Shan to cultivate. \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Strive to raise our cultivation and strength; when……our strength is sufficient, that will be the day of the Pasture Dragon Clan's downfall. \""

We need to keep ellipsis. Also "Pasture Dragon Clan". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Good. \" Xinran Zhanglao nodded seriously, she approved Qinglong Daoren's suggestion."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Tianlian Zhenren said nothing more; here, Qinglong Daoren's word is law, and the two of them dare not go against Qinglong Daoren's words."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"I understand. \""

……

Translation: "……"

We need to keep the ellipsis as is.

Five days later.

Translation: "Five days later."

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Outside the Mangshan Mountain Range, in a very remote place bordering Lingzhou, inside a barren mountain peak, the hidden Pasture Dragon Clan and others appeared; a large pit opened on the ground, the silhouette of the Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon crawled out from the ground, opened its mouth, and Mu Longjie emerged from its mouth."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "\"Cough cough cough. \" Violent coughing, he spat out several mouthfuls of black gas; Mu Longjie didn't have time for himself, immediately turning back: \"Second Elder, are you alright? \""

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "He was worried, yet he immediately distanced himself from the Second Elder, Mu Long people; the surrounding members and elders of the Pasture Dragon Clan scattered, not daring to stand nearby, they all stood outside the deep pit, at least over a hundred meters from the Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon—this distance being the limit of the poison gas's spread."

Chinese sentence.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The poison gas enveloped the Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon, that massive body coiling together."

We need to keep "Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "A body blackened to purple, continuously spraying poison gas, everything around it quickly withered under the gas's corrosion."

We need to keep nothing else.

"Roar!"

Translation: "\"Roar. \""

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon opened its huge mouth and let out a roar; in an instant, the entire mountain peak fell silent."

We need to keep "Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "All sounds vanished, whether beasts or demon beasts; at this moment, it was utterly silent."

We need to keep "demon beasts". Good.

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "The massive body began to curl, started to twist, and gradually transformed into a human shape."

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "This process was extremely brutal and terrifying, flesh and blood bursting apart, bones protruding."

Chinese sentence.

Translation: "Accompanied by the painful roar, the piercing sound made everyone's souls tremble, their faces grim; they could only retreat, distancing themselves from the Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon."

We need to keep "Thousand-foot Myriad Poison Dragon". Good.

This process lasted half an hour, and the commotion ahead stopped.

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