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Chapter 143

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The spirit of the forbidden zone could not be contained in its anger; since this burial ground came into being, it has possessed spiritual intellect and has followed the command of an ancient deity, all along assisting these deities in living a second life, never making a mistake. However, at this moment, a trace of unknown origin imprint openly acted within the forbidden zone, forcibly suppressing the Nine Yang Ancient God.

The spirit of the forbidden zone could not be contained in its anger; since this burial ground was born, it has possessed spiritual intellect and has followed the command of an ancient deity, all along assisting these deities in living a second life, never making a mistake. However, at this moment, a trace of unknown origin imprint openly acted within the forbidden zone, forcibly suppressing the Nine Yang Ancient God.

"We need to keep terms:..." This is not Chinese; it's instruction. So skip.

Let's produce: "【1】 The spirit of the forbidden zone could not be contained in its anger; since this burial ground was born, it has possessed spiritual intellect and has followed the command of an ancient deity, all along assisting these deities in living a second life, never making a mistake. However, at this moment, a trace of unknown origin imprint openly acted within the forbidden zone, forcibly suppressing the Nine Yang Ancient God."

Check length: okay.

A faint chill spread out, making Qin Yu feel icy all over, and he involuntarily shivered deep inside. It seemed as if countless rule-forces, like surging dark currents, wildly rushed toward his flesh, attempting to invade his sea of consciousness.

Translate: "A faint chill spread, Qin Yu felt his whole body icy, his heart involuntarily shivered. It seemed as if countless rule-forces, like surging dark currents, madly rushed toward his flesh, attempting to seize his sea of consciousness."

We need to keep Qin Yu as Qin Yu, rule-forces as rule-forces, flesh as flesh, and sea of consciousness as sea of consciousness. Good.

The second-generation phoenix ancestor slightly furrowed its brows, its eyes flickering with fire, yet it exuded a chilling, icy aura that made one's blood run cold.

Translate: "The second-generation phoenix ancestor slightly furrowed its brows, flames flickering in its eyes, yet it emitted a chilling, cold aura that made one's blood run chill."

We need to keep second-generation phoenix ancestor as second-generation phoenix ancestor, and keep phoenix as phoenix. Good.

"Is it over?" its voice resonated with endless majesty, "This child has affinity with my clan, yet this ancient god dares to try to seize his body— isn't that trampling the face of my phoenix clan underfoot? If you disagree, you can directly mobilize the power of heaven and earth to annihilate us all, and incidentally kill this ancient god as well. Otherwise… get lost!"

We need to keep quotes maybe as is? We'll translate content, keep quotation marks? Probably we should keep the quotes as part of translation: use English quotes. We'll translate: ""Over?" it said with boundless majesty, "This child is fated with my clan, yet this ancient god dares to seize him—isn't that trampling the face of my phoenix clan underfoot? If you disagree, you can directly mobilize the power of heaven and earth to annihilate us all, and incidentally kill this ancient god as well. Otherwise… get lost!""

We need to keep phoenix clan as phoenix clan and ancient god as ancient god. Ensure we keep the tone.

The aura radiating from within and without displayed its former glory. Back then, it even made saints bleed and slayed immortals of longevity, fearing nothing. Even now, with only a trace of imprint remaining, its might remains astonishing.

Translate: "That aura emanating from within and without displayed its former glory. Back then, it had made saints bleed, slain immortals of longevity, fearing nothing. Even now, with only a trace of imprint remaining, its might remains astonishing."

We need to keep imprint as imprint. Good.

Qin Yu listened to the second-generation ancestor's words, feeling both shocked and tense; this second-generation ancestor was truly overbearing, opening his mouth only with lethal decisiveness. At this moment, their lives hung like a thread in the opponent's hand— once the forbidden zone's spirit mobilized all rule-forces to press down, they would all perish. A strong sense of life-and-death danger, like dark clouds, loomed over his heart, but he suppressed his fear, telling himself he must not show weakness now.

Translate: "Qin Yu listened to the second-generation ancestor's words, feeling both shocked and tense; this second-generation ancestor was truly overbearing, opening with lethal decisiveness. At this moment, their lives hung like a thread in the opponent's hand—once the forbidden zone's spirit mobilized all rule-forces to press down, they would all perish. A strong sense of life-and-death crisis, like dark clouds, shrouded his heart. Yet he suppressed his fear, telling himself he must not show weakness now."

We need to keep second-generation ancestor as second-generation ancestor. Keep.

"Release the ancient god sir, and you can still leave safely; from now on we will not interfere with each other." The forbidden zone's spirit's eyes were deep and gloomy, piercing with bone-chilling cold: "I give you only three breaths' time." From ancient times to now, no one has dared threaten it like this; moreover, the lineage of primordial gods is mighty, already laid out across the myriad heavens, with over a hundred gods having emerged, it has ample confidence not to take the threat of the second-generation phoenix ancestor to heart.

First quote: "Release the ancient god sir, and you can still leave safely; from now on we will not interfere with each other." The spirit's eyes were deep and gloomy, piercing with bone-chilling cold: "I give you only three breaths' time." From ancient times to now, no one has dared threaten it like this; moreover, the lineage of primordial gods is mighty, already laid out across the myriad heavens, with over a hundred gods having emerged, it has ample confidence not to take the threat of the second-generation phoenix ancestor to heart.

We need to keep ancient god sir as ancient god sir, second-generation phoenix ancestor as second-generation phoenix ancestor, primordial god as primordial god, and myriad heavens as myriad heavens. Good.

"Boom!" Streams of rule-forces began to surge, like an invisible tide rippling in the void, quickly enveloping Qin Yu's flesh. This was both a threat and a final notice.

Translate: ""Boom!" Streams of rule-forces began to surge, like invisible tides rippling layer upon layer in the void, swiftly enveloping Qin Yu's flesh. This was both a threat and the final notice."

We need to keep Boom! as Boom!. Good.

The second-generation phoenix ancestor's eyes blazed with fire; in its entire life, no one had ever dared to threaten it so brazenly, not even the so-called sages. In its prime, a mere flick of the wrist could smash this burial ground into sinking underground.

Translate: "The second-generation phoenix ancestor's eyes blazed with fire; in its lifetime, no one had ever dared threaten it thus, not even so-called saints would dare be so presumptuous. In its prime, a flip of the hand could smash this burial ground into sinking underground."

We need to keep second-generation phoenix ancestor as before.

Immediately, it turned its gaze to the Nine Yang Ancient God and coldly said, "If you want to live, then negotiate with it; if you don't want to live, then let us all perish together. I am merely an imprint, nothing more."

Translate: "Immediately, its gaze fell upon the Nine Yang Ancient God, and it coldly said: "If you want to live, then negotiate with it; if you don't want to live, then perish together. I am merely an imprint, it doesn't matter.""

We need to keep Nine Yang Ancient God as Nine Yang Ancient God and imprint as imprint. Good.

Qin Yu's mouth twitched slightly; he felt that if it weren't for the Little Phoenix in his arms, given this old phoenix's explosive temper, the formation would likely self-destruct outright, killing everyone. The phoenix clan's beings truly have a fiery temperament.

Translate: "Qin Yu's mouth twitched slightly; he felt that if it weren't for the little phoenix in his arms, given this old phoenix's violent temper, it would likely directly self-destruct the formation, killing everyone. The phoenix clan's beings truly have an explosively fiery temper."

We need to keep Little Phoenix as Little Phoenix, old phoenix as old phoenix, and phoenix clan as phoenix clan. Good.

The Nine Yang Ancient God also had a headache; having dealt with this old phoenix before, he knew it kept its word and its methods were ruthless—not only toward enemies, but it showed no mercy even to itself.

Translate: "The Nine Yang Ancient God also suffered a headache; having dealt with this old phoenix before, he knew it kept its word, its methods were ruthless—not only toward enemies, but also toward itself, showing no mercy."

We need Nine Yang Ancient God.

One breath… two breaths… the rule-forces lurking in the sea of consciousness flickered with faint ripples, as if trying to devour that flame formation.

Translate: "One breath… two breaths… the rule-forces faintly rippled within the sea of consciousness, as if about to devour that flame formation."

We need to keep sea of consciousness as sea of consciousness. Good.

"Hold it!" the Nine Yang Ancient God hastily reached out to block, cold sweat pouring from his forehead. If he weren't afraid of death, he would never have submitted to a Foundation Establishment human cultivator. Now the opponent shows no sign of relenting, but if he continues the stalemate, death is certain.

Translate: ""Stop!" the Nine Yang Ancient God hastily reached out to block, cold sweat beading on his forehead. If he weren't afraid of death, he would not have submitted earlier to a Foundation Establishment human cultivator. Now the other side shows no sign of relenting, but if he continues the stalemate, death is certain."

We need to keep Foundation Establishment as Foundation Establishment and human cultivator as human cultivator. Good.

"Buzz buzz buzz!" At that moment, Qin Yu's body emitted a resonant humming sound, the spiritual energy in his dantian pushed to the limit. Whether it was the formation crafted by the second-generation phoenix ancestor or the rule-forces the forbidden zone's spirit directed into his sea of consciousness, a portion flowed into Qin Yu's body.

Translate: "The forbidden zone's spirit's face slightly tightened as it said: "Ancient God Sir, are you sure… you want to lose face over that? Being led by the nose by a phoenix and a human cultivator?""

We need to keep Ancient God Sir as Ancient God Sir, phoenix as phoenix, and human cultivator as human cultivator. Good.

The Nine Yang Ancient God's mouth twitched slightly; he inwardly cursed that this wasn't nonsense, but he fell into silence, unable to respond, and the situation became extremely awkward.

Translate: "The Nine Yang Ancient God's mouth twitched slightly; he inwardly cursed that this was nonsense, yet he fell into silence, having nothing to say, and the atmosphere became extremely awkward."

We need Nine Yang Ancient God.

"Buzz buzz buzz!" At that moment, Qin Yu's body emitted a resonant humming sound, the spiritual energy in his dantian pushed to the limit. Whether it was the formation crafted by the second-generation phoenix ancestor or the rule-forces the forbidden zone's spirit directed into his sea of consciousness, a portion flowed into Qin Yu's body.

Translate: ""Buzz buzz buzz!" At that moment, a humming sound emanated from within Qin Yu's body, the spiritual energy in his dantian having accumulated to the limit. Whether it was the formation crafted by the second-generation phoenix ancestor or the rule-forces that the forbidden zone's spirit had mobilized into the sea of consciousness, part of it flowed into Qin Yu's body."

We need to keep Buzz buzz buzz! as Buzz buzz buzz!, dantian as dantian, sea of consciousness as sea of consciousness, second-generation phoenix ancestor as second-generation phoenix ancestor, and forbidden zone's spirit as forbidden zone's spirit. Good.

At this moment, he could no longer suppress his cultivation level and directly charged toward breaking into the Spirit Transformation realm. Of course, he no longer wished to keep suppressing himself. If this place still had some connection with the Cangyuan Realm, then during his tribulation there would be a chance to alert the Niepan Tribulation Spirit, which would also serve as a backup plan. After all, although he had suppressed a primordial god, he himself was now in peril, the standoff unyielding, and he had to find a way to break the deadlock.

Translate: "At this moment, he could no longer suppress his cultivation realm, directly charging toward the Spirit Transformation stage. Of course, he no longer wished to keep suppressing himself. If this place still had some connection with the Cangyuan Realm, then when he undergoes his tribulation, there would be a certain probability to notify the Niepan Jie Ling, which would also serve as his backup. After all, although he had suppressed a primordial god, he himself was now in peril, the stalemate unbroken, and he must find a way to break the deadlock."

We need to keep Spirit Transformation as Spirit Transformation, Cangyuan Jie as Cangyuan Jie, Niepan Jie Ling as Niepan Jie Ling, and primordial god as primordial god. Good.

"Oh no, he's going to undergo tribulation." The forbidden zone's spirit's expression changed drastically. Although it could command the rule-forces of this heaven and earth, it could not alter the heavenly law. At this moment it must withdraw from the sea of consciousness, otherwise it would be deemed as interfering with the heavenly tribulation, and the heavenly law cannot be violated.

Translate: ""Not good, he's undergoing tribulation." The forbidden zone's spirit's face changed drastically. Although it could command the rule-forces of this heaven and earth, it could not alter heavenly law. At this moment it must withdraw from the sea of consciousness, otherwise it would be deemed interference with the thunder punishment, and heavenly law must not be defiled."

We need to keep sea of consciousness as sea of consciousness and heavenly law as heavenly law. Good.

At this moment, the second-generation phoenix ancestor also swiftly concealed its aura, inwardly sighing with relief. Earlier it had not known how to resolve this thorny situation, never expecting that the so-called burial ground's spirit would be so domineering, insisting that the Nine Yang Ancient God and they all perish together; the situation had already surpassed its control.

Translate: "At this moment, the second-generation phoenix ancestor also swiftly concealed its aura, inwardly sighing with relief. Earlier it had not known how to resolve this thorny situation; it never expected that the so-called burial ground's spirit would be so forceful, insisting that the Nine Yang Ancient God and they perish together, the situation now exceeding its control."

We need to keep second-generation phoenix ancestor as second-generation phoenix ancestor and Nine Yang Ancient God as Nine Yang Ancient God. Good.

"Buzz!" A faint flame enveloped the Nine Yang Ancient God, its immortal aura shielding it to avoid interfering with Qin Yu's tribulation.

Translate: ""Buzz!" A faint flame enveloped the Nine Yang Ancient God, its indestructible aura shielding it to avoid interfering with Qin Yu's tribulation."

We need to keep Buzz! as Buzz! and Nine Yang Ancient God as Nine Yang Ancient God. Good.

"Boom boom boom!" Just then, the dueling space dissipated, and the figures of Qin Yu and Bi Qingmu appeared deep within the inner perimeter. Countless dark clouds swiftly gathered, spreading over a hundred miles, like black waves crashing down, the aura of destruction making hearts tremble.

Translate: ""Boom boom boom!" Just then, the dueling space dissipated, and the figures of Qin Yu and Bi Qingmu appeared deep within the inner perimeter. Countless dark clouds rapidly gathered, spreading over a hundred li, like black tidal waves pressing across, the destructive aura making hearts tremble."

We need to keep Boom boom boom! as Boom boom boom!, Qin Yu as Qin Yu, Bi Qingmu as Bi Qingmu, and deep within the inner perimeter as deep within the inner perimeter. Good.

"This young master… truly priceless, even while receiving the inheritance he managed to break through his realm." Bi Qingmu's eyes were full of envy, but it did not realize that earlier, within Qin Yu's sea of consciousness, he had already experienced two life-and-death crises.

Translate: ""This young master… truly beyond precious, even while receiving the inheritance he managed to break through his realm." Bi Qingmu's eyes were full of envy. But it did not realize that earlier, within Qin Yu's sea of consciousness, he had already experienced two life-and-death crises."

We need to keep young master as young master and sea of consciousness as sea of consciousness. Good.

Many human cultivators at this moment also showed looks of admiration. Some heavenly pride among humans who had not yet dissolved their blood contracts tightly clenched their fists in their sleeves.

Translate: "Many human cultivators also now showed looks of worship. Some human heavenly pride who had not yet released their blood contracts tightly clenched their fists within their sleeves."

We need to keep human cultivators as human cultivators, human heavenly pride as human heavenly pride, and blood contract as blood contract. Good.

"This is an opportunity for us."

Translate: ""This is an opportunity for us.""

We need keep quotes.

"We have been trapped in the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone for as short as a hundred years or as long as five hundred years; this time… we have missed too much, and our future achievements may be limited. If

Translate: ""We have been trapped in the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone for as short as a hundred years, as long as five hundred years; this period… we have missed too much, our future achievements likely limited. If we could submit to this young master, perhaps there remains hope to defy fate and change destiny!""

We need to keep Heavenly God Forbidden Zone as Heavenly God Forbidden Zone and young master as young master. Good.

Everyone's eyes flashed with hopeful light. This period of time trapped in the forbidden zone should have been their golden age of cultivation, but it was wasted. Being able to cultivate to the Venerable stage would already be considered fortunate. At this moment, they are all thinking about what treasures they possess that could catch the young master's eye.

Translate: "Everyone's eyes sparkled with hopeful light. The time they had been trapped in the forbidden zone ought to have been their golden age of cultivation, yet it was wasted. Being able to cultivate to the Venerable stage would already be considered fortunate. Now they all pondered what treasure they possessed that could catch this young master's eye."

We need to keep Venerable stage as Venerable stage and young master as young master. Good.

Just as their thoughts were wandering, in Qingshi Jun, Lin Wu Ren and others were now relaxed, quietly waiting for the little master-uncle to leave seclusion. Although the projection was blocked, there faintly flickered the aura of tribulation lightning in the passage of the ancient ruins.

Translate: "As their thoughts swirled, in Qingshi Jun, Lin Wu Ren and others were now relaxed, quietly awaiting the little master-uncle to emerge from seclusion. Although the projection was obscured, faint ripples of tribulation lightning could be sensed in the passage of the ancient ruins."

We need to keep Qingshi Jun as Qingshi Jun, Lin Wu Ren as Lin Wu Ren, little master-uncle as little master-uncle, ancient ruins as ancient ruins, and tribulation lightning as tribulation lightning. Good.

Because the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone is an independent small world, but undergoing tribulation inside it still requires connection to the greater realm; otherwise, breakthrough is impossible. If one could master the power of the Lightning Dao, there would be no need to develop in secrecy like this.

Translate: "Because the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone is an independent small world, yet undergoing tribulation there still requires connection to the greater realm; otherwise breakthrough is impossible. If one could master the power of the Lightning Dao, there would be no need to develop covertly like this."

We need to keep Heavenly God Forbidden Zone as Heavenly God Forbidden Zone and Lightning Dao as Lightning Dao. Good.

"Someone is undergoing tribulation… this aura feels very familiar; could it be the adult?" Niepan Jie Ling fell into thought, but lacking a projection, it was extremely worried, fearing something might happen to the adult.

Translate: ""Someone is undergoing tribulation… this aura feels familiar, could it be the adult's?" The Niepan Jie Ling fell into contemplation, but lacking a projection, it was extremely worried, fearing something might happen to the adult."

We need to keep Niepan Jie Ling as Niepan Jie Ling and adult as adult. Good.

Immediately, without hesitation, taking advantage of the influx of the Heavenly Earth Lightning Dao into the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone, a strand of imprint closely followed and merged into the cloud layer.

Translate: "Immediately, without a word, it seized the moment when the heavenly and earthly Lightning Dao surged into the Heavenly God Forbidden Zone, a trace of imprint followed closely and merged into the cloud layers."

We need to keep Heavenly God Forbidden Zone as Heavenly God Forbidden Zone, Lightning Dao as Lightning Dao, and imprint as imprint. Good.

Immediately, Niepan Jie Ling manifested a form, but its face instantly darkened.

Translate: "Immediately, the Niepan Jie Ling manifested a form, yet its expression instantly darkened."

We need to keep Niepan Jie Ling as Niepan Jie Ling.

Because… Qin Yu's body is entwined with some extraordinary rule-forces, and these powers are clearly not benevolent!

Translate: "Because… Qin Yu's body was entwined with some extraordinary rule-forces, and these powers were clearly not benevolent!"

We need to keep Qin Yu as Qin Yu and rule-forces as rule-forces. Good.

Boom—Suddenly, lightning surged wildly in the clouds, quickly gathered into silver-white lightning dragons.

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