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Chapter 431: line with translation of chapter title

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Main Text Chapter 432: Ennoblement as Marquis and King 【7 more】

Same as 【2】: Main Text Chapter 432: Ennoblement as Marquis and King 【7 more】

Outside Xiao's residence, Xiao Feng sat on the grass, pondering a question.

Translation: "Outside Xiao Zhai, Xiao Feng sat on the grass, pondering a question."

Outside Xiao Zhai, he sat on the grass, pondering a question. Good.

Fate Main God invited him to join the Divine Kingdom and offered him marquis treatment.

Translation: "Fate Main God invited him to join the Divine Kingdom and offered him marquis treatment."

Same as 【10】: Fate Main God invited him to join the Divine Kingdom and offered him marquis treatment.

What does this marquis title mean?

Translation: "What does this 'marquis' mean?"

Xiao Feng asked He Er Na.

Translation: "He asked He Er Na."

He Er Na sat gracefully beside him, wearing a green dress that trailed on the ground, fiddling with the tea set in her hands, pouring him a cup of hot tea fragrant and fresh, and explained: "Marquis and king are honorary titles of the Upper Gods of Shen Jie, and also symbols of strength. The rulers of the 24 Divine Kingdoms are all Main Gods; below the Main Gods are the various king-level powerhouses, followed by the marquis level; after that are ordinary Upper God generals, responsible for guarding a region."

Let's break:

He Er Na sat gracefully beside him,

wearing a green dress that trailed on the ground,

fiddling with the tea set in her hands,

pouring him a cup of hot tea fragrant and fresh,

She explained: "Marquis and king are honorary titles of the Upper Gods of Shen Jie, and also symbols of strength."

The rulers of the 24 Divine Kingdoms are all Main Gods,

below the Main Gods are the various king-level powerhouses,

followed by the marquis level,

After that are ordinary Upper God generals, responsible for guarding a region.

We need to keep the quotes and punctuation.

Let's produce a single line:

"He Er Na sat gracefully beside him, wearing a green dress that trailed on the ground, fiddling with the tea set in her hands, pouring him a cup of hot tea fragrant and fresh, and explained: 'Marquis and king are honorary titles of the Upper Gods of the Divine Realm, and also symbols of strength. The rulers of the 24 Divine Kingdoms are all Main Gods; below the Main Gods are the various king-level powerhouses, followed by the marquis level. After that are ordinary Upper God generals, responsible for guarding a region.'"

【53】

24 Divine Kingdoms

【57】

Main God

【61】

Upper God generals

【70】

Thus line 6 translation:

"He Er Na sat gracefully beside him, wearing a green dress that trailed on the ground, fiddling with the tea set in her hands, pouring him a cup of hot tea fragrant and fresh, and explained: 'Marquis and king are honorary titles of the Upper Gods of Shen Jie, and also symbols of strength. The rulers of the 24 Divine Kingdoms are all Main Gods; below the Main Gods are the various king-level powerhouses, followed by the marquis level. After that are ordinary Upper God generals, responsible for guarding a region.'"

Check punctuation: we have a colon after explained and then single quotes. Good.

"I'm only a demi-god and you've already made me a marquis; it seems the Fate Main God looks favorably on me." Xiao Feng sniffed the tea aroma and said.

Translation: "\"I'm only a demigod and they gave me a marquis title; it seems Fate Main God thinks highly of me. \" Xiao Feng smelled the tea fragrance and said."

【78】

Thus: "\"I'm only a demigod and they gave me a marquis title; it seems Fate Main God thinks highly of me. \" Xiao Feng smelled the tea fragrance and said."

Xiao Feng smelled the tea fragrance and said.

【83】

Translation: "\"Yes. Master's strength truly matches that of a marquis-level powerhouse; even I am far behind. \" He Er Na flattered him without a trace."

Master, as a marquis-level powerhouse, far behind, flattered him without a trace.

Thus: "\"Yes. Master's strength truly matches that of a marquis-level powerhouse; even I am far behind. \" He Er Na flattered him without a trace."

【90】

Translation: "\"Hmm, then what? \" Xiao Feng leaned close to her chest, sniffed, feeling she smelled better than the tea, and really wanted to take a bite."

Xiao Feng leaned close to her chest, sniffed, feeling she smelled better than the tea, and very much wanted to take a bite.

Thus: "\"Hmm, then what? \" Xiao Feng leaned to her chest, sniffed, feeling she smelled better than the tea, and very much wanted to take a bite."

【97】

Translation: "This rude gesture made He Er Na's face blush slightly; she could only feign composure and continue: 'Mi Sa is a close aide of Fate Main God, already possessing king-level strength. Master's bad attitude drove him away, so this marquis opportunity naturally won't come again. However, with Master's ability, as long as he's willing to join the Divine Kingdom, I think any Main God would not be stingy with the ennoblement.'"

Fate, the Main God, ennobled him as king and marquis in the Divine Kingdom; Master Mi Sa's close aide, with a bad attitude, rejected him, and the ennoblement would not be stingy.

Thus: "This rude gesture made He Er Na's face blush slightly; she could only feign composure and continue: 'Mi Sa is a close aide of Fate Main God, already possessing king-level strength. Master's bad attitude rejected him, so this marquis opportunity naturally won't come again. However, with Master's ability, as long as he's willing to join the Divine Kingdom, I think any Main God would not be stingy with the ennoblement.'"

【102】

"What are the benefits of being ennobled as king and marquis? How does it compare to you establishing your own power?" Xiao Feng asked.

Translation: "\"What are the benefits of being a king and marquis? How does it compare to you building your own power? \" Xiao Feng asked."

【109】

Thus: "\"What are the benefits of being a king and marquis? How does it compare to you building your own power? \" Xiao Feng asked."

Herena shook her head and said: "Someone like me, a small-force lord, the gap compared to kings and marquises is not just a little. Master, you also know, Shen Jie is actually a starry sky, and Divine Kingdoms are the largest tracts of land in that starry sky. Those ennobled as king and marquis can receive a fief in a Divine Kingdom as a reward, far vaster than Zhu Shen Da Lu. And my Wind Spirit Island... actually isn't as broad as your warlord main city jurisdiction."

Translation: "He Er Na shook her head: 'Someone like me, a minor power lord, the gap with nobility is not just a little. Master, you also know, Shen Jie is actually a stretch of starry space, and the Divine Kingdom is the largest expanse of land within that starry space. Those who are ennobled as king and marquis can receive a fief in the Divine Kingdom as a reward, far vaster than Zhu Shen Da Lu. And my Wind Spirit Island... is actually not as extensive as your War Main City's territory.'"

【116】

Thus: "He Er Na shook her head: 'Someone like me, a minor power lord, the gap with nobility is not just a little. Master, you also know, Shen Jie is actually a stretch of starry space, and the Divine Kingdom is the largest expanse of land within that starry space. Those who are ennobled as king and marquis can receive a fief in the Divine Kingdom as a reward, far vaster than Zhu Shen Da Lu. And my Wind Spirit Island... is actually not as extensive as your War Main City's territory.'"

Xiao Feng nodded slightly.

Translation: "Xiao Feng nodded slightly."

【123】

Translation: "After all, the strongest power in Shen Jie is still the 24 Divine Kingdoms."

After all, the strongest power in Shen Jie is still the 24 Divine Kingdoms.

【128】

Translation: "Although there are some top-tier powerhouses who have returned from the Myriad Heavens Battlefield in the Elemental Sea, in terms of influence, this super great alliance of the 24 Divine Kingdoms is undoubtedly the strongest."

The top-tier powerhouses of the Elemental Sea, Myriad Heavens Battlefield, and 24 Divine Kingdoms form a super great alliance.

Thus: "Although there are some top-tier powerhouses who have returned from the Myriad Heavens Battlefield in the Elemental Sea, in terms of influence, this super great alliance of the 24 Divine Kingdoms is undoubtedly the strongest."

【135】

Translation: "Being ennobled as king and marquis already grants a territory as vast as Zhu Shen Da Lu; one can imagine how vast the lands governed by the Main Gods themselves are."

On Zhu Shen Da Lu, the Main God ennobles kings and marquises, granting them territory and lands.

Thus: "Being ennobled as king and marquis already grants a territory as vast as Zhu Shen Da Lu; one can imagine how vast the lands governed by the Main Gods themselves are."

【142】

Translation: "And the Elemental Sea that can contain the 24 Divine Kingdoms is even vaster, boundless!"

The Elemental Sea and the 24 Divine Kingdoms are closely related.

Thus: "And the Elemental Sea that can contain the 24 Divine Kingdoms is even vaster, boundless!"

【149】

Translation: "\"I'll be going to Shen Jie soon too; I don't know what I'll encounter then. \" He said with some anticipation."

Shen Jie

Thus: "\"I'll be going to Shen Jie soon too; I don't know what I'll encounter then. \" He said with some anticipation."

【153】

Information, it can still provide some help to the Master.

We need to combine lines 19 and 20 as they are split. The translation should be for each line individually, but we must keep each line's translation on a single line. So we translate line 19 as is, and line 20 as is.

【165】

Translation: "He Er Na smiled: 'I can serve as Master's guide. Although I haven't been to many places, Wind Spirit Island has gathered many secrets of the Elemental Sea over the years and"

Information, it can still provide some help to the Master

Thus: "He Er Na smiled: 'I can serve as Master's guide. Although I haven't been to many places, Wind Spirit Island has gathered many secrets of the Elemental Sea over the years and"

Information, it can still provide some help to the Master.

Translation: "information; I can still provide Master with some help.'"

We need to keep the closing quote and period.

Thus: "information; I can still provide Master with some help.'"

【176】

We'll keep the single quotes as in original.

"Even if you don't say it, I know; I'll definitely keep you by my side every day, guiding me and serving me." Xiao Feng said with a smile.

Translation: "\"Even if you don't say it, I know; I'll definitely keep you by my side every day, one hand showing me the way, the other serving me. \" Xiao Feng said with a squinting smile."

【183】

Thus: "\"Even if you don't say it, I know; I'll definitely keep you by my side every day, one hand showing me the way, the other serving me. \" Xiao Feng said with a squinting smile."

"Master!"

Translation: "\"Master! \"" (just that)

【191】

Translation: "He Er Na's face flushed; upon hearing the two words 'serve', she knew it wasn't anything proper."

We need to keep quotes around the two words. So: "He Er Na's face flushed; upon hearing the two words 'serve', she knew it wasn't anything proper."

"After going to Shen Jie, may I change my way of addressing you, Master?" She suddenly thought of something and asked.

Translation: "\"After going to Shen Jie... may I change my title for Master? \" She suddenly thought of something and asked."

【198】

Thus: "\"After going to Shen Jie... may I change my title for Master? \" She suddenly thought of something and asked."

"What, are you afraid of running into acquaintances and losing face?" Xiao Feng guessed her concern.

Translation: "\"What, are you afraid of running into acquaintances and losing face? \" Xiao Feng guessed her concern."

【204】

Translation: "\"Hmm. \" He Er Na nodded."

"Sure, then you can call me husband, or lord, or whatever; I don't mind." Xiao Feng laughed.

Translation: "Xiao Feng laughed: 'Sure, then you can call me husband, or lord, or whatever; I have no objection.'"

【211】

Thus: "Xiao Feng laughed: 'Sure, then you can call me husband, or lord, or whatever; I have no objection.'"

"Master!" Herena glared at him, her face flushing, then resignedly said: "Forget it, just let it be known. Master is so impressive, they'll understand, maybe even envy me."

Translation: "\"Master! \" He Er Na gave him an angry look, her face flushing red, then helplessly said: 'Forget it, just let it be known. Master is so impressive; they'll understand, maybe even envy me.'"

We need to keep quotes.

Thus: "\"Master! \" He Er Na gave him an angry look, her face flushing red, then helplessly said: 'Forget it, just let it be known. Master is so impressive; they'll understand, maybe even envy me.'"

【225】

Translation: "Xiao Feng: ……"

We need to keep the ellipsis as is.

Thus: "Xiao Feng: ……"

This is purely just overthinking.

Translation: "This is purely overthinking on his part."

【231】

Translation: "Nowadays, who would envy someone being a contract slave?"

She, too, is deeply affected by the contract, her heart now completely only has him as her Master.

Translation: "She, too, is deeply influenced by the contract, her heart now completely occupied only by him as her master."

【237】

Translation: "But this is also quite good."

A goddess who is noble and elegant, cold and ruthless outside, yet by my side she is tranquil as water, obedient and compliant.

Translation: "A goddess who is noble and elegant, cold and ruthless outwardly, yet by my side she is tranquil as water, obedient and compliant."

【242】

This experience... tsk tsk!

Translation: "This experience…… tsk tsk!"

We need to keep the ellipsis and the sound.

Thus: "This experience…… tsk tsk!"

【252】

Translation: "Men all understand!"

"Father God Mother God~ I also want to drink tea!"

Translation: "\"Father God Mother God~ I also want to drink tea! \""

【258】

"Father God Mother God~ I also want to drink tea!"

【262】

Translation: "A girl with golden hair and a white dress ran out of the bamboo grove, happily coming to the two of them."

The worries from just being beaten have already vanished.

Translation: "The worries from just being beaten have already vanished like smoke."

【268】

Translation: "\"Want to drink? Do it yourself. \" He Er Na saw her daughter and immediately put on a stern face."

Denice constantly calling Xiao Feng 'Father God' leaves her with no recourse.

Translation: "Regarding Dai Ni Si's constant address of 'Father God' to Xiao Feng, she already had no way to deal with it."

【273】

Teaching him a lesson again is useless; it might only provoke Xiao Feng's displeasure, and she might end up being lectured instead.

Translation: "Disciplining her again would be useless; it might instead provoke Xiao Feng's displeasure, and she would end up being disciplined herself."

【279】

Translation: "She could only put on a facial expression to convey her opinion of her daughter."

"If you're coming, then come!"

Translation: "\"If you want to do it yourself, then do it yourself! \""

【285】

Translation: "Dai Ni Si immediately got to work, brewing herself a cup of tea."

Then she asked: "Father God Mother God, what were you just talking about? Tell me too!"

Translation: "Then she asked: 'Father God Mother God, what were you just talking about? Tell me too!'"

【292】

Thus: "Then she asked: 'Father God Mother God, what were you just talking about? Tell me too!'"

"Little kid, just stay over there!" Herena gave her a direct eye-roll.

Translation: "\"Little kid, just stay over there! \" He Er Na directly gave her a white eye."

"Uw~ Father God, look, Mother God is being mean to me~"

Translation: "\"Wuu~ Father God, look, Mother God is being mean to me~\""

We need to keep the tildes and quotes.

Thus: "\"Wuu~ Father God, look, Mother God is being mean to me~\""

【49】 「

"You! Is your butt itchy?" Herena raised her hand, ready to hit her.

Line 49: 「 (just an opening quote). It contains only an opening Chinese quotation mark 「. No other text. So translation: "\""

But we need to output a translation for line 49. The line is just an opening quote. Should we translate as an opening double quote? In English we would use an opening double quote ". So line 49 translation: "\""

But we need to keep it as a single line. So output: 【49】 "

But we need to include the prefix 【49】 then a space then the translation. The translation is just a double quote. So: 【49】 "

But we need to ensure we don't add extra spaces after? The format: 【N】 translation. So we will output "【49】 \""? Actually we need a space after the number and then the translation. So "【49】 \"" would be number, space, then a double quote. That's fine.

"You! Is your butt itchy?" Herena raised her hand, ready to hit her.

Translation: "\"You! Is your butt itchy? \" He Er Na raised her hand, ready to hit her."

We need to keep the exclamation and question mark inside quotes.

Thus: "\"You! Is your butt itchy? \" He Er Na raised her hand, ready to hit her."

「

"You! Is your butt itchy?" Herena raised her hand, ready to hit her.

So line 49 is just an opening quote maybe part of dialogue. It contains no text besides an opening quote? Actually it's a line with just an opening Chinese quotation mark 「. That's not a named entity. We'll ignore.

"You! Is your butt itchy?"

Denice

Line 52: none.

Line 53: none.

Master

Master

Mother Goddess

Line 57: none.

Line 58: none.

Line 59: none.

Mother Goddess Denice

Thus our list is complete.

Now we need to output translations for each line 【1】-【60】.

We must translate faithfully, not add or omit. Use glossary names exactly as provided for those terms. For other terms we translate naturally.

We must keep each translation on a single line after 【N】 prefix.

We must not add any extra commentary.

Let's translate each line.

We'll need to render Chinese to English.

We'll need to keep numbers etc.

Let's go line by line.

Denice quickly hid behind Xiao Feng, poked her head out, and made a teasing face: "Hehehe~"

Translation: "Dai Ni Si quickly hid behind Xiao Feng, showing only her head, then made a face: 'Hehehe~'"

Hehehe~

Thus: "Dai Ni Si quickly hid behind Xiao Feng, showing only her head, then made a face: 'Hehehe~'"

He embodied the four words 'arrogant and fearless' to the fullest.

Translation: "She embodied the four words 'reckless and fearless' to the fullest."

We need to keep quotes around the four words.

Thus: "She embodied the four words 'reckless and fearless' to the fullest."

Herena was so angry her teeth itched, yet she couldn't ignore Xiao Feng.

Translation: "He Er Na was so angry her teeth itched, yet she couldn't ignore Xiao Feng."

Then she whispered: "Master, may I discipline the child? It won't be too harsh, right?"

Translation: "So she whispered: \"Master, may I discipline the child? You don't mind, do you? It won't be too harsh……\""

We need to keep the ellipsis.

Thus: "So she whispered: \"Master, may I discipline the child? You don't mind, do you? It won't be too harsh……\""

"Sure, go ahead and hit her, then I'll hit you." Xiao Feng smiled slightly, wearing a crafty veteran expression.

Translation: "\"Hmm, okay, you hit her, then I'll hit you. \" Xiao Feng gave a slight smile, a look of old slyness."

old slyness

Thus: "\"Hmm, okay, you hit her, then I'll hit you. \" Xiao Feng gave a slight smile, a look of old slyness."

"Hehe~ Mother Goddess, are you scared?" Denice thought she had gained protection, becoming even more smug.

Translation: "\"Hehehe~ Mother Goddess is scared, right? \" Dai Ni Si thought she had gained protection, becoming even more smug."

Mother Goddess

Thus: "\"Hehehe~ Mother Goddess is scared, right? \" Dai Ni Si thought she had gained protection, becoming even more smug."

Unexpectedly, Herena actually gave it serious thought.

Translation: "Unexpectedly, He Er Na actually gave it serious thought."

Then she nodded and said: "This... seems okay too."

Translation: "Then she nodded and said: 'This…… seems okay as well.'"

We need to keep ellipsis.

Thus: "Then she nodded and said: 'This…… seems okay as well.'"

Then she grabbed Denice and hurried straight home.

Translation: "Then she grabbed Dai Ni Si and hurried straight home."

"Wait! Mother Goddess, what are you doing?" The young Dai Ni Si was stunned, never expecting things to turn out like this; the Mother Goddess actually would rather take a beating than discipline her!

"Father God save me, Father God save me~"

She was forcibly dragged away, unable to resist, and could only cry out for help.

Unfortunately, it was useless.

Even the Father God she called upon wanted to join in educating her!

However, she felt the timing wasn't right yet, so she merely endured it!

"Let's see what we gained from this battle..."

Xiao Feng muttered to himself.

From upstairs came the pitiful pleas of an NPC girl; he sipped his tea contentedly, opened his backpack, and checked the gains of the Soul City party.

The Time Divine Envoy Xi'er was far wealthier than the Destruction Divine Envoy Lai Te.

After her death, she dropped a full seven divine artifacts!

Adding the five divine artifacts dropped by the Destruction Divine Envoy makes a total of twelve.

Only three of them were low-grade; the rest were high-quality.

Four were medium-grade, three high-grade, and two super-grade.

These items are worth a fortune!

Besides the divine artifacts, the Time Divine Envoy also dropped a skill book titled 【Time Shield】, a Divine Punishment-level defensive skill.

This was Xiao Feng's first encounter with a Divine Punishment-level defense; he found it quite novel.

He happened to be able to learn it, so he immediately did so!

【Time Shield】: Immune to instant-death effects, and distributes damage taken in the next 5 seconds over the following 500 seconds; this effect ignores any attack special effects, cooldown 3 days.

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