Chapter 1938
Translation
We must keep each translation on a single line.
Now we need to be careful with punctuation: keep original punctuation? The instruction: "Render EXACTLY what the source says — same meaning, same information, nothing added." We should translate punctuation appropriately to English. Usually we keep meaning; we can adapt punctuation to English style but not add info. We'll translate sentences naturally.
Let's do line by line.
Comprehending the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body took five days, which is a bit faster than when he previously comprehended the White Tiger War Body.
Translation: "It took five days to comprehend the Qiongqi Demon Body, which was a bit faster than comprehending the White Tiger War Body before."
But we need to translate Exhaustion Odd Demon Body and White Tiger War Body meaningfully. We decided to translate as Exhaustion Odd Demon Body and White Tiger War Body. However we need to decide on translation for Exhaustion Odd Demon Body: Exhaustion Odd Demon Body. Let's use that.
Thus: "It took five days to comprehend the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body, which was a bit faster than comprehending the White Tiger War Body before."
Check: "comprehend" = comprehend or cultivate? Usually "comprehend" or "grasp". We'll use "comprehend". Good.
Then he spent another day integrating it into the Myriad Gods and Demons War Body.
Translation: "Then he spent another day to fuse it into the Myriad Gods and Demons War Body."
On the seventh day of being trapped, Xiao Feng completed the perfect fusion of the five major physiques.
Translation: "On the seventh day of being trapped, Xiao Feng completed the perfect fusion of the five major physiques."
We need to use Xiao Feng.
"five major physiques" = five major physiques.
Furthermore, he also found a similar feeling among the five bloodlines he had accumulated; that is a power that is extraordinarily gentle, vast, and righteous.
Translation: "Moreover, he found a similar feeling among the five bloodlines he had accumulated—a power that was extraordinarily gentle, vast, and righteous."
We need to keep meaning. "five bloodlines he had accumulated" = five bloodlines he had accumulated. "a similar feeling" = a similar feeling. "a power that was extraordinarily gentle, vast, and righteous" = a power that was extraordinarily gentle, vast, and righteous.
If one is not careful, they won't notice it; they will only think it is their own inherent power.
Translation: "If not examined carefully, it would go unnoticed, and one would simply regard it as one's own innate power."
But actually…… that is the Primordial True King's Dao Ancestor Origin!
Translation: "But in fact… that is the Dao Ancestor Origin of the Primordial True King!"
This power has already appeared in Xiao Feng's body, but it is hidden deep and cannot be freely mobilized; only when transforming into a wild beast can it be somewhat drawn upon.
Translation: "This power already exists within Xiao Feng's body, but it is hidden deep and cannot be freely mobilized; only when transforming into a wild beast can it be somewhat drawn upon."
We need to use Xiao Feng. "when transforming into a wild beast" = can be somewhat drawn upon.
「After adding the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body, the divine and demonic natures slightly balanced, and now it can increase overall attribute strength by 500%。」 Xiao Feng comprehended the secret method, and a sudden realization arose in his mind.
Translation: "\"After incorporating the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body, the divine and demonic natures are slightly balanced, and overall strength can be increased by 500%. \" After comprehending the Law Secret Technique, Xiao Feng gained a sudden realization."
We need to use Xiao Feng, Law Secret Technique (glossary). Also note the comma inside quotes: we keep as is.
We need to ensure we keep the quoted speech exactly as meaning. We'll translate: "After incorporating the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body, the divine and demonic natures are slightly balanced, and overall strength can be increased by 500%." Then after quote: "After comprehending the Law Secret Technique, Xiao Feng gained a sudden realization."
「After adding the Exhaustion Odd Demon Body, the divine and demonic natures slightly balanced, and now it can increase overall attribute strength by 500%。」 Xiao Feng comprehended the secret method, and a sudden realization arose in his mind.
The previous four war bodies' enhancement was only 350%; logically, a single Exhaustion Odd Demon Body shouldn't enhance that much. However, due to the increase in demonic nature, it gradually draws closer to the divine nature, and the growth margin suddenly increased significantly.
Translation: "The previous four battle bodies only gave a 350% increase; logically, a single Exhaustion Odd Demon Body shouldn't provide such a boost. However, due to the increase in demonic nature, it gradually draws closer to the divine nature, and the growth margin jumps significantly."
We need to keep meaning. "the growth margin jumps significantly" = the growth margin jumps significantly.
After comprehending another demonic body, it can probably surge again, becoming a 700% increase!
Translation: "If he comprehends another demonic body, he could likely surge again, reaching a 700% increase!"
Moreover, the slaughter and brutality within the Exhaustion Odd Demon bloodline have also been retained; after transforming, Xiao Feng will gain stronger combat prowess.
Translation: "Moreover, the slaughter and brutality inherent in the Qiongqi bloodline have been retained; after transformation, Xiao Feng will gain even stronger killing ability."
We need to use Xiao Feng.
Next, he still needs to comprehend the physique and aura of several Wild Beast Clan Venerables.
Translation: "Next, he still needs to comprehend the physique and aura of several Wild Beast Clan Venerables."
Xiao Feng was about to take out Spiritual Essence to continue, when a message from a close friend arrived.
Translation: "Xiao Feng was about to take out the Spiritual Essence to continue, when a message from a close friend arrived."
We need to use Xiao Feng, Spiritual Essence (our translation). "message from a close friend" = message from a close friend.
「Xiao Feng, have you encountered any trouble these past few days? Why haven't you come back? 」
Translation: "\"Xiao Feng, have you run into trouble these past few days? Why haven't you come back? \""
We need to keep the question marks and comma.
The message was sent by Lucky Cat.
Translation: "The message was sent by Xing Yun Miao."
These past few days they have still been playing the group matches, and the process has been very smooth.
Translation: "These past few days they have been continuing the group stage matches, and the process has been very smooth."
Xiao Feng explained: "Well, I'm temporarily trapped in a special space; it will take some time to get out."
Translation: "Xiao Feng explained, \"Hmm, I'm temporarily trapped in a special space; it will take some time to get out. \""
「Can you make it back before the final? 」 Lucky Cat asked him.
Translation: "\"Can you make it back before the finals? \" Xing Yun Miao asked him."
「It should be possible; I have confidence. 」 Xiao Feng replied.
Translation: "\"I should be able to; I have confidence. \" Xiao Feng replied."
「Then that's good…」
Translation: "\"Then that's good…\""
Note: the original line was "Then that's good…" which we translate as "Then that's good…".
Lucky Cat said something, then fell silent.
Translation: "Xing Yun Miao said something, then fell silent."
Xiao Feng noticed her tone was a bit off, and asked: "What's wrong? Did something happen at home?"
Translation: "Xiao Feng noticed her tone was off and asked, \"What's wrong? Did something happen at home? \""
She hesitated a moment, then replied: "These two days you weren't here, Xun Shuang's chill has rebounded again; the upstairs is full of ice shards. She also refuses help from others, sitting alone, looking not good."
Translation: "She hesitated, then replied, \"These two days without you, Xun Shuang's cold energy has flared up again; the upper floor is full of ice shards. She refuses anyone's help, sitting alone, looking unwell. \""
We need to use Xun Shuang.
「What? The cold injury can rebound too? 」 Upon hearing this, Xiao Feng immediately became anxious.
Translation: "\"What? The cold injury can flare up again? \" Upon hearing this, Xiao Feng immediately became anxious."
He spent over three months to suppress that chill, but he didn't expect that after just a few days it would appear again!
Translation: "He had spent over three months to suppress that chill, never expecting it to reappear after just a few days!"
Lucky Cat said: "At first there was nothing for the first few days, but yesterday for some reason it suddenly worsened. She said it might be the Azure Dragon Venerable manipulating the power buried in her body from afar, but she's not sure."
Translation: "Xing Yun Miao said, \"The first few days were fine, but yesterday for some reason it suddenly worsened. She said it might be the Azure Dragon Venerable manipulating the sealed power buried in her body from afar, but she wasn't certain. \""
We need to use Azure Dragon Venerable (glossary? not in glossary but we decided to translate). We'll use Azure Dragon Venerable.
「Azure Dragon? Damn it, this bastard, once I get out I will tear her to pieces! 」 Xiao Feng flew into a rage.
Translation: "\"Azure Dragon? Damn it, that bastard; once I'm out I'll tear her to shreds! \" Xiao Feng exploded in anger."
We need to keep the exclamation.
Thinking that the Azure Dragon Venerable might take advantage of his absence to invade the Chaos Secret Realm and cause terrible harm to Xun Shuang, Xiao Xuan Die, and other NPCs, he felt somewhat anxious and eager to hurry back.
Translation: "Thinking that the Azure Dragon Venerable might invade the Chaos Secret Realm in his absence, inflicting terrible harm on Xun Shuang, Xiao Xuan Die, and other NPCs, he felt somewhat anxious and eager to return as soon as possible."
We need to use Azure Dragon Venerable, Chaos Secret Realm, Xun Shuang, Xiao Xuan Die, Players and NPCs (glossary). Note "etc. NPCs" etc.
However, the Realm Heart Prison is extremely secure; he still lacks the ability to escape.
Translation: "However, the Realm Heart Prison is extremely sturdy; he currently lacks the ability to break free."
「First, have Feilian help suppress Xun Shuang's chill; I'll ask the Fu Feng Shi for help. 」 Xiao Feng told Lucky Cat.
Translation: "\"First, have Fei Lian help suppress Xun Shuang's cold energy; I'll seek help from Feng Feng Shi. \" Xiao Feng said to Xing Yun Miao."
We need to use Fei Lian, Xun Shuang, Feng Feng Shi.
Xun Shuang's chill is actually somewhat better; although it will cause her great pain, it is not life-threatening.
Translation: "Actually, Xun Shuang's cold energy is somewhat better; although it causes her great pain, it is not life-threatening."
What he truly worries about is
Translation: "What he truly worries about is"
But line 32 ends incomplete; line 33 continues. We need to keep line breaks as per input. So we output line 32 translation exactly as the Chinese line: "What he truly worries about is". We need to translate that: "What he truly worries about is". Keep as single line.
It is the Azure Dragon spying from afar, discovering he hasn't returned for a long time, inferring his current situation, and thus taking action against the
Translation: "is the Azure Dragon watching from afar, noticing he hasn't returned in a long time, inferring his current situation, and thus acting against the Chaos Secret Realm."
【128】
Without him, with Qinglong's strength, any player or NPC would be no match— the situation would become extremely dangerous.
Translation: "Without him, relying on the Azure Dragon's strength, any player or NPC would be no match, and the situation would be extremely dangerous!"
We need to use Players and NPCs (glossary). Also Azure Dragon.
【136】
Translation: "At this moment, the only one he can trust and contact is Feng Feng Shi, who holds the Dao Ancestor's Edict!"
We need to use Feng Feng Shi, Dao Ancestor's Edict.
"Okay, you also need to be careful and come back soon," Lucky Cat replied.
Translation: "\"Good, you also need to be careful; come back soon. \" Xing Yun Miao replied."
【140】
Translation: "\"Hmm. \""
Xiao Feng didn't waste any words; he immediately opened the list, selected the Feng Wind clan, and sent a message.
Translation: "Xiao Feng didn't waste words, immediately opened the list, selected Feng Feng Shi, and sent a message."
【144】
Translation: "Feng Feng Shi listened to his explanation, remained silent for a few seconds, then replied, \"Alright, let your friend guide me. \""
She agreed readily, without even mentioning any conditions for the exchange.
Translation: "She agreed readily, without mentioning any conditions for exchange."
Check if any missing numbers: we have all.
Translation: "Xiao Feng expressed gratitude, \"Hmm, I'll immediately have someone pick you up; when I return, I will surely repay your kindness! \""
We need to keep the exclamation.
"It's nothing, no need." Feng Feng Shi replied lightly, without asking for his reward.
Soon, Xiao Feng had Xing Yun Miao and Jiang Ning go together to fetch Feng Feng Shi, and he opened the visitation permit for the Chaos Secret Realm, granting her permanent access.
About five minutes later, Jiang Ning sent a message, saying: "Xiao Feng big brother, Feng Feng Shi has arrived; should we arrange for her to stay temporarily at home or elsewhere?"
"Let her choose herself; if she likes the environment, we can give her a permanent cave dwelling." Xiao Feng replied.
The World Ancient Tree can actually accommodate at least several hundred thousand people.
But he didn't want to affect the subordinates of Senior Xuan Die, so he controlled the population numbers.
Anyway, the environment under and around the tree is also quite good; there's no need to insist on living in the tree.
Jiang Ning conveyed his words to Feng Feng Shi, and shortly after informed Xiao Feng that Feng Feng Shi had chosen the nearest one.
The branch, and had the World Ancient Tree newly construct a cave dwelling.
She, her two attendants, and her mount all temporarily took up residence.
"By the way, Xiao Feng big brother, just now Feng Feng Shi's mount secretly asked me when He Xianzi would be able to return." Jiang Ning added another sentence.
Xiao Feng shook his head helplessly and replied: "When I went back, He Xianzi had already gone back."
He Xianzi brought him to the Beast God Realm; as soon as the battle began, she was taken back into her mount space, and she's still locked in there now.
Two ninth-level mounts are in the heat of love; not seeing each other for a day feels like three autumns, and not seeing each other for a week makes it feel as if the other has died—being anxious inside is understandable.
However, he also had no choice; he could only first comprehend the aura of the savage beast venerables.
The safety issue of the Chaos Secret Realm was temporarily entrusted to Feng Feng Shi.
He himself took spiritual essence and comprehended the origin aura of other savage beasts.
Taking spiritual essence cannot be done simultaneously; one must do them one by one, and even if he could multitask, he still has to proceed step by step honestly.
Two days later, he comprehended the origin of the savage beast venerable "Single-Horned Ox".
These two days the household has been relatively calm; aside from Xun Shuang Xianzi suffering the ravages of the cold, everything is still fine.
After another two days, Xiao Feng comprehended the origin of the second primal beast venerable of a non-first-generation being, the Wind Civet.
The household remains quiet, but the second floor where Xun Shuang lives alone has turned into a world of ice and snow; the growing intense chill clearly shows that the Azure Dragon is manipulating things from afar, and the situation is not optimistic.
Xiao Feng felt anxious, but there was nothing he could do; he could only force himself to calm down and continue comprehending.
On the eleventh day of entering the Realm Heart Prison, he began to comprehend the third origin of a non-first-generation primal beast.
Not long after he had just begun,
The surrounding space suddenly trembled.
A flash of light shone in the darkness, a pair of huge eyes appeared ahead, their pupils blazing with fierce fire, their aura also scorching; at a glance one could tell it was the gaze of a Kirin.
"Human Xiao Feng, your mindset seems not bad; you actually manage to calmly comprehend the laws within the Realm Heart Prison." The Kirin commented on him with the attitude of a victor.
The manner in which Xiao Feng comprehended the primal beast's origin cannot be seen by outsiders; all one can see is him eating something, then sitting still without moving.
The Kirin thought he was comprehending the laws, trying to rely on the power of the laws to break free of his imprisonment, so his tone still carried a hint of mockery.
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