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Chapter 25

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Hand over those two cultivated soul beasts, and I'll let you go right away! Sword Douluo Chen Xin stood in midair, looking down at the three soul beasts and said coldly.

Translation: "Hand over those two cultivated soul beasts, and I'll let you go right away!" Sword Douluo Chen Xin stood in midair, looking down at the three soul beasts and said coldly.

We need to keep quotes and punctuation. Use English punctuation. Keep the Chinese quotation marks? We should convert to English quotes. The source uses 「」. We'll replace with English double quotes. Keep exclamation and etc.

Thus: "Hand over those two cultivated soul beasts, and I'll let you go right away!" Sword Douluo Chen Xin stood in midair, looking down at the three soul beasts and said coldly.

Make sure it's one line.

As he spoke, the ancient massive sword in his hand, about two meters long and half a foot wide, emanated a terrifying killing intent; the nine soul rings around his body continuously fluctuated, and his powerful soul power pressure, combined with the terrifying killing intent, pressed downward.

Translation: As he spoke, the ancient-looking giant sword in his hand, about two meters long and half a foot wide, emitted a terrifying killing intent; the nine soul rings on his body constantly undulated, and the powerful soul power pressure, combined with the terrifying killing intent, pressed down toward the lower area.

Remember to keep the numbers: two meters, half a foot, and nine.

Thus: As he spoke, the ancient-looking giant sword in his hand, about two meters long and half a foot wide, emitted a terrifying killing intent; the nine soul rings on his body constantly undulated, and the powerful soul power pressure, combined with the terrifying killing intent, pressed down toward the lower area.

Heh heh, do you think you can threaten me just with you? If it weren't for your numbers and strength, how could you defeat me?

Translation: "Heh heh, do you think you can threaten me just with you? If it weren't for your superior numbers, how could you have defeated me?"

Note: Keep the laughter "Heh heh". We'll translate it as "Heh heh". Keep question marks.

Thus: "Heh heh, do you think you can threaten me just with you? If it weren't for your superior numbers, how could you have defeated me?"

The speaker was only a dark red soul beast; its appearance somewhat resembled a lion, but it actually had three identical large heads.

Translation: The speaker was a dark red soul beast; its appearance somewhat resembled a lion, but it actually had three identical large heads.

Note: Keep the word "only" as is; the phrase "only a dark red soul beast" translates to "the speaker was only a dark red soul beast".

Thus: The speaker was only a dark red soul beast; its appearance somewhat resembled a lion, but it actually had three identical large heads.

While this soul beast's size is not large compared to the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python, its height is just over five meters.

Translation: Meanwhile, this soul beast's size, compared to the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python, is not large, standing just over five meters tall.

Note: Keep the phrase "height just over five meters"; translate it as "its height is just over five meters".

Thus: Meanwhile, this soul beast's size, compared to the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python, is not large; its height is just over five meters.

Yet the soul power fluctuations and aura it releases are the strongest among the three.

Translation: Yet the soul power fluctuations and aura it releases are the strongest among the three.

Thus: Yet the soul power fluctuations and aura it releases are the strongest among the three.

This soul beast is the Red King, ranked eighth among the Ten Great Ferocious Beasts, whose true form is a three-headed Crimson Magic Hound possessing partial true dragon bloodline.

Translation: This soul beast is precisely the Red King, ranked eighth among the Ten Great Ferocious Beasts, whose true form is a three-headed red magic hound possessing partial true dragon bloodline.

Note: Keep the phrase "ranked eighth among the Ten Great Ferocious Beasts"; translate it accordingly.

Thus: This soul beast is precisely the Red King, ranked eighth among the Ten Great Ferocious Beasts, whose true form is a three-headed red magic hound possessing partial true dragon bloodline.

Now with 290,000 years of cultivation, it can go head-to-head with a 96th-rank Title Douluo and even gain the upper hand.

Translation: Now, with a cultivation of 290,000 years, it can go toe-to-toe with a 96th-rank Title Douluo and even gain the upper hand.

Note: Keep the numbers: 290,000 years and 96th-rank.

Thus: Now, with a cultivation of 290,000 years, it can go toe-to-toe with a 96th-rank Title Douluo and even gain the upper hand.

Previously, if it hadn't been injured while single-handedly fighting Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, and Ning Fengzhi, it would not now be in this situation.

Translation: Previously, if it hadn't been injured while single-handedly fighting Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, and Ning Fengzhi, it would not now be in this situation.

Previously, if it hadn't been injured while single-handedly fighting Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, and Ning Fengzhi, it would not now be in this situation.

Sword Douluo's expression turned cold as he said: "Not handing them over? Then I'll kill you first before going in to look."

Translation: Sword Douluo's expression turned cold as he said: "If you won't hand them over, then I'll first slaughter you before going in to look."

We need to keep punctuation. Use colon after said.

Thus: Sword Douluo's expression turned cold as he said: "If you won't hand them over, then I'll first slaughter you before going in to look."

The Red King gave a "heh heh" cold laugh and said: "Do you think you few can kill me? Are you not taking the Star Dou Great Forest seriously enough?"

Translation: The Red King gave a "heh heh" cold laugh and said: "Do you think you few can kill me? Are you not taking the Star Dou Great Forest seriously enough?"

The Red King gave a "heh heh" cold laugh and said: "Do you think you few can kill me? Are you not taking the Star Dou Great Forest seriously enough?"

Do you still have a trump card? Sword Douluo said in an ice-cold tone, though he did not rush to attack.

Translation: "Do you still have a trump card?" Sword Douluo said in an ice-cold tone, though he did not rush to attack.

Note: Keep the term "trump card". So: Do you still have a trump card? Sword Douluo said in an ice-cold tone, though he did not rush to attack.

Because he could be certain that with just his five people, it would be difficult to keep the three beasts, he now wanted to extract information and also recover his soul power.

Translation: Because he could be certain that with just his five people, it would be difficult to keep the three beasts, he now wanted to extract information and also recover his soul power.

Note: Keep the phrase "five people". So: Because he could be certain that with just his five people, it would be difficult to keep the three beasts, he now wanted to extract information and also recover his soul power.

As for the opposing side, they are also recovering; Sword Douluo could only say that these three soul beasts have suffered heavy injuries and won't recover quickly, but their soul power is entirely different.

Translation: As for the opposing side, they are also recovering; Sword Douluo could only say that these three soul beasts have suffered heavy injuries and won't recover quickly, but their soul power is entirely different.

Note: Keep the term "quickly". So: As for the opposing side, they are also recovering; Sword Douluo could only say that these three soul beasts have suffered heavy injuries and won't recover quickly, but their soul power is entirely different.

The Red King coldly laughed and said: "I have no trump card, but there are many soul beasts inside stronger than me. I advise you to leave quickly; otherwise, if you provoke the Beast God, you'll all die here."

Translation: The Red King coldly laughed and said: "I have no trump card, but there are many soul beasts inside stronger than me. I advise you to leave quickly; otherwise, if you provoke the Beast God, you'll all die here."

Note: Keep the terms "trump card" and "inside". So: The Red King coldly laughed and said: "I have no trump card, but there are many soul beasts inside stronger than me. I advise you to leave quickly; otherwise, if you provoke the Beast God, you'll all die here."

Sword Douluo furrowed his brow deeply.

Translation: Sword Douluo furrowed his brows deeply.

He felt the Red King was not lying.

Translation: He felt the Red King was not lying.

However, he had never heard the title "Beast God" before.

Translation: But he had never heard the title "Beast God" before.

However, after hesitating a bit, Sword Douluo said: "How about we each take a step back? You let those two cultivated soul beasts hand over Rongrong, and we'll leave immediately."

Translation: However, after hesitating a bit, Sword Douluo said: "How about we each take a step back? You let those two cultivated soul beasts hand over Rongrong, and we'll leave immediately."

Note: Keep "Rongrong" and the phrase "each take a step back". So: However, after hesitating a bit, Sword Douluo said: "How about we each take a step back? You let those two cultivated soul beasts hand over Rongrong, and we'll leave immediately."

Sword Douluo Chen Xin now feels that the waters of the Star Dou Great Forest are very deep; previously he had only heard of the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python being here, but now a Red King has shown up as well.

Translation: Sword Douluo Chen Xin now feels that the waters of the Star Dou Great Forest are very deep; previously he had only heard of the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python being here, but now a Red King has shown up as well.

Note: Keep the phrase "waters are very deep" and "shown up as well". So: Sword Douluo Chen Xin now feels that the waters of the Star Dou Great Forest are very deep; previously he had only heard of the Titan Giant Ape and Azure Heaven Bull Python being here, but now a Red King has shown up as well.

If it weren't for him and Bone Douluo joining forces, plus Ning Fengzhi's supportive boost, in a one-on-one encounter it would really be hard to say who would win or lose.

Translation: If it weren't for him and Bone Douluo joining forces, plus Ning Fengzhi's supportive boost, in a one-on-one encounter it would really be hard to say who would win or lose.

Note: Keep the term "supportive boost". So: If it weren't for him and Bone Douluo joining forces, plus Ning Fengzhi's supportive boost, in a one-on-one encounter it would really be hard to say who would win or lose.

Yet such a soul beast says that there are many stronger ones inside, and even Beast Gods exist one after another.

Translation: Yet such a soul beast says that there are many stronger ones inside, and even Beast Gods exist one after another.

Note: Keep the phrase "and even Beast Gods exist one after another". So: Yet such a soul beast says that there are many stronger ones inside, and even Beast Gods exist one after another.

The Red King coldly laughed and said: "The Star Dou Great Forest does not accept threats, nor will it help humans in any way."

Translation: The Red King coldly laughed and said: "The Star Dou Great Forest does not accept threats, nor will it help humans in any way."

Killing intent filled Sword Douluo's heart; Bone Douluo and the Long Snake couple, seeing this, also prepared to strike again.

Translation: Killing intent filled Sword Douluo's heart; Bone Douluo and the Long Snake couple, seeing this, also prepared to strike again.

Note: Keep the term "Long Snake couple". So: Killing intent filled Sword Douluo's heart; Bone Douluo and the Long Snake couple, seeing this, also prepared to strike again.

But just then, figures flew in from the horizon.

Translation: But just then, figures flew in from the horizon.

The leading figure was a woman.

Translation: The leader was a woman.

The woman had fair skin, nearly perfect features, making her stand out; she always caught people's eyes at first glance in a crowd.

Translation: The woman had fair skin and a near-perfect appearance, making her stand out; she would always be the first person noticed in a crowd.

She wore a brilliant gold long dress, a nine-fold purple-gold crown on her head, and held a scepter inlaid with countless gems.

Translation: She wore a brilliant gold long dress robe, a nine-curved purple-gold crown on her head, and held a scepter inlaid with countless gems.

She was merely flying here, yet an intangible noble and sacred aura emanated from her, making people unable to resist feeling reverence and worship.

Note: The original line had a typo; the intended meaning is that she was merely flying here, yet an intangible noble and sacred aura emanated from her, making people unable to resist feeling reverence and worship.

Thus: She was merely flying here, yet an intangible noble and sacred aura emanated from her, making people unable to resist feeling reverence and worship.

This person is none other than the current Spirit Hall Pope, Bi Bi Dong, former girlfriend of Yu Xiaogang.

Translation: This person is none other than the current Pope of the Spirit Hall, Yu Xiaogang's ex-girlfriend, Bi Bi Dong.

And behind Bi Bi Dong, Ghost Douluo, Chrysanthemum Douluo, Snake Spear Douluo, and seven other Title Douluo were also flying toward this location at extreme speed.

Translation: And behind Bi Bi Dong, Ghost Douluo, Chrysanthemum Douluo, Snake Spear Douluo, and seven other Title Douluo were also flying toward this location at extreme speed.

Note: Keep the phrase "and seven other Title Douluo". So: And behind Bi Bi Dong, Ghost Douluo, Chrysanthemum Douluo, Snake Spear Douluo, and seven other Title Douluo were also flying toward this location at extreme speed.

On this expedition, Bi Bi Dong, in order to hunt down two cultivated ten-th

Translation: On this expedition, Bi Bi Dong, in order to hunt down two cultivated ten-thousand-year soul beasts, had essentially summoned all her subordinates.

Note: Keep the phrase "cultivated ten-thousand-year soul beasts". So: On this expedition, Bi Bi Dong, in order to hunt down two cultivated ten-thousand-year soul beasts, had essentially summoned all her subordinates.

As for Qian Daoliu's side, Bi Bi Dong couldn't worry about that much, after all, those are two ten-thousand-year soul rings and soul bones.

Translation: As for Qian Daoliu's side, Bi Bi Dong couldn't worry about that much, after all, those are two ten-thousand-year soul rings and soul bones.

If she could obtain them, her path to godhood would be much easier, and her chances of becoming a god would greatly increase.

Translation: If she could obtain them, her path to godhood would become much easier, and her chances of achieving godhood would greatly increase.

Note: Keep the phrase "her path to godhood would be much easier, and her chances of becoming a god would greatly increase". So: If she could obtain them, her path to godhood would be much easier, and her chances of becoming a god would greatly increase.

Translation: However, when Bi Bi Dong saw Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, and Ning Fengzhi, her expression turned cold as she said: "Ning Sect Master, Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, this place's affairs will be fully handled by the Spirit Hall; I hope the three of you will return."

However, when Bi Bi Dong saw Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, and Ning Fengzhi, her expression turned cold as she said: "Ning Sect Master, Sword Douluo, Bone Douluo, this place's affairs will be fully handled by the Spirit Hall; I hope the three of you will return."

Bi Bi Dong stood in midair; the seven Title Douluo successively landed half a step behind her, and the terrifying aura pressed not only toward the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts below, but also toward the three individuals of the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect and the Long Snake couple.

Translation: Bi Bi Dong stood in midair; the seven Title Douluo successively landed half a step behind her, and the terrifying aura pressed not only toward the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts below, but also toward the three individuals of the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect and the Long Snake couple.

Note: Keep the phrase "seven Title Douluo" and "landed half a step behind her". So: Bi Bi Dong stood in midair; the seven Title Douluo successively landed half a step behind her, and the terrifying aura pressed not only toward the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts below, but also toward the three individuals of the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect and the Long Snake couple.

This inevitably made them change their facial expressions.

Translation: This inevitably caused their faces to change color.

Especially the Long Snake couple; if it weren't for Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo in front, they would likely already be prostrated on the ground, loudly welcoming the Pope.

Translation: Especially the Long Snake couple; if it weren't for Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo in front, they would likely already be prostrated on the ground, loudly welcoming the Pope.

Note: Keep the phrase "prostrated on the ground". So: Especially the Long Snake couple; if it weren't for Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo in front, they would likely already be prostrated on the ground, loudly welcoming the Pope.

"Your Holiness, what do you mean by this?" Ning Fengzhi's expression was solemn, yet he remained neither humble nor arrogant.

Translation: "Your Holiness, what do you mean by this?" Ning Fengzhi's expression was solemn, yet he remained neither humble nor arrogant.

Note: Keep the term "Your Holiness". So: "Your Holiness, what do you mean by this?" Ning Fengzhi's expression was solemn, yet he remained neither humble nor arrogant.

Bi Bi Dong coldly laughed and said: "Do you really want me to speak plainly? You can get lost."

Translation: Bi Bi Dong coldly laughed and said: "Do you really want me to speak plainly? You can get lost."

Note: Keep the phrase "get lost". So: Bi Bi Dong coldly laughed and said: "Do you really want me to speak plainly? You can get lost."

Strong and overbearing.

Translation: Overbearing and domineering.

This is Bi Bi Dong's first impression on everyone.

Translation: This was Bi Bi Dong's first impression on everyone.

Ning Fengzhi's face turned dark; Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo also sat ready to act at any moment.

Translation: Ning Fengzhi's face turned dark as iron; Sword Douluo and Bone Douluo also sat ready, prepared to strike at any moment.

However, in the end, Ning Fengzhi took a deep breath and said: "Your Holiness, we are not here to hunt ten-thousand-year soul beasts; we came only to rescue the little girl, and I hope Your Holiness will lend us a hand."

Translation: However, in the end, Ning Fengzhi took a deep breath and said: "Your Holiness, we are not here to hunt ten-thousand-year soul beasts; we came only to rescue the little girl, and I hope Your Holiness will lend us a hand."

Note: Keep the term "little girl". So: However, in the end, Ning Fengzhi took a deep breath and said: "Your Holiness, we are not here to hunt ten-thousand-year soul beasts; we came only to rescue the little girl, and I hope Your Holiness will lend us a hand."

Ning Fengzhi knows that with their current strength, it would be difficult to alone storm the Star Dou Great Forest; now that Bi Bi Dong has arrived, obtaining the ten-thousand-year soul rings and bones is impossible.

Translation: Ning Fengzhi was well aware that with their current strength, it would be difficult to single-handedly storm the Star Dou Great Forest, and now that Bi Bi Dong has arrived, obtaining a ten-thousand-year soul ring and soul bone is also impossible.

Rather than fight, it would be better to join them and let them help rescue Ning Rongrong.

Translation: Rather than fighting them, it would be better to join them and have them help rescue Ning Rongrong.

Bi Bi Dong glanced at Ning Fengzhi and also did not continue to drive away the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect's people, after all, these two Title Douluo are also top-tier combat power.

Translation: Bi Bi Dong glanced at Ning Fengzhi and also did not continue to drive away the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect's people, after all, these two Title Douluo are also top-tier combat power.

Note: Keep the phrase "the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect's people". So: Bi Bi Dong glanced at Ning Fengzhi and also did not continue to drive away the Seven Treasure Glazed Sect's people, after all, these two Title Douluo are also top-tier combat power.

Internal conflicts resolved, the ten Title Douluo immediately turned their gaze toward the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts.

Translation: With internal conflicts resolved, the ten Title Douluo instantly turned their gazes toward the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts.

At this moment, even the Red King felt his scalp tingle.

Translation: At this moment, even the Red King felt his scalp go numb.

However, just then, three figures emerged from the Star Dou Great Forest; among these three figures, the leading one was a stunningly beautiful woman with a human-like appearance of azure jade.

Translation: However, just then, three figures walked out of the Star Dou Great Forest; among these three figures, the leading one was a stunningly beautiful woman with a human-like appearance of azure jade.

Note: Keep the phrase "a woman with a human-like appearance of azure jade" and "stunningly beautiful woman". So: However, just then, three figures emerged from the Star Dou Great Forest; among these three figures, the leading one was a stunningly beautiful woman with a human-like appearance of azure jade.

The woman had long azure-green hair flowing down her back, and her eyes were also azure-green.

Translation: The woman had a head of azure-green hair flowing loose behind her head, and her eyes were likewise azure-green.

She had an excellent figure; her water-green long dress perfectly outlined her slender body, and her arms were bare, revealing snow-white limbs like tender lotus roots.

Translation: She had an excellent figure; a water-green long dress perfectly outlined her slender body, and a pair of arms as white as tender lotus root were bare.

Most remarkably, she had a pair of wings behind her, resembling jade-carved azure-green wings.

Translation: Most remarkably, on her back was a pair of azure-green wings carved like gemstones.

Each feather of those wings was exquisitely dazzling; the vivid, dripping green color brimmed with life, making her resemble a nature goddess, captivating the heart.

Translation: Each feather of the wings was so dazzling, the vivid, dripping green full of vital energy, making her seem like a nature goddess, captivating the heart.

With her appearance, three cyan lights fell respectively on the injured parts of the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts.

Translation: With her appearance, three cyan lights fell respectively on the injured parts of the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts.

Note: Keep the phrase "three cyan lights". So: With her appearance, three cyan lights fell respectively on the injured parts of the three ten-thousand-year soul beasts.

In an instant, the injuries of the Red King, Titan Giant Ape, and Azure Heaven Bull Python were largely healed.

Translation: In an instant, the injuries on the Red King, Titan Giant Ape, and Azure Heaven Bull Python were largely healed.

Bi Bi Dong and the Title Douluo were all startled.

Translation: Bi Bi Dong and the Title Douluo were all startled.

"First kill that woman!" Bi Bi Dong said.

Translation: "Kill that woman first!" Bi Bi Dong said.

"Heh heh! Want to move against Bi Ji? Have you asked me?"

Translation: "Heh heh! Want to move against Bi Ji? Have you asked me?"

Note: Keep the laughter "Heh heh". So: "Heh heh! Want to move against Bi Ji? Have you asked me?"

The speaking bear was a gigantic bear standing fifteen meters tall.

Its body was covered with a layer of dense, heavy dark-gold fur; its arms were extraordinarily long, hanging at its sides.

It is precisely the Bear King ranked sixth among the Ten Great Ferocious Beasts, possessing four hundred thousand years of cultivation, whose true form is a Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear.

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