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Chapter 1586

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He still didn't wake Jiang Ning, and the room remained silent.

Translation: He still didn't wake Jiang Ning, the room was silent and still.

But need to keep meaning: "He still didn't wake Jiang Ning; the room was silent and still." Use natural English.

We'll output: 【1】 He still didn't wake Jiang Ning; the room was silent and still.

A strand of source qi drew out from within his body, not daring to use too much, afraid her physical body was too weak to bear it.

A strand of source qi drew out from within his body, not daring to use too much, afraid her Li Ti was too weak to bear it.

But need to keep original meaning: "A strand of source qi drew out from within his body, not daring to use too much, afraid her Li Ti was too weak, unable to bear it."

Let's produce: 【2】 A strand of source qi drew out from within his body, not daring to use too much, afraid her Li Ti was too weak to bear it.

The source qi slipped in along the cloth covering her eyes.

Translation: The source qi slipped in along the cloth covering her eyes.

【3】 The source qi slipped in along the cloth covering her eyes.

Xiao Feng carefully sensed her eye structure, then gradually peeled away the dead muscle tissue and skin, following his own body framework, shaping neurons for her that connected to the brain.

We need to keep Xiao Feng as per glossary: muscle tissue, skin, neurons, body framework.

Translate: Xiao Feng carefully sensed her eye structure, then gradually peeled away the necrotic muscle tissue and skin within, following his own body framework, shaping neurons for her one by one, connecting them to the brain.

Make sure it's one line.

【4】 Xiao Feng carefully sensed her eye structure, then gradually peeled away the necrotic muscle tissue and skin within, following his own body framework, shaping neurons for her one by one, connecting them to the brain.

Throughout the process, he was extremely careful, not daring to have any oversight.

Translation: The whole process was done with extreme care, not daring to have any oversight.

【5】 The whole process was done with extreme care, not daring to have any oversight.

Otherwise, a slight mistake could cost a life.

Translation: Otherwise, a slight mistake could cost a life.

【6】 Otherwise, a slight mistake could cost a life.

He was no stranger to shaping objects; although this time he was very serious and nervous, the process was not slow.

Translation: Shaping a body was no longer unfamiliar to him; although this time he was very serious and nervous, the process was not slow.

【7】 Shaping a body was no longer unfamiliar to him; although this time he was very serious and nervous, the process was not slow.

Jiang Ning's eye sockets gradually filled, a pair of eyeballs forming, with a complete structure identical to a normal person's, even more perfect.

Translation: Jiang Ning's eye sockets gradually filled, a pair of eyeballs forming, with a complete structure, exactly like a normal person's, even more perfect.

【8】 Jiang Ning's eye sockets gradually filled, a pair of eyeballs forming, with a complete structure, exactly like a normal person's, even more perfect.

After a while, Xiao Feng completed the entire 'surgery' process.

Translation: After a period of time, Xiao Feng completed the entire "surgery" process.

【9】 After a period of time, Xiao Feng completed the entire "surgery" process.

I don't know if it worked……

Translation: "I don't know if it succeeded……"

【10】 "I don't know if it succeeded……"

He was a bit nervous, gently shaking the person on the bed to wake her.

Translation: He was a bit nervous, gently shaking the person on the bed, waking her.

【11】 He was a bit nervous, gently shaking the person on the bed, waking her.

Xiao Feng big brother……

Translation: "Xiao Feng Big Brother……"

But we should keep as "Xiao Feng big brother?" Actually it's a term of address: "Xiao Feng big brother". We'll output: 【12】 "Xiao Feng big brother……"

Jiang Ning's willpower sensed that he was calling her, and she quickly exited the game.

Translation: Jiang Ning's willpower sensed that he was calling her, and she quickly exited the game.

【13】 Jiang Ning's willpower sensed that he was calling her, and she quickly exited the game.

She reached out and touched Xiao Feng's face, concerned, saying: 'You haven't been offline for a long time this time; did something important happen?'

Translation: She reached out and touched Xiao Feng's face, concerned, saying: "You haven't gone offline for a long time this time; did you encounter something important?"

【14】 She reached out and touched Xiao Feng's face, concerned, saying: "You haven't gone offline for a long time this time; did you encounter something important?"

Hmm, I've been enlightening myself lately. Xiao Feng replied, untying the blindfold cloth from her eyes.

Translation: "Mm, I've been enlightening lately." Xiao Feng replied, undoing the blindfold for her.

【15】 "Mm, I've been enlightening lately." Xiao Feng replied, undoing the blindfold for her.

Jiang Ning still didn't realize what had happened to her, continuing to care for him: 'Are you hungry? You haven't eaten for almost two months; you must be suffering, right? Let's go……'

Translation: Jiang Ning still didn't realize what had happened to her body, continuing to care for him: "Are you hungry? It's been almost two months without food; you must be suffering, right? Let's go……"

Let's go……!

【16】 Jiang Ning still didn't realize what had happened to her body, continuing to care for him: "Are you hungry? It's been almost two months without food; you must be suffering, right? Let's go……"

Mid-sentence, she suddenly froze.

Translation: Halfway through her words, she suddenly froze.

【17】 Halfway through her words, she suddenly froze.

A burst of strong light made her feel very unaccustomed; she tightly shut her eyes and lifted her hand to cover them.

Translation: A burst of strong light made her feel very unaccustomed; she tightly closed her eyes and lifted her hand to cover them.

【18】 A burst of strong light made her feel very unaccustomed; she tightly closed her eyes and lifted her hand to cover them.

What's going on?

Translation: "What's going on?"

【19】 "What's going on?"

The bodily abnormality, combined with the intense stimulation feedback from the optic nerves, gave her an unprecedented feeling, filling her with panic.

Translation: The bodily abnormality, together with the intense stimulation feedback from the optic nerves, gave her an unprecedented feeling, filling her with panic.

【20】 The bodily abnormality, together with the intense stimulation feedback from the optic nerves, gave her an unprecedented feeling, filling her with panic.

It's okay, it's okay, put your hand down and try opening your eyes.

Translation: "It's okay, it's okay, put your hand down, try opening your eyes."

【21】 "It's okay, it's okay, put your hand down, try opening your eyes."

Xiao Feng pulled her hand apart and spoke softly.

Translation: Xiao Feng pulled her hand apart and spoke softly.

【22】 Xiao Feng pulled her hand apart and spoke softly.

Xiao Feng big brother, I……

Translation: "Xiao Feng big brother, I……"

【23】 "Xiao Feng big brother, I……"

Jiang Ning slightly opened her mouth, her whole body stunned.

Translation: Jiang Ning slightly opened her mouth, her whole person froze.

【24】 Jiang Ning slightly opened her mouth, her whole person froze.

She slowly opened her eyes; the strong light was still somewhat glaring, but her body was quickly adapting to the abnormality.

Translation: She slowly opened her eyes; the strong light was still somewhat glaring, but her body was quickly adapting to the abnormality.

【25】 She slowly opened her eyes; the strong light was still somewhat glaring, but her body was quickly adapting to the abnormality.

Before her appeared a blurry outline of the room, and a handsome face.

Translation: A blurry outline of the room appeared before her, along with a handsome face.

【26】 A blurry outline of the room appeared before her, along with a handsome face.

Thump

Thump

These are sound effects; we need to translate as English sound words: "Thump" maybe? "Thud"? "Thump" is typical for heartbeat. So we output: 【27】 Thump and 【28】 Thump.

【27】 Thump

【28】 Thump

Her heartbeat suddenly sped up a lot, and her breathing became rapid.

Translation: Her heartbeat suddenly sped up a lot, and her breathing became rapid.

【29】 Her heartbeat suddenly sped up a lot, and her breathing became rapid.

I, I……

Translation: "I, I……"

【30】 "I, I……"

Her emerald green eyes widened, and Jiang Ning finally realized what had happened to her.

Translation: Her emerald-green eyes widened round, and Jiang Ning finally realized what had happened to her body.

【31】 Her emerald-green eyes widened round, and Jiang Ning finally realized what had happened to her body.

She cried out in astonishment: 'I can see! Xiao Feng big brother, I can see!'

Translation: She cried out in astonishment: "I can see! Xiao Feng big brother, I can see!"

【32】 She cried out in astonishment: "I can see! Xiao Feng big brother, I can see!"

Extreme shock made her lose her usual quiet and composure; her loud voice even woke Xiao Nian next door.

Translation: Extreme shock made her lose her usual quiet and composure; her loud voice even woke Xiao Xiaonian next door.

【33】 Extreme shock made her lose her usual quiet and composure; her loud voice even woke Xiao Xiaonian next door.

What's wrong?

Translation: "What's wrong?"

【34】 "What's wrong?"

The little loli climbed up from the bed, discovered Xiao Feng had logged off, and happily hugged him.

Translation: The little loli climbed up from the bed, discovered Xiao Feng had logged off the game, and happily hugged him.

【35】 The little loli climbed up from the bed, discovered Xiao Feng had logged off the game, and happily hugged him.

Then she saw Jiang Ning beside her, breathing rapidly, tense all over, looking very excited.

Translation: Then she saw Jiang Ning beside her, breathing rapidly, body tense, acting very excited.

【36】 Then she saw Jiang Ning beside her, breathing rapidly, body tense, acting very excited.

Especially those emerald green eyes, which were especially eye‑catching!

Translation: Especially those emerald-green eyes, which especially attracted attention!

【37】 Especially those emerald-green eyes, which especially attracted attention!

Ah… what… what's going on? Xiao Nian stood frozen.

Translation: "Ah…… what's going on?" Xiao Xiaonian stood frozen in place.

【38】 "Ah…… what's going on?" Xiao Xiaonian stood frozen in place.

Xiao Feng smiled and said: 'Looks like it succeeded, Ning'er, congratulations.'

Translation: Xiao Feng smiled and said: "Looks like it succeeded, Ning'er, congratulations."

【39】 Xiao Feng smiled and said: "Looks like it succeeded, Ning'er, congratulations."

Looking at the girl's delighted expression, he felt genuine happiness from the heart.

Translation: Looking at the girl's surprised and delighted appearance, he felt genuine happiness from the heart.

【40】 Looking at the girl's surprised and delighted appearance, he felt genuine happiness from the heart.

Xiao Feng big brother, I, I…… what's going on?

Translation: "Xiao Feng big brother, I, I…… what's going on?"

【41】 "Xiao Feng big brother, I, I…… what's going on?"

Jiang Ning stammered, not knowing what expression to make for a moment.

Translation: Jiang Ning spoke haltingly, for a moment not knowing what expression to make.

【42】 Jiang Ning spoke haltingly, for a moment not knowing what expression to make.

Before, Xiao Feng had mentioned once that he wanted to cure her.

Translation: Before, Xiao Feng had once mentioned wanting to cure her.

【43】 Before, Xiao Feng had once mentioned wanting to cure her.

But she thought it was just consolation, actually impossible to achieve.

Translation: But she thought it was just consolation; in fact, it seemed impossible to achieve.

【44】 But she thought it was just consolation; in fact, it seemed impossible to achieve.

Only today did this truly happen, and she finally believed that miracles exist in the world!

Translation: Until today, this thing truly happened, and only then did she finally believe that miracles exist in the world.

【45】 Until today, this thing truly happened, and only then did she finally believe that miracles exist in the world.

I passed the 2000th level of the All-Heavens Tower, made a wish to the gods, and cured you. Xiao Feng said with a smile.

Translation: "I passed the 2000th floor of the Myriad Heavens Tower, made a wish to the gods, and healed you." Xiao Feng said with a smile.

【46】 "I passed the 2000th floor of the Myriad Heavens Tower, made a wish to the gods, and healed you." Xiao Feng said with a smile.

The fact that he could control everything was a bit too absurd; he didn't want to scare those around him, so he didn't speak plainly.

Translation: The fact that he could control all things was a bit too outrageous; he didn't want to scare those around him, so he didn't speak plainly.

【47】 The fact that he could control all things was a bit too outrageous; he didn't want to scare those around him, so he didn't speak plainly.

Heavens! Is this really true? Ningning, you can see?

Translation: "Heavens! Is this really true? Ningning, you can see?"

【48】 "Heavens! Is this really true? Ningning, you can see?"

Xiao Nian was stunned, mouth agape, waving a hand in front of Jiang Ning's eyes, unable to believe it was real.

Translation: Xiao Xiaonian was stunned, mouth small open, she waved a hand in front of Jiang Ning's eyes, unable to believe it was real.

【49】 Xiao Xiaonian was stunned, mouth small open, she waved a hand in front of Jiang Ning's eyes, unable to believe it was real.

Sniff… thank you, Xiao Feng big brother……

Translation: "Uuu…… thank you, Xiao Feng big brother……"

【50】 "Uuu…… thank you, Xiao Feng big brother……"

The next second, Jiang Ning flung herself into Xiao Feng's arms, weeping uncontrollably.

Translation: The next second, Jiang Ning flung herself into Xiao Feng's arms, weeping uncontrollably.

【51】 The next second, Jiang Ning flung herself into Xiao Feng's arms, weeping uncontrollably.

This event moved her deeply; the defect that had accompanied her since birth was finally made whole, even happier than when she first entered the All-Heavens and gained sight for the first time.

Translation: This matter moved her too greatly; the defect that had accompanied her since birth was actually made whole, which was even happier than when she first entered the Myriad Heavens and initially gained sight.

【52】 This matter moved her too greatly; the defect that had accompanied her since birth was actually made whole, which was even happier than when she first entered the Myriad Heavens and initially gained sight.

Xiao Feng gently stroked her long hair, saying nothing, silently comforting the poor girl.

Translation: Xiao Feng gently stroked her long hair, saying nothing, silently comforting this pitiful girl.

【53】 Xiao Feng gently stroked her long hair, saying nothing, silently comforting this pitiful girl.

Xiao Nian was also infected, not as mischievous as usual, and hugged the two of them.

Translation: Xiao Xiaonian was also infected, not as mischievous as usual, and hugged together with the two of them.

【54】 Xiao Xiaonian was also infected, not as mischievous as usual, and hugged together with the two of them.

The room remained silent for a long time.

Translation: The room remained silent for a long time.

【55】 The room remained silent for a long time.

After a while, the door opened and Su Lingyu and Fang Yinuo walked in.

Translation: After a while, the door opened, and Su Lingyu and Fang Yinuo walked in.

【56】 After a while, the door opened, and Su Lingyu and Fang Yinuo walked in.

Upon learning that Jiang Ning could see, and that her eyes were more beautiful than anyone's, they were all shocked and also happy for her.

Translation: Upon learning that Jiang Ning could see, and that her eyes were more beautiful than anyone's, they were all shocked and also happy for her.

【57】 Upon learning that Jiang Ning could see, and that her eyes were more beautiful than anyone's, they were all shocked and also happy for her.

The news spread quickly, and Old Zhang and Old Li also found out.

Translation: The news quickly spread, and Old Zhang and Old Li also knew.

【58】 The news quickly spread, and Old Zhang and Old Li also knew.

Both of them brought their partners over to congratulate Jiang Ning; Su Ni was so happy she immediately got busy cooking a tableful of delicious dishes.

Translation: Both of them came over with their partners to congratulate Jiang Ning; Su Ni was so happy she immediately got busy cooking a tableful of delicious dishes.

【59】 Both of them came over with their partners to congratulate Jiang Ning; Su Ni was so happy she immediately got busy cooking a tableful of delicious dishes.

After Jiang Ning's mood had calmed a little, the first thing she did was call her grandmother to tell her close family about this miraculous thing.

The old man didn't believe it was real, repeatedly saying it was impossible.

Jiang Ning had wanted to take a few photos to send over, but she feared the situation would be too outrageous and scare the old folks, so she held back, planning to find time these few days to return in person and let her grandmother see, to make her happy.

A group of people gathered at the table, in the name of congratulations, kept plying her with alcohol.

Usually introverted and restrained, Jiang Ning was unusually open today, turning away none who came, drinking until she was dazed and limp, falling asleep in Xiao Feng's arms.

Even after falling asleep, she continued to murmur happily in her sleep.

Xiao Feng sent her back to her room, then continued drinking with his friends, talking about the changes in the game during this period.

He had disappeared all at once for almost two years, and the whole layout of the Myriad Heavens world had completely changed.

Now, the first-tier players in virtually every battle zone have almost all reached the Divine Lord realm; taking just Blue Star No. 8 Battle Zone, there are already over 500,000 who have successively broken through.

What's more, there are several tens of millions stuck at level 500, unable to breakthrough because of lacking talent and perception.

Temples sprang up one after another; the most renowned remain those around him, for they level up fast, are strong, and are widely recognized.

The Myriad Heavens Battlefield already has many people; all major civilizations have begun to settle, with hundreds of millions taking up permanent residence. The divine beings and lesser Divine Lords who used to rob adventurers have suffered brutal oppression, and untold numbers have been killed.

When players entered, it was like a locust swarm passing through, scraping clean the land near the main base's Teleportation Array inch by inch.

Some powerful battle zones began to establish cities.

Any place with flat terrain and surroundings not too poor would be selected.

The major battle zones vied and fought; in just a few months, the number of wars fought is unknown, and announcements of a battle zone's civilizational lord being slain can be heard almost daily.

Thanks to Xiao Feng, the Blue Star No. 8 Battle Zone's three great Mi Jing stand firm, uninvaded, and have developed very well.

Cuiwei Mi Jing has rapidly been built into a large city, with many who have broken through to the Divine Lord realm cultivating there in peace, swiftly increasing their strength.

Naturally, some also go out in groups to hunt Divine Lords, obtaining the merit of eliminating demons.

Of course, people are not satisfied with just this.

The three great Mi Jing can accommodate at most ten to twenty million people.

What about the several billion other players?

We must go to war! Build larger cities, even divine nations, to accommodate this huge population base!

During this period, Jiang Ning, as a civilizational lord, led the area's elite Divine Lord team, launching multiple campaigns against the plain 5,000 kilometers west of Cangyue Dongtian.

The native inhabitants there—a group of intermediate Divine Lords and a few superior Divine Lords—were hunted down one after another.

However, at the same time they also faced contention from the Qingkong World and two other battle zones.

Relying on the powerful equipment Xiao Feng left them, after several rounds of war the Blue Star No. 8 Battle Zone finally seized that vast expanse of land with a radius of 3,000 kilometers.

However, because everyone's prestige was insufficient, it has not yet been protected with a Golden Seal.

The known map of the Myriad Heavens Battlefield is expanding, as civilizational lords have opened the 'All-Zone Map Sharing' function, with many continually exploring farther afield.

They encountered the stone-life beings near the neighboring main base's Teleportation Array, and also met players from the Fighting Qi Divine Realm in another direction.

One Mi Jing after another, one powerful foe after another, continually being discovered.

One city after another, one territory after another, sprang up from the ground.

Naturally, some battle zones began to form alliances, pledging non-aggression and jointly attacking alien races.

A brand-new era has arrived—the true age of hegemony in Myriad Heavens has just begun!

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