Chapter 19
Star wandered through the space station, still hesitant about her future choice.
Translation: "Star wandered through the space station, still hesitant about her future choice."
We need to keep the quotes? The Chinese includes 「」. Should we keep them? The instruction: translate faithfully, preserve every paragraph break. It didn't say to drop quotation marks. Usually we keep them as they are part of the text. So we should keep the Chinese quotation marks? In English translation, we would replace with English quotes? The instruction: "Render onomatopoeia / sound effects... as English sound words". For quotation marks, not specified. Usually we keep the meaning, but we can use English quotes. However to be faithful, we could keep the Chinese quotes? But output English lines; using Chinese quotes would be weird. I think we should translate the content, and we can use English quotation marks to denote speech. The Chinese 「」 are quotation marks. So we can replace with English double quotes. We'll do that.
Thus: "Star wandered through the space station, still hesitant about her future choice."
Star wandered through the space station, still hesitant about her future choice.
Ok.
From afar she saw Dan Heng, but when she walked over to talk, she momentarily didn't know what to say; meanwhile, the usually aloof Dan Heng spoke first: "What's wrong? You look like you have something to say."
Translation: "From afar she saw Dan Heng, but when she walked over to talk, she didn't know what to say for a moment; meanwhile, the usually aloof Dan Heng spoke first: 'What's wrong? You look like you have something to say.'"
We need to keep quotes for speech inside. Use English quotes.
A hint of curiosity and doubt appeared on Star's face: "Since I first met you, I've always felt you don't seem like someone who likes traveling."
Translation: "A hint of curiosity and doubt appeared on Star's face: 'From the moment I first met you, I've always felt you don't seem like someone who likes to travel.'"
Dan Heng shook his head, his handsome face remaining calm, though his tone fluctuated slightly: "Getting on the train isn't the same as 'travel' or 'adventure'… the Astral Express represents 'pioneering,' you know?"
Translation: "Dan Heng shook his head, his handsome face remaining calm, though his tone fluctuated slightly: 'Getting on the train isn't the same as 'travel' or 'adventure'… the Astral Express represents 'pioneering,' do you understand?'"
Note: we need to keep the inner quotes around "travel" etc. We'll replace with English quotes.
"Pioneering means the 'unknown,' whether it's unknown risks or unknown joys," Dan Heng paused, then said, "In my view, the unknown is no more frightening than the known; the unknown often also means it can still be controlled and changed."
Translation: "''Pioneering means the 'unknown,' whether it's unknown risks or unknown joys,' Dan Heng paused, then said, 'In my view, the unknown is no more frightening than the known; the unknown often also means it can still be controlled and changed.'"
"Pioneering means the 'unknown,' whether it's unknown risks or unknown joys," Dan Heng paused, then said, "In my view, the unknown is no more frightening than the known; the unknown often also means it can still be controlled and changed."
But we need to keep the structure: The outermost quotes are the spoken line. We'll use double quotes for the outermost, single for inner.
"Well..." Faced with Dan Heng's frank and sincere gaze, Star's eyes darted slightly, "But I'm a bit hesitant."
Translation: "''Like that…'' Facing Dan Heng's frank and sincere gaze, Star's eyes darted slightly, 'But I'm a bit hesitant.'"
Dan Heng's cold voice echoed in her ears: "Don't treat hesitation as an excuse; the longer you hesitate, your original thoughts will also fade away."
Translation: "Dan Heng's cold voice echoed in her ears: 'Don't treat hesitation as an excuse; the longer you hesitate, your original thoughts will also fade away.'"
Star shuddered all over, as if parting clouds to see the sun; she had already made up her mind.
Translation: "Star shuddered all over, as if parting clouds to see the sun; she had already made a decision in her heart."
"Thank you, Dan Heng."
Translation: "''Thank you, Dan Heng.''"
Dan Heng gave a slight nod, turned away, and continued gazing at the starry sky.
Translation: "Dan Heng gave a slight nod, turned away, and continued gazing at the starry sky."
Star, who had already made up her mind, walked toward the platform where the Astral Express was docked; upon seeing Himeko's signature red long hair, she stepped forward and warmly greeted her.
Star, who had already made up her mind, walked toward the platform where the Astral Express was docked; upon seeing Himeko's signature red long hair, she stepped forward and warmly greeted her.
"How is it? Have you decided?" Himeko smiled slightly, "If you have something to say, you can say anything."
Translation: "''How is it? Have you decided?'' Himeko smiled slightly, 'If you have anything to say, you can say it.'"
After a moment's thought, Star still asked the question deep in her heart: "Why did you invite me aboard?"
Translation: "After a moment's thought, Star still voiced the deep-seated question in her heart: 'Why did you invite me aboard?'"
Himeko had no intention of hiding it; she got straight to the point: "Because you're different from everyone else, the 【Star Core】 inside you is the primary reason, but not the only one."
Translation: "Himeko had no intention of hiding it; she got straight to the point: 'Because you're different from everyone else, the Star Core inside you is the primary reason, but not the only one.'"
"I think you need an opportunity to discover how you differ from others. Everyone tells you how unique you are, you have a 【Star Core】 inside you…" Himeko paused, shook her head, and continued, "But you yourself clearly understand this, and others telling you—no matter how credible that sounds—are two entirely different things."
Translation: "''I think you need an opportunity to discover how you differ from others. Everyone tells you how unique you are, that you have a 【Star Core】 inside you…'' Himeko paused, shook her head, and continued, 'But you yourself clearly recognizing this is quite different from others telling you—no matter how credible that claim may seem, the two are entirely different.'"
"You need to have experienced enough to know what you've gained and lost because of the 'Star Core,' who you really are, and learning how to master this 'Star Core' is what lets you control your own fate."
Translation: "''Only after you've experienced enough can you know what you've gained and lost because of the 'Star Core,' who you really are, and learning how to master this 'Star Core' will let you master your own fate.'"
Note: we keep quotes around "Star Core".
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This line is just an em dash? It's a separator. We need to output exactly "【17】 ——". So translation is just an em dash? Probably we keep the em dash as is. So output: "【17】 ——". No translation needed.
"If she came to our village, this girl would probably be the 'Star Core Human Pillar,' right?"
Translation: "If she came to our village, this girl would probably be the 'Star Core Human Pillar,' right?"
But the Star Core looks far more dangerous than you.
Translation: "However, the Star Core looks far more dangerous than you."
"Oh?" Nine Tails grunted slightly dissatisfied.
Translation: "''Huh?'' the Nine-Tails grunted, slightly displeased."
"Oh dear, don't be angry." Naruto laughed cheerfully, "I believe in the saying of the 'cancer of all worlds'; this thing likely has the energy to destroy the world. However, according to my personal view, this thing is both dangerous and an opportunity."
Translation: "''Oh dear, oh dear, don't be angry.'' Naruto laughed cheerfully, 'I believe the saying that it's the 'cancer of all worlds'; this thing probably has the energy to destroy the world. But in my personal view, it's both dangerous and an opportunity.'"
Similarly, Naruto, who had a nuclear-level weapon sealed inside his body, highly agreed with Himeko's view. Initially, because he had the Nine-Tails sealed within him, the villagers saw him as the embodiment of disruption to village peace and often gave him cold looks.
Translation: "Naruto, who likewise had a nuclear-level weapon sealed inside his body, fully agreed with Himeko's view; initially, because he housed the Nine-Tails, the villagers regarded him as the embodiment of destruction to the village's peace and often gave him the cold shoulder."
We need to keep "Nine-Tails" as Nine-Tails (translated). So "Nine-Tails". Also "Naruto" as Naruto. "Himeko" as Himeko.
However, with his gradual training, from initially being unable to control the half-tailed beast transformation to the Nine-Tails mode… he clearly understood that once he fully mastered the Nine-Tails' chakra within him, his power underwent a tremendous leap.
Translation: "But with his gradual training, from initially being unable to control his half-tailed beast transformation to the Nine-Tails mode… he clearly knew that after fully mastering the Nine-Tails' chakra within him, his power underwent what kind of leap."
We need to keep the ellipsis as is.
"If Star were willing to visit our village, I'd get along great with her." Naruto rested his chin on one hand, daydreaming about a future where the light curtain opens a passage connecting the two worlds, and he and the Astral Express crew have a friendly meeting.
Translation: "''If Star were willing to come to our village as a guest, I'd get along great with her.'' Naruto propped his chin on one hand, imagining a future where one day the light curtain opens a passage connecting the two worlds, and he and the Astral Express crew have a friendly meeting."
"Aren't you afraid of the danger the Star Gods would bring?" Nine Tails cautioned.
Translation: "''Aren't you afraid of the danger the Star Gods would bring?'' the Nine-Tails admonished."
In the simulated universe, when the Star Gods appeared, even someone as strong as Naruto couldn't help but be drawn into memories—although he quickly snapped out of it, he gained an initial sense of the Star Gods' power.
Translation: "In the simulated universe, when the Star Gods appeared, even someone as strong as Naruto couldn't help but be drawn into his memories—although he quickly came to his senses, he also gained a preliminary sense of the Star Gods' power."
"Hmm, I've thought about that; danger will certainly exist."
Translation: "''Hmm, I've considered that too; danger will certainly exist.''"
Naruto took it in stride, rose, stretched, and gave a grin as he rubbed the Nine Tails lying on the ground, "Opportunity and danger come hand in hand… haven't all the dangers we've faced over the years been overcome together?"
Translation: "Naruto, however, took it in stride; he rose, stretched, and gave a grin as he rubbed the Nine-Tails lying on the ground, 'Opportunity and danger come together, don't they… all the dangers we've faced over the years, haven't we overcome them together?'"
After Himeko's explanation, Star became even more convinced of her inner thought—she wants to go on the train!
Translation: "After Himeko's explanation, Star became even more convinced of her inner thought—she wanted to go on the train!"
She lifted her head and formally told Himeko her decision; Himeko merely smiled gently, lightly placing her hand on Star's shoulder: "All aboard, we're departing."
Translation: "She raised her head and formally told Himeko her decision; Himeko merely smiled gently, her hand lightly resting on her shoulder: 'All aboard, we're setting off.'"
After the group entered the train, following several minutes of preparation, the train finally began to move. March 7 stood by the window, enthusiastically waving to those outside.
Translation: "After the group entered the train, following several minutes of preparation, the train finally began to move. March 7 stood by the window, enthusiastically waving to the people outside."
On the platform, Asta and Arlan politely waved goodbye to them; Heita then confirmed their safe departure before turning away without a glance to continue their own research.
Translation: "On the platform, Asta and Arlan politely waved goodbye to them, while Heita confirmed their safe departure before turning away without a glance to continue her own research."
Star leaned against the window, reluctantly gazing at the space station, when a sudden "Hey" interrupted her budding melancholy.
Translation: "Star leaned against the window, reluctantly gazing at the space station, when a sudden 'Hey' broke the wistful mood she had just been building."
"Hey! I'm calling you, hey!"
Translation: "''Hey! I'm calling you, hey!''"
Star followed the sound and saw a fluffy strange creature slowly walking up beside her feet. It wore a tall hat, a cute red uniform, and a pair of huge ears drooping to the ground, resembling a rabbit, yet it walked upright.
Translation: "Star followed the sound and saw a fluffy strange creature slowly walking up beside her feet. It wore a tall hat, a cute red uniform, and a pair of huge ears drooping to the ground, resembling a rabbit, yet it walked upright."
However, this creature didn't feel particularly strange; on the contrary, no matter how you look at it, it's ninety percent or even utterly adorable.
Translation: "Yet this creature didn't feel particularly strange; on the contrary, no matter how you looked at it, it was ninety percent, even a hundred percent cute."
"Good... so cute!" Furina's heart fluttered instantly.
Translation: "''Good… so cute!'' Furina's heart fluttered instantly."
Even after living 500 years, and despite witnessing countless changes in Fontaine's plush toy trends over those 500 years, she had never seen such an adorable "little creature"!
Translation: "Even after living 500 years, even having witnessed countless popular changes of Fontaine's plush toys over those five centuries, she had still never seen such a cute 'little creature'!"
... was fiercely poked.
Translation: "... was fiercely poked."
We need to keep the ellipsis. So "... was fiercely poked."
Not only that, the entirety of Teyvat suddenly sparked a craze overnight.
Translation: "Moreover, all of Teyvat suddenly began to surge with a craze overnight."
Pam's image was immediately captured; in an instant, Fontaine's major toy manufacturers sprang into action, producing various Pam plush toys and figurines overtime to seize the market first.
Translation: "Pam's image was immediately snapped up; in an instant, all the major toy manufacturers in Fontaine sprang into action, producing various Pam plush toys and figurines overtime to seize the market as quickly as possible."
Because they knew... the wealth code has arrived!
Translation: "Because they knew…… the wealth code had arrived!"
We need to keep ellipsis.
Almost simultaneously, one of Snezhnaya's finest toy salespeople was surrounded by their younger siblings, noisily chattering by the fireplace.
Translation: "Almost at the same moment, one of Snezhnaya's finest toy salespeople was also surrounded by their younger siblings, noisily chattering away by the fireplace."
"Uh..."
Dádà Lìyà was drenched in sweat, having no choice but to send his subordinates, the Foolish Ones, to immediately go to Fēngdān... to purchase the latest style Pam doll.
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