Chapter 399

TMD ruined such a good script from ONE.

Son of a bitch!

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"*Naruto* and *One Punch Man*... they are the most qualified to take over *Bleach*."

Finally, Xu Feng locked his eyes on the two hot-blooded scripts.

This script was written by him according to the original plot.

Of course, it only covers the end of the youth arc, that is, the end of the battle at the Valley of the End.

They say *Bleach*, *Naruto*, *One Piece*, *Bleach*, *Naruto*, *One Piece*; the most exciting parts of *One Piece* should be the Water 7 arc and the Summit War arc in the middle.

And *Naruto* and *Bleach* belong to the best opening.

Chunin Exams arc and Sasuke Retrieval arc, Soul Society arc and Aizen arc.

Therefore, Xu Feng initially felt that the youth arc of *Naruto* did not need to be modified.

However, after spending half an hour reading it through, Xu Feng's face became darker and darker.

Because he knew the later plot, so combined with the plot of *Shippuden*, Xu Feng would find that the youth arc could be said to have bugs everywhere.

The first problem is with the protagonist Naruto Uzumaki.

Why does everyone know he is a Jinchuriki?

Shouldn't this kind of thing be hidden as much as possible?

Then, is the character Sarutobi Hiruzen, the Third Hokage, good or bad?

From the surface of the original work, he is undoubtedly a good person.

But he knew Naruto's true identity, so why did he watch and eat melons silently for twelve years?

You know, if it weren't for Minato Namikaze, the Hidden Leaf Village might have been gone, and it would be your turn to sit in the Hokage position again?

He didn't give much living expenses, causing people to drink expired milk.

No wonder so many *Naruto* fanfictions blacken you to death.

Just looking at Naruto's childhood treatment, you can't wash it white.

And Kakashi and Jiraiya, you two, one is a disciple and one is a master, you've been eating melons together all these years, right?

I'm afraid you put all your energy into *Make-Out Paradise* and peeping at the women's bathhouse.

Finally, there is this singer Uchiha Itachi.

This guy's character setting must be changed.

There is a rumor that Kishimoto's original setting for him was a pure villain, but later his popularity became higher and higher, so he simply changed it to an "undercover".

Good guy, it turns out Gosho Aoyama learned from you!

"Phew..."

Xu Feng sighed again and began to try to fix these bugs.

The problem of Naruto's Jinchuriki identity being exposed.

Xu Feng set it so that Naruto went out of control once when he was three years old and was witnessed by a large number of villagers in the Hidden Leaf Village.

So it was exposed.

The official *Naruto* novel in the previous life seems to have used this patch.

I have to say that this patch is relatively reasonable.

The setting of drinking expired milk was also removed.

Although it is also necessary to highlight the protagonist's childhood loneliness and hardship, it cannot be too exaggerated.

Third Hokage Sarutobi Hiruzen, Xu Feng set this character as a monarch who was wise in the beginning and foolish in the end, similar to Emperor Xuanzong of Tang and King Wuling of Zhao in ancient China.

After all, there is no way, this old guy has done too many dirty things.

Xu Feng, a time traveler, wants to wash him, but can't wash him clean.

As for Uchiha Itachi, the number one filial son in the *Naruto* world, no, even in the 2D world.

Xu Feng said sorry, brother, you should restore your initial setting and be your scum villain.

You are just a big villain who killed his father and mother for his own selfish desires.

By the time Xu Feng repaired the bugs in the youth arc, he looked out the window.

Oh my, it's dark.

Take another look at the time in the lower right corner of the screen.

Coded for five hours.

Almost topped half of the dog author's daily volume...

"In this way, *Shippuden* will also have to be greatly modified, son of a bitch, it's too late."

Xu Feng yawned, rubbing his eyebrows in distress.

Turned his attention to *One Punch Man* and *Inuyasha*.

The former ONE script is perfect without exaggeration, and there is no need for a time traveler like himself to do it.

And the latter... basically no big problems, just too many notes, or side plots that are irrelevant to the main line, need to be deleted in large quantities.

"Speaking of which, can the *Inuyasha* script pass the review..."

Xu Feng immediately began to worry about another problem—

Sesshomaru's official partner Rin, her first appearance seems to be 6 or 8 years old.

Finally, she gave birth to a cub for Sesshomaru, this, is this a bit perverted?

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"Boss, your tea."

Guli Nazha walked in for the nth time to pour tea for Xu Feng.

This second new girl in Xu Feng's company has become more and more familiar with the assistant's work in the past six months.

Seeing Xu Feng writing a script, she didn't say a word all afternoon.

Just seeing the teacup by Xu Feng's hand bottoming out, or getting cold, she poured hot tea on it cautiously.

Seeing Xu Feng finally stop the action of coding words, with a headache.

She hurriedly stepped forward and gave him a brain relaxation with her slender fingertips.

It's a pity that the conscience of little assistant Guli Nazha is slightly barren, otherwise Xu Feng could enjoy a wave of brain-cushion treatment.

While Xu Feng enjoyed Guli Nazha's massage, he stared at the script with squinted eyes.

There are really a lot of things to modify.

Especially *Naruto*!

But fortunately, although there are many bugs, there are no disgusting bridges.

Well, Xu Feng is talking about *One Piece*, which produced heaven-defying hard work like Momonosuke, Kozuki Oden, and Nika fruit.

Xu Feng suspects that it is because *Naruto* and *Bleach* finished one after another, and Oda has no opponents, so he just let himself go?

"Boss, there is one thing I forgot to tell you, Brother Ma invited you to attend the Weibo Night Awards Ceremony."

Guli Nazha, who was massaging Xu Feng, suddenly remembered something.

PS: Bourbon's initial setting was really pure black, but because he was too handsome, Aoyama changed him to an undercover, this was admitted by the author himself, I'm also drunk.

Some friends asked why not play Naraku but play Sesshomaru, just erase Naraku's liking for Kikyo, right?

My answer is that if Naraku doesn't like Kikyo, then many plots won't make sense, and I just want to fall in love with a loli.