Chapter 320

Episode 7 complete

Episode 7 complete

Episode 7 is complete.

First, self-evaluation: there are flaws, and there is room for improvement.

Old book fans probably all know that my imagination is particularly large, so I often do big things while writing, or throw out various imaginative settings into the book.

This is actually not good.

Because, as the saying goes, the first priority of a web novel must be that it is good to read. This is the most important core that overrides everything else. Having many imaginative ideas is just one element of being good to read, not the core element.

I can still improve. I am improving with every book. Some bad things need to be changed, and some good things need to be strengthened. This is my attitude toward writing books.

Demon City spanned two episodes. I set up the worldview and logic of this dream world, and then absorbed the shortcomings of throwing out imaginative ideas in the previous books, describing the imagination of this world as interestingly and as well as possible.

Of course, there are also various characters, emotions, battles, etc., which are also needed, just like bones and flesh.

At present, I have managed to avoid my habitual shortcomings of explanatory text and throwing out imaginative ideas, but I can still improve, and I can write better. I will absorb experience and continue to improve in the future, so my evaluation is that there are flaws, and there is room for improvement next time.

I am only forty-one years old. At present, I plan to retire at fifty, so I can still improve for nine years~~~

Then let's talk about the good parts: the fighting.

The bad parts, such as explanatory text, such as throwing out settings and imagination, these are all bad parts that need to be improved. And the good parts, such as fighting, need to be dug deeper. I can continue to improve the visual sense and smoothness of the fighting, continue to simplify the cumbersome text, be more concise, and express it more perfectly. This is what I need to work hard on next.

Improving a little bit with every book is undoubtedly my biggest goal right now. At present, I think I am doing quite well, so I will continue to work hard.

Pifu's story is still continuing, Pifu is also working hard, and so am I.

Finally, there will be two updates today. A new episode will start tomorrow. I need to organize the plot and outline.

(End of chapter)