Chapter 469: and translation of chapter title

【11】

【1】 "Stop it!"

But we need to decide whether to include the Chinese quotes. I'd use English double quotes.

Proceed similarly for other lines with quoted speech.

Let's translate each.

Ba Liao Wang charged forward wildly, the power of the supreme god's peak erupting completely; his might was extraordinary, as if heaven and earth were shaking, intent on breaking Xiao Feng with a single strike.

Now translate the rest: "charged forward violently, the power of the Upper God peak erupted completely, momentum extraordinary, as if heaven and earth were shaking, aiming to strike Xiao Feng down with a single blow."

We need to keep meaning, not add. Let's produce a concise translation: "Ba Liao Wang charged forward violently; the power of the Upper God peak erupted completely, his momentum extraordinary, as if heaven and earth shook, aiming to strike Xiao Feng down with a single blow."

Check if we omitted anything: "his momentum was extraordinary", "as if heaven and earth were shaking", "aiming to strike Xiao Feng down with a single blow".

【23】

"Don't even think about it!"

He Er Na stood in front of Xiao Feng, and the Main Divine Artifact automatically erupted a stream of scarlet divine power, forming a barrier.

【26】

Bang!

【29】

Ba Liao Wang struck with a single punch; she didn't move a muscle.

【33】

The defense of this Main Divine Artifact is too strong; it cannot be broken by just a single punch.

If Ba Liao Wang were in his prime state, not affected by the Frenzy effect, perhaps he still had a chance to shake it. But now his own movements cannot be fully free; even his full ability cannot be exerted at fifty percent.

If Ba Liao Wang were in his prime state, not affected by the Frenzy effect, perhaps he still had a chance to shake it. But now his own movements cannot be fully free; even his full ability cannot be exerted at fifty percent.

We need to keep Frenzy as translated? We'll translate as Frenzy. No quotes.

【39】

In the instant of that punch, a large amount of fire rained down.

"In the time of just that punch, a large amount of fire fell down." So: "In the time it took for that punch, a large amount of fire fell down."

【45】

The War God Nation's divine attendants around them were mentally chaotic, unable to dodge, screaming miserably.

In just two seconds, several god‑level powerhouses were instantly killed.

"In just 2 seconds, several god-level powerhouses were instantly killed." So: "In just 2 seconds, several god-level powerhouses were instantly killed."

【51】

Xiao Feng took three kinds of buff divine pills; his divine essence power and critical damage increased greatly, and he also wielded the Sword of Civilization, his strength reaching a terribly formidable level.

Under these circumstances, the power of the Ten Thousand Times amplified Divine Punishment skill can be imagined!

Under these circumstances, the power of the Ten Thousand Times amplified Divine Punishment skill can be imagined!

【57】

"His divine essence power was continuously drawn out, transformed into world-destroying power." So: "His divine essence power was continuously drawn out, transformed into world-destroying power."

3 seconds, 4 seconds…

We keep numbers: "3 seconds, 4 seconds..." So: "3 seconds, 4 seconds..."

【61】

Your Highness...

【63】

The flames were like an ancient giant beast, opening its bloody maw to devour everything around.

"Flames were like an ancient giant beast, opening its bloody maw to devour everything around." So: "The flames were like an ancient giant beast, opening its bloody maw to devour everything around."

【69】

"Ba Liao Wang still had some strength left to dodge, but others did not have that ability." So: "Ba Liao Wang still had some strength left to dodge, but others did not have that ability."

Under the bombardment of heavenly fire, these divine attendants fell one after another, turning to ashes in the blaze, leaving only radiant divine sigils and a few relics.

Under the bombardment of heavenly fire, these divine attendants fell one after another, turning to ashes in the blaze, leaving only radiant divine sigils and a few relics.

【75】

"They thought this would be a one-sided battle; with so many powerhouses on their side, even facing the Main Divine Artifact, they could easily win." So: "They thought this would be a one-sided battle; with so many powerhouses on their side, even facing the Main Divine Artifact, they could easily win."

But I never expected the opponent to be this terrifying, going all out with a big move right from the start, catching me off guard.

"But they never expected the opponent to be so terrifying, right from the start going all out with a ultimate move, catching them off guard." So: "But they never expected the opponent to be so terrifying, right from the start going all out with an ultimate move, catching them off guard."

【81】

"A one-sided battle is a one-sided battle, but it's them who are falling!" So: "A one-sided battle is a one-sided battle, but it's them who are falling!"

Damn it!

【85】

"Ba Liao Wang finally broke free from the Frenzy state." So: "Ba Liao Wang finally broke free from the Frenzy state."

Seeing that more than half of his subordinates had died under Xiao Feng's heavenly fire, with the rest severely wounded, his heart filled with both anxiety and anger.

"Seeing that his subordinates had already died more than half under Xiao Feng's heavenly fire, the rest also heavily wounded, his heart filled with anxiety and anger." So: "Seeing that his subordinates had already died more than half under Xiao Feng's heavenly fire, the rest also heavily wounded, his heart filled with anxiety and anger."

【89】

He let out a low shout, a dazzling golden light flaring from his body; the falling flames struck him but caused no damage.

"He let out a low shout, a dazzling golden light flared on his body; the falling flames struck him but caused no damage." So: "He let out a low shout, a dazzling golden light flared on his body; the falling flames struck him but caused no damage."

【95】

"It then turned into a golden cannonball that shot toward him." So: "It then turned into a golden cannonball that shot toward him."

Ba Liao Wang is an existence that has lived for nearly ten thousand years, older even than the War God.

"Ba Liao Wang is an existence that has lived for nearly ten thousand years, older than the War God." So: "Ba Liao Wang is an existence that has lived for nearly ten thousand years, older than the War God."

【101】

"His combat instinct is extremely strong; he has fought in the elemental seas, guarded the War Capital, having experienced countless battles." So: "His combat instinct is extremely strong; he has fought in the elemental seas, guarded the War Capital, having experienced countless battles."

Faced with Xiao Feng's tendency to open with a big move, he was not without experience, understanding that as long as he interrupted him, the rest would be simple.

"Facing Xiao Feng's situation of opening with a ultimate move, he is not without experience; he understands that as long as he interrupts him, the rest becomes simple." So: "Facing Xiao Feng's situation of opening with an ultimate move, he is not without experience; he understands that as long as he interrupts him, the rest becomes simple."

【107】

"However, when he rushed forward to stop Xiao Feng, He Er Na steadily blocked his path." So: "However, when he rushed forward to stop Xiao Feng, He Er Na steadily blocked his path."

Looking for death?

【110】

Ba Liao Wang Wu Mu

Ba Liao Wang Wu Mu shouted coldly, both hands clenched fists, golden light burst forth, a pair of gauntlets appeared, taking the form of a bull's horns and launching an impact.

【116】

"Looks like a simple motion, but it's actually a signature skill honed through a hundred battles." So: "Looks like a simple motion, but it's actually a signature skill honed through a hundred battles."

This impact was no less than the power of Divine Punishment!

"This impact is not inferior to the power of Divine Punishment!" So: "This impact is not inferior to the power of Divine Punishment!"

【120】

He Er Na, to protect Xiao Feng, dared not dodge, and unleashed the Main Divine Artifact power within the Blood Prison Armor, forcefully blocking.

"He Er Na, to protect Xiao Feng, dared not dodge, activating the Main Divine Artifact power within the Blood Prison Armor, forcibly blocking." So: "He Er Na, to protect Xiao Feng, dared not dodge, activating the Main Divine Artifact power within the Blood Prison Armor, forcibly blocking."

【126】

"A huge bang, her body was knocked back over ten meters, nearly knocking Xiao Feng over as well." So: "A huge bang, her body was knocked back over ten meters, nearly knocking Xiao Feng over as well."

The overwhelming force, acting through the Main Divine Artifact's defense, inflicted over 100 million damage on her.

The overwhelming force, acting through the Main Divine Artifact's defense, inflicted over 100 million damage on her.

【132】

"She herself is not good at defense; if not for the Main Divine Artifact protecting her body, and also recently having obtained the Eternal Heart Armor adding an inner layer of protection, this blow would have likely caused severe injury." So: "She herself is not good at defense; if not for the Main Divine Artifact protecting her body, and also recently having obtained the Eternal Heart Armor adding an inner layer of protection, this blow would have likely caused severe injury."

He Er Na knew she couldn't just defend; she then flung the Time Hua Lun from her hand.

He Er Na knew she couldn't just defend; she then flung the Time Hua Lun from her hand.

【137】

The Superior-grade Divine Artifact turned into an afterimage, disappearing, appearing behind Ba Liao Wang Wu Mu, spinning and shooting.

【139】

The Time Hua Lun moved swiftly, slashing in a burst and releasing a massive divine power impact.

"Time Hua Lun is very fast; in a burst of cutting, it released a massive divine power impact." So: "Time Hua Lun is very fast; in a burst of cutting, it released a massive divine power impact."

【145】

"The artifact's special effect begins to take effect; damage accumulates, and will erupt after 5 seconds." So: "The artifact's special effect begins to take effect; damage accumulates, and will erupt after 5 seconds."

Time Rules?

【149】

"Feeling the delayed damage effect from the Time Hua Lun, Ba Liao Wang Wu Mu snorted coldly, his golden light surged again, mobilizing all the divine power of a top-tier Upper God." So: "Feeling the delayed damage effect from the Time Hua Lun, Ba Liao Wang Wu Mu snorted coldly, his golden light surged again, mobilizing all the divine power of a top-tier Upper God."

Golden barriers surged from all directions, layer upon layer like dragon scales.

"Golden barriers emerged from all directions, layer upon layer like dragon scales." So: "Golden barriers emerged from all directions, layer upon layer like dragon scales."

【155】

"The flames of the apocalyptic heavenly disaster bombardment struck the golden scales, yet were also blocked." So: "The flames of the apocalyptic heavenly disaster bombardment struck the golden scales, yet were also blocked."

But this is not a defensive skill; it's an offensive skill!

"But this is not a defensive skill, but an offensive skill!" So: "But this is not a defensive skill, but an offensive skill!"

【159】

He let out a low shout, the golden scales rapidly contracting into a massive palm covered in scales.

"He let out a low shout, the golden scales rapidly contracted, forming a huge palm covered in scales." So: "He let out a low shout, the golden scales rapidly contracted, forming a huge palm covered in scales."

【165】

"This palm is hundreds of meters in size, directly enveloping Xiao Feng and He Er Na, quickly tightening." So: "This palm is hundreds of meters in size, directly enveloping Xiao Feng and He Er Na, quickly tightening."

The huge palm brought terrifying pressure; Xiao Feng, maintaining the apocalyptic heavenly disaster, could not move widely, only feeling his scalp go numb, as if being grabbed to

Afterwards, he would immediately lose his life as if.

【170】

This line continues: "afterwards, he would immediately lose his life as if."

He Er Na's perception became clearer; she knew this was a method that transcended divine punishment, which could be called a Secret Art, and only a few people in the Shen Jie have mastered it.

Such a domineering blow—if it lands solidly, even if you don't die you'll be seriously injured!

She reacted quickly, retreating to Xiao Feng's side, crossing her hands, mobilizing all her divine power, and unleashing her strongest skill.

«Splitting Void Annihilation! »

A massive surge of divine origin burst forth, forming a cyan, ring‑shaped blade that crossed diagonally and spread outward in all directions, instantly colliding with the golden great hand.

Sizzle!

Wind‑system divine power clashed with war power, producing a piercing sound.

The two divine forces pressed against each other, neither yielding.

«Mmm…»

Blood trickled from He Er Na's mouth corner, a -150 million damage appeared above her head—clearly she was losing in the divine power clash.

Yet her Divine Punishment skill held firm, stubbornly blocking Flame King Wumu's great hand.

Rumble—

In the final second the flames fell, and the surrounding 30‑kilometer radius was already a wasteland.

Xiao Feng's skill was no mere decoration; his mighty Divine Punishment barrage bombarded relentlessly, likewise causing great trouble for the Flame King, the golden hand shaking nonstop from the explosions.

He dared not interrupt the defense of his Battle Spirit Armor, or else he would be instantly devoured by the flames.

Maintaining this powerful defensive skill also consumes a large amount of divine power.

Facing two opponents alone, the golden Secret Art Hand quickly shattered, boundless divine power exploding into a storm that swept the surroundings.

At the same time, the second stage of the Doomsday Heavenly Disaster also began.

It sounds slow, but in fact only a little over ten seconds have passed since the battle began.

The flames had just subsided when an endless hurricane suddenly rose.

It covered the same area, but this time the force was all‑pervasive, impossible to hide from!

The hurricane howled, striking the Battle Spirit Armor and emitting a tinkling clatter.

The Flame King's face darkened as he flashed forward, again trying to interrupt Xiao Feng.

But he could not break through He Er Na's defense.

The other Upper Gods who had come with him had already been wiped out by Xiao Feng's Divine Punishment; now he had no allies.

He Er Na's Eternal Age Wheel also kept assaulting him; seeing the stacked five‑second attack about to erupt, he gritted his teeth, feinted a move, and repelled He Er Na.

Then suddenly he changed direction, turning into a golden light and fleeing into the distance.

(End of chapter)