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Chapter 6

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Mu Yi rubbed his head, feeling a bit unwell; the sensation of his weakened soul was unpleasant, like having a fever from a cold, and he felt an unprecedented fatigue.

Translate: Mu Yi rubbed his head, he felt a bit unwell, the feeling of weak soul was unpleasant, like having a fever from a cold, feeling unprecedented fatigue.

We need to keep meaning, not add extra. Let's produce: Mu Yi rubbed his head, feeling a bit unwell; the weak-soul sensation was unpleasant, like a fever from a cold, and he felt an unprecedented fatigue.

Make sure it's one line.

Fortunately, the time was only one hour.

Translation: Fortunately, the time was only one hour.

As time passed, the hour of weakness quickly went by.

Translation: As time passed, the hour of weakness quickly went by.

Mu Yi climbed out of bed, a miraculous experience; when the time came, he felt as if he had taken an All-Inclusive Tonifying Pill, and his whole body felt invigorated.

Translation: Mu Yi climbed out of bed, a miraculous experience; when the time arrived, he felt as if he had taken a Shi Quan Da Bu Wan, his whole spirit revived.

as if he had taken an All-Inclusive Tonifying Pill.

After returning to normal, Mu Yi checked his personal gear and found that everything, including his explosive-proof suit, was intact, with no tears or other damage.

Translation: After returning to normal, Mu Yi checked his personal gear and found that even the explosion-proof suit was intact, with no tears or other damage.

This left Mu Yi puzzled, wondering what form he had taken to enter the dungeon just moments ago.

Translation: This left Mu Yi puzzled, wondering what form he had just entered the dungeon in.

Given how real the sensation felt, he still believed he had actually entered the dungeon.

Translation: Based on the realistic feeling earlier, he had thought he had truly entered the dungeon.

Now it seems perhaps he entered as some kind of soul or a copy.

Translation: Now it seems perhaps he entered as some kind of soul or clone.

Soon Mu Yi shook his head, dismissing such impractical thoughts; no matter the method, it was a power he could not yet comprehend.

Translation: Soon Mu Yi shook his head, giving up such impractical speculation; no matter the method, it was a power he could not yet comprehend.

Mu Yi glanced at his Comprehensive Network panel; thanks to the slaughter bonus, he now had nearly 2000 points of killing experience.

Translation: Mu Yi glanced at his Zongwang panel; thanks to the slaughter bonus, he now had nearly 2000 points of slaughter experience.

We will translate it as 'thanks to the slaughter bonus'.

Raising a warrior's profession to level 2 requires only 1000 experience.

Translation: Raising the General profession to level 2 requires only 1000 experience.

However, after looking at the upgrade options, Mu Yi still chose to give up.

Translation: However, Mu Yi looked at the upgrade options and still chose to give up.

The encounter in the dungeon made it clear that his elite talent was problematic, or perhaps not as simple as described on paper; without fully mastering it, rashly seeking more power could result in being consumed by that power itself.

Translation: The encounter in the dungeon made it clear that his Elite Talent had a problem, or rather that his Elite Talent was not as simple as its description suggested; without full mastery, rashly seeking more power might see him devoured by that power itself.

The feeling of being overtaken by a bloodlust sensation was unpleasant; thinking of the goblins affected in the dungeon gave him a chill.

Translation: The feeling of being controlled by a bloodlust sensation was unpleasant; thinking of the goblins affected in the dungeon, Mu Yi felt a chill.

Mu Yi intended to study his talent thoroughly, at least first resolving this loss of rationality.

Translation: Mu Yi planned to study his talent properly; at the very least he needed to resolve this loss of reason.

A perfectly normal warrior ending up like a berserker definitely indicates something went wrong.

Translation: A perfectly fine General had become like a berserker; surely something was wrong.

Where should he go to find a profession tutor?

Translation: Where should he go to find a profession tutor?

Mu Yi was confused; as everyone knows, the best way to quickly get the hang of a game is to find an expert who can guide you hand‑in‑hand, allowing you to shed the novice stage swiftly and truly grasp the game's core mechanics.

Translation: Mu Yi was confused; as everyone knows, the best way to quickly get started in a game is to find an expert who will guide you hand‑in‑hand, so you can escape the newbie stage as fast as possible and truly grasp the game's core mechanics.

As Mu Yi's thoughts drifted, he noticed that the Comprehensive Network page before him flipped like a book, leading him into a brand‑new interface.

Translation: As Mu Yi's thoughts drifted, he noticed the Zongwang page before him flipping like a book, leading him into a brand‑new interface.

"How intelligent!" Mu Yi felt a bit delighted; it was truly a case of wearing out iron shoes to find nothing, yet obtaining it effortlessly.

Translation: "So intelligent?" Mu Yi felt a bit delighted; indeed, it was like finding what he sought without effort after breaking through iron shoes.

The new page contained plenty of new content.

Translation: The new page contained a lot of new content.

【Multiverse Trading Center (Newcomer‑Restricted Areas)】

Translation: 【Multiverse Trade Center (Newbie Restriction Area)】

【Comprehensive Network Event List (Newcomers Cannot Participate)】

Translation: 【Zongwang Activity List (Newbie Cannot Participate)】

【Multiverse Public Open World List (Newcomers Cannot Participate)】

Translation: 【Multiverse Public Open World List (Newbie Cannot Participate)】

【Multiverse Comprehensive Network Player Discussion Forum (Newcomer‑Restricted Areas)】

Translation: 【Multiverse Zongwang Player Exchange Forum (Newbie Restriction Area)】

Skipping the two sections he couldn't access, Mu Yi opened the Multiverse Trading Center; instantly a huge pile of items appeared, and the intricate classification information overwhelmed him.

Translation: Skipping the two inaccessible sections, Mu Yi opened the Multiverse Trade Center; instantly a heap of items appeared before him, the complex classification information dazzling his eyes.

Mu Yi tried entering the keyword for spells into the search bar before him.

Translation: Mu Yi tried entering a spell keyword into the search bar before him.

Upon his confirmation, a dense list of spell information instantly refreshed before his eyes.

Translation: Upon his confirmation, a dense list of spell information instantly refreshed before his eyes.

"《Mage - Fireball Skill Details》: 200 Comprehensive Network disaster coins (version transaction tax: 100 Comprehensive Network disaster coins)"

Translation: "《Mage - Fireball Skill Details》: 200 Zongwang Disaster Coins (Version Transaction Surcharge 100 Zongwang Disaster Coins)"

"《Zero‑Ring Magic Model Compendium》: 300 Comprehensive Network disaster coins (version transaction tax: 150 Comprehensive Network disaster coins)"

Translation: "《Zero Ring Spell Model Encyclopedia》: 300 Zongwang Disaster Coins (Version Transaction Surcharge 150 Zongwang Disaster Coins)"

"《Spell Compendium Even Goblins Can Learn》: 500 Comprehensive Network disaster coins (version transaction tax: 250 Comprehensive Network disaster coins)"

Translation: "《Spell Compendium Even Goblins Can Learn》: 500 Zongwang Disaster Coins (Version Transaction Surcharge 250 Zongwang Disaster Coins)"

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Translation: …………

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Translation: …………

Version transaction tax?

Translation: Version Transaction Surcharge?

After thinking, Mu Yi entered the keyword for warriors into the search bar before him.

Translation: After thinking, Mu Yi again entered the General keyword into the search bar before him.

"《Warrior: From Beginner to Burial》: 100 Comprehensive Network disaster coins"

Translation: "《General - From Entry to Burial》: 100 Zongwang Disaster Coins"

"《Warrior: Know Your Profession》: 100 Comprehensive Network disaster coins"

Translation: "《General: Know Your Profession》: 100 Zongwang Disaster Coins"

Indeed, afterward there was no red notice about the version transaction tax.

Translation: Indeed, afterward there was no red notice of the Version Transaction Surcharge.

Although he didn't know what this version meant, Mu Yi still remembered this point.

Translation: Although he didn't know what this "version" meant, Mu Yi still noted it.

A glance at his item bag showed that, having never cleared the newcomer dungeon, his amount of Comprehensive Network disaster coins was still "0".

Translation: Glancing at his item bag, he who hadn't even cleared the newbie dungeon still had zero Zongwang Disaster Coins.

He shook his head and closed the trading center.

Translation: Shaking his head, Mu Yi closed the trade center.

There were many good items, but unfortunately he was penniless.

Translation: There were many good things, a pity he had no money.

Buying was impossible; only freeloading could sustain his lifestyle.

Translation: Buying was impossible; only free‑loading could sustain his lifestyle.

Mu Yi opened the forum, and a very hot post appeared before him.

Translation: Mu Yi opened the forum; a hot post appeared before him.

The familiar sense of déjà vu made Mu Yi think he had opened not the Comprehensive Network forum but something like a certain microblog or a certain Q&A site, or perhaps even a certain blue bird.

Translation: The familiar sense of déjà vu made Mu Yi think he had opened not the Zongwang forum but some Weibo, Zhihu, or perhaps a certain blue bird.

Clicking it revealed a high‑definition, uncensored photo of a drow elf that made his blood race, reminiscent of a half‑covered pipa pose, displayed at the top.

Translation: Clicking it, a picture that made the blood surge, a drow elf half‑covering her face with a pipa, high‑resolution uncensored, was displayed at the top.

Indeed, some things are common to all intelligent beings.

Translation: Indeed, some things are common to sentient beings.

Of course, scrolling further down he entered the paid section, which he found utterly boring.

Translation: Of course, scrolling further down he entered the pay‑walled section, which Mu Yi found dull.

He hadn't expected to find such a goddess figure on the Comprehensive Network; unfortunately, as a freeloader, he couldn't pay.

Translation: He hadn't expected to find such a goddess on Zongwang; too bad he's a freeloader, paying would be "baa".

While browsing other Comprehensive Network players' posts, Mu Yi noticed they were mostly just chatting and joking, as if it were merely a social platform.

Translation: As Mu Yi browsed other Zongwang players' posts, he found they were mostly chatting and bragging, seeming like just a social platform.

However, after scrolling for a long time, Mu Yi did discover something useful.

Translation: However, after scrolling for a long time, Mu Yi did discover something useful.

In a sense, this also counts as the Comprehensive Network forum being a flea market for its players.

Translation: In a sense, this also counts as a flea market for the Zongwang forum and its players.

However, for some reason, reviews of Kyushu on the Comprehensive Network were overwhelmingly negative.

Translation: However, for some reason, reviews of Jiuzhou on Zongwang seemed uniformly negative.

There was a post offering a challenge ticket for the "Fish Leaping Dragon Gate" dungeon.

Translation: One post was offering a Fish Leaps Dragon Gate dungeon challenge ticket.

"Fish Leaping Dragon Gate Challenge Ticket"

Translation: "Fish Leaps Dragon Gate Challenge Ticket"

Type: Dungeon Challenge Voucher / Consumable

Translation: Type: Dungeon Challenge Scroll / Consumable

Remaining uses: 1/1

Translation: Remaining uses: 1/1

Status: Locked (the player must complete a transaction on the relevant Comprehensive Network trading page to unlock the item's usage rights)

Translation: Status: Locked (the player must complete a transaction on the relevant Zongwang trade page to unlock the item's usage right)

Description: After use, a Comprehensive Network player can enter a level‑5 dungeon once.

Translation: Description: After use, a Zongwang player can enter a level‑5 dungeon once.

"Fish Leaps Dragon Gate":

Type: Time Dungeon

Dungeon recommended challenge level: 5+

Dungeon-exclusive key element: Ocean

Dungeon rewards: Zongwang Disaster Coin, magic materials, magic equipment.

Dungeon-exclusive rewards: Dragon Palace Camp reputation, Aquatic Camp reputation.

ps: This dungeon is not a real dungeon world; after death, characters revive in the material world and fall into a soul weakness time of 1~2 days.

Moreover, the price is only 2000 Zongwang Disaster Coin, seeming quite a bargain.

However, the comments below the post are almost unanimously critical of the dungeon.

"Another shitty Jiuzhou dungeon, recommended challenge level 5+? Maybe 15+?"

"Last time I just killed two civilians, got chased eighteen streets by a big shot with challenge level 20+, not counting being killed, they also slapped an Enemy Mark on me; any Jiuzhou-type dungeon will generate disgust toward me."

"You damn well committed a crime; I just entered, and he wants to subdue demons and make me his mount—where the hell am I supposed to reason?"

"Dogshit Reputation is useless; even if you switch worlds, nobody will acknowledge it—it's just a way to turn hostile and not recognize people."

"Don't let me see Jiuzhou again—I'll beat anyone I see!"

"Just looking, it seems they've been beaten before, yet they weren't killed and are still quite strong?"

……

All such accusations are too many to count; Mu Yi thought about the information in his job description, and his mouth twitched involuntarily.

Still haven't left Newbie Village, yet I seem to have piled up a ton of debt and provoked a bunch of potential enemies—what should I do? Waiting online, really urgent.

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