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Chapter 3187

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Ye Liuyun and his clone used the Divine Soul Red Eye on their souls to launch an illusion attack on the charging Martial Cultivators, making them all stop in front of Ye Liuyun, then he handed over his Storage Rings to the clone. Even the resources inside their Space Worlds were taken out.

We must make sure to use the exact glossary terms: 'Divine Soul Red Eye', 'Martial Cultivator', 'Storage Ring', 'Space World'. The term 'Divine Soul' alone may not be necessary; we will use 'Divine Soul Red Eye'. Also, 'his clone' should be translated as 'his clone'. Use 'clone'. It's not in the glossary, but that's fine.

Check each line for terms.

Let's go line by line.

Ye Li Yun and his clone both used the Divine Soul Red Eye to launch an illusion attack against the charging Martial Cultivators, stopping them all in front of Ye Li Yun. Then he handed over his Storage Ring to his clone, and even took out the resources from their Space World.

Translate: Ye Liuyun and his clone used the Divine Soul Red Eye to launch an illusion attack on the charging Martial Cultivators, making them all stop in front of Ye Liuyun, then he handed over his Storage Rings to the clone. Even the resources inside their Space Worlds were taken out.

We need to ensure "Divine Soul Red Eye" is correct. Could also be "Divine Soul's Red Eye". We'll keep as "Divine Soul Red Eye". Also "Martial Cultivators" plural.

After Ye Li Yun's Divine Soul became powerful, using the Divine Soul Red Eye, a single glance was enough to trap them in an illusion, often a double illusion. Martial Cultivators whose Divine Soul strength was insufficient could not escape his illusion control.

Translate: After Ye Liuyun's Divine Soul grew strong, using the Divine Soul Red Eye, a single glance would plunge them into an illusion, often a double illusion. Martial Cultivators whose Divine Soul Power was insufficient could not escape his illusion control.

We need "Divine Soul Power". Use that term.

Even those two Martial Cultivators with strong Divine Souls, whose primary Divine Souls were damaged, could not escape his illusion; they packed their resources into their Storage Rings and threw them over.

Translate: Even those two Martial Cultivators with strong Divine Souls, whose main battle Divine Souls were damaged, could not escape his illusion, and they poured their resources into their Storage Rings and threw them over.

We need "Divine Souls". Use "Divine Soul". "Storage Ring". Good.

Afterward, his clone placed slave seals on eight other relatively strong Martial Cultivators, erasing their previous contracts and sending them back to the camp to report to Li Zhaoyuan. Then, with a casual swing of his blade, he sliced the two fallen Soul Cultivators in half.

Translate: Afterwards, the clone placed Slave Seals on eight other relatively strong Martial Cultivators, erasing their previous contracts, sending them back to the camp to report to Li Zhaoyuan, then he casually swung his sword and cut the two fallen Soul Cultivators in half.

We need "Slave Seal", "Martial Cultivators", "Soul Cultivators". Also "Li Zhaoyuan". Good.

"Rebellion! You dare to assassinate imperial officials! Commander of the Imperial Guard, lead your troops and wipe them out!"

Translate: "Rebellion! You dare to assassinate imperial officials! Imperial Guard Leader, lead the troops and wipe them out!"

We need "Imperial Guard Leader". Good.

Liao Fengxian and his men never expected that these ten powerful Martial Cultivators would be so easily eliminated by Ye Li Yun.

Translate: Liao Fengxian and his men also never expected that these ten elite Martial Cultivators would be so easily taken down by Ye Liuyun.

We need "Martial Cultivators". "Elite" maybe not in glossary but okay. "Liao Fengxian" is a name not in glossary; we romanize.

However, they didn't realize it was Ye Li Yun who acted, since he remained seated on his snow wolf without moving, and they assumed it was the commander beside him who had done it.

Translate: But they didn't know it was Ye Liuyun who did it, because Ye Liuyun had been sitting motionless on the Snow Wolf's back, and they thought it was the Leader beside Ye Liuyun who acted.

We need "Snow Wolf". Not in glossary; translate meaning. "Leader" is glossary.

Thus, the Imperial Guard commander immediately led his troops to charge at the clone.

Translate: So the Imperial Guard Leader immediately led the Imperial Guard charging at the clone.

We need "Imperial Guard Leader", "Imperial Guard". Good.

The clone, meanwhile, charged toward him while using the Divine Soul Red Eye to cast an illusion on the Imperial Guard commander, instantly immobilizing him, standing stunned, and then the clone cut him down with a single blow.

Note there is an extra period at end. We'll translate: The clone also charged at him while using the Divine Soul Red Eye to cast an illusion on the Imperial Guard Leader, instantly controlling him, leaving him standing stunned on the spot, where he was then cut down in one blow by the clone.

We need "Divine Soul Red Eye", "Imperial Guard Leader". Also "one blow". Good.

Cui Daoran also immediately ordered his men to charge at the Imperial Guard.

Translate: Cui Daoran also immediately commanded his men to charge at the Imperial Guard.

We need "Imperial Guard". Good.

"Is that it? The dynasty only sent ten Martial Cultivators to deal with me? You're seriously underestimating me!" Ye Li Yun felt unsatisfied, as he himself had hardly lifted a finger.

Translate: "Is that it? The dynasty sent only ten Martial Cultivators to deal with me? You're seriously underestimating me!" Ye Liuyun still felt unsatisfied; he himself had hardly lifted a finger.

We need "Martial Cultivators". Good.

He glanced at Cui Daoran's men fighting and noticed that the bandit Martial Cultivators they brought were actually fighting desperately. Meanwhile, the Imperial Guard, having long been stationed in the capital, were only good at intimidation; their combat awareness was poor.

Translate: He glanced at Cui Daoran's men fighting and saw that the Martial Cultivators from the bandit gang he brought were actually fighting desperately, while the Imperial Guard, having long stayed in the Royal City, could only intimidate outsiders; their combat awareness was already poor.

We need "Martial Cultivators", "bandit gang", "Imperial Guard", "Royal City". Good.

As soon as the two sides clashed, it became clear that their combat experience was lacking; facing these fearless bandits, they fumbled and their formation was immediately disrupted.

Translate: As soon as they clashed, it became clear their combat experience was clearly lacking; facing these fearless bandits, they fumbled, and their formation was instantly disrupted.

We need no glossary terms.

"These Imperial Guard troops are nothing special. They can bully the few with numbers, but on a real battlefield they are utterly unsuited!" Ye Li Yun thought to himself.

Translate: "These Imperial Guard are nothing special. Bullying the few with numbers might work, but on a real battlefield they simply can't adapt!" Ye Liuyun silently evaluated.

We need "Imperial Guard". Good.

Nevertheless, to reduce losses, he still deployed two thousand elite troops to encircle the Imperial Guard. Xiao Heng, however, received Ye Li Yun's order to hold his position, as these forces were sufficient to destroy that Imperial Guard unit.

Translate: However, to reduce losses, he still deployed two thousand elite troops to encircle these Imperial Guard. Xiao Heng, having received Ye Liuyun's order, held his position, for these men were enough to destroy this Imperial Guard unit.

We need "elite troops", "Imperial Guard". Good.

The clone then turned his attack toward the Sixth Prince and Liao Fengxian, but upon seeing the situation turn against them, the two immediately retreated, seeking refuge among the Imperial Guard.

Translate: The clone then lunged at the Sixth Prince and Liao Fengxian, but the two, seeing the situation turn bad, immediately retreated, fleeing into the Imperial Guard.

We need "Sixth Prince", "Imperial Guard". Good.

Seeing their panicked expressions, the clone guessed they had no hidden cards, so he didn't press the attack; instead, he immediately took those elite troops to surround and annihilate the Imperial Guard.

Translate: Seeing their panicked expressions, the clone guessed they had no trump cards, so he didn't press the attack; instead, he immediately took those elite troops to surround and annihilate the Imperial Guard.

We need "trump cards", "elite troops", "Imperial Guard". Good.

At that moment, the first clone stationed in space monitoring the area spotted a warship approaching, carrying a hundred thousand gold-armored Imperial Guard troops.

Translate: At that moment, the first clone stationed in Xingkong to monitor discovered a warship sailing toward them, carrying a hundred thousand gold-armored Imperial Guard.

We need the terms 'Xingkong', 'warship', and 'Imperial Guard'. Also, 'gold-armored' is optional; we can keep it as 'gold-armored Imperial Guard'. The term 'gold-armored Imperial Guard' is the translation.

The warship also carried twenty powerful Martial Cultivators, ten of whom were assassins from the dynasty's assassin squad.

Translate: The warship also carried twenty elite Martial Cultivators, ten of whom were assassins from the dynasty's assassin squad.

We need "Martial Cultivators". Good.

"Not even sending someone strong enough to challenge me!" Ye Li Yun sighed, then immediately urged his snow wolf forward toward Jiang Yunfei, swinging his demon-slaying blade to clear a path for the wolf.

Translate: "Not even sending someone strong enough to challenge me!" Ye Liuyun sighed, then immediately urged the Snow Wolf forward, charging at Jiang Yunfei while waving the Demon Slaying Sword to clear a path for the Snow Wolf.

We need "Snow Wolf", "Demon Slaying Sword". Good.

His bloodline pressure surged forth, he unleashed his blade intent with full force, augmented by divine essence, and the Imperial Guard could not withstand a single strike—he cleaved them all apart.

Translate: His Bloodline Pressure spread out, he unleashed his sword intent with full force, combined with his Divine Core, and the Imperial Guard could not withstand a single strike; they were all cleaved apart.

We need "Bloodline Pressure", "Divine Core", "Imperial Guard". Good.

He wanted to quickly end this battle and then deal with the additional hundred thousand Imperial Guard troops.

Translate: He wanted to quickly end this battle, then move on to face the other hundred thousand Imperial Guard.

We need "Imperial Guard". Good.

Seeing that the Imperial Guard could not stop Ye Li Yun, Jiang Yunfei immediately shouted at him: "Ye Li Yun, it's the dynasty that wants to act against you; it has nothing to do with me. I am a prince—you cannot kill me!"

Translate: Seeing the Imperial Guard unable to stop Ye Liuyun, Jiang Yunfei immediately shouted at Ye Liuyun: "Ye Liuyun, it's the dynasty that wants to act against you, it has nothing to do with me. I am a prince, you cannot kill me!"

We need "Imperial Guard". Good.

Ye Li Yun, however, from a distance used the Divine Soul Red Eye on him, compelling him to attack Liao Fengxian nearby.

Translate: Ye Liuyun, however, used the Divine Soul Red Eye on him from afar, making him attack Liao Fengxian nearby.

We need "Divine Soul Red Eye". Good.

Jiang Yunfei also struck Liao Fengxian with a palm, sending him vomiting blood to the ground, and then the oncoming snow wolf swiped him with a claw, mangling him. Liao Fengxian had no time to react, and Jiang Yunfei, wondering why he had attacked him, breathed his last.

Translate: Jiang Yunfei also struck Liao Fengxian with a palm, sending him spitting blood onto the ground, then the charging Snow Wolf smashed him with a claw. Liao Fengxian hadn't even reacted to why Jiang Yunfei had attacked him before he died.

We need "Snow Wolf". Good.

At the same time, Ye Li Yun shouted at Jiang Yunfei: "Idiot! Last time I let you go because I couldn't be bothered with you, yet you actually thought I wouldn't dare kill you?"

Translate: Ye Liuyun also shouted at Jiang Yunfei: "Idiot! Last time I let you go because I couldn't be bothered, yet you actually thought I wouldn't dare kill you?"

We need no glossary.

"You dare kill me?" Jiang Yunfei replied, still somewhat disbelieving, lifting his chin to provoke Ye Li Yun.

Translate: "You dare kill me?" Jiang Yunfei still doubtful, he lifted his chin to provoke Ye Liuyun.

Ye Li Yun merely curled his lip, raised his hand, and slashed a blade toward him.

Translate: Ye Liuyun merely curled his lip, raised his hand, and slashed down with a blade.

"You think your life is too long? I'll grant your wish!"

Translate: "Think your life is too long? I'll grant you your wish!"

With Ye Li Yun's cold shout, his blade immediately descended.

Translate: With Ye Liuyun's cold shout, that blade immediately came down.

"You dare!"

Translate: "You dare!"

In desperation, Jiang Yunfei let out a startled cry.

Translate: In panic, Jiang Yunfei cried out.

He sensed the blade intent and surging divine essence in Ye Li Yun's strike, realizing that this blow could actually kill him, not merely intimidate him.

Translate: He felt the sword intent and surging Divine Core in Ye Liuyun's blade, realizing this strike could truly kill him, not just a threat.

We need "Divine Core". Good.

Thus, his bloodline power erupted throughout his body, attempting to suppress Ye Li Yun; at the same time, he released nearly a hundred mid-to-late Ninth Layer Martial Cultivators from his Space World.

Translate: Thus his Bloodline Power erupted throughout his body, hoping to suppress Ye Liuyun; at the same time, he released nearly a hundred Martial Cultivators of the mid-to-late Ninth Layer from his Space World.

We require the terms 'Bloodline Power', 'Martial Cultivators', and 'Space World'. Also, 'Ninth Layer' is not in the glossary, so we keep it as 'Ninth Layer'. The term 'mid-to-late Ninth Layer' is the translation.

However, these individuals emerged too suddenly, and for a moment they had no idea what was happening outside. In his critical moment, Jiang Yunfei also didn't have time to tell them whom to attack.

Translate: But these men emerged too suddenly, and for a moment they had no idea what was happening outside. In his dire straits, Jiang Yunfei didn't have time to tell them whom to attack.

Ye Li Yun also waved his hand, releasing another five hundred elite troops to encircle these hundred individuals in the center, preventing them from moving.

Translate: Ye Liuyun also waved his hand, releasing another five hundred elite troops to encircle these hundred, leaving them unable to move.

We need "elite troops". Good.

By then, Jiang Yunfei had already been sent flying by a single slash from Ye Li Yun.

Translate: Meanwhile, Jiang Yunfei had already been blown away by Ye Liuyun's blade.

"Ah!"

Translate: "Ah!"

Jiang Yunfei let out a tragic scream as Ye Li Yun's blade blasted him away.

Translate: Jiang Yunfei let out a miserable scream, being blown apart by Ye Liuyun's blade with a booming sound.

He possessed a protective divine artifact, so Ye Li Yun's strike did not kill him, but it severely shook him, leaving him unable to rise from the ground.

Translate: He had a Protective Artifact on him, so Ye Liuyun's strike didn't kill him, merely shaking him severely; he fell to the ground unable to rise.

We need "Protective Artifact". Good.

Moreover, his bloodline pressure was indeed formidable, a match for Ye Li Yun's. Ye Li Yun estimated that this bloodline power had likely reached the standard of the Taixu realm.

Translate: Moreover, his Bloodline Pressure was indeed not weak, a match for Ye Liuyun's. Ye Liuyun estimated that his Bloodline Power had likely reached the standard of the Taixu realm.

We need "Bloodline Pressure", "Taixu". Good.

"It seems Jiang Yuntian's bloodline power might be even stronger!" Ye Li Yun immediately thought of Jiang Yuntian.

Translate: "It seems Jiang Yuntian's Bloodline Power might be even stronger!" Ye Liuyun immediately thought of Jiang Yuntian.

We need "Bloodline Power". Also "Jiang Yuntian" is in glossary.

However, trying to intimidate Ye Li Yun with this bloodline pressure alone would obviously be useless.

Translate: But trying to intimidate Ye Liuyun with that Bloodline Pressure alone would obviously be useless.

We need "Bloodline Pressure". Good.

Ye Li Yun's subordinates did not cease; another blade came down toward Jiang Yunfei.

Translate: Ye Liuyun's subordinates didn't cease; another blade came down toward Jiang Yunfei.

"Ye Li Yun, you have a death wish! If you kill me, my father the king will never forgive you!" Seeing Ye Li Yun swing another blade at him, Jiang Yunfei immediately warned him.

Translate: "Ye Liuyun, you have a death wish! Kill me, and my Father King will never let you off!" Seeing Ye Liuyun's blade coming again, Jiang Yunfei immediately warned him.

We need "Father King". Good.

"Then go ahead and see if I really dare to kill you!" Ye Li Yun, unfazed, immediately followed up with another strike.

Translate: "Then see if I really dare to kill you!" Ye Liuyun paid no heed and immediately swung another blade.

"Idiot!"

Translate: "Idiot!"

Afterward, Ye Li Yun cursed again and unleashed another blade.

Translate: Afterwards, Ye Liuyun cursed and slashed out another blade.

"Boom, boom..."

Translate: "Boom, boom..."

After several booms, Jiang Yunfei was left disheveled, blood filling his mouth. His wretched state was worse than a beggar's, and all princely dignity was gone.

Translate: After several booms, Jiang Yunfei was left disheveled, blood filling his mouth. His wretched state was worse than a beggar's, and he had lost all princely bearing.

"Don't, don't kill me—I'll give you all my resources!"

Translate: "Don't, don't kill me, I'll give you all my resources!"

Jiang Yunfei was already gasping for breath from Ye Li Yun's blows, desperately suppressing the urge to spit blood as he begged for mercy.

Translate: Jiang Yunfei was already gasping for breath from Ye Liuyun's blows, desperately suppressing the urge to spit blood as he begged for mercy.

"You're not qualified to negotiate with me. Hand over your resources!" Ye Li Yun immediately commanded.

Translate: "You're not qualified to negotiate with me. Hand over the resources!" Ye Liuyun immediately commanded.

At this point, the remaining Imperial Guard had already begun to surrender. The two thousand elite troops led by his doppelganger and the two thousand bandits led by Cui Daoran had already killed nearly half of them; the rest were now surrounded, and besides surrender, they had no other choice.

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