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Chapter 644: with translation of chapter title

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Hearing that, Feng Qing'er's delicate face, which bore a hint of nobility, instantly turned a little sombre.

Interpretation: Upon hearing that, Feng Qinger's pretty face, which hinted at a touch of nobility, instantly turned somewhat gloomy.

We need to keep it concise: "Upon hearing that, Feng Qinger's pretty face, which hinted at a touch of nobility, instantly turned somewhat gloomy."

The Heavenly Demon Phoenix clan never allows its members to marry outside, and Gu Xun'er is certainly aware of that rule.

"Those of the Tianyao Phoenix Clan, who never marry out, this rule, Gu Xun'er must certainly be very aware."

Better: "As members of the Tianyao Phoenix Clan who never marry out, Gu Xun'er certainly knows this rule well."

If they were to publicize this, it would certainly cause a lot of trouble for her husband.

"If they spread this matter, it would indeed be very troublesome for her husband."

Better: "If they were to spread this, it would indeed be very troublesome for her husband."

She knows full well that, given the obstinate nature of the clan's elders, gaining their approval would be nearly impossible.

"She is well aware that, given the stubborn nature of those old fogeys in the clan, it would be extremely hard to win their consent."

Better: "She knows well that, given the stubborn nature of those old fogeys in the clan, gaining their agreement would be extremely difficult."

After all, in ancient races, the importance placed on bloodlines far surpasses what ordinary people can imagine.

"After all, in ancient races, the emphasis on bloodline far exceeds ordinary people's imagination."

Better: "After all, in ancient races, the importance placed on bloodline far surpasses ordinary imagination."

This is precisely what has enabled the ancient races to dominate the continent for so long—their most vital asset.

"Because this thing is precisely what has allowed the ancient races to dominate the continent for so many years, the most important thing."

Better: "Because this is precisely what has enabled the ancient races to dominate the continent for so many years—the most important thing."

It's okay—if he lets this slip, we'll also expose that Xiao Yan wields multiple kinds of strange fire, and nobody will get off easy.

"It's fine; if he spreads this news, we'll also spread the fact that Xiao Yan possesses multiple kinds of different fire, so nobody will have it easy."

Better: "It's fine; if he lets this news out, we'll also reveal that Xiao Yan possesses multiple kinds of different fire, so nobody will have it easy."

Seeing his expression, Lin Feng chuckled lightly and offered reassurance.

"Seeing his expression, Lin Feng gave a light laugh and comforted him."

Better: "Seeing his expression, Lin Feng chuckled lightly and offered comfort."

Well, there's nothing else we can do.

"Eh, there's nothing else we can do."

Better: "Well, there's nothing else we can do."

Feng Qing'er let out a fragrant sigh, resigned.

"Feng Qinger exhaled a fragrant breath, speaking helplessly."

Better: "Feng Qinger exhaled a fragrant breath and spoke helplessly."

Come on, give me a smile—don't keep looking so grim.

"Come on, smile, don't keep a grim face."

Better: "Come on, smile—don't keep a grim face."

Seeing Feng Qing'er still wearing a worried expression, Lin Feng smiled, reached out with both hands, and gently pulled at her perfect cheek.

"Seeing Feng Qinger's face still full of worry, Lin Feng immediately laughed, reached out with both hands, and tugged at her flawless cheek."

Better: "Seeing Feng Qinger's face still full of worry, Lin Feng immediately laughed, reached out with both hands, and tugged at her flawless cheek."

Go on, be serious.

"Go on, be serious."

Better: "Come on, be serious."

Feng Qing'er shot him an irritated look and then slapped his hand away.

"Feng Qinger gave him an annoyed glance, then slapped his hand away."

Better: "Feng Qinger gave him an annoyed glance, then slapped his hand away."

Husband, why not trade that heavenly-tier technique for a combat skill? You're already practicing the Flame Mantra, so you hardly need more techniques—holding onto it is pointless.

"Husband, why don't you exchange that Heavenly Step Technique for a combat skill? You now cultivate the Burning Scripture, so you hardly lack techniques; keeping it is useless."

Better: "Husband, why not exchange that Heavenly Step Technique for a combat skill? You now cultivate the Burning Scripture, so you hardly lack techniques; keeping it is useless."

At that point, Xiao Yixian expressed her doubt.

"At this moment, Xiao Yixian voiced the doubt in her heart."

Better: "At this moment, Xiao Yixian voiced the doubt in her heart."

Exactly, you don't need any other techniques at the moment.

"Exactly, you don't need any other techniques at all."

Better: "Exactly, you don't need any other techniques at all."

Hearing his question, Feng Qing'er also agreed.

"Upon hearing that question, Feng Qinger also agreed."

Better: "Upon hearing that question, Feng Qinger also agreed."

After all, the technique Lin Feng is currently cultivating was left behind by a Dou Emperor.

"After all, the technique Lin Feng currently cultivates was left by a Dou Emperor."

Better: "After all, the technique Lin Feng currently cultivates was left by a Dou Emperor."

Furthermore, Lin Feng had told her in his spare time that this technique can absorb flames to evolve.

"Moreover, Lin Feng told her during his free time that this technique can absorb flames to evolve."

Better: "Moreover, Lin Feng told her during his free time that this technique can absorb flames to evolve."

The heavenly-tier technique Gu Xun'er offered as compensation is undoubtedly just an ordinary low-level heavenly-tier technique.

"The Heavenly Step Technique that Gu Xun'er compensated with is surely just an ordinary low-grade Heavenly Step Technique."

Better: "The Heavenly Step Technique that Gu Xun'er compensated with is surely just an ordinary low-grade Heavenly Step Technique."

In her opinion, a low-level heavenly-tier technique pales in comparison to the Flame Mantra.

"In her view, a low-grade Heavenly Step Technique is far inferior to the Burning Scripture."

Better: "In her view, a low-grade Heavenly Step Technique is far inferior to the Burning Scripture."

Hehe, since the heavenly-tier technique Gu Xun'er compensated with, I'm after the poison attribute.

"Hehe, because the Heavenly Step Technique Gu Xun'er compensated with, I want the poison attribute."

Better: "Hehe, because the Heavenly Step Technique Gu Xun'er compensated with, I want the poison attribute."

Having said that, Lin Feng turned his gaze toward Xiao Yixian.

"Having said that, Lin Feng's gaze turned to Xiao Yixian."

Better: "Having said that, Lin Feng turned his gaze to Xiao Yixian."

Husband.

"Husband."

Better: "Husband."

Hearing his request for the poison attribute, a flicker of emotion passed through Xiao Yixian's lovely eyes.

"Upon hearing that he wanted the poison attribute, a flash of emotion crossed Xiao Yixian's lovely eyes."

Better: "Upon hearing that he wanted the poison attribute, a flash of emotion crossed Xiao Yixian's lovely eyes."

She knows full well that he intends to give that technique scroll to himself.

"She certainly knows he intends to give that scroll of technique to himself."

Better: "She certainly knows he intends to give that scroll of technique to himself."

The other two women also showed a flash of understanding.

"And in the eyes of the other two women, a flicker of realization also passed."

Better: "And in the eyes of the other two women, a flicker of realization also passed."

Seeing Xiao Yixian's moved expression, Lin Feng gave a small smile and then turned to Feng Qing'er, saying, "Of course, I've also prepared something for my dear Phoenix."

"Seeing Xiao Yixian's moved expression, Lin Feng gave a slight smile, then turned to Feng Qinger and said, 'Of course, I've also prepared something for my dear Feng'er.'"

Better: "Seeing Xiao Yixian's moved expression, Lin Feng gave a slight smile, then turned to Feng Qinger and said, 'Of course, I've also prepared something for my dear Feng'er.'"

Having said that, he produced a large heap of jade bottles before the three women's curious eyes.

"Having said that, amidst the curious gazes of the three women, he took out a large pile of jade bottles."

Better: "Having said that, amidst the curious gazes of the three women, he took out a large pile of jade bottles."

As all those eighth-grade pills were stacked together, the ambient spiritual energy spiked noticeably.

"As so many Eighth Grade Pills were piled together, the spiritual energy concentration in the surrounding area surged greatly."

Better: "As so many Eighth Grade Pills were piled together, the spiritual energy concentration in the surrounding area surged greatly."

Nearby grasses and trees abruptly grew much taller.

"Nearby plants and trees suddenly shot up considerably."

Better: "Nearby plants and trees suddenly shot up considerably."

The parched, dry leaves turned vibrant and green.

"The withered, dry leaves turned lush and green."

Better: "The withered, dry leaves turned lush and green."

Are these all the pills you got from selling puppets?

"Are these all the pills you obtained from selling puppets?"

Better: "Are these all the pills you obtained from selling puppets?"

Seeing the jade bottles nearly stacked into a small mountain, the three women gaped in shock.

"Gazing at the jade bottles almost piled into a small hill, the three women opened their mouths wide in astonishment."

Better: "Gazing at the jade bottles almost piled into a small hill, the three women opened their mouths wide in astonishment."

Although they suspected his gains this time would be substantial.

"Although they guessed his gains this time would certainly be not small."

Better: "Although they guessed his gains this time would certainly be not small."

Yet upon seeing the heap of eighth-grade pills piled into a small mountain, the three women could not stay composed.

"But upon seeing the pile of Eighth Grade Pills like a small hill, the three women still could not remain calm."

Better: "But upon seeing the pile of Eighth Grade Pills like a small hill, the three women still could not remain calm."

Lin Feng smiled and nodded, saying, "Here we have seventy-two eighth‑grade five‑color pills, two eighth‑grade six‑color pills, and four eighth‑grade seven‑color pills—all obtained from selling puppets."

"Lin Feng nodded with a smile and said, 'Here we have seventy-two Eighth Grade Five-Color Pills, two Eighth Grade Six-Color Pills, and four Eighth Grade Seven-Color Pills. Moreover, they were all obtained from selling puppets.'"

Better: "Lin Feng nodded with a smile and said, 'Here we have seventy-two Eighth Grade Five-Color Pills, two Eighth Grade Six-Color Pills, and four Eighth Grade Seven-Color Pills. Moreover, they were all obtained from selling puppets.'"

Good heavens, we've struck it rich; we might as well specialize in selling puppets from now on.

"Heavens, we've struck it rich; otherwise, we could just specialize in selling puppets from now on."

Better: "Heavens, we've struck it rich; otherwise, we could just specialize in selling puppets from now on."

Looking at the massive pile of jade bottles before them, the three women all exclaimed excitedly.

"Gazing at the huge pile of jade bottles before them, the three women all spoke excitedly."

Better: "Gazing at the huge pile of jade bottles before them, the three women all spoke excitedly."

After all, those puppets do entail some expense apart from the magic cores.

"After all, those puppets only have some cost from the magic cores."

Better: "After all, those puppets only incur some cost from the magic cores."

The other souls and bodies are mostly gained by slaying enemies.

"Their souls and bodies are almost entirely obtained by slaying enemies."

Better: "Their souls and bodies are almost entirely obtained by slaying enemies."

Yet after refining them into puppets, they yielded such a huge amount of eighth‑grade pills.

"But after refining them into puppets, they were exchanged for such a vast quantity of Eighth Grade Pills."

Better: "But after refining them into puppets, they were exchanged for such a vast quantity of Eighth Grade Pills."

Haha, stop staring—let's first divide these pills.

"Haha, stop staring; let's first distribute these pills."

Better: "Haha, stop staring; let's first distribute these pills."

As he spoke, he flicked his fingers lightly.

"While speaking, he flicked his fingers."

Better: "While speaking, he flicked his fingers."

Instantly, more than thirty jade bottles from the pile shot precisely toward Feng Qing'er.

"Instantly, from the pile of jade bottles before him, more than thirty bottles shot out precisely toward Feng Qinger."

Better: "Instantly, from the pile of jade bottles before him, more than thirty bottles shot out precisely toward Feng Qinger."

He then, without further comment, tucked them all into his own spatial ring.

"And he, without saying much, directly stored them all into his spatial ring."

Better: "And he, without saying much, directly stored them all into his spatial ring."

After all, she knows her husband still needs her to use these pills to barter for needed items from within the clan.

"After all, she also knows that her husband still needs her to use these pills to exchange for needed items from within the clan."

Better: "After all, she also knows that her husband still needs her to use these pills to exchange for needed items from within the clan."

Then Lin Feng, after she took the pills, turned to Xiao Yixian beside him and said, "As for you, Xiao'er, with your Poison‑Stricken Body, you rely on absorbing large amounts of toxic substances to boost your Dou Qi cultivation, and you likewise need plenty of pills—take twenty five‑color pills and one seven‑color pill."

"Then, after Feng Qinger received the pills, Lin Feng immediately turned to Xiao Yixian beside him and said, 'As for you, Xian Er, with your Poison Calamity Body, you rely on absorbing large amounts of toxic substances to cultivate your Dou Qi, so you likewise need many pills—take twenty Five-Color Pills and one Seven-Color Pill.'"

Better: "Then, after Feng Qinger received the pills, Lin Feng immediately turned to Xiao Yixian beside him and said, 'As for you, Xian Er, with your Poison Calamity Body, you rely on absorbing large amounts of toxic substances to cultivate your Dou Qi, so you likewise need many pills—take twenty Five-Color Pills and one Seven-Color Pill.'"

Having said that, another twenty‑odd jade bottles flew from the pill pile before him and hovered before Xiao Yixian.

"Having said that, from the pile of pills before him, another twenty-odd bottles flew out and hovered before Xiao Yixian."

Better: "Having said that, from the pile of pills before him, another twenty-odd bottles flew out and hovered before Xiao Yixian."

She likewise took the pills and stored them in her spatial ring.

"She likewise received the pills and then placed them into her spatial ring."

Better: "She likewise received the pills and then placed them into her spatial ring."

Next, Lin Feng turned to Ye Xinlan and said, "Since you, Xin'er, currently have no use for them, just take five five‑color pills and give them to the Ye family; they previously scoured the land for Dou Zong bodies and metal materials, also contributing considerably."

"Next, Lin Feng turned to Ye Xinlan and said, 'Since Xin Er, you currently have no use for them, just take five Five-Color Pills and give them to the Ye family; they previously gathered Dou Zong corpses and metal materials far and wide, also contributing greatly.'"

Better: "Next, Lin Feng turned to Ye Xinlan and said, 'Since Xin Er, you currently have no use for them, just take five Five-Color Pills and give them to the Ye family; they previously gathered Dou Zong corpses and metal materials far and wide, also contributing greatly.'"

Immediately after, Lin Feng looked toward the last Ye Xinlan and said: "Since Xun'er, you currently have no use for it, just take five five-colored medicinal pills and give them to the Ye family; they previously gathered Dou Zong bodies and metal materials everywhere, also contributing considerable effort."

Seeing Lin Feng immediately hand over five five‑color pills to the Ye family, Ye Xinlan happily nodded.

"Seeing Lin Feng immediately send five Five-Color Pills to the Ye family, Ye Xinlan nodded delightedly."

Better: "Seeing Lin Feng immediately send five Five-Color Pills to the Ye family, Ye Xinlan nodded delightedly."

As for the remaining twenty‑one pills, I still need them, so I'll keep them for myself.

"As for the remaining twenty-one pills, I still have use for them, so I'll keep them for myself."

Better: "As for the remaining twenty-one pills, I still have use for them, so I'll keep them for myself."

Saying that, Lin Feng gathered the remaining jade bottles back into his spatial ring.

"Saying that, Lin Feng gathered the remaining bottles back into his spatial ring."

Better: "Saying that, Lin Feng gathered the remaining bottles back into his spatial ring."

After all, aside from the pills he set aside for Zi Yan to eat, several of them are Bone‑Generating and Blood‑Fusing pills.

"After all, aside from the ones he left for Zi Yan to eat, there are also several Bone-Mending Blood-Fusing Pills among them."

Better: "After all, aside from the ones he left for Zi Yan to eat, there are also several Bone-Mending Blood-Fusing Pills among them."

He had specially taken these when selling the puppets, intending to use them later to revive other experts.

"He specially took them when selling the puppets, preparing to use them later when reviving other experts."

Better: "He specially took them when selling the puppets, preparing to use them later when reviving other experts."

It was what he specially took when selling puppets, prepared for later use when resurrecting other strong ones.

By the way, husband, my teacher has already been here for a few days; on the way, he also went to the Ye family to see the Third Elder. After seeing the marvel of that secret technique, he has now taken the remains of the successive pavilion masters from the Return Wind Thunder Pavilion and brought back some reliable disciples; he should be able to arrive after a while.

At this moment, Feng Qinger suddenly remembered this, and raised their head to speak.

Alright, I still have some Bone-Fusing Blood Pill in hand; as long as the Thunder Venerable comes, we can perform the secret method at any time.

Upon hearing that the Thunder Venerable would come, Lin Feng quickly replied.

After all, he also wanted to quickly settle these miscellaneous matters, obtain compensation from the Three Giants and Gu Xun'er's side, then absorb the two Strange Fires on his hand, completely break through the Fighting Sect's barrier, and step into the Dou Zun Realm.

After all, only about ten months remain until that Pill Gathering begins.

He hopes to successfully step into the Fighting Venerable before the Pill Gathering starts.

Only then does he have enough confidence to face the Three Thousand Blazing Flame Fire and the many strong ones of the Soul Hall.

After all, he knows that during the Pill Gathering, Mu Gu will also bring a group of Soul Hall Fighting Venerables to cause trouble.

If his strength is sufficient, then at that time he can harvest the bodies and souls of many strong ones.

How could he miss such a good opportunity?

Everyone, sorry, my computer is gone, I'm using my phone to type, I'm really not used to it, I didn't manage to type it out, I'll make it up next time, sorry.

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