Chapter 485

line: "Having said that, the Four Great Elders together circulated their cultivation, and the vast chaotic power instantly swept the heavens!" No Chinese.

Translation: "Having said that, the Four Great Elders together circulated their cultivation, and the vast chaotic power instantly swept the heavens!"

same.

"We added 'Having said that,' which is the translation of that phrase." No Chinese.

Line 2:

"Just then, a brilliant beam of moonlight shone down from the Moon Immortal Palace above the Nine Heavens." Contains "Moon Immortal Palace" which is English translation, fine.

Translation: "Just then, a brilliant beam of moonlight shone down from the Moon Immortal Palace above the Nine Heavens."

same.

Line 3:

"Immediately, countless strands of formation power appeared out of nowhere in the void, and with their continual merging a grand formation suddenly rose up!" No Chinese.

Translation: "Immediately, countless strands of formation power appeared out of nowhere in the void, and with their continual merging a grand formation suddenly rose up!"

same.

Line 4:

"The formation enveloped the entire interior and exterior of the Ancient Immortal Forbidden Land, and gradually grew stronger under the continual moonlight." "Ancient Immortal Forbidden Land" is English.

Translation: "The Grand Formation enveloped the entire interior and exterior of the Ancient Immortal Forbidden Land, and gradually strengthened under the continual moonlight."

same as above but without the second clause: "The formation enveloped the entire interior and exterior of the Ancient Immortal Forbidden Land." Good.

Line 5:

"The Four Great Elders each flew toward a different direction at the top of the formation." Good.

Translation: "The Four Great Elders each flew toward a different direction at the top of the Grand Formation."

Line 6:

"The North Slaughter Divine Lord stood in the north, the South Kill Divine Lord in the south, the East Annihilation Divine Lord presided over the east, and the West Fall Divine Lord stood firm in the west." Good.

Translation: "The North Slaughter Divine Lord was in the north, the South Slaughter Divine Lord in the south, the East Annihilation Divine Lord stationed in the east, and the West Fall Divine Lord stood firm in the west."

Line 7:

"\"This formation is called the Moonlight Immortal Derivation Grand Formation, the supreme grand formation of our Moon Immortal Palace. \"" Contains quotes but English.

Translation: "\"This formation is called the Moonlight Immortal Derivation Grand Formation, a top-tier grand formation of our Moon Immortal Palace. \""

Line 8:

"\"Only those who pass this formation can obtain a quota for the Inheritance Contention Battle. \"" Good.

Translation: "\"Only those who pass this formation can obtain a quota for the Inheritance Contention Battle. \""

Line 9:

"\"You may begin, \" said the East Annihilation Divine Lord, flicking his sleeve as countless vortex gates opened at the edge of the forbidden land." Good.

Translation: "\"You may begin, \" said the East Annihilation Divine Lord, flicking his sleeve as countless vortex gates opened at the edge of the forbidden land."

same as 52.

Line 10:

"Immediately, the four of them began to close their eyes and nurture their spirits, as if paying no heed to the situation below." Good.

Translation: "Immediately, the four of them began to close their eyes and nurture their spirits, as if paying no heed to the situation below."

Line 11:

"Yet their divine sense, as Divine Lords, constantly monitored every move of the cultivators below." Good.

Translation: "Yet their Divine Lord Realm divine sense constantly monitored every move of the cultivators below."

Line 12:

"Today is the day of the net…" Contains ellipsis, fine.

Translation: "Today is the day of gathering the net……"

Line 13:

"\"Pass the formation and you'll gain eligibility for the Inheritance Battle, brothers—what are you waiting for? Charge! \"" Good.

same.

Line 14:

"\"If you're my brother, come slash me! No—if you're my brother, make way for me! Once I join the Moon Immortal Palace, you'll get what's coming to you! \"" Good.

same.

Line 15:

"As soon as the vortex gates appeared, the atmosphere ignited instantly! Countless cultivators shouted and surged toward the myriad vortex gates!" Good.

Translation: "As soon as the vortex gates appeared, the atmosphere ignited! Countless cultivators howled and rushed en masse toward the many vortex gates!"

Line 16:

"At the same time, within the Moon Immortal Palace above the Nine Heavens." Good.

Translation: "Meanwhile, within the Moon Immortal Palace above the Nine Heavens."

Line 17:

"A screen etched with dao patterns was playing real-time footage of the situation outside the grand formation." "dao patterns" is English transliteration, fine.

Translation: "A screen woven from Dao patterns was broadcasting in real time the situation inside the Grand Formation outside."

Line 18:

"All the high-ranking elders of the Moon Immortal Palace were present, standing ready in strict formation." Good.

Translation: "All the high-ranking elders of the Moon Immortal Palace were here, ready in formation."

Line 19:

"The first and second elders are ninth-level Divine Lords, the third elder is a seventh-level Divine Lord, and the remaining dozens of elders are high-ranking Immortal Sovereigns." Good.

Translation: "The Great Elder and Second Elder were Ninth Layer Divine Lords, the Third Elder a Seventh Layer Divine Lord, and the remaining dozens of elders were High-Ranking Immortal Venerables."

Line 20:

"Adding the four Divine Lord-level sword-wielding elders guarding the formation, the Moon Immortal Palace's palace lord Yingyue Xian Di, and the Moon Immortal Palace's Xian Di ancestor in secluded cultivation." Contains "Yingyue Xian Di" which is a transliteration of a name; it's okay as it's not Chinese characters? Actually "Yingyue Xian Di" uses Latin letters, it's a transliteration, acceptable. Similarly "Xian Di". Should be fine.

Translation: "Plus the Four Divine Lord Realm Sword-Wielding Elders guarding the Grand Formation, the Moon-Reflecting Immortal Emperor as palace master, and the Moon Immortal Palace Immortal Emperor Ancestor in secluded cultivation."

Line 21:

"There is a present-day peak Immortal Emperor, an aging Immortal Emperor, the two emperors coexisting, seven supreme Divine Lords, and dozens of Immortal Sovereign elders." Good.

Translation: "One present-era peak Immortal Emperor, one aging Immortal Emperor—two emperors coexisting, seven Supreme Divine Lords, and dozens of Immortal Venerable elders."

Line 22:

"This is the full foundation of the Moon Immortal Palace, which has dominated tens of eras in this parallel world." Good.

Translation: "This is the full foundation of the Moon Immortal Palace, which has dominated dozens of eras in the parallel timeline."

Line 23:

"\"Reporting to the Palace Lord, all arrangements are complete; we await your command to begin the net. \"" Good.

Translation: "\"Reporting to the Palace Master, all arrangements are complete; we await your command to begin the net gathering. \""

Line 24:

"\"Moreover, the Heavenly Surveillance Pavilion has already dispatched a large number of strong experts, greatly increasing our chances of victory. \"" Good.

Translation: "\"Moreover, the Immortal Supervision Pavilion has dispatched many strong fighters here, greatly increasing our chances of victory. \""

Line 25:

"A figure appeared out of thin air in the Moon Immortal Hall, clasping his hands respectfully and said." Good.

Translation: "A figure appeared out of thin air in the Moon Immortal Palace Hall, clasping hands respectfully."

Line 26:

"Upon hearing this, the Moon Immortal Palace Lord seated on the throne merely nodded, then focused intently

Translation: "Hearing this, the Moon-Reflecting Immortal Emperor seated on the throne merely nodded, then focused intently on the Dao pattern screen in the void."

Line 27:

In the display, those who had entered the Moonlight Immortal Derivation Grand Formation trial had completed three-tenths of it; those who failed were sent outside the formation, leaving only a few thousand cultivators remaining.

Translation: "In the screen, those who had entered the Moonlight Immortal Derivation Grand Formation test had completed three-tenths; those who failed were sent outside the formation, leaving only a few thousand cultivators."

Line 28:

Gazing at those several thousand cultivators, the cold intent in the Moon Immortal Palace Lord's eyes grew ever stronger.

Translation: "Gazing at those several thousand cultivators, the Moon-Reflecting Immortal Emperor's eyes grew ever colder."

Line 29:

Wait a bit longer, wait a bit longer…

Translation: "Wait a bit longer, wait a bit longer……"

Line 30:

……

Translation: "……"

Line 31:

The trial within the formation was in full swing; those who passed would enter a special space where dedicated elders awaited.

Translation: "The test within the Grand Formation was proceeding fiercely; those who passed would enter a special space where specialized elders awaited."

Line 32:

"Congratulations on passing the preliminary trial and earning eligibility for the Inheritance Battle; please wait here until all cultivators have finished testing, after which I will bring you to the land of inheritance."

Translation: "\"Congratulations on passing the preliminary test and earning eligibility for the Inheritance Battle; please wait here until all cultivators finish testing, then I will take you to the Land of Inheritance. \""

Line 33:

The elders of the Moon Immortal Palace, with kind and benevolent expressions, drew a cheer as their words fell.

Translation: "The Moon Immortal Palace elder's kind expression and words elicited a cheer."

Line 34:

"Excellent! We've taken another step toward successfully obtaining the inheritance!"

Translation: "\"Great! We're one step closer to successfully obtaining the inheritance! \""

Line 35:

"Haha! This test is far too easy to pass! I thought it would be much harder!"

Translation: "\"Haha! This test is way too easy to pass—I thought it would be hard! \""

Line 36:

Seeing this, the reception elder merely smiled without a word and looked at them: "Laugh, laugh, later you'll have your time to cry."

Translation: "Seeing this, the reception elder merely smiled without speaking, looking at them: \"Laugh, laugh, later you'll have your time to cry. \""

"Laugh, laugh, later you'll have your time to cry."

Line 37:

Over the following period, cultivators continually passed the trial and entered this space, and their numbers quickly reached ten thousand.

Translation: "Over the next period, cultivators continually passed the trial and entered this space, quickly reaching ten thousand."

Line 38:

After an hour, the cultivators outside the forbidden zone had completed about seventy to eighty percent of the test, and the vast majority had already been eliminated.

Translation: "After an hour, the cultivators outside the forbidden land had completed seventy to eighty percent of the test, and the vast majority had been eliminated."

Line 39:

At this moment, the immortals of Penglai Isle, who had been at the rear of the crowd, also passed the test and arrived in this special space.

Translation: "At this moment, the Penglai Immortal Island immortals at the rear of the crowd also passed the test and arrived in this special space."

Line 40:

Upon entering, Divine Lord Ziyin merely glanced around and immediately sensed something amiss.

Translation: "Upon entering, Ziyin Divine Lord merely glanced around and sensed something amiss."

Line 41:

How could it be that only cultivators from the original timeline passed the test?

Translation: "How could all those who passed the test be cultivators from the original timeline?"

Line 42:

Not good! My guess was correct—this is merely a trap set by the Moon Immortal Palace!

Translation: "Not good! My guess was correct—this is merely a trap set by the Moon Immortal Palace!"

Line 43:

"Penglai immortals, hear my order! Follow me and charge out!"

Translation: "\"Penglai Immortals, hear my order! Follow me and charge out! \""

Line 44:

After a startled cry, she immediately employed the great divine art of Dǒuzhuàn Xīngyí, only to find it utterly useless!

Translation: "After a startled cry, she immediately employed the Great Divine Ability Technique: Star Shift, only to find it utterly useless!"

Line 45:

This spatial formation actually completely isolated heaven and earth!

Translation: "This space formation actually completely isolated heaven and earth!"

Line 46:

"You want to leave? It's too late!"

Translation: "\"Want to leave? Too late! \""

Line 47:

"By order of the Palace Lord, exterminate all these foreign invaders!"

Translation: "\"By order of the Palace Master, exterminate all these foreign invaders! \""

Line 48:

The reception elder here withdrew his friendly expression and spoke in a cold voice.

Translation: "Here the reception elder withdrew his amiable expression and spoke coldly."

Line 49:

Upon hearing this, the four sword-wielding elders of the Moon Immortal Palace stationed in the east, south, west, and north immediately flew forth and began slaughtering the tens of thousands of cultivators.

Translation: "Upon hearing this, the Moon Immortal Palace's Four Great Sword-Wielding Elders stationed in the four directions immediately flew over and began slaughtering the tens of thousands of cultivators."

Line 50:

In an instant, blood mist filled the sky and anguished cries erupted everywhere!

Translation: "In an instant, blood mist filled the sky and wails rose everywhere!"

Line 51:

Within the space, the original timeline cultivators, bewildered, were all struck dumb.

Translation: "Inside the space, the bewildered original timeline cultivators were all dazed."

Line 52:

Who am I? Where am I? What has happened?

Translation: "\"Who am I? Where am I? What's happening? \""

Line 53:

"I've realized it! This is a scheme! The Illusory Realm's will has set this trap just for us! Let's fight them!"

Translation: "\"I get it! This is a scheme! The Phantom Realm's will set this trap just for us—let's fight them! \""

Line 54:

"Kill, kill, kill, kill, kill, kill!"

Translation: "\"Kill kill kill kill kill kill! \""

Line 55:

"Kill them all the way to the Nine Heavens! Destroy the Moon Immortal Palace! The resources and all inheritances of this Illusory Realm are ours!"

Translation: "\"Kill them all the way to the Nine Heavens! Destroy the Moon Immortal Palace! All resources and inheritances of this Phantom Realm are ours! \""

Line 56:

The many original timeline cultivators who came to their senses immediately launched a counterattack, and within a few breaths they drove back the Moon Immortal Palace's four sword-wielding elders.

Translation: "The many original timeline cultivators who realized the truth immediately engaged in battle, and within a few breaths drove back the Moon Immortal Palace's Four Great Sword-Wielding Elders."

Line 57:

Know that the original timeline cultivators who entered the Illusory Realm include more than ten Immortal Sovereigns and over a thousand Imperial Sovereigns.

Translation: "Know that the original timeline cultivators who entered the Phantom Realm include several dozen Immortal Venerables and thousands of Immortal Emperors."

Line 58:

In this parallel world, they are equivalent to more than ten Divine Lords and over a thousand Immortal Sovereigns—what a terrifying force!

Translation: "In this parallel timeline they equate to several dozen Divine Lords and thousands of Immortal Venerables—what terrifying power!"

Line 59:

Moreover, there's also Divine Lord Yao Ziyin, who is of the fifth level; here she is equivalent to a fifth-tier Immortal Emperor!

Translation: "Moreover, there's Yao Ziyin, a Fifth Layer Divine Lord, who here is equivalent to a Fifth Layer Immortal Emperor!"

Line 60:

How is this possible? These outsiders are too strong!

The four sword-bearing elders of the Moon Immortal Palace who had been repelled were all utterly shocked.

At that very moment, thousands of figures flew down from the Moon Immortal Palace above the nine heavens.

The leaders are the Moon Immortal Palace Grand Elder, Second Elder, and Third Elder, these three Divine Lords.

Dozens of Immortal Venerable senior elders followed closely behind, while the rest were the elders of each branch of the Moon Immortal Palace.

It can be said that all their hidden strength has been revealed!

"Your cultivation is not bad, but unfortunately your mind is not upright; you lead many strong ones to brazenly invade my Tianyu Great World, wantonly slaughtering cities and villages, committing heinous crimes! This old man will slaughter you all here!"

The Divine Lord Ziyan, who had intended to break the formation and escape, was blocked by an old man with hoary white hair.

That old man wore a grey robe; his cloudy eyes were exceptionally bright, and a rotting aura permeated his whole body, as if he had just been dug out of the earth.

"Who are you!" After sensing the old man's aura, Divine Lord Ziyan instantly became alert; this old man is not simple!

"Furthermore, we are not invaders from outside!"

"Don't try to quibble! The discernment of the Moonlight Immortal Expansion Grand Formation and the aura on your bodies cannot be faked!"

"Remember, the one who kills you is the Moon Immortal Palace's ancestor who venerates the Moon Immortal Emperor!"