Chapter 210

Attack on Titan - ok.

This is "Attack on Titan." (common translation). Keep period. So "【1】 Attack on Titan."

The evening wind lingered, lightly embracing the orange-red bonfire, the flames spreading and retracting in the night, - contains only English and punctuation. ok.

same.

"The general's eyes… look exhausted." - contains curly quotes and ellipsis. ok.

Quote marks Chinese 「」 become English quotes? Usually we keep as English quotation marks. We'll translate: '"The general's look…… seems very tired."' Keep the ellipsis as three dots? Chinese uses …… which is ellipsis. We'll keep as "...". So: "【3】 \"The general's look... seems very tired. \"" Ensure we keep the quotes.

Mikasa tightened the scarf around her neck, her face full of worry. It's hard to imagine how General Jingyuan has managed to endure these past few centuries; in memory, the Cloudtop Five Heroes are shattered, while in reality, it's piles

We need to keep proper nouns: Mikasa is a name, keep it as Mikasa. General Jingyuan should be kept as General Jingyuan (title). Cloudtop Five Heroes can be translated as 'Cloudtop Five Heroes' since it's a named group. Luofu Six Emperors should be translated as 'Luofu Six Emperors'. Ten Kings Office becomes 'Ten Kings Office'. Alliance high command stays as 'alliance high command'.

We'll output: "【4】 Mikasa tightened the scarf around her neck, her face full of worry. It's hard to imagine how General Jingyuan has managed to endure these past few centuries; in memory, the Cloudtop Five Heroes are shattered, while in reality it's piles of documents, dealing with the Luofu Six Emperors, and also having to contend with the Ten Kings Office and even the alliance high command..."

Note the original ends with …… (ellipsis). We'll keep "..." at end.

Nobody can substitute for General Jingyuan; if someone really tried, they'd probably be tortured to madness…

Translation: "No one can step into Jingyuan's shoes; if someone really did, they'd probably be tortured into madness..." Keep ellipsis.

We need to keep "Jingyuan" as name. So: "【5】 No one can step into Jingyuan's shoes; if someone really did, they'd probably be tortured into madness..."

"Speaking of which… do the Cloudtop Five Heroes from back then somewhat resemble us?" Alan, standing nearby, suddenly spoke.

Translation: '"Speaking of which…… do the Cloudtop Five Heroes of the past resemble us a bit?" Alan suddenly said from beside.' Need to keep quotes. Use ellipsis. So: "【6】 \"Speaking of which... do the Cloudtop Five Heroes of the past resemble us a bit? \" Alan suddenly said from beside."

"Speaking of which… do the Cloudtop Five Heroes of the past somewhat resemble us?" Alan, standing nearby, suddenly spoke.

"Hey hey, Alan… isn't that too ominous?" Armin glared at Alan dissatisfiedly, "And how are we alike? The Cloudtop Five Heroes ultimately fell apart, but we won't! No matter what happens in the future, the three of us will stay together, right?"

Translation: '"Hey hey, Alan... that's too ominous!" Armin glared at Alan dissatisfiedly, "And how are we alike? The Cloudtop Five Heroes ultimately fell apart, but we won't! No matter what happens in the future, the three of us will stay together, right?"' Need to keep quotes and punctuation.

We'll output: "【7】 \"Hey hey, Alan... that's too ominous! \" Armin glared at Alan dissatisfiedly, \"And how are we alike? The Cloudtop Five Heroes ultimately fell apart, but we won't! No matter what happens in the future, the three of us will stay together, right? \""

As he spoke, the blond-haired boy looked at her: "Mikasa, am I right?"

Translation: "Saying that, the blond-haired boy looked at her: 'Mikasa, you agree, right?'" We'll keep quotes. So: "【8】 Saying that, the blond-haired boy looked at her: \"Mikasa, you agree, right? \""

"Hmm…"

Translation: '"Mm..."' Keep ellipsis. So: "【9】 \"Mm... \""

The evening wind lingered, lightly embracing the orange-red bonfire, the flames spreading and retracting in the night, like a girl's unspoken thoughts.

Translation: "The evening wind lingered, lightly embracing the orange-red bonfire, the flames spreading and retracting in the night, like a girl's unspoken thoughts." Keep as one sentence. So: "【10】 The evening wind lingered, lightly embracing the orange-red bonfire, the flames spreading and retracting in the night, like a girl's unspoken thoughts."

Mikasa's gaze quietly crept onto Alan's side profile.

Translation: "Mikasa's gaze quietly crept onto Alan's side profile." So: "【11】 Mikasa's gaze quietly crept onto Alan's side profile."

In the flickering firelight, Alan's outline was edged with flowing gold, his brows tinged with warm color, yet the depths of his eyes held shadows deeper than night… he seemed troubled, as if a heavy weight pressed on his shoulders.

Translation: "In the flickering firelight, Alan's outline was plated with a flowing golden edge, his brows tinged with warm color, yet his eyes held shadows deeper than night… He seemed to have something on his mind, as if a heavy weight pressed on his shoulders." Keep ellipsis. So: "【12】 In the flickering firelight, Alan's outline was plated with a flowing golden edge, his brows tinged with warm color, yet his eyes held shadows deeper than night… He seemed to have something on his mind, as if a heavy weight pressed on his shoulders."

A gust of wind came, the flames suddenly dipped, and in the instant the light dimmed, Mikasa hastily averted her gaze from his face.

Translation: "A gust of wind came, the flames suddenly dipped, and in the instant the light dimmed, Mikasa hastily averted her gaze from his face." So: "【13】 A gust of wind came, the flames suddenly dipped, and in the instant the light dimmed, Mikasa hastily averted her gaze from his face."

"Mm, we'll always be together… Alan."

Translation: '"Mm, we'll always be together… Alan."' Keep ellipsis as three dots? Chinese uses … (two dots?) Actually it's "…". We'll use "...". So: "【14】 \"Mm, we'll always be together... Alan. \""

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This is a separator line, just em dash? We need to output translation. The line is "——". Probably just an em dash line. We'll translate as "——" (keep same). So: "【15】 ——"

"At the same time, inside the Gods' Strategy Manor."

"At the same time, inside the Gods' Strategy Manor."

"Jingliu plans to embark on a journey to revisit several old places, offering a cup of wine in remembrance of the past."

Translation: '"Jingliu plans to embark on a journey to revisit several old places, pour a cup of wine, and reminisce about the past."' Keep quotes. So: "【17】 \"Jingliu plans to embark on a journey to revisit several old places, pour a cup of wine, and reminisce about the past. \""

"She demanded that Danheng accompany her, refusing no acceptance; receiving her letter meant agreeing to her invitation, her attitude extremely firm. Danheng, not wanting to cause further complications, agreed."

Translation: '"She demanded that Danheng accompany her, refusing was not allowed; accepting her letter meant agreeing to her invitation, her attitude very firm. Danheng also didn't want to cause further complications, so he agreed."' Keep quotes. So: "【18】 \"She demanded that Danheng accompany her, refusing was not allowed; accepting her letter meant agreeing to her invitation, her attitude very firm. Danheng also didn't want to cause further complications, so he agreed. \""

"The first stop of this revisit to the old place was chosen by Yinqing for Jingliu at Return Star Port."

"The first stop of this revisit to the old place was chosen by Yinqing for Jingliu at Return Star Port."

"Arriving at the port, Yinqing gazed at the myriad star shuttles across the sky, beginning to wonder about her purpose. However, Jingliu instead posed a question to him: "Little brother, have you heard the name of the fox-person aviator【Bai Heng】?"

"Arriving at the port, Yinqing gazed at the myriad star shuttles across the sky, beginning to wonder about her purpose. However, Jingliu instead posed a question to him: \"Little brother, have you heard the name of the fox-person aviator【Bai Heng】? \""

Thus line: "【20】 \"Arriving at the port, Yinqing gazed at the myriad star shuttles across the sky, beginning to wonder about her purpose. However, Jingliu instead posed a question to him: 'Little brother, have you heard the name of the fox-person aviator【Bai Heng】?'\""

But we need to keep the outer quotes as double quotes, inner as single? We'll just use double quotes for the whole line and use single quotes for the inner spoken line. Let's do: "【20】 \"Arriving at the port, Yinqing gazed at the myriad star shuttles across the sky, beginning to wonder about her purpose. However, Jingliu instead posed a question to him: 'Little brother, have you heard the name of the fox-person aviator【Bai Heng】?'\""

"The name Bai Heng felt familiar to Yinqing, yet he couldn't quite recall it. Meanwhile, Danheng nearby felt a sudden daze—although the name was as unfamiliar as a fleeting breeze, a voice inexplicably echoed in the wind."

Translation: '"The name Bai Heng made Yinqing quite familiar, yet he couldn't recall it at the moment. Meanwhile, Danheng felt a sudden daze—although the name was as unfamiliar as a passing breeze, for some reason a sound came through the wind."' Need to keep the em dash. We'll output: "【21】 \"The name Bai Heng made Yinqing quite familiar, yet he couldn't recall it at the moment. Meanwhile, Danheng felt a sudden daze—although the name was as unfamiliar as a passing breeze, for some reason a sound came through the wind. \""

""Let the noble Dragon Sovereign bring clouds and rain to flood the enemy formation; we mere supporters just need to watch from the sky, right?""

We have double quotes inside double quotes. We'll translate: '""Let the noble dragon sovereign bring clouds and rain to drown the enemy formation. We, the mere accompaniments, just need to watch from the sky, right?""' We'll keep the inner quotes as double? We'll just use single for inner. Let's produce: '""Let the noble dragon sovereign bring clouds and rain to drown the enemy formation. We, the mere accompaniments, just need to watch from the sky, right?""' Outer double quotes. So: "【22】 \""Let the noble dragon sovereign bring clouds and rain to drown the enemy formation. We, the mere accompaniments, just need to watch from the sky, right?"\""

「「……！！」」

Translation: '"……!!"' Actually Chinese: 「「……！！」」 includes ellipsis then two exclamation marks inside quotes. We'll translate: '"……!!"' Keep outer quotes. So: "【23】 \"……!! \""

"Danheng suddenly opened his eyes; that fleeting voice stabbed his heart like a needle."

Translation: '"Danheng suddenly opened his eyes; that fleeting sound, like a needle prick, stabbed his heart."' Keep quotes. So: "【24】 \"Danheng suddenly opened his eyes; that fleeting sound, like a needle prick, stabbed his heart. \""

"Jingliu noticed Danheng's anomaly and wondered what he had recalled. Danheng took a few deep breaths and slowly said: "She… seems to be a comrade of the Yin Yue Monarch.""

they gave example with 【25】 but we need to output for 【67】.

""She is a comrade, also a friend; belonging to Yin Yue, and also to us." Jingliu lifted her head, gazing at the star shuttles repeatedly crossing the sky, her voice light as a withered autumn leaf."

Translation: '""They are comrades, and also friends. They belong to Yin Yue, and also to us." Jingliu lifted her head, gazing at the star shuttles repeatedly going back and forth in the sky, her voice light as a withered leaf of late autumn."' Need to keep quotes. So: "【26】 \""They are comrades, and also friends. They belong to Yin Yue, and also to us." Jingliu lifted her head, gazing at the star shuttles repeatedly going back and forth in the sky, her voice light as a withered leaf of late autumn. \""

""Never mind… they're just past clouds. The reason I came to Return Star Port is merely to pay my respects to her here.""

Translation: '""Never mind… they're just past clouds and smoke. The reason I came to Return Star Port is merely to pay respects to her here.""' Keep quotes. So: "【27】 \""Never mind… they're just past clouds and smoke. The reason I came to Return Star Port is merely to pay respects to her here."\""

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Separator: "【28】 ——"

Frieren of the Funeral

Frieren of the Funeral.

"It is the fox people's memorial rite…"

Translation: '"It is the fox people's memorial rite……"' Keep ellipsis. So: "【30】 \"It is the fox people's memorial rite... \""

"Xiuta'erk slumped in the chair, the regretful and sorrowful atmosphere in the light screen nearly overflowing, making even us viewers feel heavy-hearted."

they gave example with 【??】 but we need to output for 【79】.

Thus: "【31】 Xiuta'erk slumped in the chair, the regretful and sorrowful atmosphere in the light screen almost overflowing, making even us viewers feel heavy-hearted."

"Lady Frieren, I feel that although the Cloudtop Five Heroes get along well, the relationship between Jingliu and Bai Heng seems especially close." Filien said from beside.

Translation: '"Lady Frieren, I feel that although the Cloudtop Five Heroes get along well, the relationship between Jingliu and Bai Heng seems especially close." Filien said from beside.' Need to keep quotes. So: "【32】 \"Lady Frieren, I feel that although the Cloudtop Five Heroes get along well, the relationship between Jingliu and Bai Heng seems especially close. \" Filien said from beside."

"Lady Frieren, I feel that although the Cloudtop Five Heroes get along well, the relationship between Jingliu and Bai Heng seems especially close." Filien said from beside.

"Really?" Frieren lightly shook her head, "I believe this is merely a simple remembrance of comrades and the past. However, if not for the Yin Yue turmoil, Jingliu's tone wouldn't be so heavy now."

Translation: '"Really?" Frieren lightly shook her head, "I believe this is merely a simple remembrance of comrades and the past. However, if the Yin Yue Rebellion had not occurred, Jingliu's tone would not be so heavy now."' Need to keep quotes. So: "【33】 \"Really? \" Frieren lightly shook her head, \"I believe this is merely a simple remembrance of comrades and the past. However, if the Yin Yue Rebellion had not occurred, Jingliu's tone would not be so heavy now. \""

"…In Jingliu's view, the Yin Yue Monarch is the root of the problem."

Translation: '"…… In Jingliu's view, the Yin Yue Monarch is the root of the problem."' Keep quotes. So: "【34】 \"…… In Jingliu's view, the Yin Yue Monarch is the root of the problem. \""

Zan Yin gazed at Danheng's back in the light screen, feeling deeply: "But now we all know that Dan Feng is also helpless. The regret of a comrade's death, the crisis of dwindling kin, the burden of being a Dragon Sovereign… rather than doing nothing and just adding sorrow, he would rather take a risky next move."

they gave example with 【35】 but we need to output for 【91】.

"He staked everything on the art of dragon transmutation… yet he lost utterly, his body left in ruins."

Translation: '"He staked everything on the Dragon Transformation Marvelous Method… but unfortunately he lost utterly, his body shattered."' Keep quotes. So: "【36】 \"He staked everything on the Dragon Transformation Marvelous Method… but unfortunately he lost utterly, his body shattered. \""

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Separator: "【37】 ——"

"Jingliu doesn't know how to manufacture star shuttles, so Yinqing took over the labor for her; only then did he suddenly recall that he had once read the name【Bai Heng】 in a travelogue titled《Sea Edge Star Shuttle Scenery》."

they gave example with 【38】 but we need to output for 【97】.

"Nine times out of ten, the book's content is the author's experiences of star shuttles crashing in different worlds, frequently encountering danger, and this luck that always turns peril into safety, allowing unharmed survival, also leaves Yinqing in awe."

Translation: '"Nine out of ten of the book's contents are the author's experiences of star shuttles crashing in different worlds, frequently encountering danger; yet this luck that always turns peril into safety and ensures survival also leaves Yinqing in awe.'" Keep quotes. So: "【39】 \"Nine out of ten of the book's contents are the author's experiences of star shuttles crashing in different worlds, frequently encountering danger; yet this luck that always turns peril into safety and ensures survival also leaves Yinqing in awe. \""

""Yes, her luck is astonishingly bad. Whenever she pilots a star shuttle on an expedition, either she is mistakenly swallowed as a snack by the Abundance Folk's giant beasts, or she crashes deep in enemy territory.""

they gave example with 【40】 but we need to output for 【101】.

"Speaking of Bai Heng's past, Jingliu's voice rarely shows a hint of warmth: "But when it comes to staying alive… her luck is astonishingly good. No matter how perilous, she always turns misfortune into fortune.""

Translation: '"Speaking of Bai Heng's past, Jingliu's voice also rare ly revealed a hint of warmth: "Only in staying alive… her luck is astonishingly good. No matter how perilous, she always turns danger into auspiciousness."'" Keep quotes. So: "【41】 \"Speaking of Bai Heng's past, Jingliu's voice also rare ly revealed a hint of warmth: 'Only in staying alive… her luck is astonishingly good. No matter how perilous, she always turns danger into auspiciousness.'\""

But we need to keep the inner quotes as Chinese 「」 turned to English quotes. We'll use double for outer, single for inner. Let's produce: "【41】 \"Speaking of Bai Heng's past, Jingliu's voice also revealed a hint of warmth: 'Only in staying alive… her luck is astonishingly good. No matter how perilous, she always turns danger into auspiciousness.'\""

"As they spoke, the star shuttle assembly line also started up; several people arrived at the spaceport, where a star shuttle they had just finished building was on display."

Translation: '"As they were speaking, the star shuttle assembly line also started up; several people arrived at the spaceport, where a star shuttle they had just finished building was on display.'" Keep quotes. So: "【42】 \"As they were speaking, the star shuttle assembly line also started up; several people arrived at the spaceport, where a star shuttle they had just finished building was on display. \""

""After being away from Luofu for so long, I can finally come to bid you farewell.""

Translation: '""After being away from Luofu for so long, I can finally come to say goodbye to you.""' Keep quotes. So: "【43】 \""After being away from Luofu for so long, I can finally come to say goodbye to you."\""

"Jingliu took a deep breath, and as her fingertips touched the icy hull of the star shuttle, she turned her gaze to Danheng and continued asking: "Yin Yue… severing【Shu Hu】that battle, do you still remember?""

they gave example with 【44】 but we need to output for 【111】.

""I don't remember anything at all." Danheng shook his head."

Translation: '""I don't remember anything." Danheng shook his head."' Keep quotes. So: "【45】 \""I don't remember anything." Danheng shook his head. \""

""Let me tell you, in that battle, Bai Heng the fool ultimately exhausted the luck granted by the Divine Bow.""

Translation: '""Let me tell you, in that battle, Bai Heng the fool ultimately exhausted the luck bestowed by the Emperor's Bow.""' Keep quotes. So: "【46】 \""Let me tell you, in that battle, Bai Heng the fool ultimately exhausted the luck bestowed by the Emperor's Bow. \"\""

""She charged into the formation alone, enabling the alliance troops to break through the Blood‑Stained Abyss of【Shu Hu】, and even recalled you from the Dragon Fury; yet she couldn't leave that battlefield, and we all owe a debt that cannot be repaid.""

they gave example with 【47】 but we need to output for 【117】.

""For the cloud cavalry soldiers, returning to be buried on the battlefield is an honor. But Yin Yue… you don't understand these things.""

Translation: '""For the Cloud Cavalry soldiers, returning to be buried on the battlefield is honor. But Yin Yue… you don't understand this.""' Keep quotes. So: "【48】 \""For the Cloud Cavalry soldiers, returning to be buried on the battlefield is honor. But Yin Yue… you don't understand this."\""

"Jingliu's fingers unconsciously clenched; recalling the scene of slaughtering the evil dragon, she only felt chill permeate her limbs, and her shoulders trembled involuntarily."

Note: the original verb was a typo; the correct translation is "Jingliu's fingers unconsciously clenched; recalling the scene of slaughtering the evil dragon, she only felt chill permeate her limbs, and her shoulders trembled involuntarily."

"You cannot accept Bai Heng's departure, and you actually used …… at the time when she should have been resting, you have committed an irreparable mistake."