Prev
Ch. 79 / 16435%
Next

Chapter 79: with translation of chapter title

~14 min read 2,680 words

After thinking it over, Jingliu's state seemed off from the very start.

Xiao Banei

"However, Jingliu, who had fallen into the Demonic Yin Form, is so dangerous—how did she get out?" Sweet Dew Temple wondered, "Wouldn't the guards have stopped her?"

""There's no way they could stop her, right?" Shezhu Xiao Bannei watched the white-haired woman wildly swinging her sword at Jingyuan on the light curtain, heart still pounding, and said: "Being able to suppress a divine envoy's emissary to this extent… breaking out of prison doesn't seem all that unimaginable.""

What currently puzzles Shezhu is that, although it's clear Jingyuan is strong, when facing a master whose swordsmanship surpasses his… he didn't employ any more special means.

Is he really an emissary? Or… is he hiding his techniques?

Polnareff - fine.

Frieren - fine.

""Ugh!" Jingyuan barely blocked the sword qi, but his body uncontrollably retreated dozens of steps before he recovered."

""The sword qi swept past his armor, striking the pavilion behind him, and in an instant reduced the building to rubble.""

Patrol Star God - fine.

""Jingliu remained expressionless, simply holding her sword and walking toward him step by step.""

""Gripping the battle blade in his hand, Jingyuan's eyes flashed with a hint of sorrow and reluctance.""

Italy - fine.

""Once he opened his eyes again, Jingyuan had made up his mind; his golden-yellow eyes held no hesitation or confusion.""

SPW - SPW (original term is 【SPW】 but we need original ChineseChars? The original term is the Chinese characters that represent it. The line shows 【SPW】 inside brackets. The original Chinese characters are just the letters SPW inside brackets? Actually it's written as 【SPW】 which is not Chinese characters. The original term is the bracketed term? The glossary expects original_term as ChineseChars. But SPW is not Chinese characters. However the instruction says list every NAMED entity / coined term in these lines: characters, places, sects, ranks, techniques, cultivation realms/pills/treasures, named beasts/items, fan-fiction names. SPW is likely an acronym for an organization, a coined term. It appears as 【SPW】. The original term is the bracketed term? It's not Chinese characters. But we can still list original_term as "SPW" (the letters). The instruction says original_term: ChineseChars. But if it's not Chinese characters, we might still put the original as it appears (SPW). We'll do that.

Ganlu Temple - fine.

Thus add:

Ganlu Temple - fine.

light curtain - fine.

divine sovereign - fine.

deity - fine.

emissary - fine.

Demonic Yin Form - fine.

Italy, Naples - fine.

Translation: "Italy, Naples."

The streets in July were scorching beyond belief; under the sun's relentless heat, it was rare for this tourist city to exude a silent, deathly stillness. - fine.

The July streets were simply scorching beyond words; under the sun's baking, it was rare for this tourist city to exude a silent, deathly stillness. - fine.

The July streets were simply scorching beyond words; under the sun's scorching, it was rare for this tourist city to emit a silent deathly atmosphere. - fine.

Under a clear blue sky, a drone drifted slowly in midair like a government surveillance device, except that no matter which direction it faced, its camera always pointed at the sky's light curtain. - fine.

Translation: "Under the clear blue sky, a drone hovered slowly in midair, like a government device for filming—except that no matter which direction the drone faced, its mounted camera always pointed at the sky's light curtain."

light curtain - fine.

The drone's wings were sprayed with 【SPW】. - contains brackets but no Chinese.

Translation: "On the drone's wings was sprayed 【SPW】."

We keep brackets.

Meanwhile, in a mountaintop villa not far away, Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana set down his cup of black tea and looked toward the blue‑clad man at the doorway. - contains "Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana" with accent marks? The letter ò is okay, not Chinese. The middle dot is fine. Ensure no Chinese characters. It's fine.

Translation: "Meanwhile, inside a mountaintop villa not far away, Giorno Giovanna·JoJo? Actually we need to use pinyin: Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana. So: "Meanwhile, inside a mountaintop villa not far away, Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana was setting down his tea and looking toward the blue-clad man at the door."

red tea and a blue‑clad man - fine.

"It's okay, Misida, don't be so on guard." As the gang boss, Qiaoluonuò had just turned sixteen; his voice, though still youthful, was clear and resonant, making people instinctively trust him. - fine.

Translation: "\"It's fine, Mista, no need to be so on guard. \" As the mafia boss who had just turned sixteen, Giorno's voice, though still youthful, was clear and resonant, making people instinctively trust him."

just turned sixteen - fine.

"Just as you were pulling your gun from your boot, you almost missed the first move of the Stand user from another world." Qiaoluonuò switched to a more relaxed tone, "Good thing I had the drone record everything—you can watch it with me later." - fine.

Translation: "\"Just as you were pulling your gun from your boot, you almost missed the first strike of the Stand User from another world. \" Giorno switched to a more relaxed tone, \"Fortunately I had the drone record everything—you can watch it with me later. \"

We need to keep quotes and punctuation. Keep "Stand User". Keep "another world". Keep "drone". Keep "etc."

"Stand user? Does that world really have Stands?" Misida slipped his gun back into his boot; he always believed what Qiaoluonuò said. - fine.

Translation: "\"Stand User? Does that world really have Stands? \" Mista slipped his gun back into his boot, always trusting Giorno's words."

We need to keep the term "Stand", keep "Stands", and keep the name "Misida" (using pinyin). - fine.

Thus: "\"Stand User? Does that world really have Stands? \" Misida slipped his gun back into his boot, always trusting Giorno's words."

We also need to keep Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana. - fine.

Thus line: "\"Stand User? Does that world really have Stands? \" Misida slipped his gun back into his boot, always trusting Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana's words."

"It's hard to explain; you just have to see for yourself." Qiaoluonuò pointed with his teaspoon at the sky; the battle between Jingyuan and Jingliu continued. - fine.

Translation: "\"It's hard to explain; you just have to see for yourself. \" Giorno pointed at the sky with his teaspoon; Jingyuan and Jingliu's battle continued."

teaspoon - fine.

The golden‑yellow divine sovereign resembled a deity; as it swung down a single blow, heaven and earth shattered, as if everything would turn to dust. - contains hyphen and special characters but fine.

Translation: "The golden divine sovereign resembled a god; as it swung down a single blow, heaven and earth shattered, as if everything would turn to dust."

The divine sovereign resembled a deity; as it swung down a single blow, heaven and earth shattered, as if everything would turn to dust. - fine.

"This..." - fine.

Translation: "\"This... \""

Misida stared at the sky in disbelief, struggling to swallow, "Is this a Stand?"... If so, that would be astonishing. - fine.

Translation: "Misida stared in disbelief at the sky, gulping with difficulty, \"Is this a Stand?... If so, that's just too astonishing. \"

We need to keep ellipsis and punctuation. We'll keep as is.

Qiaoluonuò was equally shocked, but his expression was far calmer than Misida's. - fine.

Translation: "Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana was equally shocked, but his expression was far calmer than Misida's."

"It seems like a power‑type Stand, though its range is probably far greater than that of an ordinary Stand." Qiaoluonuò raised an eyebrow slightly, estimated the distance, and gestured with his hands on the table: "The slash range is likely over 100 meters; as for speed..." - fine.

Translation: "\"It seems like a power-type Stand, though its range is probably greater than that of an ordinary Stand. \" Giorno raised an eyebrow slightly, estimated the distance, and gestured with his hands on the table: \"The slash's range is likely over 100 meters; as for speed... \""

We need to keep the colon and quotes.

The woman named Jingliu did not dodge. - fine.

Translation: "The woman named Jingliu did not dodge."

Bathed in the divine sovereign's blade light, she offered no resistance, nor the madness from her earlier sword swing. Instead, before the smoke cleared, a faint smile seemed to flicker at the corner of her mouth. - fine.

Translation: "Bathed in the divine sovereign's blade light, she offered no resistance, nor the madness from her earlier sword swing. On the contrary, before the smoke cleared, a faint smile seemed to flicker at the corner of her mouth."

divine sovereign's blade light - fine.

... Qiaoluonuò also couldn't figure out whether

Translation: "... Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana also couldn't figure out whether she could have dodged or simply chose not to."

We need to keep ellipsis at start.

"But rather than guessing whether he is a Stand user, I lean more toward another hypothesis."

Translation: "\"Rather than guessing whether he's a Stand User, I lean more toward another hypothesis. \"

Qiaoluonuò gazed at the empty teacup and said calmly: "Wasn't it earlier guessed that Jingyuan was an emissary of the Hunt? This golden Stand might be the privilege granted to him by the Hunt's star god."

Translation: "Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana gazed at the empty teacup and said calmly: \"Wasn't it earlier speculated that this Jingyuan was an emissary of the Hunt? This golden 'Stand' might be the privilege granted to him by the Hunt's star god. \"

emissary of the Hunt, Hunt's star god

"A deity? That makes sense."

Translation: "\"A god? That makes sense. \"

Speaking of deities, Misida couldn't help but show an envious expression, "But granting someone a Stand is perhaps too generous—I can't even imagine what would happen if that guy were pierced by an arrow."

Translation: "Speaking of gods, Misida couldn't help but look envious: \"But granting someone a Stand is perhaps too generous—I can't even imagine what would happen if this guy were pierced by an arrow. \"

guy

"But what a pity—" Qiaoluonuò suddenly sighed.

Translation: "\"What a shame—\" Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana suddenly sighed.

"A pity?"

Translation: "\"A shame? \""

"Well, the woman named Jingliu seems to have died." Qiaoluonuò regretted, "Her swordsmanship is wonderful and worth learning... though if we were to study it, we'd likely need to slow‑mo the video."

Translation: "\"Well, the woman named Jingliu seems to have died. \" Qiaoluonuò·Qiaobana regretted, \"Her swordsmanship is wondrous and worth learning... though to study it we'd likely need to slow down the camera footage. \"

regretted

"Bolunaleifu happened to be asleep when she and Jingyuan faced off; I recommended it to him, but at first he didn't believe me... I just sent him the drone's recording, and now he's completely silent."

Translation: "\"Bolunaleifu happened to be asleep and missed her duel with Jingyuan; when I recommended it to him at first he didn't believe me... but just now I sent him the drone's recording, and then he fell completely silent. \"

Bolunaleifu

——

Translation: "——"

We need to output exactly the line with the dash? The source line is just "——". We'll output "【43】 ——". Keep the em dash.

"The scene shifts to a vast clear sky; it's still the place where Jingyuan practices his sword."

Translation: "\"The scene shifts; under endless clear skies, it's still the place where Jingyuan practices his sword. \"

We need to keep quotes.

"But this time, Jingyuan is no longer a child; he is the master, standing aside and watching the young boy before him swing his long sword with all his might."

Translation: "\"This time, however, Jingyuan is no longer a child but a master; he stands to the side, watching the young boy before him swing his longsword with all his might. \"

"Nine thousand nine hundred ninety‑eight... nine thousand nine hundred ninety‑nine... ten thousand!" the boy panted, his arms trembling slightly as he kept gasping.

Translation: "\"\"Nine thousand nine hundred ninety-eight... nine thousand nine hundred ninety-nine... ten thousand! \" the boy panted, his arms trembling slightly as he kept gasping. \"

"Nine thousand nine hundred ninety‑eight... nine thousand nine hundred ninety‑nine... ten thousand!" the boy panted, his arms trembling slightly as he kept gasping.

Jingyuan then said slowly, "As a cloud rider, one must not let one's weapons leave the hand, nor let the body dissipate."

Translation: "\"Jingyuan then said slowly: \"As a cloud rider, one must not let one's armaments leave the hand, nor let the body dissipate. \"\""

We need to keep the quotes. We'll do: "\"Jingyuan then said slowly: \"As a cloud rider, one must not let one's armaments leave the hand, nor let the body dissipate. \"\""

"Yes!" the boy replied with vigor, instantly adjusting his stance and preparing for the next training.

Translation: "\"\"Yes! \" the boy replied with vigor, immediately adjusting his stance and preparing for the next training. \""

We'll do: "\"Yes! \" the boy replied with vigor, immediately adjusting his stance and preparing for the next training."

Jingyuan suddenly laughed, "You're still too young to be considered a cloud rider."

Translation: "\"But Jingyuan suddenly laughed: \"You're still too young to count as a cloud rider. \"\""

We'll do: "\"But Jingyuan suddenly laughed: \"You're still too young to count as a cloud rider. \"\""

The boy abruptly turned his head and said solemnly, "I want to become like the general, a legend remembered on the Astral Express."

Translation: "\"The boy abruptly turned his head and said solemnly: \"I want to become like the general, a legend remembered on the Astral Express. \"\""

The boy abruptly turned his head and said solemnly: "I want to become like the general, a legend remembered on the Astral Express."

Jingyuan chuckled lightly, "What's so great about that? This road hasn't been easy at all."

Translation: "\"Jingyuan chuckled lightly: \"What's so good about that? This path hasn't been easy. \"\""

We'll do: "\"Jingyuan chuckled lightly: \"What's so good about that? This path hasn't been easy. \"\""

"But hasn't the general also gotten to where he is now step by step?"

Translation: "\"\"But hasn't the general also gotten here step by step? \"\""

We'll do: "\"But hasn't the general also gotten here step by step? \""

"..." Jingyuan just kept looking at him silently.

Translation: "\"\"... \" Jingyuan just silently watched him. \""

We'll do: "\"\"... \" Jingyuan just silently watched him. \""

A gentle wind slipped past them, rustling the leaves, as if carrying away their sorrow.

Translation: "\"A gentle wind brushed past them, rustling the leaves, as if carrying away sorrow. \""

We'll do: "\"A gentle wind brushed past them, rustling the leaves, as if carrying away sorrow. \""

After a while, he finally laughed, "Since you're so eager, let's get some practice."

Translation: "\"After a while, he finally laughed: \"Since you're so eager, let's practice. \"\""

We'll do: "\"After a while, he finally laughed: \"Since you're so eager, let's practice. \"\""

"Great!" the boy instantly got excited, quickly took his stance, and declared, "I won't hold back!"

Translation: "\"\"Great! \" the boy instantly sprang up, quickly took his stance, and declared, \"I won't go easy on you! \"\""

We'll do: "\"Great! \" the boy instantly sprang up, quickly took his stance, and declared, \"I won't go easy on you! \""

Ah ah, Frieren, I have a bad feeling!!

Translation: "\"Ah ah, Fulilian, I have a bad feeling!! \""

We need to keep the exclamation marks. We'll do: "\"Ah ah, Fulilian, I have a bad feeling!! \""

Xiūtāěrkè is somewhat overwhelmed: "This scene feels familiar—I feel like it won't be long before Jingyuan succumbs to the Demonic Yin Form, and that boy will have to act himself."

Translation: "\"Xiutaaerke was somewhat overwhelmed: \"This scene feels familiar—I feel like it won't be long before Jingyuan succumbs to demonic possession, and that boy will have to act himself——\""

We need to keep the em dash at end. We'll do: "\"Xiutaaerke was somewhat overwhelmed: \"This scene feels familiar—I feel like it won't be long before Jingyuan succumbs to demonic possession, and that boy will have to act himself——\""

"All right." Frieren gave Xiūtāěrkè a light pat on the head.

Translation: "\"All right. \" Fulilian lightly tapped Xiutaaerke's head."

We'll do: "\"All right. \" Fulilian lightly tapped Xiutaaerke's head."

Immortal Vessel people, whenever they act, just live for several hundred years, even if Jing Yuan truly has the Demonic Yin Body day, can you be alive to see that scene?!

◈

End of Chapter

Prev
Ch. 79 / 16435%
Next