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Chapter 625: with translation of chapter title

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(Yesterday I felt dizzy and didn't finish writing; I already made up a chapter and a half in the previous chapter, so those who haven't seen it can check it out.)

It seems like a parenthetical note from author: "(Yesterday I was dizzy and didn't finish writing, the previous chapter already added one and a half chapters, those who haven't seen can take a look)". Need to translate faithfully.

We keep the parentheses? Probably keep as is. Output: 【1】 (Yesterday I was dizzy and didn't finish writing; the previous chapter already added one and a half chapters, those who haven't seen can take a look.)

Make sure it's one line.

Who knows what the Yun family is thinking, but the upcoming show is even more exciting. Just thinking about the Yun family taking on the Mo imperial clan and all the major powers gets my blood pumping! Just to be safe, let's retreat a bit outward so we don't accidentally harm ourselves.

Translate: "Who knows what the Yun family is thinking, but the upcoming drama is even more exciting; the Yun family against the Mo imperial clan and all major forces—just thinking about it is explosive! To be safe, we should retreat a bit outward, lest we accidentally hurt ourselves."

Need to keep quotes? The Chinese uses 「」 for speech. We can keep double quotes or just translate without quotes? Usually we keep the quoted speech as is, using English quotes. We'll output: 【2】 "Who knows what the Yun family is thinking, but the upcoming drama is even more exciting; the Yun family against the Mo imperial clan and all major forces—just thinking about it is explosive! To be safe, we should retreat a bit outward, lest we accidentally hurt ourselves."

Look up at the eastern horizon! Another major power is coming! As everyone once again focused their gaze on the Yun family's small world, the white-clad cultivator cried out again.

Translate: "Quickly look above the eastern horizon! Another major force has arrived!" As everyone once again focused their gaze on the Yun family's small world, that white-clad cultivator exclaimed again.

We need to keep as one line.

In the void of the eastern horizon, another massive fleet of warships slowly approached, the immortal ships brimming with armored warriors wielding immortal weapons, their murderous aura like a raging sea, shooting straight up to the clouds.

Translate: But seen, in the void of the eastern horizon, another massive fleet of warships slowly approached; the immortal ships were filled with immortal soldiers clad in heavy armor and wielding immortal weapons, their killing intent like a raging sea, surging straight to the heavens!

We need to keep natural English.

At the forefront, standing atop the lead warship was a tall figure clad in general's battle armor, shouldering a brand‑new golden immortal coffin.

Translate: At the forefront, standing atop the lead warship was a tall figure clad in general's battle armor, shouldering a brand-new golden immortal coffin on his shoulder.

The lord of the Mandate Empire, the Mandate Emperor, has arrived at the Yun immortal clan to congratulate the Nirvana God Master on his rebirth.

Translate: "The lord of the Mandate Empire, the Mandate Emperor, has graced the Yun Immortal Clan with his presence to congratulate the Reincarnation of the Nirvana God Master."

Note: Nirvana God Master.

To show the sincerity of our Mandate, our emperor has ordered four renowned craftsmen to work nonstop for three days and nights to forge a brand‑new profound‑gold immortal coffin, which we present to congratulate the Nirvana God Master and the Yun clan on seeing the coffin and striking it rich.

Translate: "To show the sincerity of our Mandate, our emperor specially ordered four renowned craftsmen to work nonstop for three days and nights to forge a brand-new profound-gold immortal coffin, presented as a gift, wishing the Nirvana God Master and the Yun family collectively to see the coffin and grow wealthy!"

We need to keep meaning.

The tall figure's dignified voice echoed throughout heaven and earth.

Translate: The tall figure's solemn voice echoed between heaven and earth.

Upon hearing this, countless Mo Shadow cultivators erupted in an uproar.

Translate: Upon hearing this, countless Mo Shadow cultivators exploded in an uproar!

First the Mo imperial clan sent a bell, and now the Mandate Empire has sent a coffin!

Translate: First the Mo imperial clan sent a bell, and now the Mandate Empire sends a coffin!

No need to think! It's definitely because the Mandate Empire also received the Yun family's blood‑stained invitation, which is why they came here in full force to keep the appointment.

Translate: No need to think! It's definitely because the Mandate Empire also received the Yun family's blood-summons, which is why they came aggressively to "keep the appointment."

Crazy! Crazy! This world is too crazy! The Yun family provoked the Mo imperial clan, and that wasn't enough? Now they've provoked the Mandate Empire too!

Translate: "Crazy! Crazy! This world is too crazy! The Yun family provoked one Mo imperial clan and that wasn't enough? Now they've provoked the Mandate Empire too!"

It can't be that the Nirvana God Master didn't return via Nirvana rebirth but instead broke through to become an Immortal Emperor and returned, right? The probability is practically lower than the chance that this immortal's lover would cheat!

Translate: "It can't be that the Nirvana God Master didn't return via Nirvana reincarnation but instead broke through to Immortal Emperor and returned? Impossible! This probability is even smaller than the chance that my dao partner's red apricot climbs over the wall!"

this immortal

Hiss! It's possible that person actually hit the nail on the head! I've heard of his title—the infamous Green‑Hat King of the Mo Shadow; he's the only one still kept in the dark.

Translate: "Hiss! It might actually be true what that person said! I've heard of his title—the famous Green Hat King of the Mo Shadow; he's the only one still kept in the dark!"

Before the crowd could finish being shocked, another cultivator discovered that a massive immortal‑ship array of a major power was speeding across the southern horizon's void.

Translate: Before the crowd could finish being shocked, another cultivator discovered that on the southern horizon's void, another major force's immortal ship array was speeding over.

This immortal‑ship formation isn't as huge as the previous force's—it consists of only six large immortal ships.

Translate: This immortal ship formation, compared to the previous force, isn't that massive—only six huge immortal ships.

Moreover, the lead immortal ship wasn't openly carrying a bell or a coffin, yet it still left countless Mo Shadow cultivators utterly shocked.

Translate: Moreover, atop the first immortal ship there was no openly carried bell or coffin, yet it still left countless Mo Shadow cultivators astonished!

They had become completely numb!

Translate: They have become completely numb!

It's because the incoming immortal‑ship fleet consists entirely of warships from the Mo Shadow's top sect, the Hongmeng Immortal Sect.

Translate: Because the incoming immortal ship formation consists entirely of the warships of the Mo Shadow's top sect, the Hongmeng Immortal Sect!

Thus! Apart from the Yun family, all of the Mo Shadow's major powers and the twelve great forces have now gathered!

Translate: Thus! Apart from the Yun family, all of the Mo Shadow's major forces and the twelve major powers have all arrived!

Holy crap! Today really wasn't a wasted trip! This is definitely a major historical moment! From today onward, the Mo Shadow's landscape will be completely reshuffled.

Translate: "Holy crap! Today really wasn't a wasted trip! Today is definitely a very important historical moment! From today onward, the pattern of our Mo Shadow will be reshuffled."

Note: Holy crap!

Yeah, this immortal doesn't even know what to say—can only utter two words: awesome!

Translate: "Yeah, this immortal doesn't even know what to say; can only say two words: awesome!"

Too fierce! The Yun immortal clan is looking to take on all of the Mo Shadow's major powers single‑handedly! Could it really be that the Green‑Hat King was right?

Translate: "Too fierce! The Yun Immortal Clan is looking to single-handedly take on all of our Mo Shadow's major forces! Could it really be that the Green Hat King was right?"

Soon after, inside the Yun family's small world.

Translate: Shortly after, within the Yun family's small world.

The warships of the three major powers and those of the twelve great forces all docked in the air above the central region of the Yun immortal clan.

Translate: The warships of the three major powers and the twelve major powers all docked in the airspace above the central region of the Yun Immortal Clan.

As far as the eye could see, below the Yun family there was no sign of the scene they had imagined; many Yun clan members were still going about their usual business.

Translate: As far as the eye could see, below in the Yun family there was no sign of the scene they had imagined; many Yun clan members were still going about their usual business.

Even in the central area, there were no Yun family experts standing ready; only two or three Yun slaves were leisurely sweeping the ground.

Translate: In the central area, there were no Yun family experts standing ready; only two or three Yun family slaves were leisurely sweeping the ground.

What is this? They completely don't even regard us.

Translate: What is this? They completely didn't put us in their eyes.

One of the sweeping slaves even looked at them with a gaze that said, "You've come to pay respects," then put down his broom, pointed behind him to the main immortal hall, and said, "Everyone, stop watching us sweep here; our clan leader and the others are already waiting for you inside the main immortal hall."

Translate: One of the sweeping slaves even looked at them with a gaze saying, "You came to pay respects," then put down his broom, pointed behind him to the main immortal hall, and said: "Everyone, stop watching us sweep here; our clan leader and the others are already waiting for you inside the main immortal hall."

After saying that simply, he picked up his broom again and started sweeping.

Translate: After saying that simply, he picked up his broom again and began sweeping.

「……」

Translate: "……"

We need to keep the ellipsis as is.

After seeing this, the spokespersons of all the major forces were speechless for a moment, then, escorted by their own experts, they flew out of their immortal ships.

Translate: After seeing this, the leaders of the major powers were speechless for a moment, then, escorted by their own strong cultivators, they flew out from their respective immortal ships.

Nine Yang God Master, you're our pillar—what should we do in this situation?

Translate: "Nine Yang God Master, you are our mainstay; in this situation, what should we do?"

Yeah, the Yun immortal clan is giving us a show of force, completely disregarding us.

Translate: "Yeah, the Yun Immortal Clan is giving us a show of force; they completely disregard us."

This is infuriating! Wherever our major powers go, we're admired by millions and welcomed by countless cultivators lining the streets, yet now we're treated like mere roadside weeds.

Translate: "Really infuriating! Wherever our major powers go, we are worshiped by tens of thousands, greeted by countless cultivators lining the roads; now we're treated like a roadside ditch."

The spokespersons of the remaining eleven major forces all gathered around the leader of the Nine Yang Immortal Sect, because the Nine Yang Immortal Sect is the strongest among the major forces and its leader, the Nine Yang God Master, has the highest cultivation among them.

Translate: The remaining eleven major powers' leaders all gathered around the lord of the Nine Yang Immortal Sect, because the Nine Yang Immortal Sect is the strongest among the major powers, and the Nine Yang God Master's cultivation is the highest among them.

The emperor knows you're anxious, but don't rush—just follow the plan we discussed that day.

Translate: "This Emperor knows you're anxious, but don't rush; just act according to the plan we discussed that day."

Note: Emperor knows.

This time the Yun immortal clan's main target is definitely the Mo imperial clan, the Mandate Empire, and the Hongmeng Immortal Sect—these three colossal powers; we just need to adapt to the situation, the Nine Yang God Master said, smoothing his robes and speaking lightly.

Translate: "This time the Yun Immortal Clan's main target is surely the Mo imperial clan, the Mandate Empire, and the Hongmeng Immortal Sect—these three colossal beings; we just need to adapt to circumstances," the Nine Yang God Master said, smoothing his robes, speaking lightly.

Basically, it's just one sentence: if the Yun family truly has a trump card to deal with the other three major powers, then we'll kneel… if it's just a bluff, heh, we'll get to enjoy their nice juice.

Translate: "In short, it's just one sentence: if the Yun family truly has a trump card to deal with the other three major powers, then we will kneel… if it's just a bluff, heh, we'll get to enjoy their fine juice."

kneel…

The Mandate Emperor and his group have arrived—come on, let's hurry and follow them.

Translate: "The Mandate Emperor and his entourage have arrived; let's hurry and follow."

At this moment, the lord of the Mo imperial clan, the Empty City God Master, led the clan's strong cultivators out slowly from the immortal vessel.

Translate: At this moment, the lord of the Mo imperial clan, the Empty City God Master, led the clan's strong cultivators, slowly flying out from their immortal vessel.

This procession is mighty, containing twenty high‑ranking elders of the Mo family; the grand elder, Mo Cangnan God Master, has reached the Ninth Heaven Peak, while the second and third elders, Mo Jiangbai and Mo Jiangxue, are both at the God Master Eightfold Realm, and the fourth and fifth elders, Mo Tianming and Mo Tianqing, are at the God Master Sevenfold Realm.

Translate: This procession is mighty, containing twenty high elders of the Mo family; the Grand Elder Mo Cangnan God Master has reached the Ninth Heaven Peak, the Second Elder Mo Jiangbai and Third Elder Mo Jiangxue are both at the God Master Eightfold Realm, while the Fourth Elder Mo Tianming and Fifth Elder Mo Tianqing are at the God Master Sevenfold Realm.

We need to use the glossary for God Master Eightfold Realm. Also need to translate the other realms: Ninth Heaven Peak. Actually the term for the Ninth Layer Peak Realm likely means "the Ninth Layer Peak Realm." We'll translate it as "Ninth Heaven Peak." For the term for the Sevenfold Realm → "Sevenfold Realm." We'll keep it consistent: God Master Sevenfold Realm? But the glossary only gave the eightfold version. We'll translate the others as "God Master Sevenfold Realm," etc.

Of the remaining fifteen elders, three are at the God Master Sixfold Realm, and the rest are at the God Master Fivefold Realm or lower.

Translate: Of the remaining fifteen elders, three are at the God Master Sixfold Realm, and the rest are at the God Master Fivefold Realm or below.

The Mo family's lineup is luxurious enough that even without their clan leader, Empty City, they could crush the Yun immortal clan—that's why they don't regard the Yun family at all.

Translate: The Mo family's lineup is luxurious enough; even without adding the clan chief Mo Empty City, it could crush the Yun Immortal Clan, which is why they don't regard the Yun family.

Could it be that all the Yun family members are dead? Hurry out and welcome them with the myriad‑cauldron bronze bell. The fifth elder, Mo Tianqing, raised the great bell with one hand and solemnly called out toward the Yun family's main immortal hall.

Translate: "Could it be that all the Yun family members have already perished? Quickly come out to welcome you with the myriad cauldrons bronze bell." Fifth Elder Mo Tianqing raised the great bell with one hand, and solemnly called toward the direction of the Yun family's main immortal hall.

Note: myriad cauldrons bronze bell.

At that moment, the lord of the Mandate Empire, the Mandate Emperor, and the lord of the Hongmeng Immortal Sect, the Hongmeng God Master, each led their retinues down from their warships.

Translate: At this time, the lord of the Mandate Empire, the Mandate Emperor, and the lord of the Hongmeng Immortal Sect, the Hongmeng God Master, each led their retinue, flying down from their war ships.

The Mandate Empire's top forces dispatched this time consist of fifteen Mandate Generals; in the empire they hold a rank equivalent to the Heavenly Light Envoys of the Bright God Kingdom, they are transcendent beings who obey only the Mandate Emperor, the Heavenly Strategy God Master, and their overall strength far surpasses that of the Heavenly Light Envoys.

Translate: The Mandate Empire's strongest forces this time consist of fifteen Mandate Generals; in the nation's hierarchy, a Mandate General equals the Heavenly Light Envoy of the Bright God Kingdom; they are transcendent beings, obeying only the Mandate Emperor, the Heavenly Strategy God Master, and their overall strength far surpasses the Heavenly Light Envoy.

Note: Mandate General, Bright God Kingdom, Heavenly Light Envoy, Mandate Emperor, the Heavenly Strategy God Master.

Among them, the senior general's cultivation is at the God Master Ninefold Realm, the second and third generals are at the God Master Eightfold Realm, the fourth and fifth generals are one at the God Master Sevenfold Realm and one at the God Master Sixfold Realm, while the remaining generals are at the God Master Fivefold Realm or lower.

Translate: Among them, the senior general's cultivation is at the God Master Ninefold Realm; the second and third generals are both at the God Master Eightfold Realm; the fourth and fifth generals are one at the God Master Sevenfold Realm and one at the God Master Sixfold Realm; the remaining generals are at the God Master Fivefold Realm or below.

Although the Mandate Empire's lineup is slightly inferior to the Mo family's, it is still very strong; placed on a weaker immortal continent like Azure Brush Immortal Continent, it could defeat the Bright God Kingdom several times over.

Translate: Although the Mandate Empire's lineup is slightly inferior to the Mo family's, it is still very strong; placed on the weakly blessed Qinghan Immortal Continent, it could defeat the Bright God Kingdom several times over.

Note: Azure Brush Immortal Continent.

Light God Master: Good good good, has my Emperor's Light God Kingdom become a measurer of strength and weakness?

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