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Chapter 104: Writing Casually Doesn

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Because I couldn’t resist playing games as soon as I turned on the computer, the first two hundred thousand characters were typed on my phone.

Today I finally found time to read the comments.

First, thank you to all readers who’ve supported me—may you all have a smooth new year, get rich every day, earn promotions and raises, and marry your boss.

I’ll briefly answer a few questions.

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When Roger was executed, the protagonist cried—I never expected anyone would criticize that.

A captain who helped you in your most helpless moment, sailed with you for five years, and then lived in seclusion with you for another year after the crew disbanded.

Six years. Exactly six years.

Even a dog would have feelings.

Some asked me to change the scene where the protagonist cries—I’m sorry, but if you don’t like it, I can’t change it.

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Some readers think the protagonist’s battle with Akainu felt weak—that’s my writing issue; I’ve clearly marked the battle lasted a full day and night.

A seventeen-year-old fighting someone in his thirties is inherently at a disadvantage; I’ll arrange another fight between the protagonist and Akainu soon, and this time he’ll crush him decisively.

A Shuangwen won’t let you feel frustrated.

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About the issue of the protagonist giving away a girl.

Please.

Shi Daila—the protagonist didn’t even know her before; you can’t just go up to every woman and try to seduce her.

Trafalgar Law and Shi Daila are souls who saved each other, so I gave them a happy ending.

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About the issue of “pushing girls.”

My previous highest-earning book had very borderline content—I got locked in the black room over a dozen times, and even after it ended over a year ago, I still got locked up several more times.

So now I’m being extremely careful.

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Those who think Big Bear is a cuckold bear—I won’t comment; if you think so, then fine.

Wishing you good morning, good afternoon, and good night.

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Regarding the crew’s address issue: Mihawk and Big Bear will no longer be called Mi Sang and Xiong Sang.

Tenghu will only be called Tenghu from now on; Yixiao is an old translation; Yisheng is the official name, but I didn’t consider reader acceptance—that’s my mistake.

Going forward, he’ll be uniformly called Tenghu.

As for why the Marines know to call him Tenghu, there was a conversation between the protagonist and Aokiji—it was the protagonist’s little joke.

“Mihawk is vice-captain; Tenghu Yisheng is a full crew member.”

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Also, those who think this is AI-written!

I’ll take it as a compliment on my writing.

If this were AI-written, the pacing wouldn’t be this fast—an AI could stretch this chapter into three or four chapters, and it wouldn’t have typos either.

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About the protagonist’s height: by the time he’s an adult, he’ll definitely grow to three meters tall; someone commented I must be short in real life.

Fuck.

Please don’t make personal attacks.

The protagonist is set at three meters because the female lead is 2.63 meters—this is a perfectly matched height ratio, and it was planned in the outline from the start.

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Venting all this really made me feel better; for even more malicious comments, I bought a table last year.

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Thank you, readers, for your continued support—because of you, even a lazy person like me can consistently update over six thousand words a day.

I won a physical annual pass for Yangxizi in a writer group draw—it should arrive by month’s end, and I’ll figure out a way to randomly gift it to a lucky reader by picking a lucky number.

Thank you for your support!

Rating +0.1 adds one extra chapter on top of the guaranteed three—this offer is permanent.

I’ll keep working hard on updates.

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