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Chapter 200

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Cultivating the fleshly body's bloodline, if one wishes to make progress, the needed blood and qi are not small; even maintaining daily consumption requires a considerable amount.

, 【5】, 【7】, 【10】, 【12】, 【13】, 【14】, 【18】, 【22】, 【26】, 【30】, 【31】, 【38】, 【45】, 【47】, 【62】, 【69】, 【72】, 【75】, 【77】, 【78】, 【81】, 【86】, 【89】, 【92】, 【95】, 【99】, 【100】, 【105】, 【108】, 【112】, 【113】, 【118】, 【123】, 【128】, 【133】, 【137】, 【138】, 【142】, 【143】, 【145】, 【146】, 【151】, 【156】, 【161】, 【166】, 【170】, 【171】, 【176】, 【181】, 【186】, 【189】, 【193】, 【194】, 【199】, 【204】, 【209】, 【214】, 【218】, 【219】, 【224】, 【229】, 【232】, 【237】, 【242】, 【247】, 【252】, 【257】, 【262】, 【267】, 【271】, 【272】, 【277】, 【282】, 【287】, 【289】, 【292】, 【296】, 【297】, 【301】.

After creating a race, we cannot let them rely entirely on the Holy Temple for sustenance; if their food consumption is similar to ours, it would still be fine as long as their numbers are not large.

: "【5】 Zhu Jiuyin"

If their numbers grow, they will eventually end up opposed to the Wilderness.

: "【7】 Twelve Wu Gods"

As long as the tribe lives well, what is there to fear about opposition? I don't believe they can contend with us.

After all, we created the races relying on the Holy Temple; rather than saying we created them, it is more accurate to say they are all descendants of the Father God, our brothers and sisters.

: "【10】 the Wilderness"

It is merely a struggle; I fear nothing. Moreover, cultivating the physical body, bloodline, and the power of laws, our progress will surely be much faster than theirs; as long as we endure, victory will surely be ours.

: "【12】 Zhurong"

: "【13】 Fuxi, Nüwa"

: "【14】 Taiyi"

However, in terms of cultivation time, we have far less than they do; if we were to contend, with the twelve of us present, how could we fear him?

Gonggong may not like Zhurong, but he fully agrees with Zhurong's earlier remarks; he is even more radical, saying, "The Wilderness was opened up by the Father God; as descendants of the Father God, this heaven and earth ought rightfully to belong to us."

As for those living beings, we have never owed them anything; although they have long occupied the Wilderness, what relation does the Wilderness have to them?

: "【18】 Shebi Shi"

Previously they regarded the races they had created as equal to the myriad beings of the Wilderness, but if we follow Zhurong and Gonggong's words, the situation is completely different now.

The existing Wilderness beings, in the eyes of all the Wu Gods, have shifted from being fellow kin to becoming enemies who occupy the living space that rightfully belongs to them.

: none.

: "【22】 Di Jiang"

Everyone exchanged a glance, reached a consensus, and all nodded in agreement to establish the race.

The Wilderness was created by the Father God; as his descendants, we inherently possess the right to this heaven and earth; even if we do not contend, it is merely because we do not wish to.

It is not because we fear opposition from the myriad beings that we must consider the threat they pose when creating a race.

: "【26】 Hou Tu"

We all call ourselves Wu Gods; the race we create should then be called Wu.

Having no objections, they followed Di Jiang as he led the way to their birthplace.

After passing layer upon layer of obstacles and formations that blocked them, the twelve arrived beneath a cliff and began to dance wildly.

: "【30】 Mount Buzhou"

: "【31】 Pangu"

Until the people seemed to sense something, the strange movements gradually ceased, and a narrow crack appeared in the cliff face as it vibrated.

Only after the cliff's vibrations ceased did they gradually walk into the crack.

Upon entering on foot, they discovered that inside lay another world—a long staircase that gradually descended from the opening into the cliff.

Led by Di Jiang, the twelve descended step by step; after they brought everyone inside and disappeared, the fissure in the cliff wall also vanished.

From the outside, it appeared unchanged, as if what had just happened had never existed, leaving no trace.

In the darkness, they walked for an unknown length of time before a light appeared, and suddenly their vision opened up.

: "【38】 Pangu's majestic pressure"

These white jade pieces formed an ancient-style hall, sparsely decorated and unobstructed, its interior plainly visible.

Above the hall hung only a plaque, bearing two divine sigils that displayed the inscription—Pangu.

The hall interior was vast and empty, except for a blood pool at its center, radiating red divine light.

The blood in the pool resembled scarlet jade, boiling and churning, yet showed nothing uncanny, only evoking a sense of sacred extraordinariness.

The twelve Wu Gods gazed silently at this scene; they all had emerged from this blood pool, and since birth they have possessed robust physiques and been accompanied by the power of laws.

It is a pity that after they left, they never returned, and even among themselves they seldom gathered.

: "【45】 Pangu Palace"

They all looked at each other, then immediately knelt together and bowed, saying:

: list: Di Jiang, Rushou, Jumang, Gonggong, Zhurong, Hou Tu, Tianwu, Xuanming, Qiangliang, Shebi Shi, Xizi, Zhu Jiuyin.

We deeply feel that the Father God's descendants are few; today we have come specially to pay our respects, wishing to take ourselves as the root, to create the Wu Clan, as a legacy of the Father God's descendants, to spread his majesty.

We do not know whether the Father God agrees, nor how we ought to proceed.

Di Jiang and the others spoke in unison, and as their words faded, a supreme will seemed to descend from the void.

Pangu's aura permeated the air, unchanged from before, yet Di Jiang and the others felt as if they had received a response, becoming exceedingly excited and speaking together:

We will surely remember our mission and pledge, spread the Father God's majesty, and let the beings of the Wilderness know his greatness.

Having spoken, the twelve Wu Gods simultaneously slit their wrists, from which flowed essence blood similar to that in the blood pool—like scarlet jade—dropping into the pool.

The previously full blood pool instantly boiled violently, red light shooting forth, emanating the breath of life, and began to permeate the Pangu Hall.

Within the churning blood pool, the essence blood that had fallen in seemed to come alive, rapidly evolving until individual silhouettes formed within it.

These silhouettes slowly walked out of the blood pool, tall and mighty, emanating an aura similar to that of the twelve Wu Gods.

They originated from different essence blood, following a similar Wu God aura, and naturally took their places behind the twelve Wu Gods.

From then on, each Wu God had behind them roughly a thousand Wu Clan members, half male and half female, with no single-sex individuals.

Among them, a few had an aura far stronger than the others who emerged from the blood pool. Seeing this, Di Jiang immediately laughed and said:

Now that the Wu Clan has manifested in the world, you and I are no longer the twelve Wu Gods; from now on we shall be the twelve ancestral Wu, the twelve ancestral Wu of the Wu Clan!

The remaining eleven Wu gods, upon seeing the Wu Clan manifest in the world, likewise wore smiles; Earth Mother even said: "From now on I will be the ancestral Wu god of the Earth Mother tribe, Earth Mother—what sort of Wu god is this? It's fine not to take it."

translation: "While the ancestral witches were chatting and laughing, they also noticed that several individuals had an aura far stronger than others." Good.

Interpretation: Among the ancestral witches, while chatting and laughing, they also noticed that a few people had a much stronger aura compared to others.

: Actually the line 【66】 is the explanation? Wait the prompt after 【62】 includes a block of text that seems to be instructions for translation? Let's re-read the prompt after 【62】:

Make concise but keep all info.

translation: "Although they did not know why this difference existed, they still summoned those few individuals, gave them names, and made them stand out from the rest." Good.

Translation: "Although they did not know why such a difference existed, they still called those few out, gave them names, making them distinct from the rest."

translation: "They were respectively:" Good.

Translation: "They were respectively:"

translation: "the Dijiang tribe, Chiyou" Good.

translation: "the Dijiang tribe, Chiyou" Good.

translation: "the Gonggong tribe, Xiangliu" Good.

"the Gonggong tribe, Xiangliu." Keep Xiangliu pinyin.

translation: "the Xuanning tribe, the Rain Master" Good.

:

translation: "Thus line 64: "the Dijiang tribe, Chiyou". line 65: "the Gonggong tribe, Xiangliu". line 66: "the Xuanning tribe, the Rain Master"." Ensure quotes inside? We have double quotes inside the line; that's okay.

translation: "the Hou Tu tribe, Kuafu and Dayi" Good.

"the Houtu tribe, Kuafu, Dayi." Need to keep Kuafu and Dayi as pinyin names. So: "the Houtu tribe, Kuafu, Dayi".

translation: "the Tianwu tribe: Feng Bo" Good.

"the Tianwu tribe: Fengbo." Fengbo is "Wind Earl". Could translate as "the Wind Earl". But Fengbo is a deity name; could keep pinyin. I'd translate meaning: "the Wind Earl". However the instruction says for personal names we keep pinyin; for titles we translate. Fengbo is a title (Wind Earl). So translate: "the Tianwu tribe, the Wind Earl". Use colon? Original uses fullwidth colon. We'll keep colon or replace with comma? We should keep meaning but punctuation can be adjusted? The instruction: keep each translation on a single line; we can keep punctuation similar but not required. I'll use comma for consistency. So: "the Tianwu tribe, the Wind Earl".

translation: "the Xuanning tribe: Nine Phoenixes" Good.

"the Xuanning tribe, the Nine Phoenixes." Jiufeng is "Nine Phoenix". Could translate as "the Nine Phoenix". So: "the Xuanning tribe, the Nine Phoenix".

translation: "These seven individuals, among the Wu Clan created by the twelve ancestral witches, had the strongest aura, far surpassing others, and were currently the only witches who had been given names." Good.

Translation: "These seven individuals, among the Wu Clan created by the twelve ancestral witches, possessed the strongest aura, far surpassing others, and were currently the only witches who had been given names."

translation: same as 【95】 but okay.

translation: "Having seen that all the planned matters were completed, the twelve ancestral witches no longer lingered; after the tribespeople finished sacrificing to the Father God, they led the group away to seek a suitable territory for their tribe's survival." Good.

Translation: "Seeing that the planned matters were all completed, the twelve ancestral witches did not linger any longer; after letting the clansmen finish sacrificing to the Father God, they led the group away to seek a suitable territory for their tribe's survival."

Need to keep "Father God" maybe translate as "Father God". Could be "the Father God". Keep as is.

translation: They simply did not know that, after the birth of these witches, the originally overflowing blood pool seemed to have decreased slightly, although the change was extremely minute.

Translation: "However, they did not realize that after giving birth to these witches, the originally overflowing blood pool seemed to have decreased slightly, although the change was extremely minute."

translation: Moreover, they were born too late and had never interacted with the outside world, so they were unaware that the previous race which, by its own power, stood opposed to all beings of the Wilderness was called the Ferocious Beasts.

Translation: "Moreover, they were born too late and had never interacted with the outside world, so they were unaware that the previous race which, by its own power, stood opposed to all beings of the Wilderness was called the Ferocious Beasts."

translation: "Moreover, they were born too late and had never interacted with the outside world, so they were unaware that the previous race which, by its own power, stood opposed to all beings of the Wilderness was called the Ferocious Beasts." Good.

translation: "Moreover, these Ferocious Beasts were very similar to them: they did not cultivate the Great Dao, but solely trained their flesh and blood, feeding on all beings of the Wilderness and regarding heaven and earth as their pasture." Good.

Translation: "These Ferocious Beasts were also extremely similar to them: neither cultivated the Great Dao, but solely trained their flesh and blood, feeding on all beings of the Wilderness and regarding heaven and earth as their pasture."

Need to use "the Great Dao" per glossary. So: "These Ferocious Beasts were also extremely similar to them: they did not cultivate the Great Dao, but solely trained their flesh and blood, feeding on all beings of the Wilderness and regarding heaven and earth as their pasture."

translation: "The only difference between them was that the Ferocious Beasts could cultivate supernatural abilities through wisdom, whereas they cultivated only the power of laws." Good.

Translation: "The only difference between the two lay in that wisdom and the Ferocious Beasts could cultivate divine abilities, whereas they cultivated the power of laws."

Need to keep "Ferocious Beasts". So: "The only difference between the two lay in that wisdom and the Ferocious Beasts could cultivate divine abilities, whereas they cultivated the power of laws."

translation: "The birth of the Wu Clan was unknown to Qi and Emperor Jun and others; even if they knew the Wu Clan had been born, given the current situation, their strength was not worth noting." Good.

Translation: "The birth of the Wu Clan was unknown to Di Jun and the others; even if they had known that the Wu Clan had already been born, given the current situation, their strength was not worth noting."

Need to use "Di Jun" per glossary. So: "The birth of the Wu Clan was unknown to Di Jun and the others; even if they had known that the Wu Clan had already been born, given the current situation, their strength was not worth noting."

translation: "In Chaos." Good.

Translation: "In Chaos."

Need to use "Chaos" per glossary. So: "In Chaos."

translation: "Yang Mei quietly watched as another world collapsed, while Chaos currents ceaselessly flowed into the world's center, evolving into a new Chaos storm." Good.

Translation: "Yang Mei quietly watched as another world collapsed, while the Chaos currents ceaselessly flowed into the world's center, evolving into a new Chaos storm."

translation: same as 【133】 but okay.

translation: "At this moment, Yang Mei's aura was perfect and flawless; his past injuries had finally healed, and at this point he was only one step away from proving the Dao and attaining the Mixed Yuan." Good.

Translation: "At this moment, Yang Mei's aura was perfect and flawless; his past injuries had finally healed, and at this point he was only one step away from proving the Dao and attaining the Mixed Yuan."

translation: same as 【138】 but okay.

translation: "Hongjun, Luohu, I'm going to find you now; I just don't know whether the Union of the Dao you pursue can save your lives!" Note we removed outer quotes? The original had quotes around whole sentence. We kept them? I removed them. Should we keep the quotes? The instruction: no Chinese characters, nothing else. Quotes are fine. But we need to decide. The line originally had Chinese with quotes inside. The translation likely should keep the quotes as part of the spoken line. I think we should keep the quotation marks to indicate speech. However the note 【143】 didn't have quotes in the instruction; they gave the Chinese line with quotes. The translation likely should keep the quotes. Let's keep them: "\"Hongjun, Luohu, I'm going to find you now; I just don't know whether the Union of the Dao you pursue can save your lives! \"" That includes double quotes at start and end. We'll output that.

"Hongjun, Luohu, I'm going to find you now; I just don't know whether the Union of the Dao you pursue can save your lives!"

translation: "As Yang Mei's words fell, a mighty and unmatched aura spread from his body, actually erasing the previously formed Chaos storm outright." Good.

Translation: "As Yang Mei's words fell, an overwhelming aura spread from his whole body, actually erasing the Chaos storm that had just formed."

Need to keep Yang Mei, Chaos. So: "As Yang Mei's words fell, an overwhelming aura spread from his whole body, actually erasing the Chaos storm that had just formed."

translation: "Countless slender willow branches moved through the Chaos currents, seeking the possible direction of the Wilderness world." Good.

Translation: "Countless slender willow branches threaded through the Chaos currents, seeking the possible direction of the Wilderness world."

Need to keep "Chaos". Use "Wilderness". So: "Countless slender willow branches threaded through the Chaos currents, seeking the possible direction of the Wilderness world."

translation: "In Chaos there was originally no sense of direction, and with the Great Dao departing the Wilderness and entering Chaos, the expansion of Chaos became even swifter." Good.

Translation: "In Chaos there was originally no sense of direction, and with the Great Dao having departed the Wilderness and entered Chaos, the expansion of Chaos became even more rapid."

Need to use "the Great Dao", "Chaos", "Wilderness". So: "In Chaos there was originally no sense of direction, and with the Great Dao having departed the Wilderness and entered Chaos, the expansion of Chaos became even more rapid."

translation: "Moreover, the expansion of Chaos meant that even the present Yang Mei could not easily locate the position of the Wilderness within Chaos." Good.

Translation: "Moreover, the expansion of Chaos meant that even Yang Mei now could not easily locate the position of the Wilderness within Chaos."

Need to keep Yang Mei, Chaos, Wilderness. So: "Moreover, the expansion of Chaos meant that even Yang Mei now could not easily locate the position of the Wilderness within Chaos."

translation: "On Mount Yujing, Hongjun was in the process of sealing the four great Ferocious Beasts when he suddenly felt uneasy, as if a great catastrophe loomed." Good.

Translation: "On Mount Yujing, Hongjun was in the process of sealing the four great Ferocious Beasts when he suddenly felt uneasy, as if a great catastrophe loomed."

translation: same as 【166】 but okay.

translation: "But the Jade Disc of Creation gave him no hint, and this made Hongjun instantly think of the only possibility, as he muttered to himself:" Good.

Translation: "However, the Jade Disc of Creation gave him no hint, and Hongjun immediately thought of the only possibility, hearing him mutter to himself:"

Need to keep "Hongjun". So: "However, the Jade Disc of Creation gave him no hint, and Hongjun immediately thought of the only possibility, hearing him mutter to himself:"

translation: "\"Yang Mei? Yang Mei! It must be him, but why is his recovery speed so fast, unreasonable! \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"Yang Mei? Yang Mei! It must be him, but why is his recovery speed so fast, unreasonable? \""

Need to keep Yang Mei. So: "\"Yang Mei? Yang Mei! It must be him, but why is his recovery speed so fast, unreasonable? \""

translation: "\"In Chaos there is nothingness; given his injuries, he should not have recovered so quickly—clearly the Great Dao entering Chaos has also caused Chaos to undergo other changes. \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"In Chaos there is nothingness; given his injuries, he should not have recovered so quickly—it seems the Great Dao entering Chaos has also caused Chaos to undergo other changes. \""

Need to keep "the Great Dao", "Chaos". So: "\"In Chaos there is nothingness; given his injuries, he should not have recovered so quickly—it seems the Great Dao entering Chaos has also caused Chaos to undergo other changes. \""

translation: "\"Nevertheless, I should also make preparations early. \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"But no matter what, I should also make preparations early. \""

translation: "Hongjun looked at the four great Ferocious Beasts before him, feeling somewhat embarrassed, but then suddenly thought of something and immediately smiled, saying: \"It can be considered your fortune; I, the poor Daoist, still have important matters at hand and have no leisure to attend to you, but I have thought of a good place for you. \"" Keep quotes inside.

Translation: "Hongjun looked at the four great Ferocious Beasts before him, feeling somewhat embarrassed, but then suddenly thought of something and immediately smiled, saying: \"It can be considered your fortune; I, the poor Daoist, still have important matters at hand and have no leisure to attend to you, but I have thought of a good place for you. \""

translation: same as 【189】 but okay.

translation: "Having said that, Hongjun's smile faded, his eyes turned cold, and the four great Ferocious Beasts had no choice but to believe the words of this Daoist." Good.

Translation: "Saying this, Hongjun's smile faded, his eyes turning cold, forcing the four great Ferocious Beasts to believe the words of this Daoist before them."

Need to keep Hongjun, Ferocious Beasts. So: "Saying this, Hongjun's smile faded, his eyes turning cold, forcing the four great Ferocious Beasts to believe the words of this Daoist before them."

translation: "Seeing that the four great Ferocious Beasts, bound and unable to speak, could only nod frantically in agreement, Hongjun withdrew his outward killing intent and sealed the four great Ferocious Beasts within his sleeves." Good.

Translation: "Seeing that the four great Ferocious Beasts, bound and unable to speak, could only nod frantically in agreement, Hongjun withdrew his outward killing intent and stored the four great Ferocious Beasts in his sleeve."

Need to keep Hongjun, Ferocious Beasts. So: "Seeing that the four great Ferocious Beasts, bound and unable to speak, could only nod frantically in agreement, Hongjun withdrew his outward killing intent and stored the four great Ferocious Beasts in his sleeve."

translation: "\"The preparations needed for the Union of the Dao are not yet complete; it seems we cannot deal with this in the Wilderness, for Chaos is their stronghold, so we must still trouble Daoist Luohu a bit more. \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"The preparations needed for the Union of the Dao are not yet complete; it seems we cannot deal with this in the Wilderness, but since Chaos is its main battlefield, we will have to trouble Daoist Luohu a bit more. \""

Need to keep "Luohu". Use "the Union of the Dao". Use "Wilderness", "Chaos". So: "\"The preparations needed for the Union of the Dao are not yet complete; it seems we cannot deal with this in the Wilderness, but since Chaos is its main battlefield, we will have to trouble Daoist Luohu a bit more. \""

translation: "\"I only hope that Daoist Luohu can understand and not blame me, the poor Daoist, for I truly had no other choice. \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"I only hope that Daoist Luohu will understand and not blame me, the poor Daoist, for after all I truly had no choice but to act as I did. \""

Need to keep Luohu. So: "\"I only hope that Daoist Luohu will understand and not blame me, the poor Daoist, for after all I truly had no choice but to act as I did. \""

translation: "As soon as his words fell, Hongjun did not linger and rushed toward Heaven Beyond Heaven." Good.

Translation: "As soon as his words fell, Hongjun did not linger and rushed toward the Heaven Beyond Heaven."

translation: same as 【214】 but okay.

translation: "Having reached their level, perhaps they could disregard fate and calculation, but a sudden intuitive warning is absolutely never wrong." Good.

Translation: "Having reached their level, perhaps they could no longer trust in heavenly numbers or in divination, but a sudden intuitive warning is absolutely infallible."

Need to keep meaning. So: "Having reached their level, perhaps they could no longer trust in heavenly numbers or in divination, but a sudden intuitive warning is absolutely infallible."

translation: "Concerning their own safety, the lifelong cultivation of their lives would give them a feeling in the dark; although there is no apparent source of information, this is what many innate deities trust most." Good.

Translation: "Concerning their own safety, the cultivation of life they have long practiced will give them a feeling in the dark; although there is no apparent source of information, it is what many innate deities trust most."

Need to keep meaning. So: "Concerning their own safety, the cultivation of life they have long practiced will give them a feeling in the dark; although there is no apparent source of information, it is what many innate deities trust most."

translation: "After all, heavenly secrets can be concealed, divination may err, but long-term cultivation never deceives oneself." Good.

Translation: "After all, heavenly secrets can be concealed, divination can go wrong, but long-term cultivation will never deceive oneself."

translation: "In Heaven Beyond Heaven, the originally estimated dim sky suddenly became overcast with dark clouds, and a giant eye opened in the sky, instantly causing thunder to roar throughout the world." Good.

Translation: "In the Heaven Beyond Heaven, the sky that was originally estimated to be dim suddenly became overcast with dark clouds, and a giant eye opened in the sky, instantly causing thunder to roar throughout the world."

Need to keep "Heaven Beyond Heaven". So: "In the Heaven Beyond Heaven, the sky that was originally estimated to be dim suddenly became overcast with dark clouds, and a giant eye opened in the sky, instantly causing thunder to roar throughout the world."

translation: "Luohu, in order to escape Jun's punishment, naturally did not do so without cost; now his divine form has dissipated, entirely used to open up Heaven Beyond Heaven." Good.

Translation: "Luohu, in order to escape Hongjun's punishment, naturally did not do so without cost; now his divine form has dissipated, entirely used to open up the Heaven Beyond Heaven."

Need to keep Luohu, Hongjun. So: "Luohu, in order to escape Hongjun's punishment, naturally did not do so without cost; now his divine form has dissipated, entirely used to open up the Heaven Beyond Heaven."

translation: "At present, Luohu cannot even peek into what is happening in the Wilderness world; all his power and consciousness are confined to Heaven Beyond Heaven." Good.

Translation: "At present, Luohu cannot even peek into what is happening in the Wilderness world; all his power and consciousness are confined to the Heaven Beyond Heaven."

Need to keep Luohu, Wilderness, Heaven Beyond Heaven. So: "At present, Luohu cannot even peek into what is happening in the Wilderness world; all his power and consciousness are confined to the Heaven Beyond Heaven."

translation: "Although he had already become Heaven Beyond Heaven, a sudden sense of crisis compelled Luohu to awaken from his slumber; the feeling of impending catastrophe made him extremely uneasy." Good.

Translation: "Although he had already transformed into the Heaven Beyond Heaven, a sudden sense of crisis forced Luohu to awaken from his slumber; the feeling of an impending great catastrophe made him extremely uneasy."

Need to keep Luohu, Heaven Beyond Heaven. So: "Although he had already transformed into the Heaven Beyond Heaven, a sudden sense of crisis forced Luohu to awaken from his slumber; the feeling of an impending great catastrophe made him extremely uneasy."

translation: "\"What exactly is the cause of this feeling I have? Is it Yang Mei or Hongjun? \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"What exactly is the cause of this feeling I have? Is it Yang Mei? Or Hongjun? \""

Need to keep Yang Mei, Hongjun. So: "\"What exactly is the cause of this feeling I have? Is it Yang Mei? Or Hongjun? \""

translation: "Luohu silently thought to himself, but no matter what, he could not avoid facing it." Good.

Translation: "Luohu thought to himself, but no matter what, he could not avoid facing it."

Need to keep Luohu. So: "Luohu thought to himself, but no matter what, he could not avoid facing it."

translation: "\"No, merely relying on Heaven Beyond Heaven cannot resolve this calamity; otherwise I would not feel this way, so we must also prepare our backup plan early. \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"No, merely relying on the Heaven Beyond Heaven cannot resolve this calamity; otherwise I would not have such a feeling. It seems we must also prepare a backup plan early. \""

Need to keep Heaven Beyond Heaven. So: "\"No, merely relying on the Heaven Beyond Heaven cannot resolve this calamity; otherwise I would not have such a feeling. It seems we must also prepare a backup plan early. \""

translation: "\"I originally thought that this backup plan would not be activated in the short term, but I never expected that after only a few yuanhui, Heaven Beyond Heaven would actually have to be abandoned! \"" Keep quotes.

Translation: "\"I originally thought that this backup plan would not be activated in the short term, but I never expected that after only a few yuanhui, the Heaven Beyond Heaven would actually have to be abandoned! \""

translation: same as 【267】 but okay.

translation: "Luohu felt resentful, but had no time to dwell; he needed to know where the source of his unease lay, in order to respond and preserve himself." Good.

Translation: "Luohu felt resentful, but he had no time to dwell on it; he needed to know exactly where the source of his unease lay, in order to respond and preserve himself."

Need to keep Luohu. So: "Luohu felt resentful, but he had no time to dwell on it; he needed to know exactly where the source of his unease lay, in order to respond and preserve himself."

translation: "He condensed his remaining origin and continually extended it toward the starry sky nearest to Heaven Beyond Heaven; only by entering that starry sky could he have the ability to activate his backup plan." Good.

Translation: "He condensed his remaining primordial essence, continually extending it toward the starry sky nearest the Heaven Beyond Heaven; only by entering the starry sky could he gain the ability to activate his backup plan."

Need to keep Heaven Beyond Heaven. So: "He condensed his remaining primordial essence, continually extending it toward the starry sky nearest the Heaven Beyond Heaven; only by entering the starry sky could he gain the ability to activate his backup plan."

translation: "At this moment, Luohu felt fortunate that his past foresight had already secured all possible retreats, and outsiders could never predict where he would actually go." Good.

Translation: "At this moment, Luohu felt immensely grateful for his past foresight; he had already secured all possible retreats, and outsiders could never have predicted where he would actually go."

Need to keep Luohu. So: "At this moment, Luohu felt immensely grateful for his past foresight; he had already secured all possible retreats, and outsiders could never have predicted where he would actually go."

translation: "PS: I owe 4000 characters; I will repay them tomorrow, and tomorrow I will update two chapters, for a total of 8000 characters." Good.

translation: same as 【287】 but okay.

We must keep the PS: prefix. So output: "【110】 PS: I owe 4000 characters; I will repay them tomorrow, and tomorrow I will update two chapters, for a total of 8000 characters."

translation: "Reborn in the Era of Taiyi, the era of the Three Sovereigns had just passed, the Wu-Yao Great Calam

Translation: "Reborn in the Era of Taiyi, the era of the Three Sovereigns had just passed, the Wu-Yao Great Calamity had not yet broken out, and the Mystic Gate was still on the eve of its opening."

Reborn in the Era of Taiyi, the era of the Three Sovereigns had just passed, the Wu-Yao Great Calamity had not yet broken out, and the Mystic Gate was still on the eve of its opening.

Qi Yu, who had returned from the Primordial Era, sought to remake heaven and earth; with the body of an innate water god, he would inherit the throne of the Black Emperor and compose a legend of the Water Element Dao! Amidst the surge of the Heavenly Dao, would he rise by borrowing the trend, thus standing at the forefront of the age, or suffer utter defeat, ultimately becoming a mere speck of dust from the bygone era? This story begins with the reversal of the Kunlun Heavenly River.

Translation: "Qi Yu, who had returned from the Primordial Era, sought to remake heaven and earth; with the body of an innate water god, he would inherit the throne of the Black Emperor and compose a legend of the Water Element Dao! Amidst the surge of the Heavenly Dao, would he rise by borrowing the trend, thus standing at the forefront of the age, or suffer utter defeat, ultimately becoming a mere speck of dust from the bygone era? This story begins with the reversal of the Kunlun Heavenly River."

Qi Yu, who had returned from the Primordial Era, sought to remake heaven and earth; with the body of an innate water god, he would inherit the throne of the Black Emperor and compose a legend of the Water Element Dao! Amidst the surge of the Heavenly Dao, would he rise by borrowing the trend, thus standing at the forefront of the age, or suffer utter defeat, ultimately becoming a mere speck of dust from the bygone era? This story begins with the reversal of the Kunlun Heavenly River.

Qi Yu, who had returned from the primordial era, wished to remake heaven and earth; with the body of a primordial water deity, he would inherit the throne of the Black Emperor and compose a hymn of the Water-Origin Great Dao! Amid the tide of the Heavenly Dao's mighty trend, would he, in the end, ride the wave to rise and stand at the forefront of the times, or suffer utter defeat and become a speck of dust from the old age? This story begins with the backflow of the Kunlun Heavenly River.

(End of chapter)

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