Chapter 189: Taking a Short Break; Wait for Me to Go to the Dock and Get Some Fries to Settle My Thoughts
Taking a short break; wait for me to go to the dock and get some fries to settle my thoughts.
Today, a good brother author is coming to our place, saying he will cook and show off his skills; everyone has been buying all sorts of things since noon, carefully selecting a huge amount of dishes, and improving the kitchen supplies along the way.
All afternoon, I was busy with the gathering, cooking, and helping out with various tasks.
Plus, we are going out to stroll around tonight after the gathering, so I really have no time to type; sorry.
Just right, the fries will also take this time.
Tonight, I will think carefully about the character settings for the follow-up, because the controversy caused by the character Zhuge Yue seems quite large; brothers have mixed opinions about her (mostly negative).
Her positioning from start to finish was actually to stand on the opposite side of the protagonist; her existence will inevitably pose a threat to the stability the protagonist is pursuing at this stage.
If readers directly define her as a villain while reading, brothers might feel better about it.
It is just that maybe the fries wrote a bit vaguely before, making the development between her and the protagonist feel discordant; some brothers even feel that the segment where she first appeared would have been better if the protagonist had narrowly escaped from her hands in a life-threatening situation rather than making contact.
After reading everyone's evaluations, I am also thinking about these things.
Because this character plays a very important role in connecting the subsequent content.
The fries cannot just kill her off casually and skip this part.
Moreover, her strength was actually very high when she first appeared; without the foreshadowing of Wu Wang tricking a large number of Epic items, his own Eye of Prophecy prediction assistance, and the buff of immortality, if she were killed off casually, the collapse of combat power would be even more obvious.
Perhaps her mad behavior makes people dislike her a lot.
On this point, the fries apologize to everyone.
My writing is not very good, or the connection in the plot is not smooth enough; I cannot say I can fix these problems immediately to be very good and awesome.
After all, my ability is limited, and the fries have self-awareness; so please give the fries some time to improve.
Writing and plot conception are not things one can suddenly realize at Longchang (at least the fries does not think he is that kind of genius; I only have diligence to make up for lack of talent, writing more and learning more).
This character was originally very tragic.
In the process of Wu Wang killing Zhuge Yue, under the revelation of the content of the Pluto Research Institute, it is not hard to see that her madness has traces to follow.
A tragic character who can gain the recognition of the Grand Priest of Suffering and the approval of the Lord of Suffering.
Disgust, pain, torture.
These are traits she should possess.
I can only say that everyone dislikes the existence of this kind of character; the fries will remember this and try not to create similar character settings in the following content.
After all, I am an eighteen-year-old new author.
There might be a tiny bit of deviation in age, but for the path of web novels, the fries is indeed still a newcomer.
Just as I said in my remarks upon the book going on sale.
The original intention of this book was to make everyone happy; in the future, the fries will also put more energy into creating fun and being a fun-seeker.
Alright, that's it.
Nothing to do today; go to the brothel to listen to songs.
Let's go to the dock and get some fries!
End of Chapter
