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Chapter 59

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"Lu Wu, you all don't resist!"

"Go!"

Thus line 1: 【1】 "Lu Wu, you all don't resist!"

But we need to output exactly 【1】 then space then translation. No extra spaces? We'll output: 【1】 "Lu Wu, you all don't resist!"

Upon hearing Zhu Qingyun's mental transmission, Lu Wu and the other divine beasts instantly relinquished the faint binding force on their bodies, and in the next moment they were drawn into the Wen Dao Great World.

Translation: "Hearing Zhu Qingyun's voice transmission, Lu Wu and the other divine beasts instantly gave up the faint pulling force on their bodies, and in the next moment were taken into the Great World of the Literary Dao."

We need to keep the comma at end? The original line ends with a comma (,). We can keep punctuation as is; but we are translating to English, we can keep a comma at end. We'll output: 【2】 "Hearing Zhu Qingyun's voice transmission, Lu Wu and the other divine beasts instantly gave up the faint pulling force on their bodies, and in the next moment were taken into the Great World of the Literary Dao,"

But note the original Chinese ends with a comma, indicating continuation. We'll keep a comma at end.

"Go!"

"Go!"

Yuan Feng spread his wings, and with a heavy, powerful punch he unleashed a shockwave that obscured Hongjun's vision, after which the three instantly turned into rainbows and retreated.

Translation: "Yuan Feng spread his wings, and with a heavy, powerful punch he unleashed a shockwave that blocked Hongjun's sight; shortly after, the three turned into rainbows and retreated."

We need to keep punctuation: original ends with a period (。). We'll output period.

Thus: 【4】 "Yuan Feng spread his wings, and with a heavy, powerful punch he unleashed a shockwave that blocked Hongjun's sight; shortly after, the three turned into rainbows and retreated."

Hongjun had wanted to pursue, but seeing the four close disciples and four outer sect members looking frightened, he ultimately chose to suffer this great loss! The Eight Immortals fell, which still affected him; if he did not retreat into seclusion quickly, he might even fall from the peak of the Dao! "Damned Heavenly Fortune Daoist!"

Translation: "Hongjun had wanted to pursue, but seeing the four close disciples and four outer disciples frightened at this moment, he ultimately still chose to suffer this great loss! The Eight Immortals fell, which still affected him; if he did not quickly enter seclusion, he might even fall to the Extreme Realm of the Dao! 'Damned Heavenly Fortune Daoist!'"

Hongjun had wanted to pursue, but seeing the four close disciples and four outer sect members looking frightened, he ultimately chose to suffer this great loss! The Eight Immortals fell, which still affected him; if he did not retreat into seclusion quickly, he might even fall from the peak of the Dao! "Damned Heavenly Fortune Daoist!"

Thus: 【5】 "Hongjun had wanted to pursue, but seeing the four close disciples and four outer disciples frightened at this moment, he ultimately still chose to suffer this great loss! The Eight Immortals fell, which still affected him; if he did not quickly enter seclusion, he might even fall to the Extreme Realm of the Dao! \"Damned Heavenly Fortune Daoist! \""

Hongjun cursed angrily, then cautiously led the remaining Xuanmen immortals away, still worried that Zhu Qingyun's trio might launch a counterattack.

Translation: "Hongjun cursed angrily, then immediately cautiously led the remaining Profound Gate immortals away; he was still worried that Zhu Qingyun and the others might launch a counterattack."

launch a counterattack.

Thus: 【6】 "Hongjun cursed angrily, then immediately cautiously led the remaining Profound Gate immortals away; he was still worried that Zhu Qingyun and the others might launch a counterattack."

Finally, after returning safely to Jade Capital Mountain, Hongjun let out a sigh of relief.

Translation: "Finally, after returning safely to Jade Capital Mountain, Hongjun finally breathed a sigh of relief."

Thus: 【7】 "Finally, after returning safely to Jade Capital Mountain, Hongjun finally breathed a sigh of relief."

Meanwhile, Yuan Feng flew at extreme speed with Zhu Qingyun and the other, only stopping when they could faintly see the illusory form of Buzhou Mountain in the distance.

Translation: "Meanwhile, Yuan Feng flew at extreme speed with Zhu Qingyun, only stopping when they could faintly see the illusory image of Mount Buzhou in the distance."

Thus: 【8】 "Meanwhile, Yuan Feng flew at extreme speed with Zhu Qingyun, only stopping when they could faintly see the illusory image of Mount Buzhou in the distance."

"Uncle, I'll only take you two this far; ahead is the territory of that Shi Qilin fellow, and as the leader of the Phoenix clan it's not convenient for me to go."

Translation: "\"Uncle, I'll send you two this far; ahead is the territory of that fellow, the Primordial Qilin, and as the Phoenix Clan chief it's inconvenient for me to go. \""

We need to keep quotes. So: 【9】 "\"Uncle, I'll send you two this far; ahead is the territory of that fellow, the Primordial Qilin, and as the Phoenix Clan chief it's inconvenient for me to go. \""

Yuan Feng didn't know how to address Yin and Yang, so after thinking, he gave the two eggs to Zhu Qingyun.

Translation: "Yuan Feng didn't know how to address Yin Yang, thought for a moment, and handed the two eggs to Zhu Qingyun."

Thus: 【10】 "Yuan Feng didn't know how to address Yin Yang, thought for a moment, and handed the two eggs to Zhu Qingyun."

"Uncle, I see you seem to have a great world; why not place my two children in your great world?"

Translation: "\"Uncle, I see you seem to have a great world; why not place my two children in your great world? \""

Thus: 【11】 "\"Uncle, I see you seem to have a great world; why not place my two children in your great world? \""

"I sense that the three-clan decisive battle will occur within ten thousand years; I worry that members of the Dragon and Qilin clans might harm the children."

Translation: "\"I sense that the Battle of the Three Clans will occur within this ten thousand years; I worry that the Dragon and Qilin peoples will harm the children. \""

Thus: 【12】 "\"I sense that the Battle of the Three Clans will occur within this ten thousand years; I worry that the Dragon and Qilin peoples will harm the children. \""

The three-clan decisive battle is about to erupt; although allied with the Shi Qilin, this does not mean the Phoenix and Qilin peoples will live in harmony—open and covert strife are inevitable.

Translation: "The Battle of the Three Clans is about to erupt; although joining forces with the Primordial Qilin, it does not mean the Phoenix and Qilin peoples will live in harmony—open and covert struggles are inevitable."

Thus: 【13】 "The Battle of the Three Clans is about to erupt; although joining forces with the Primordial Qilin, it does not mean the Phoenix and Qilin peoples will live in harmony—open and covert struggles are inevitable."

"Good! Sister-in-law, rest assured—I will surely take good care of the two nephews!"

Translation: "\"Good! Sister-in-law, rest assured, I will take good care of the two nephews! \""

Thus: 【14】 "\"Good! Sister-in-law, rest assured, I will take good care of the two nephews! \""

Zhu Qingyun solemnly received the two eggs, then after consideration placed Kong Xuan into the Wen Dao Great World, nurturing him beneath the World Tree, and also arranged for Ye Yun to help look after Kong Xuan!

Translation: "Zhu Qingyun solemnly received the two eggs, thought for a moment, placed Kong Xuan into the Great World of the Literary Dao, nurturing him under the World Tree, and simultaneously arranged for Ye Yun to help look after Kong Xuan!"

Thus: 【15】 "Zhu Qingyun solemnly received the two eggs, thought for a moment, placed Kong Xuan into the Great World of the Literary Dao, nurturing him under the World Tree, and simultaneously arranged for Ye Yun to help look after Kong Xuan!"

As for the Golden-Winged Great Peng, he recalled from a novel he had seen in his past life about a being called the Golden-Winged Little Peng King who possessed a technique of 108,000 swords, so he placed him in the Sword Dao Great World.

Translation: "As for the Golden-winged Great Peng, he recalled from a novel he had seen in his past life a being called the Golden-winged Little Peng King who had a technique of 108,000 swords, so he placed him in the Great World of the Sword Dao."

Thus: 【16】 "As for the Golden-winged Great Peng, he recalled from a novel he had seen in his past life a being called the Golden-winged Little Peng King who had a technique of 108,000 swords, so he placed him in the Great World of the Sword Dao."

The worldly power of the two great worlds enveloped the two eggs, with strands of worldly power subtly being absorbed as nourishment!

Translation: "The power of the two great worlds wrapped the two eggs, and the worldly power subtly seeped in, being absorbed as nourishment!"

Thus: 【17】 "The power of the two great worlds wrapped the two eggs, and the worldly power subtly seeped in, being absorbed as nourishment!"

"Elder brother, sister-in-law, how about naming the two nephews Kong Xuan and Jin Ling?"

Translation: "\"Elder brother, sister-in-law, why not name one nephew Kong Xuan and the other Jin Ling? \""

Thus: 【18】 "\"Elder brother, sister-in-law, why not name one nephew Kong Xuan and the other Jin Ling? \""

Yin and Yang said nothing, merely turning their gaze toward Yuan Feng, who rolled his eyes, somewhat speechless at their reaction.

Translation: "Yin Yang said nothing, but turned his gaze toward Yuan Feng, who rolled his eyes, somewhat speechless at Yin Yang's reaction."

Thus: 【19】

Hearing Zhu Qingyun's voice transmission, Luwu and the other divine beasts instantly relinquished the faint pulling force on their bodies, and in the next moment were drawn into the Wen Dao Great World.

"Go!"

Yuan Feng spread his wings, and with a heavy, powerful punch he unleashed a shockwave that obscured Hongjun's sight, after which the three instantly turned into rainbows and retreated.

Hongjun had wanted to pursue, but seeing the four close disciples and four outer disciples with looks of fright, he ultimately chose to suffer this great loss! The fall of the Eight Immortals still affected him; if he did not retreat into seclusion soon, he might even fall to the extreme of the Dao! "Damned Heavenly Fortune Daoist!"

Hongjun cursed angrily, then cautiously led the remaining Xuanmen immortals away, still worried that Zhu Qingyun and the two others might launch a counterattack.

Finally, after returning safely to Yujing Mountain, Hongjun let out a sigh of relief.

On the other side, Yuan Feng flew at extreme speed with Zhu Qingyun and the other, only stopping when they could faintly see the illusion of Mount Buzhou in the distance.

"Uncle, I'll send you two here; ahead is the territory of that guy, the Primal Qilin, and as the Phoenix clan chief it's not convenient for me to go."

Yuan Feng didn't know how to address Yin Yang, so after thinking he handed the two eggs to Zhu Qingyun.

"Uncle, I see you seem to have a great world; why not place my two children in your great world?"

"I sense that the battle of the three clans will occur within this ten thousand years; I worry that the people of the Dragon and Qilin clans will strike at the children!"

The battle of the three clans is about to erupt; although we are joining forces with the Primal Qilin, it does not mean the Phoenix and Qilin peoples will live in harmony—open and covert strife are still inevitable.

"Good! Sister-in-law, rest assured, I will surely take good care of the two nephews!"

Zhu Qingyun solemnly received the two eggs, then after thinking he placed Kong Xuan into the Wen Dao Great World, settling him beneath the World Tree to nurture, and simultaneously arranged for Ye Yun to help look after Kong Xuan!

As for the Golden-Winged Great Peng, he recalled from a novel he had seen in his past life a being called the Golden-Winged Little Peng King who possessed a technique of 108,000 swords, so he placed him in the Sword Dao Great World.

The worldly power of the two great worlds wrapped the two eggs, and strands of worldly power were subtly absorbed as nutrients!

"Elder brother, sister-in-law, how about naming the two nephews one Kong Xuan and the other Jin Ling?"

Yin Yang said nothing, but instead turned his gaze toward Yuan Feng, who promptly rolled his eyes, finding Yin Yang's reaction somewhat speechless.

"Everything is up to you, Uncle!"

"Then Uncle, I'll first return to the Undying Volcano!"

With the children entrusted, Yuan Feng can now prepare for the three-clan battle with peace of mind!

"Elder brother, what's with you, lacking all responsibility? I just asked about the children's names—give me some opinion!"

Gazing at the silent Yin Yang, who was like a complete idiot, Zhu Qingyun felt somewhat frustrated, wishing he could make something of him.

"Third brother, I... I just haven't gotten used to it yet!"

The Yin Yang Old Ancestor scratched his head, then let out a hearty laugh.

"Go, go, go—aren't we supposed to go to Mount Buzhou?"

After the Yin Yang Old Ancestor spoke, not knowing what he had thought of, his face showed a simple, honest smile.

"You……"

Zhu Qingyun was about to say something when he discovered that another huge change had occurred within the Wen Dao Great World!

Only a voice echoed through the Wen Dao Great World, and a red cloud emitting the aura of a Chaos spirit treasure floated in the air. "I, Hongyun, now sever my cultivation to re-cultivate the Great Dao!"

Hongyun's attainment of mid-stage Mixed Yuan Golden Immortal was not due to any high level of law comprehension, but entirely because of the strength of his comprehension of the Wen Dao!

"Elder brother, help me sever my true form!"

Hongyun shouted loudly.

Over these years in the Wen Dao Great World, Hongyun concealed his cultivation, comprehended the myriad forms of sentient beings, and his Dao heart greatly improved.

Although his Chaos spirit treasure body gave him a starting point surpassing the innate deities of the Wilderness, it also constrained his growth! He discovered that, imperceptibly, whenever he encountered trouble he always relied on his Chaos spirit treasure body rather than using the Dao he had comprehended.

Over time, this would cause his aspiration for the Dao to wane!

Therefore, he wished to sever his cultivation and re-cultivate the Great Dao!

Zhu Qingyun and Hongjun shared the same intention; although Hongyun said nothing, Zhu Qingyun also understood his resolve.

Given Hongyun's such strong aspiration for the Dao, Zhu Qingyun naturally would not obstruct him.

"The method of spirit treasure fusion—reversal!"

Zhu Qingyun's projection appeared within the Wen Dao Great World, and the spirit treasure fusion method was reversed.

Instantly, one could see the Chaos spirit treasure where Hongyun's true body resided gradually decompose, reversing anew into righteous vital energy, the origins of earth, wind, water, and fire, and Pangu's blood essence! "Pfft!"

Hongyun immediately spat out a mouthful of Dao blood; at that moment Nüwa appeared, the Grand Creation Dao turning, frenziedly repairing Hongyun's primordial spirit injury! The immense pain distorted Hongyun's visage into a ferocious countenance.

Droplets of the Three-Light Divine Water poured down freely onto Hongyun's primordial spirit, safeguarding his consciousness from scattering.

Zhu Qingyun looked at Hongyun's true spirit, twisted with pain, feeling somewhat reluctant, but since it had come to this, he could not abandon it halfway.

Immediately, Zhu Qingyun took two-thirds of the righteous vital energy in the air, and from the remaining one-third he further divided it into quarters.

Under the great hand formed by Zhu Qingyun's magical power, the power of the origins of earth, wind, water, and fire was torn apart, most of its origins blending with Pangu's blood essence to serve as Hongyun's true body.

The divided portions of righteous vital energy respectively merged with the origins of earth, wind, water, and fire.

They transformed into the painting, script, chess, and zither—treasures emitting the aura of supreme innate spirit treasures! These are the Four Treasures of the Wen Dao, but because they have incorporated the origins of earth, wind, water, and fire, they appear merely as ordinary supreme innate spirit treasures.

"Heavenly Fire Zither, Heavenly Water Chess, Heavenly Wind Scripture, Heaven and Earth Painting!"

Hongyun's true spirit merged into the Dao body that Zhu Qingyun had forged for him, instantly giving the four treasures their names.

"Elder brother, I wish to roam the Wilderness; the Wen Dao Great World no longer offers me much improvement!"

After severing his cultivation, Hongyun now possesses only the perfected cultivation of a Golden Immortal of the Great Luo; this journey, he hopes to take the opportunity to comprehend the Wilderness and return to the Mixed Yuan realm! The four spirit treasures are essentially partial derivations of Hongyun's true body, so they need no refinement and he can immediately exert their full power! With these four spirit treasures capable of exerting their full might in hand, although Hongyun is a perfected Great Luo Golden Immortal, even an ordinary initial-stage Mixed Yuan Golden Immortal might not be his match! Zhu Qingyun, looking at these four treasures sharing the same origin, suddenly had an idea.

"Second brother, could Elder Brother ask you to do something for me?"

Hongyun felt somewhat at a loss; Elder Brother is a peak existence of the Mixed Yuan Golden Immortal, while he himself is merely at the perfected Great Luo realm—how could he possibly be of help to Elder Brother?

However, Hongyun didn't think much about it; no matter what Elder Brother wanted him to do, he would absolutely not refuse! "Elder Brother, whatever you ask, you are the elder brother and I the younger; having you assign me tasks is something I cannot shirk!"

At present, Hongyun's Dao body is formed from the fusion of the origins of earth, wind, water, and fire with Pangu's blood essence; lacking righteous vital energy, to outsiders he appears to have little connection with Zhu Qingyun.

(End of chapter)

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