Chapter 2357: then translation of chapter title

Leaving the Myriad Heavens Pagoda, Xiao Feng returned to the Elemental Divine Realm, not immediately going to the Myriad Heavens Battlefield, but instead made a trip to Chai Chai City.

Translation: Leaving the Myriad Heavens Pagoda, Xiao Feng returned to Yuan Su Shen Yu, not immediately going to the Myriad Heavens Battlefield, but instead made a trip to Chai Chai Cheng.

Leaving the Myriad Heavens Pagoda, Xiao Feng returned to Yuan Su Shen Yu, not immediately going to the Myriad Heavens Battlefield, but instead made a trip to Chai Chai Cheng.

We'll keep concise.

Over a thousand years have passed, Chai Chai City no longer has any players visiting; this version has been phased out, and now only tens of thousands of NPCs live there, making it very desolate.

Translation: Over a thousand years have passed, Chai Chai Cheng no longer has any players visiting; this version has been eliminated, and now only tens of thousands of NPCs live there, making it very desolate.

Note: "several ten thousand" means "tens of thousands". We'll keep "tens of thousands". Good.

However…

Translation: However… (preserve ellipsis). Should we keep three dots? Use "...". So: However…

When Xiao Feng opened the guild warehouse and looked, he found that his city still contained a large amount of valuable materials and items that had remained untouched in storage, and the warehouse's physical structure was also intact.

Translation: Xiao Feng opened the guild warehouse and saw that his city still contained a large amount of valuable materials and items, left untouched in storage, and the warehouse's physical structure was completely intact.

Note: there is a comma before the warehouse's physical structure, which is also intact; we'll reflect that.

Even the most desolate games are protected by system power, preventing theft or plunder; these things remain unchanged for thousands of years and will stay that way until the day the service shuts down.

Translation: Even the most desolate game is protected by system power, so it cannot be stolen or plundered. These things remain unchanged for a thousand years and will stay that way until the day of shutdown.

After stepping out of the teleportation array, Xiao Feng scanned with his divine sense, found Mi He Er and Mi Li Si Hui Jin, and then instantly teleported to stand before them.

Translation: Stepping out of the Teleportation Array, Xiao Feng swept with his Divine Sense, found Mi He Er and Mi Li Si Hui Jin, then instantly teleported to appear before them.

We need to decide on the pinyin for Mi He Er and Mi Li Si Hui Jin; we'll use "Mi He Er" and "Mi Li Si Hui Jin". Note that "Mi Li Si Hui Jin" may include "Hui Jin" as part of the name; we keep it as is.

Mi He Er and his wife have both become God Kings, one at level 1150 and the other at level 1100; limited by their talent, they stopped progressing further in the later stages.

Translation: Mi He Er and his wife are now God Kings, one at level 1150, the other at 1100; limited by their talent, they cannot continue to grow stronger in the later stages.

Note: "Mi He Er and his wife" means Mi He Er and his wife. We'll translate as "Mi He Er and his wife". Could also be "Mi He Er and his spouse". We'll use "Mi He Er and his wife".

Upon seeing Xiao Feng suddenly appear, the two were stunned for a moment.

Translation: Seeing Xiao Feng suddenly appear, the two were stunned for a moment.

It took a good while before they could dig out from memory their impression of this person.

Translation: It took a good while before they dug out an impression of this person from their memories.

"Xiao Feng, you're back?" Mi He Er exclaimed in surprise.

Translation: "Xiao Feng, you're back?" Mi He Er exclaimed in surprise.

"Yeah, I've been in seclusion for a long time; I just returned recently. Why aren't you going to the Myriad Heavens Battlefield? You could perhaps continue improving there." Xiao Feng said.

Translation: "Yeah, I've been in seclusion for a long time, just returned recently. Why don't you go to the Myriad Heavens Battlefield? You might still be able to improve there." Xiao Feng said.

Mi Li Si Hui Jin gave a wry smile and said: "I don't dare go there; the Myriad Heavens Battlefield is crowded with strong warriors, and God King-level adventurers are everywhere. We would easily be killed. It's better to stay here as a city guardian and enjoy a peaceful life."

Translation: Mi Li Si Hui Jin gave a wry smile and said: "We don't dare go; the Myriad Heavens Battlefield is crowded with strongers, God King–level adventurers everywhere, we'd easily be killed. It's better to stay here as the city's guardians and enjoy a peaceful life."

Note: "God King–level adventurers" is the translation for "God King-level adventurers"; use an en dash.

"Hmm, that's true; peace is the rarest happiness." Xiao Feng nodded in agreement.

Translation: "Mm, that's right; peace is the rarest happiness." Xiao Feng nodded in agreement.

"Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er gestured

called out.

"Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er beckoned

"Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er gestured

"Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er beckoned

Thus translation: "Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er gestured

called out

Alternatively we could combine meaning: but we must not add or omit. So we must output exactly what the line says. So line 14 translation includes the gesture, line 15 translation is just the verb.

Thus:

【14】 "Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er gestured

【15】 called out.

But we need to keep the quotes? The original line 14 includes Chinese quotation marks around the speech. We should preserve the quoted speech in English with quotation marks. So line 14: "Xiao Feng, come drink in the city. My sister—why isn't she with you?" Mi He Er gestured

Line 15: called out.

We'll keep that.

They are currently outside the city planting flowers and gathering herbs, not at home.

Translation: Right now they are outside the city planting flowers and gathering herbs, not at home.

Xiao Feng smiled and said: "Mi Nie Ya is busy with other matters and is with my main body; I am a separated consciousness coming here, wanting to find someone to handle some affairs."

Translation: Xiao Feng smiled and said: "Mi Nie Ya is busy with other matters and is with my main body. I've come here as a separated consciousness, looking for someone to handle a few things."

Note: "Mi Nie Ya" we decided as Mi Nie Ya. "main body" is the physical form. "separated consciousness" refers to an avatar. We'll use "separated consciousness".

"Looking for someone? Who?" Both were puzzled.

Translation: "Find someone? Who?" Both were puzzled.

Xiao Feng replied: "Youni, have you seen her?"

Translation: Xiao Feng replied: "You Ni, have you seen her?"

The love god who wanted to cling to her, I don't know where he is now.

Translation: That Love God who wanted to cling to her, I don't know where he is now.

Note: "to cling to her" means "to cling to her" or "to pursue her aggressively". We'll translate as "who wanted to cling to her". Could be "who wanted to lean on her". We'll use "who wanted to cling to her".

"What do you want from her? Could it be…"

Translation: "What do you want her for? Could it be…?"

Mi He Er showed a doubtful expression, somewhat on guard, wanting to stand watch for her sister.

Translation: Mi He Er showed a suspicious expression, somewhat on guard, wanting to protect his sister a little.

Xiao Feng explained: "Last time I didn't fully study her law; this time my cultivation has increased, so I intend to thoroughly understand it as a reference."

Translation: Xiao Feng explained: "Last time I didn't fully study her law; this time my cultivation has increased, so I intend to understand it more thoroughly as a reference."

"In that case… alright, I'll take you to see her." Mi He Er saw he wasn't talking nonsense, nodded, and flew him to the other side of Chai Chai City.

Translation: "Well… alright then, I'll take you to see her." Mi He Er saw he wasn't talking nonsense, nodded, and flew with him to the other side of Chai Chai Cheng.

Youni lives here.

Translation: You Ni lives here.

She has also reached the God King realm, and her level is even higher, at 1400.

Translation: She too has reached the God King Realm, and her level is even higher—1400.

At this moment, the love goddess is lying in the flower field, humming a little tune while playing with a white rabbit; her floral dress is spread on the ground, her pink hair sways with her head movements, giving off a strong youthful vibe.

Translation: At this moment, the Love Goddess lay prone in the flower field, humming a little tune as she teased a white rabbit, her floral dress spread on the ground, her pink hair swaying with her head movements, exuding a strong maidenly aura.

However… a several-thousand-year-old maiden's freshness period is also quite long.

Translation: However… a maiden who is thousands of years old still has a long enough freshness period.

"Youni, someone is looking for you." Mi He Er said from mid-air, slowly descending.

Translation: "You Ni, someone's looking for you." Mi He Er said from midair, slowly descending.

"Who?"

Translation: "Who is it?"

Youni looked up and exclaimed: "King of Gods, why have you come!"

Translation: You Ni looked up and then exclaimed in surprise: "King of Gods, how did you come here?"

However, it's only surprise; not as exaggerated as before, where upon meeting she would rush forward to display her charm.

Translation: But it was only surprise, not as exaggerated as before, where she would have lunged at first sight to show off her charm.

Xiao Feng landed on the ground, and the white rabbit ran over, hopping around his legs, very affectionate.

Translation: Xiao Feng landed on the ground, and the white rabbit ran over, hopping around his legs, very affectionate.

This is the power of a gentle-natured law possessed by the body

causing the aura of a top-tier expert.

We have line 34 and 35 split. Need to translate each line separately.

Line 34: This is the power of a gentle-natured law possessed by the body

Translation: This is the power of a law with a gentle nature possessed by the body

But we need to keep meaning: "This is the aura of a top-tier expert possessing a gentle-natured law power." Actually line 34-35 together: "This is the power of a gentle-natured law possessed by the body, causing the aura of a top-tier expert." Means "This is the aura of a top-tier expert caused by possessing a gentle-natured law power." So line 34: "This is the power of a gentle-natured law possessed by the body". Line 35: "causing the aura of a top-tier expert."

Thus we translate line 34: This is the power of a gentle-natured law possessed by the body

Line 35: causing the aura of a top-tier expert.

We'll keep that.

If it were a fierce-law expert, small animals would be frightened and flee upon seeing them.

Translation: If the expert possessed a fierce law, small animals would be frightened and flee at the sight of them.

"Youni, I want to borrow your law for contemplation. Please fully release your strongest law power so I can feel it." Xiao Feng got straight to the point.

Translation: "You Ni, I want to borrow your law for contemplation. Release your strongest law power fully so I can feel it." Xiao Feng got straight to the point.

The love law is an emotion-type law, acting upon the soul.

Translation: The Love Law is an emotion-type law that acts upon the soul.

Xiao Feng previously only had a casual understanding of it, without deep study.

Translation: Last time Xiao Feng only had a casual understanding of it, without deep study.

Recently, due to the reminder of the Universe Master, he intends to put in some hard work on soul-law aspects, so as not to become a weakness later.

Translation: Recently, reminded by the Lord of the Universe, he plans to put in some hard work on soul laws, lest they become a weakness later.

Having fully comprehended the five great laws, stepping into the Supreme Origin Realm is an immensely powerful state—so powerful that "strong" cannot describe it, surpassing cosmic rules and transcending the universe.

Translation: When all five great laws are fully comprehended and perfected, one steps into the Supreme Origin Realm—a state of immeasurable power, so mighty that "powerful" can no longer describe it, surpassing cosmic rules and reigning above the universe.

But it is also very difficult.

Translation: But it is also extremely difficult.

Youni heard this and felt a little disappointed, gave an "oh", then released her law power.

Translation: You Ni felt a little disappointed, let out an "oh," and then released her law power.

She raised her head to look at Xiao Feng, blinked, and a pink halo spread outward.

Translation: She lifted her head to look at Xiao Feng, blinked, and a pink halo spread outward.

At that moment, from Xiao Feng's perspective, everyone else seemed to disappear, leaving only a beautiful girl standing in the flower field, smiling at him.

Translation: At that moment, from Xiao Feng's perspective, everyone around seemed to vanish, leaving only a beautiful girl standing in the flower field smiling at him.

Of course, the love law not only makes one perceive beauty but also affects the heart, causing Xiao Feng to involuntarily feel the illusion "I like her."

Translation: Of course, the Love Law doesn't just make one perceive beauty; it also works on the mind, causing Xiao Feng to involuntarily feel the illusion "I really like her."

Given Xiao Feng's strength, resisting would be easy.

Translation: With Xiao Feng's strength, resisting would be easy.

But he simply went with the feeling, without resisting.

Translation: But he simply went with the feeling, offering no resistance.

"King of Gods, let's enjoy the flowers together, Youni." Youni said to him.

Translation: "King of Gods, let's enjoy the flowers together, You Ni." You Ni said to him.

Mi He Er and Mi Li Si Hui Jin watched from the side.

Translation: Mi He Er and Mi Li Si Hui Jin watched from the sidelines.

Xiao Feng slightly nodded and walked side by side with her in the flower field, admiring the beautiful scenery.

Translation: Xiao Feng nodded slightly, walked shoulder‑to‑shoulder with her in the flower field, and admired the beautiful scenery.

Their height difference is just right, their appearances flawless, and to onlookers

they appear as a perfect couple.

We have line 52 and 53 split.

Line 52: Their height difference is just right, their appearances flawless, and to onlookers

Translation: Their height difference is just right, their appearances flawless, and to onlookers

Line 53: they appear as a perfect couple.

Translation: they make a perfect couple.

Thus line 52 translation: Their height difference is just right, their appearances flawless, and to onlookers

Line 53 translation: they make a perfect couple.

In fact, under the influence of the law power, both parties feel this way.

Translation: In fact, both parties under the influence of the law's power feel the same way.

Youni's law is bidirectional: after making others fall into love, she herself also sinks into it, so she hardly needs to use this law against others.

Translation: You Ni's law is bidirectional; after making others fall into a love state, she herself also sinks into it, so she hardly ever uses this law against others.

Now, having fully unleashed her law power, the two instantly become like passionate lovers, freely enjoying themselves in the garden as if no one else were around.

Translation: Now, upon fully activating her law power, the two instantly become like passionate lovers, playing carefree in the garden as if no one else were around.

Youni only has God King cultivation; her law, though special, is merely ordinary in depth.

Translation: You Ni only has God King cultivation; although her law is special, in terms of depth it is actually quite ordinary.

After a few hours, Xiao Feng completely grasped her law, comprehending the mysteries of this emotion-type law.

Translation: After a few hours, Xiao Feng had completely grasped her law, appreciating the subtleties of this emotion-type law.

"That's enough, Youni, thank you for your help." He shook his divine sense, dispelling the law's effect.

Translation: "That's enough, You Ni, thanks for your help." He shook his Divine Sense to dispel the law's effect.

You Ni snapped out of her lovestruck state, gazing at Xiao Feng's clear eyes, showing no sign of being affected, and revealed a deep sense of loss.

Oh.

She replied with a sentence, turned and left, dejected and very lonely.

Xiao Feng slightly shook his head.

He originally wanted to show what he had comprehended, a love law stronger than Yunni's.

But upon second thought, this law has side effects; if she couldn't get out after using it, that would be too embarrassing.

So he dismissed the idea, teleported away on the spot, and went to the Flame God Kingdom.

After Xiao Feng left, Miheer and his wife came to see Yunni.

"Yunni, don't be sad; you have many pursuers—why cling to a King of Gods?" Miheer comforted.

Yunni's eyes reddened, she said aggrievedly: "I don't want that either, but if the love law fails upon activation it backfires. After failing against him so many times, I can't free myself—wuwuwu..."

Miheer

He couldn't help chuckling: "Then use it on someone else once, to offset the backlash with success."

"No way! I won't give up; this hateful male god, I will definitely make him love me!" Yunni clenched her fists, full of fighting spirit.