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Chapter 79: Simply put

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Simply put.

Simply put.

So far, many people think the protagonist didn't participate, didn't change many martial world affairs; this is a fallacy.

Fan fiction develops the plot according to the original setting.

That's not something we can just twist however we want; otherwise we'd go write an original work.

Either the protagonist directly obtains Sun Wukong's abilities, or some immortal's abilities, then everything is no problem.

But writing fan fiction, following the original setting, is basic morality, because you make a living off someone else's traffic.

I won't bite the hand that feeds me.

First, let's talk about Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv.

These two are open-hearted; Xiao Longnv wishes to leave the ancient tomb because Li Mochou wants to kill her, Yang Guo steps forward, saying he wants to kill, kill me, thus breaking the oath of the tomb's successors.

Because inheriting the tomb's legacy requires an oath: only when a man is willing to die for oneself can one leave the tomb.

This is also why Li Mochou, being older, did not inherit the tomb's legacy, because she is unwilling to make that oath.

So her master didn't give her the true teachings; she lives in the tomb, mostly unaware of its mechanisms! This is not the belief that Li Mochou betrayed the tomb for Lu Zhan yuan.

Because Li Mochou has always been a disciple of the tomb, never expelled from the master's gate; if she betrayed the master, what face would she have to enter the tomb, and how would her coffin be there?

Also, it's precisely because Yang Guo accidentally broke Xiao Longnv's oath that she is willing to leave the tomb; otherwise, even if she discovered the tomb's secret passages, she would not go out.

But can the current Li Mochou defeat Xiao Longnv and Yang Guo? If Xiao Longnv's oath remains unbroken, she will not leave the tomb.

Of course, Li Mochou and Ouyang Feng are also uncertain factors, but the plot's development stems from Xiao Longnv mistakenly thinking the one she had relations with was Yang Guo, while Yang Guo does not consider her his wife.

So she fled in anger and helplessness, Yang Guo went to look for her, leading to the story of their chance encounter with Lu Wushuang, Wanyan Ping, and others.

But Lu Wushuang, taking advantage of Li Mochou and Hong Lingbo going up Mount Zhongnan, stole the Five Poisons Secret Manual and fled.

Li Mochou chased from south to north and north to south for over a year before catching up to Lu Wushuang.

Because after Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv left the tomb, they practiced martial arts in the rear mountains for over a year, leading to the plot where Xiao Longnv is defiled and Yang Guo goes down the mountain to find her.

Afterwards, Yang Guo again met Guo Fu and others, feeling inferior and helpless, heartbroken, he unknowingly ran to Mount Hua, where he encountered Hong Qigong, etc.

Even up to the Heroes' Gathering, the subsequent series of plot developments are all about Yang Guo seeking Xiao Longnv, and believing Guo Jing killed his father, etc.

As for the protagonist, as soon as he enters, with his martial arts, he only needs to casually do something, and the plot is already completely changed.

If Xiao Longnv does not leave the tomb, does not lose her chastity, does not run, does not pursue, many original plotlines would not exist; this is the biggest change.

Including Yang Guo not leaving the mountains; even if Hong Qigong encountered Ouyang Feng, they would not perish together.

Because whether it's Hong Qigong or Ouyang Feng, they are due to a young man whose martial arts depth they don't know, who also happens to be Ouyang Feng's son; Ouyang Feng, in front of his son, is eager to show himself, leading to days of battle where neither yields, resulting in weak death.

If Yang Guo hadn't intervened, when Hong Qigong met Ouyang Feng, they wouldn't have been entangled with a madman; they would have fled long ago.

There's no such thing as fighting nonstop for several days.

Therefore, for all these reasons, everyone reading my fan fiction shouldn't think about going to see the highlight scenes of the original.

First, those plots can already not exist; second, Jin Yong wrote his own plot in a way that cannot be surpassed,

I will definitely replace their protagonist with my protagonist, reenact it; is that interesting?

Take the Heroes' Gathering: in the original, Jinlun appears at Da Sheng Guan; in this book, could the protagonist casually encounter him midway and kill him directly? Or could the protagonist kill Jinlun directly at Da Sheng Guan? Surely that's possible?

Guo Jing and company are great heroes who observe propriety! Is the protagonist?

That's damn it, the feud between the two clans; you wait for me to lecture you on martial arts rules, you're causing trouble?

There's also another issue: some readers say my narration is too much; most people who read fan fiction know this, and I don't deny it.

But understand this: readers are just reading for themselves.

And writing a book is not aimed at an individual or a few dozen people, but at everyone who sees this book.

Among them, some will inevitably not know, and I have the duty to explain clearly, even if you don't like it.

Of course, you can say it's wordy, watery.

I can understand these.

Because for those who already know, this is the reality.

But there's no way; regarding the explanation of martial arts in Jin Yong's books, I know it even if I don't write it, but can I refrain from writing?

As for Zhao Zhijing's Heavenly Gang Big Dipper Formation, the protagonist with a broken leg can break it easily! Would I just write a sentence: the protagonist waves his blood saber, a palm strike, and everything is finished?

As for Zhao Zhijing's Heavenly Gang Big Dipper Formation as it stands now, the protagonist, even with a lame leg, could break it with ease! Do I have to write a sentence where the protagonist swings his Blood Blade, a palm strike splits it, and everything is finished?

It's that even now, some still don't understand why the protagonist acts this way when meeting Zhen Zhibing and Zhao Zhijing: because his heart is broad, his martial arts have reached this level, which is to study the mysteries of martial arts, broaden his horizons, and walk his own path.

Even to this day, there are still people who don't understand why the protagonist acted that way when he met Zhen Zhibing and Zhao Zhijing? Because his heart is broad, his martial arts have reached this realm; it is to study the profound mysteries of martial arts, broaden his horizons, and walk his own path.

Falling from a high altitude during transmigration is telling the protagonist: relying on external things, there are too many uncertain factors!

Even in the Lian Cheng world, Feng Yi relied on the system because he lacked strength and his life was not secure; but now he possesses both righteous and evil techniques, what he seeks is to broaden his horizons, and any profound martial art is worth his study.

This is the protagonist; the system is an external force, he won't rely on it entirely.

People must rely on themselves! For example, if the system issues a task to kill Guo Jing, protect Mongolia, give him great benefits, be number one under heaven, become emperor, would he also do it?

That's not the protagonist! Once the protagonist's Divine Illumination Skill is accomplished, he has the ability to establish himself; he acts only according to his own heart's wishes! The system is the system, how a person acts is Feng Yi.

That's not the protagonist! Once the protagonist's Divine Illumination Skill is accomplished, he has gained the ability to establish himself; he acts only according to what he thinks in his heart! However the system is, it's the system; however a person acts, it's Feng Yi.

Moreover, many subsequent plots of the Divine Eagle revolve around Yang Guo and Xiao Longnv.

When the trajectories of these two change, are there still those plots?

Take Gongsun Zhi: he saved Xiao Longnv, broke his own heart that had been still for many years, and in the end the valley was destroyed and people perished.

But without Xiao Longnv, he is still a hermit, the master of Gongsun Valley.

Including Yang Guo's Love Flower, he always regarded his father's heroic figure; hearing Silly Girl's words, he thought Guo Jing killed his father. To assassinate Guo Jing, causing Guo Jing to be injured, Guo Xiang to be captured, etc., these are all interlocking.

In short, in my fan fiction, many original plots will not be performed, so there's nothing to look forward to.

One sentence, in my fanfic many original plot points won't happen, so don't expect them.

Feng Yi is Feng Yi, Yang Guo is Yang Guo.

Everyone is waiting to see the original plot of the Condor Heroes; just go read the original.

(End of chapter)

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