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Chapter 131

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【10】

Interpretation: Lin Qingyue now also has arrogant capital; seeing all this now, she at this time, smiling, very pleased.

But we must not add extra meaning not present. Let's break down:

Lin Qingyue now also has reason to be proud.

【14】

At this moment she wore a smile and was very pleased with herself.

Combine: "Lin Qingyue now also had reason to be proud; seeing all this, she smiled, very pleased with herself."

We need to keep meaning: "Lin Qingyue now also had arrogant capital; seeing all this now, she at this time wore a smile, very self-satisfied."

We can produce: "Lin Qingyue now also had grounds for arrogance; seeing all this, she smiled, very pleased with herself."

That seems fine.

【29】

Meaning: She considers herself much more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan; therefore she must now adjust her attitude, when doing things, let Zhou Tian understand her importance to him.

Translate: "She believed she was far more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan, so she now had to straighten her attitude, making Zhou Tian understand her importance to him when she acted."

She considered herself much more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan.

【33】

While doing things, she let Zhou Tian understand her importance to him.

Combine: "She considered herself much more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan, so she now had to straighten her attitude, making Zhou Tian understand her importance to her actions."

Better: "She believed she was far more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan, so she needed to adjust her demeanor, letting Zhou Tian understand her importance to him when she acted."

We'll produce: "She believed she was far more important than Leng Qingyue and Mo Qingyan, so she needed to adjust her demeanor, letting Zhou Tian understand her importance to him when she acted."

【46】

Meaning: Only by letting him see clearly who is beneficial to him will he be willing to fully submit.

Translate: "Only by letting him see clearly who is beneficial to him will he be willing to submit completely."

Only by letting him see clearly who is beneficial to him will he be willing to submit completely, I suppose.

Thus: "Only by letting him see clearly who is beneficial to him will he be willing to submit completely, I suppose."

【56】

Meaning: "Junior brother, let's start."

Translate: "\"Junior brother, let's begin. \""

We need to keep the quotes? The source includes Chinese quotes 「」. We can keep English quotes. We'll output: "\"Junior brother, let's begin. \""

Lin Qingyue smiled and nodded, beginning to instruct Lin Qingyue.

【63】

We need to keep the name exactly: Lin Qingyue.

Thus: "Lin Qingyue smiled and nodded, began giving guidance to Lin Qingyue."

Lin Qingyue's talent and insight in the martial way were certainly not just empty talk.

Meaning: And Lin Qingyue's talent for comprehending the martial path is indeed not just boast.

Translate: "And Lin Qingyue's talent for grasping the martial way was indeed not mere boast."

【72】

Thus: "And Lin Qingyue's talent for grasping the martial way was indeed not mere boast."

As she guided Zhou Tian, he soon gained a deeper understanding and insight into the Dragon‑Nurturing Skill.

Meaning: Following her guidance to Zhou Tian, after a short while, Zhou Tian gained a deeper understanding and comprehension of the Dragon Nurturing Divine Technique.

Translate: "As she guided Zhou Tian, after a moment he gained a deeper understanding and comprehension of the Dragon Nurturing Divine Technique."

【79】

With his deeper comprehension, his strength gradually solidified at the fifth‑grade level.

Meaning: His own strength, as understanding deepened, gradually stabilized at the fifth-grade realm.

Translate: "His strength, as his understanding deepened, gradually stabilized at the fifth-grade realm."

【88】

Thus: "His strength, as his understanding deepened, gradually stabilized at the fifth-grade realm."

Compared with when Zhou Tian had just entered the fifth grade, his strength had increased considerably.

Meaning: Now compared to when Zhou Tian just entered the fifth-grade realm, his strength has increased considerably.

Translate: "Now, compared to when Zhou Tian had just entered the fifth-grade realm, his strength had increased considerably."

【95】

Seeing Zhou Tian excited from his recent progress, Lin Qingyue's mind filled with new thoughts.

Meaning: Lin Qingyue looked at Zhou Tian, whose cultivation had increased and who looked excited, and in her heart she had some ideas.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue watched Zhou Tian, whose cultivation had risen and who looked excited, and in her heart she had some thoughts."

【102】

"Junior brother, think again about restoring Zhuzhou."

Meaning: "Junior brother, regarding the matter of restoring Pillar Prefecture, think again."

Translate: "\"Junior brother, think again about restoring Pillar Prefecture. \""

【111】

Thus: "\"Junior brother, think again about restoring Pillar Prefecture. \""

"If Zhuzhou is restored, the support you gain will increase greatly!"

Meaning: "If Pillar Prefecture can be restored, the assistance you will receive will greatly increase!"

Translate: "\"If Pillar Prefecture is restored, the aid you will receive will greatly increase! \""

We need to keep exclamation.

Thus: "\"If Pillar Prefecture is restored, the aid you will receive will greatly increase! \""

【126】

Meaning: Lin Qingyue still kept in mind her own matter of restoring the country, never forgetting.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue still kept in mind her own aim to restore the country, never forgetting."

Lin Qingyue still kept in mind her own aim to restore the country, never forgetting it.

【133】

Meaning: The Pillar Prefecture State, in reality, seems not yet completely destroyed.

Translate: "The Pillar Prefecture State, in reality, seems not yet completely destroyed."

The Pillar Prefecture State, in reality, seems not yet completely destroyed.

【141】

Meaning: But the actual controllable range of the Pillar Prefecture State in reality is also shrinking; in many people's minds, the Pillar Prefecture State exists in name only.

Translate: "But the actual controllable area of the Pillar Prefecture State in reality is also shrinking; in many people's minds, the Pillar Prefecture State exists in name only."

But the actual controllable area of the Pillar Prefecture State is also shrinking; in many people's minds it exists in name only.

As the fallen princess of a lost kingdom, Lin Qingyue came to Zhou Tian because the once peaceful jianghu has begun to fall into turmoil.

Meaning: Lin Qingyue, this fallen-state princess, actively came to find Zhou Tian because the formerly peaceful martial world has now begun to fall into chaos.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue, this fallen-state princess, came to Zhou Tian because the formerly peaceful martial world has now begun to fall into chaos."

【150】

Thus: "Lin Qingyue, this fallen-state princess, came to Zhou Tian because the formerly peaceful martial world has now begun to fall into chaos."

Even some self‑styled prophets have spoken out, claiming that the Great Xia Yun dynasty's fate is exhausted and it will soon be overthrown.

Meaning: Moreover, some self-proclaimed powerful prophets have spoken, saying the Great Xia Yun Dynasty's fate is exhausted, soon to be completely overthrown.

Translate: "Moreover, some self-styled powerful prophets have spoken, saying the Great Xia Yun Dynasty's fate is exhausted, soon to be completely overthrown."

【159】

Thus: "Moreover, some self-styled powerful prophets have spoken, saying the Great Xia Yun Dynasty's fate is exhausted, soon to be completely overthrown."

Thus, in Lin Qingyue's mind, this is seen as her good opportunity—a chance to seize the moment and restore her country.

Meaning: Precisely thus, in Lin Qingyue's mind, she would consider this a good opportunity, a good time to seize the chance to restore the country.

Translate: "Precisely thus, in Lin Qingyue's mind, she saw this as a good opportunity, a good time to seize the chance to restore the country."

【166】

Lin Qingyue is very talented; her standards are extremely high.

Meaning: Lin Qingyue is very talented, her standards are extremely high.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue is very talented, her standards extremely high."

【173】

She approves of and takes interest in very few people.

Meaning: The people she can approve and recognize are not many.

Translate: "The people she approves and recognizes are few."

【180】

Zhou Tian is undoubtedly her best choice.

Meaning: Zhou Tian, without doubt, is her best choice.

Translate: "Zhou Tian is undoubtedly her best choice."

【187】

"Little junior brother, if you help me, I will constantly guide you and will surely bring you to the pinnacle of the martial path!"

Meaning: "Little junior brother, if you help me, I will constantly guide you, and will absolutely bring you to the peak of the martial way!"

Translate: "\"Little junior brother, if you help me, I will constantly guide you and will absolutely bring you to the peak of the martial way. \""

【194】

Lin Qingyue offered her most attractive bargaining chip.

Meaning: Lin Qingyue threw out her most attractive bargaining chip.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue offered her most attractive bargaining chip."

【201】

She knows exactly what Zhou Tian seeks, and what she herself can provide.

Meaning: She deeply knows what Zhou Tian seeks, and what she can achieve with her vision.

Translate: "She well knew what Zhou Tian sought, and what she could achieve with her vision."

【208】

Upon hearing Lin Qingyue's words, Zhou Tian's heart stirred involuntarily.

Meaning: Zhou Tian, upon hearing Lin Qingyue's words, felt his heart moved involuntarily.

Translate: "Zhou Tian, hearing Lin Qingyue's words, felt his heart stir."

【215】

There is no denying that Lin Qingyue's words carry considerable allure.

Meaning: Undeniably, Lin Qingyue's words have considerable appeal.

Translate: "Undeniably, Lin Qingyue's words have considerable appeal."

【222】

In this matter, Zhou Tian also believes deeply that with Lin Qingyue's guidance he will surely achieve such accomplishments.

Meaning: In this matter, Zhou Tian also firmly believes that with Lin Qingyue's guidance, he will certainly achieve such accomplishment.

Translate: "In this matter, Zhou Tian also firmly believed that with Lin Qingyue's guidance, he would certainly achieve such accomplishment."

【229】

Having Lin Qingyue by his side is like having an all‑knowing good teacher constantly at hand to instruct him.

Meaning: Having Lin Qingyue by one's side is equivalent to having an all-knowing good teacher nearby to give guidance at any time.

Translate: "Having Lin Qingyue by one's side is like having an all-knowing teacher nearby to give guidance at any time."

【236】

Yet Zhou Tian still harbors some greed and covetousness in his heart.

Meaning: However, Zhou Tian's heart still harbors some greed and some covetousness.

Translate: "However, Zhou Tian's heart still harbored some greed and some covetousness."

【243】

The most basic of these is Yun Xi Yue.

Meaning: The most basic thing is Yun Xi Yue.

Translate: "The most basic thing was Yun Xi Yue."

【250】

Yun Xi Yue's status as the sixth princess holds a powerful attraction for Zhou Tian.

Meaning: Yun Xi Yue's identity as the Sixth Princess has a super strong attraction for Zhou Tian.

Translate: "Yun Xi Yue's status as the Sixth Princess held a super strong attraction for Zhou Tian."

【257】

The most important reason is that obtaining Yun Xi Yue amounts to defeating Yang Jun.

Meaning: The most important reason is that obtaining Yun Xi Yue equates to defeating Yang Jun.

Translate: "The most important reason was that obtaining Yun Xi Yue amounted to defeating Yang Jun."

The most important reason was that obtaining Yun Xi Yue amounted to defeating Yang Jun.

【271】

Meaning: Only such a thing is what Zhou Tian most wants to achieve.

Translate: "Only such a thing is what Zhou Tian most wants to achieve."

Only such a thing is what Zhou Tian most wants to achieve.

Knowing that Yang Jun has not yet truly obtained Yun Xi Yue makes this prospect even more alluring to Zhou Tian.

Meaning: Know that Yang Jun has not yet truly obtained Yun Xi Yue; for Zhou Tian, this has even greater attraction.

Translate: "Know that Yang Jun has not yet truly obtained Yun Xi Yue; for Zhou Tian, this holds even greater attraction."

【278】

If he becomes a true prince consort, he will not only have defeated Yang Jun; he will gain much more support in the future, making success easier for him.

Meaning: As long as one becomes a true Prince Consort, it's not just simply defeating Yang Jun; for oneself, thereafter there will be more assistance, making success easier.

Translate: "As long as one becomes a true Prince Consort, it's not just simply defeating Yang Jun; thereafter one will have more aid, making success easier."

【285】

"Fifth sister, let me think this over a bit more, but rest assured—I will give you my full help whenever the chance arises."

Meaning: "Fifth Senior Sister, let me consider this matter again; however, rest assured, as long as there is an opportunity, I will definitely help you with all my strength."

Translate: "\"Fifth Senior Sister, let me consider this again; rest assured, as long as there is an opportunity, I will definitely help you with all my strength. \""

【292】

"All right."

Meaning: "Good."

Translate: "\"Good. \""

【303】

Meaning: Lin Qingyue smiled slightly, did not say more.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue smiled slightly and said nothing more."

Lin Qingyue smiled slightly and said nothing more.

【310】

Meaning: As smart as Lin Qingyue, how could she not understand what this means?

Translate: "As smart as Lin Qingyue, how could she not understand what this meant?"

As smart as Lin Qingyue, how could she fail to understand what this meant?

【317】

Meaning: Since Zhou Tian is still making excuses, one all the more needs to think of ways to pressure this little junior brother.

Translate: "Since Zhou Tian was still making excuses, she all the more needed to think of ways to pressure this little junior brother."

Since Zhou Tian was still making excuses, she all the more needed to think of ways to pressure this little junior brother.

【324】

Meaning: Lin Qingyue also fully understood Zhou Tian's thoughts.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue also fully understood Zhou Tian's thoughts."

Lin Qingyue also fully understood Zhou Tian's thoughts.

【332】

Meaning: Only by applying a bit more pressure will he definitely change completely.

Translate: "Only by applying a bit more pressure would he definitely change completely."

Only by applying a bit more pressure would he definitely change completely.

Having made up her mind, Lin Qingyue left the deputy commandant's residence, entered an alley, and lightly clapped her hands.

Meaning: Having made a plan in her heart, Lin Qingyue left the Vice Commander's Mansion, walked into an alley, and lightly clapped her hands.

Translate: "Having made a plan, Lin Qingyue left the Vice Commander's Mansion, walked into an alley, and lightly clapped her hands."

【339】

Immediately, two foreign women utterly unlike Great Xia women appeared and knelt before her.

Meaning: Immediately, two foreign women, utterly different from Great Xia women, appeared and knelt before her.

Translate: "Immediately, two foreign women, utterly different from Great Xia women, appeared and knelt before her."

Immediately, two foreign women, utterly different from Great Xia women, appeared and knelt before her.

【352】

Meaning: "Please, Your Highness, give orders!"

Translate: "\"Please, Your Highness, give orders! \""

"Please, Your Highness, give orders!"

【360】

Meaning: Lin Qingyue, seeing this, let out a cold snort.

Translate: "Lin Qingyue, seeing this, let out a cold snort."

Lin Qingyue, seeing this, let out a cold snort.

"Inform the Great Xia Yun Imperial Dynasty that the Pillar Prefecture Princess has arrived for the autumn hunt!"

Meaning: "Inform the Great Xia Yun Imperial Dynasty, the Pillar Prefecture Princess, that she arrives for the autumn hunt!"

Translate: "\"Inform the Great Xia Yun Imperial Dynasty, the Pillar Prefecture Princess, that she arrives for the autumn hunt! \""

"Inform the Great Xia Yun Imperial Dynasty, the Pillar Prefecture Princess, that she arrives for the autumn hunt!"

…… (ellipsis). We need to output the ellipsis as is? The instruction: render onomatopoeia/sound effects as English sound words; ellipsis is not sound effect but punctuation. We should keep the ellipsis as "……"? Probably we should output "……" as is. But we need to keep each line as a single output line with 【N】 prefix. So we output "【48】 ……". However we need to decide whether to translate ellipsis to "...". The source uses Chinese ellipsis "……". We can keep as "……". It's not a sound effect; it's punctuation. We'll keep as "……". So line: "【48】 ……"

【375】

Meaning: "\"What? Great Xia autumn hunt? \""

Translate: "\"What? Great Xia autumn hunt? \""

"What? Great Xia autumn hunt?"

Pingxi Prince's Mansion, Yang Jun wore a doubtful expression.

Meaning: "Pingxi Prince's Mansion, Yang Jun wore a doubtful expression."

Translate: "\"Pingxi Prince's Mansion, Yang Jun wore a doubtful expression. \""

"Pingxi Prince's Mansion, Yang Jun wore a doubtful expression."

【389】

Meaning: "The Great Xia autumn hunt is quite normal; he knows that."

Translate: "\"The Great Xia autumn hunt is quite normal; he knows that. \""

"The Great Xia autumn hunt is quite normal; he knows that."

"But how did Yun Xi Yue, this Sixth Princess, suddenly bring this up? Know that the two of us are currently being affectionate."

Meaning: "But how did Yun Xi Yue, this Sixth Princess, suddenly bring this up? Know that the two of us are currently being affectionate."

Translate: "\"But how did Yun Xi Yue, this Sixth Princess, suddenly bring this up? Know that the two of us are currently being affectionate. \""

We need to keep "雲熙月". So: "\"But how did Yun Xi Yue, this Sixth Princess, suddenly bring this up? Know that the two of us are currently being affectionate. \""

【403】

Meaning: "Although we can't really have an open battle with swords and spears, but still, why bring up the autumn hunt at a time like this?"

Translate: "\"Although we can't really have an open battle with swords and spears, but still, why bring up the autumn hunt at a time like this? \""

"Although we can't really have an open battle with swords and spears, still, why bring up the autumn hunt at a time like this?"

"Right, autumn hunt."

Meaning: "\"Right, autumn hunt. \""

Translate: "\"Right, autumn hunt. \""

"Right, autumn hunt."

【417】

Meaning: "Yun Xi Yue clung close to Yang Jun, speaking in a coquettish voice."

Translate: "\"Yun Xi Yue clung close to Yang Jun, speaking in a coquettish voice. \""

"Yun Xi Yue clung close to Yang Jun, speaking in a coquettish voice."

Her seductive words like silk, while speaking, she panted incessantly.

Meaning: "Her seductive words like silk, while speaking, she panted incessantly."

Translate: "\"Her seductive words like silk, while speaking, she panted incessantly. \""

"Her seductive words like silk, while speaking, she panted incessantly."

【431】

Meaning: "Their bodies slightly trembling, they clung ever tighter."

Translate: "\"Their bodies slightly trembling, they clung ever tighter. \""

"Their bodies slightly trembling, they clung ever tighter."

"Husband, do you want to practice more? Then you can compete for first place."

Meaning: "\"Husband, do you want to practice more? Then you can compete for first place. \""

Translate: "\"Husband, do you want to practice more? Then you can compete for first place. \""

"Husband, do you want to practice more? Then you can compete for first place."

【444】

Meaning: "\"This way, you'll bring honor to your father, and you can also be glorious. \""

Translate: "\"This way, you'll bring honor to your father, and you can also be glorious. \""

"This way, you'll bring honor to your father, and you can also be glorious."

Yun Xi Yue spoke in a soft, coquettish voice, and Yang Jun was slightly taken aback.

As for being first, or the glory and such, he really has no interest in that.

But, the matter of the autumn hunt gave him a hint of an idea.

In the original book, Zhou Tian actually stole the limelight during the autumn hunt.

After all, he is the protagonist of the original book, bearing the protagonist's halo; he slaughtered in all directions, mighty beyond compare.

Most importantly, he captured a young ferocious beast.

After this ferocious beast grew up, it aided Zhou Tian, letting him gain countless successes in his campaigns, and also win the favor of many beauties.

Now Zhou Tian bears a deep hatred for Yang Jun; under this hatred, he wishes he could kill Yang Jun.

Since that's the case, I too must make preparations.

The stronger Zhou Tian becomes, the more danger I am in; conversely, the stronger I become, the weaker Zhou Tian will become.

Having such a thought, Yang Jun also became interested in this autumn hunt.

No matter what, we must not let this young ferocious beast fall into Zhou Tian's hands.

"Um, wife, help me out."

Yang Jun leaned in, speaking softly.

Yun Xi Yue snorted, about to raise her head, when Yang Jun pressed his lips to hers.

The kiss was too heavy, her breathing seemed somewhat insufficient.

Yun Xi Yue glared at Yang Jun resentfully.

"Speak, what is it?"

"The map of the autumn hunt hunting grounds, you should be able to easily get it, right?"

"Huh?"

With Yang Jun's words, Yun Xi Yue immediately understood: this guy wants to cheat!

"Fine then, want it? I'll see your performance before deciding whether to give it or not."

"Rest assured, husband, your will is steadfast; I'll make sure you're satisfied!"

Yang Jun took a deep breath, his face resolute.

……

When Yang Jun took out the box given by Hei Ming, he discovered that inside it was divided into sections, exactly containing three portions of rouge and powder and such.

Seeing these things, he was again slightly taken aback.

Is this a coincidence, or did Hei Ming intend it?

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