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Chapter 456: with translation of chapter title

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Chinese line only.

Mixed line.

We'll translate: "Wait, after consuming this Nine-turn Break Venerable Pill, the user cannot progress beyond Immortal Venerable Ninefold irreversibly, but after consuming the Ten-turn Break Emperor Pill there are no restrictions and they can certainly be promoted."

Mixed line.

Let's craft: "Wait, after consuming this Nine-turn Break Venerable Pill, the user cannot progress beyond Immortal Venerable Ninefold irreversibly, but after consuming the Ten-turn Break Emperor Pill there are no restrictions and they can certainly be promoted."

Mixed line.

Chinese line only.

Chinese line only.

Mixed line with brackets.

Mixed line with brackets.

Let's decide: We'll translate the Chinese inside, and keep the outer 【】 as they are, and replace inner 「」 with English double quotes. So: 【"Eh, Lord Sovereign, what you think should probably be all right…."】.

【25】

Thus line 4: 【"Eh, Lord Sovereign, what you think should probably be all right…."】

Chinese line only.

Chinese line only.

The phrase should be kept as 'my Azure Cloud Sect', where the first character means I/my.

【32】

Thus: 【"Lord Sovereign: Feng Qingyang, Realm: Immortal Venerable Eightfold"】 but we need to keep quotes? We'll do similar: 【"Lord Sovereign: Feng Qingyang, Realm: Immortal Venerable Eightfold"】.

【"Heaven Source Dao Seed: Myriad Heaven Source Dao"】

【34】

【"Sect: Azure Cloud Sect (Level 4), Sect Value: 6,000,000, Prestige Value: 1,250,000,000"】

Thus line 10: 【"Sect: Azure Cloud Sect (Level 4), Sect Value: 6,000,000, Prestige Value: 1,250,000,000"】.

【39】

two hundred fifty million

Thus: "Not bad, Sect Value increased by 1,000,000, Prestige Value increased by 250,000,000."

【43】

Thinking back to when I just ascended, that's not right...

【45】

I directly sent out sixteen Immortal Kings to subdue them with force; they should be more careful in their next life.

【47】

Others start from scratch when they ascend, but my Azure Cloud Sect began invincible and remained invincible all the way!

【49】

【"Ding, ten Immortal Emperor Summon Cards used successfully, summoning in progress... depiction completed, manifested."】

【51】

After the system's voice fell, massive Dao Source Power surged forth continuously.

【53】

"We pay our respects to the Sect Master."

【55】

The Elder's Bureau, as the most important department of the Azure Cloud Sect, naturally has uniform design second to none.

【59】

Thus: 〖Six-star Elder wears a dark brown long robe with cyan trim; the back is embroidered with a vivid depiction of the entire Azure Cloud Sect, and this sect emblem shifts with the flow of Dao patterns on the uniform, lifelike. 〗

(If any expert can provide images, feel free to draw)

【62】

〖Seven-star Elder wears a dark purple long robe with sky-blue trim, wide robes and large sleeves, flowing and elegant yet not losing dignified solemnity; the back is embroidered with the celestial phenomenon of a bright moon shining in the azure sky! 〗

【65】

〖Seven-star Elder wears a dark purple long robe with sky-blue trim, wide robes and large sleeves, flowing and elegant yet not losing dignified solemnity; the back is embroidered with the celestial phenomenon of a bright moon shining in the azure sky! 〗

【67】

〖Eight-star Elder Robe: cloud-white base with sky-blue trim, overall more magnificent and unparalleled, eye-catching; the back features special Dao methods embroidering a piece of heaven and earth, making the wearer seem like the master of heaven and earth! 〗

It seems line 28 missing closing 〗, line 29 provides the rest and closing 〗. So line 28 is incomplete; line 29 completes the description. We need to translate each line as given, preserving line breaks. So we must translate line 28 exactly as it appears (including missing closing bracket). Then line 29 as given.

【75】

Thus: 〖Seven-star Elder wears a dark purple long robe with sky-blue trim, wide robes and large sleeves, flowing and elegant yet not losing dignified solemnity; the back is embroidered with the celestial phenomenon of a bright moon shining in the azure sky! (missing closing bracket). We'll keep the opening 〖 and no closing.

〖A round bright moon hangs in the bright azure sky, competing with the scorching sun; as the Dao patterns flow, the moon becomes even brighter. 〗

Thus line 29 translation: "A round bright moon hangs in the bright azure sky, competing with the scorching sun; as the Dao patterns flow, the moon becomes even brighter. 〗"

【80】

"Nine-star Elder Robe:? Ten-star Elder Robe:?"

【82】

These uniforms were obtained when Feng Qingyang previously asked the system for Seven-color Chaos Tea, as an additional request.

【84】

Feng Qingyang answers: My sect does not want the Blue Lotus.

【86】

Feng Qingyang glanced at the ten people before him and then withdrew his gaze.

【88】

However, the left chest of their clothing is still empty; they are still missing the Six-star Badge conferred by the Elder's Bureau.

【90】

"Han Shuang, Xing Yue, Tian Zi"

【92】

You wouldn't believe it, but among these ten people depicted by the system, the seven male Immortal Emperors' names are strikingly similar, all containing the character 'Dao'.

【94】

"I will dutifully follow the Sect Master's command."

【96】

After years of training, isn't it all for this moment!

【98】

After the ten left, Feng Qingyang began to ponder again.

【100】

Who should be the first tool person to choose?

【103】

…… Translation: "……" (just ellipsis). We'll output "……".

Outside the Azure Cloud Sect gate, the Immortal Sword Sect's First Ancestor and Second Ancestor suddenly yawned.

【105】

First Ancestor Jun Ling and Second Ancestor Ye Gu exchanged a glance, then simultaneously thought secretly.

【107】

"Holy shit! Where are the First and Second Ancestors? How did they disappear in the blink of an eye?"

We need to output for each of these.

Hiss! What are we gonna do now!

You guys, is there a possibility? I'm saying, could it be that the First and Second Ancestors abandoned us and ran away?

This scene startled the Immortal Sword Third Ancestor beside them and the countless Immortal Sword Sect immortals kneeling in the rear.

Third Ancestor Lord Po Wang heard the conversation behind him, and his brows furrowed slightly.

Old Man Jun and Old Man Ye had both vanished suddenly, leaving no trace.

What on earth happened?

Could it really be as they guessed—that the Immortal Sect has started judging us?

Or perhaps these two immortals have fled together!

Damn it! Fleeing like this… and they didn't even call this old man!

"Guilty Sect Founding Ancestor Jun Ling" "Guilty Sect Founding Ancestor Ye Gu"

"Greetings, Immortal Lord."

At the summit of Azure Cloud Peak, the terrified Immortal Sword Second Ancestor dropped to his knees with a thud, trembling as he spoke.

Terrifying! Utter terror!

Just what level of power is this Azure Cloud Immortal Lord! A single glance makes my eyes feel like they're about to burst, nearly shattering my soul!

Even his attendant maids are terrifyingly powerful beings!

She merely glanced at me lightly, and boundless might instantly surged through my body!

One glance from the Immortal Emperor, and I kneel!

"Eat it."

Looking at the two terrified individuals, Feng Qingyang spoke sternly.

With a thought, two pitch-black Nine Turns Breaking Sovereign Pills appeared in the Immortal Sword Second Ancestor's hands.

Hearing this, without the slightest hesitation, the two wolfed down the pills.

No joke—the Immortal Lord himself gave the order, so no matter what this black thing is, we have to eat it!

Even if the Immortal Lord told us to eat scraps from the outhouse, we wouldn't even frown.

Well… you really shouldn't say, but what exactly is this thing?

The taste of these scraps—no, the taste of this black thing is actually pretty good.

(Feng Qingyang: Hey, what's going on? Why is the old timer updating so slowly? It's slowed our sect's progress to dominate all realms by a huge amount!)

('I'll give you a number, this number per day,' Feng Qingyang said, holding up five fingers—but before he could finish, a huge hand descended from the heavens and suppressed him. The mysterious person: 'Five chapters a day? I'll give you the pen, you write. Like this: as long as you urge for updates a hundred million times more, I'll write more.')

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