Chapter 29: Author

Moreover, water as a thing is actually hard to have a fixed nature; I reflected and found I truly don't know what to revise, every step is indispensable, and the author has even deleted many small plots because each small plot is tightly linked.

Just like the plot of Qian Renxue fooling Qian Daoliu, which is indispensable for hunting a hundred-thousand-year soul ring nowadays; just like Ye Feng the transmigrator, it's precisely because she meets him that Qian Renxue wants to immediately take the Ice and Fire Yin Yang Eyes—if she didn't go, I can only say she'd become a brainless fool; how do you know there aren't other transmigrators?

Also, the verbal sparring between Bibi Dong and Ci Tun are things the author wishes to show readers; I don't want everyone to treat these Title Douluo as idiots—what the transmigrator says is what it is.

That's too mindless? They also have their own thoughts, their own thinking; every one of their ideas is the author's projection into their personality and experience! Could this be water? Could it be that only fast-paced, where everyone is exactly the same, completely lacking their own ideas, like a clone's homogenization, is considered not water?

Moreover, everything Qian Renxue currently possesses is what she fought for herself; she is the reincarnated Qian Renxue, her configuration is exactly the same as the original Qian Renxue!

The author didn't add even a hint of water to her basic setting! Her cheats are all hers, gained through her wisdom, power, talent, and her own struggle!

It's not that just entering the Star Dou Great Forest, killing a soul beast suddenly causes an external soul bone to pop out—why would it pop out? I don't know, just because Tang San has it so I must have it too? Like the Blue Silver Emperor's external soul bone, which Qian Renxue also wrested from A Yin herself; she's long had her own plans for her future! She won't rely on so-called luck or fate! It's not like a system suddenly arrives, a 'ding' sign-in success, wow! Congratulations on obtaining the Twelve-Wing Fallen Angel! I didn't say eating immortal herbs would instantly evolve, right? Is a god‑level martial soul really that cheap? A few immortal herbs and it's done? Surely we can't just write these transformations in one go, a 'ding' sign‑in success, wow! Congratulations on the martial soul evolving into a Twenty‑Four Wing Angel! Is that considered not water?

Then what genius flow are you still watching? Go watch the invincible flow—there are plenty of sign‑in twelve‑wing and sixteen‑wing ones, and double pupils and supreme bones can be produced for you.

Is it really necessary to have a system to be considered not water? After gaining a system, does the protagonist truly have their own charm? Everything is just the system's tasks; without a system, could Qian Renxue not become the strongest? Could she not obtain a hundred‑thousand‑year first soul ring? Brothers seeing this, you yourselves say—where is my cheat unreasonable? Isn't that something she fought for herself? Earlier a reader said I was too exaggerated, that the first soul ring is just a hundred‑thousand‑year soul ring, but tell me where my handling is unreasonable? Have I violated the basic setting of Douluo Continent? Qian Renxue plotted for three years for that hundred‑thousand‑year soul ring! Could it still be inferior to a protagonist who gets everything with a mere 'ding'? Why is it that Qian Renxue's painstaking scheming is called water, while a system's mere 'ding' sign‑in is considered not water? In such system‑flow or sign‑in‑flow protagonists, besides signing in beside Shrek, do they have any original ideas or plot? Sigh π_π, sorry, I suddenly got a bit angry; the author is a guy with thick skin—you can call the author sandbag, lazy dog, OOC characters I don't care, but if something's reasonable I'll change it on the spot. Yet Qian Renxue plotted for so long and ended up being labeled 'water', which really upsets me.

I thought about where it could be called water—maybe the reactions of the various sects—but how could that not be a little satisfaction point? Moreover, I previously told some readers that the scenes should be bigger; could it be that only a mere 'ding' with a congratulatory hundred‑thousand‑year soul ring scene is satisfying?

Also, maybe it's the fight between Qian Xunji and Tang Hao that's considered water, but this is the big plot of hunting a hundred‑thousand‑year soul ring! Could I just write Qian Renxue showing up, A Yin you give me a sacrifice, and I'm only a Title Douluo here? I settled it with a single sentence—sigh, it's really upsetting.

Furthermore, my comment section does not set up fan values or anything like that, and I do not delete comments.

Many hands make light work; if you're dissatisfied, you can bring it up directly, and the author will immediately fix any unreasonable parts—right and wrong will naturally be judged.

This book was written for those brothers who have likewise been fed up with brainless fanfiction and die‑hard lickers; if you don't like it, you can go read a system‑powered invincible flow, or an innate rank‑ninety soul power type—how fast that is, full of dry goods, not a drop of water; my inferior work actually isn't suitable, I'm just a newcomer who picked up the pen without knowing anything.

Finally, the author hopes to communicate with everyone; whether something is unreasonable or a character is OOC, you can bring it up, and the author will humbly accept it—but don't insult people, otherwise I'll just start a debate right then.

I've been at it half a day, the two chapters for early morning still aren't written—I have to start rushing the draft. Everyone, if you have any ideas you can also bring them up; the author will reflect on them, but if you can't find a reason to insult people, I'm not your father and I won't indulge you! Finally, thank you everyone, (ω) love you all.

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