Chapter 423
The planting plan in Fe Tu Shi Jie has officially started.
The planting plan in Fe Tu Shi Jie has officially started.
The planting plan in Fe Tu Shi Jie has officially started.
Everyone in the sanctuary was fired up, once again launching a frenzied worship of the goddess.
-> "Everyone in Bi Hu Suo was fired up, once again launching a frenzied worship of the goddess." Use Bi Hu Suo. Keep "goddess" as generic. So: "Everyone in Bi Hu Suo was fired up, once again launching a frenzied worship of the goddess."
Across the planes, Lin Lin Mengye received their faith power in her sleep, and her cultivation instantly reached the Foundation Establishment Perfection.
Across the planes, Lin Lin Mengye received their faith power in her sleep, and her cultivation instantly reached the Foundation Establishment Perfection.
When she woke up and realized her cultivation had hit a bottleneck, she was overcome with excitement.
-> "When she woke up and found her cultivation had hit a bottleneck, she was extremely excited." So: "When she woke up and found her cultivation had hit a bottleneck, she was extremely excited."
She could feel she was only one step away from the Golden Core stage, and just then Ye Fan gave her an Ascending Spirit Fruit—heavenly timing, earthly advantage, and human harmony were all in place; only the earthly advantage was missing.
She could feel she was only one step away from the Golden Core stage, and Ye Fan happened to give her an Ascending Spirit Fruit—heavenly timing, earthly advantage, and human harmony were all present; only the earthly advantage was missing.
Thus: "She could feel that she was only one step away from the Golden Core stage, and Ye Fan happened to give her an Ascending Spirit Fruit—heavenly timing, earthly advantage, and human harmony were all present; only the earthly advantage was missing."
But we need to keep concise. Maybe: "She felt she was only a step from Golden Core, and Ye Fan gave her an Ascending Spirit Fruit—heavenly timing, earthly advantage, and human harmony were all there; only the earthly advantage was lacking."
We'll output: "She felt she was only a step from Golden Core, and Ye Fan gave her an Ascending Spirit Fruit—heavenly timing, earthly advantage, and human harmony were all present; only the earthly advantage was missing."
Breaking through to Golden Core would cause a noticeable disturbance, so advancing in the city is clearly unwise.
-> "Breaking through to Golden Core would cause a commotion; advancing in the city is clearly unwise." So: "Breaking through to Golden Core would cause a commotion; advancing in the city is clearly unwise."
If it triggered any heavenly portent, making the headlines the next day would be unavoidable, and she didn't want to be exposed so soon.
-> "If it triggered any heavenly signs again, making the headlines the next day would be unavoidable; she didn't want to be exposed so quickly." So: "If it triggered any heavenly signs again, making the headlines the next day would be unavoidable; she didn't want to be exposed so quickly."
It looks like she needs to quickly find a suitable place for her breakthrough.
-> "It seems she needs to quickly find a place to break through." So: "It seems she needs to quickly find a place to break through."
She wasn't sure if attempting a breakthrough in the Strange World would even work.
-> "She didn't know if going to the Weird World to break through her cultivation would work." So: "She didn't know if going to the Weird World to break through her cultivation would work."
Thinking about this, Lin Lin Mengye couldn't sit still.
-> "Thinking of this, Lin Lin Mengye couldn't sit still." So: "Thinking of this, Lin Lin Mengye couldn't sit still."
After preparing the Ascending Spirit Fruit and spirit stones, she blinked and found herself in the Strange World.
-> "After preparing the Ascending Spirit Fruit and Spirit Stone, she blinked and entered the Weird World." So: "After preparing the Ascending Spirit Fruit and Spirit Stone, she blinked and entered the Weird World."
Pressed for time and with a heavy task, Lin Lin Mengye didn't seek out Bai Shen or Ye Xiu; instead she headed straight into the wilderness, found a spot free of strangeness, and curled up there.
-> "Time was pressing and the task heavy; Lin Lin Mengye didn't go look for Bai Shen or Ye Xiu, but instead headed straight to the wilderness, found a spot without weirdness, and curled up there." So: "Time was pressing and the task heavy; Lin Lin Mengye didn't go look for Bai Shen or Ye Xiu, but instead headed straight to the wilderness, found a spot without weirdness, and curled up there."
For her, the breakthrough would be no trouble—just a formality—and once she broke through she'd leave immediately, so it shouldn't cause a stir.
-> "For her, breaking through was no difficulty—just a formality; once she broke through and left immediately, it shouldn't cause a stir." So: "For her, breaking through was no difficulty—just a formality; once she broke through and left immediately, it shouldn't cause a stir."
However, while her expectations were good, reality left her letting out a heavy sigh.
-> "However, Lin Lin Mengye's expectations were good, but reality made her let out a heavy sigh." So: "However, Lin Lin Mengye's expectations were good, but reality made her let out a heavy sigh."
She hadn't expected her cultivation to be restricted here—perhaps the world's rules differ—so breaking through her bottleneck would require an exponentially increasing amount of spiritual energy.
-> "She hadn't expected her cultivation to be restricted here; perhaps the world's operating rules differ, causing the spiritual energy needed to break through her cultivation bottleneck to increase exponentially." So: "She hadn't expected her cultivation to be restricted here; perhaps the world's operating rules differ, causing the spiritual energy needed to break through her cultivation bottleneck to increase exponentially."
In other words, trying to exploit a bug to advance here is impossible.
-> "In other words, trying to cheat the system to advance here is impossible." So: "In other words, trying to cheat the system to advance here is impossible."
Lin Lin Mengye sighed and could only temporarily give up.
-> "Lin Lin Mengye sighed and could only temporarily give up." So: "Lin Lin Mengye sighed and could only temporarily give up."
But since she'd come all this way, she definitely wanted to check on Ye Xiu.
-> "But since she came all this way, she definitely had to go see Ye Xiu." So: "But since she came all this way, she definitely had to go see Ye Xiu."
As for the Strange World, she had originally harbored some curiosity to explore, but now she'd rather skip it.
-> "As for the Weird World, she originally had some desire to explore, but now she'd rather skip it." So: "As for the Weird World, she originally had some desire to explore, but now she'd rather skip it."
She's short on time, and once the Immortal Cultivation Academy is built, it will surely demand even more of her energy.
-> "Her time is insufficient; later, after the Cultivation University is built, she will certainly have to expend even more energy." So: "Her time is insufficient; later, after the Cultivation University is built, she will certainly have to expend even more energy."
This world is vastly larger than her own reality—she might never finish exploring it in a lifetime—so she'll wait until she has free time later.
-> "This world is far larger than the reality she inhabits; she might not be able to explore it all in a lifetime, so better to wait until she has free time later." So: "This world is far larger than the reality she inhabits; she might not be able to explore it all in a lifetime, so better to wait until she has free time later."
Anyway, once she breaks through to Golden Core, her lifespan will be at least six or seven hundred years.
-> "Anyway, once her cultivation breaks through to the Golden Core stage, her lifespan will be at least six or seven hundred years." So: "Anyway, once her cultivation breaks through to the Golden Core stage, her lifespan will be at least six or seven hundred years."
With endless years ahead, everything can wait for another day.
-> "In the long years ahead, everything can wait for another day." So: "In the long years ahead, everything can wait for another day."
As expected, when Lin Lin Mengye found Ye Xiu, he was in the midst of cultivation.
-> "As expected, when Lin Lin Mengye found Ye Xiu, he was cultivating." So: "As expected, when Lin Lin Mengye found Ye Xiu, he was cultivating."
The young man is very ambitious, cultivating with all his might.
-> "The young man was very enterprising, cultivating with all his might." So: "The young man was very enterprising, cultivating with all his might."
Upon seeing Lin Lin Mengye, Ye Xiu's face instantly showed a hurt expression.
-> "Upon seeing Lin Lin Mengye, Ye Xiu's face instantly showed a look of grievance." So: "Upon seeing Lin Lin Mengye, Ye Xiu's face instantly showed a look of grievance."
"Sister, it's been ages since you came to see me."
-> "\"Sister, it's been a long time since you came to see me. \"" So: "\"Sister, it's been a long time since you came to see me. \""
Hearing this, Lin Lin Mengye's expression shifted slightly—really? She hadn't been gone long; she'd just seen the newly hatched black dragon.
-> "Lin Lin Mengye's expression shifted slightly at the words. 'Really? I just came not long ago and saw the hatchling black dragon.'" So: "Lin Lin Mengye's expression shifted slightly at the words. 'Really? I just came not long ago and saw the hatchling black dragon.'"
However, Ye Xiu has had a hard life, and it was she who pulled him out of the mire, so his slight dependence on her is understandable.
-> "However, Ye Xiu has had a hard life, and it's understandable that he depends on her a bit since she pulled him out of the mire." So: "However, Ye Xiu has had a hard life, and it's understandable that he depends on her a bit since she pulled him out of the mire."
But Lin Lin Mengye still hopes Ye Xiu can soon stand on his own, after all she's just a passerby and can't guard them forever.
-> "But Lin Lin Mengye still hopes Ye Xiu can quickly stand on his own, after all she's just a passerby and cannot guard them forever." So: "But Lin Lin Mengye still hopes Ye Xiu can quickly stand on his own, after all she's just a passerby and cannot guard them forever."
Thus Lin Lin Mengye took out a few bottles of Aperture-Opening Pills and then said to Ye Xiu:
-> "Thus Lin Lin Mengye took out a few bottles of Passage Aperture Pills and then said to Ye Xiu:" So: "Thus Lin Lin Mengye took out a few bottles of Passage Aperture Pills and then said to Ye Xiu:"
"Ye Xiu, sister may be busy for a long time ahead, so we won't be able to meet as often—you'll need to get used to it."
-> "\"Ye Xiu, sister might be busy for a long time afterward, so we won't see each other that often—you need to get used to it. \"" So: "\"Ye Xiu, sister might be busy for a long time afterward, so we won't see each other that often—you need to get used to it. \""
"Stay with Bai Shen and cultivate well; your future will surely be limitless."
-> "\"Follow Bai Shen and cultivate well; your future will surely be limitless. \"" So: "\"Follow Bai Shen and cultivate well; your future will surely be limitless. \""
Ye Xiu heard this out of the blue, his heart gave a sudden jolt, his head drooped, and a wave of dejection washed over him.
-> "Ye Xiu's heart gave a sudden jolt upon hearing this; he slumped his shoulders, and dejection spread through his whole body." So: "Ye Xiu's heart gave a sudden jolt upon hearing this; he slumped his shoulders, and dejection spread through his whole body."
"Sister, will you never come to see me again?" … Sister doesn't want him anymore…
-> "\"Sister, will you never come to see me again? \" Sister doesn't want him……" So: "\"Sister, will you never come to see me again? \" Sister doesn't want him……"
Lin Lin Mengye saw Ye Xiu instantly turn into an abandoned puppy, and a strange feeling stirred in her heart.
-> "Lin Lin Mengye saw Ye Xiu instantly become like an abandoned puppy, and a strange feeling arose in her heart." So: "Lin Lin Mengye saw Ye Xiu instantly become like an abandoned puppy, and a strange feeling arose in her heart."
She quickly stepped forward and ruffled his soft hair, feeling a bit reluctant.
-> "She hurried forward and stroked his fluffy head, feeling somewhat reluctant." So: "She hurried forward and stroked his fluffy head, feeling somewhat reluctant."
"Don't worry, I'm not saying I'll never come again—just that it might be a long time before I visit once more."
-> "\"Alright, it's not that I'll never come again; it's just that I might only come once in a long while. \"" So: "\"Alright, it's not that I'll never come again; it's just that I might only come once in a long while. \""
"I'll keep supplying you with Aperture-Opening Pills; I also have trade arrangements with Bai Shen and will occasionally visit him, but your cultivation is crucial too, so unless something special happens, I won't bother you."
-> "\"I'll keep supplying you with Passage Aperture Pills; I also have dealings with Bai Shen and will occasionally visit him, but your cultivation is also crucial—if there's no special circumstance, I won't bother you. \"" So: "\"I'll keep supplying you with Passage Aperture Pills; I also have dealings with Bai Shen and will occasionally visit him, but your cultivation is also crucial—if there's no special circumstance, I won't bother you. \""
"If you call me sister, I'll certainly not abandon you, but Ye Xiu, you're an adult now—I hope you can stand on your own and become someone others can rely on."
-> "\"If you call me sister, I will certainly not neglect you, but Ye Xiu, you're an adult now; sister hopes you can stand on your own and become someone others can rely on. \"" So: "\"If you call me sister, I will certainly not neglect you, but Ye Xiu, you're an adult now; sister hopes you can stand on your own and become someone others can rely on. \""
Ye Xiu's eyes reddened as he struggled to suppress his reluctance toward Lin Lin Mengye; after hearing her words, an unprecedented desire to grow stronger surged within him.
-> "Ye Xiu's eyes reddened as he struggled to suppress his reluctance toward Lin Lin Mengye; after hearing her words, an unprecedented desire to grow stronger welled up in his heart." So: "Ye Xiu's eyes reddened as he struggled to suppress his reluctance toward Lin Lin Mengye; after hearing her words, an unprecedented desire to grow stronger welled up in his heart."
Could it be that once he becomes strong enough, sister will also be able to rely on him?
-> "Could it be that once he becomes strong enough, sister could also rely on him?" So: "Could it be that once he becomes strong enough, sister could also rely on him?"
In that case, would sister not leave?
-> "In that case, would sister not leave?" So: "In that case, would sister not leave?"
Lin Lin Mengye rubbed Ye Xiu's head and spoke softly:
-> "Lin Lin Mengye rubbed his head and softly said:" So: "Lin Lin Mengye rubbed his head and softly said:"
"All right, sister has to leave now; next time I see you, I'll give you a new beast egg, hoping that by then you'll be the academy's strongest student."
-> "\"Alright, sister should leave now; next time I see you, I'll give you a new beast egg, hoping that by then you'll be the strongest student in the academy. \"" So: "\"Alright, sister should leave now; next time I see you, I'll give you a new beast egg, hoping that by then you'll be the strongest student in the academy. \""
Ye Xiu reluctantly rubbed his palm against Lin Lin Mengye's, like a puppy eagerly awaiting affection.
-> "Ye Xiu reluctantly rubbed against Lin Lin Mengye's palm, like a puppy eagerly awaiting affection." So: "Ye Xiu reluctantly rubbed against Lin Lin Mengye's palm, like a puppy eagerly awaiting affection."
"Sister, I'll do it—I won't let you down."
-> "\"Sister, I will do it; I will definitely not disappoint you. \"" So: "\"Sister, I will do it; I will definitely not disappoint you. \""
After saying goodbye to Ye Xiu and returning to the real world, Lin Lin Mengye still felt a bit reflective.
-> "After saying goodbye to Ye Xiu and returning to the real world, Lin Lin Mengye still felt somewhat emotional." So: "After saying goodbye to Ye Xiu and returning to the real world, Lin Lin Mengye still felt somewhat emotional."
As an observer, Ye Xiu's ordeal rivals that of many suffering people; many like him, these little bitter gourds, are either crushed early by reality or become twisted, monstrous villains.
-> "As an observer, Ye Xiu's experiences rival those of many suffering people; many like him, these little bitter gourds, are either defeated by reality early on or become twisted demons." So: "As an observer, Ye Xiu's experiences rival those of many suffering people; many like him, these little bitter gourds, are either defeated by reality early on or become twisted demons."
Ye Xiu is unfortunate, yet undoubtedly fortunate—the spatial bracelet gave them contact, and at the moment he needed it most, she pulled him up.
-> "Ye Xiu is unfortunate, but undoubtedly also fortunate; the space bracelet let them meet, and at the moment he needed it most, she pulled him up." So: "Ye Xiu is unfortunate, but undoubtedly also fortunate; the space bracelet let them meet, and at the moment he needed it most, she pulled him up."
But Lin Lin Mengye also knows that she and Ye Xiu are ultimately not from the same plane.
-> "But Lin Lin Mengye also knows that she and Ye Xiu are ultimately not people of the same plane." So: "But Lin Lin Mengye also knows that she and Ye Xiu are ultimately not people of the same plane."
Ye Xiu's future will involve facing the entire Strange World; he is gradually growing stronger, and it's believed that sooner or later he will stand at the peak.
-> "Ye Xiu's future challenge is the entire Weird World; he is gradually becoming stronger, believing that sooner or later he will stand at the peak." So: "Ye Xiu's future challenge is the entire Weird World; he is gradually becoming stronger, believing that sooner or later he will stand at the peak."
The burden of saving the Strange World will eventually fall on his shoulders, and she hopes that by then she'll have the strength to help him.
-> "The burden of saving the Weird World will eventually fall on his shoulders; all that is hoped is that by then she also has the strength to help him." So: "The burden of saving the Weird World will eventually fall on his shoulders; all that is hoped is that by then she also has the strength to help him."
Whether it's the Wasteland World or the Strange World, if she has the power, Lin Lin Mengye also wants to help them change the world.
-> "Whether it's the Wasteland World or the Weird World, if she has the strength, Lin Lin Mengye also wants to help them change the world." So: "Whether it's the Wasteland World or the Weird World, if she has the strength, Lin Lin Mengye also wants to help them change the world."
Just this step is too hard to take, and I don't even know if she will have this qualification in the future...
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