Chapter 167: 167. Postscript on the Completion of the Book

167. Postscript on the Completion of the Book

Postscript on the Completion of the Book

Some book friends say the ending was rushed, but Peach Blossom Su does not think so, because whether it is the world-building or the plot, everything is complete.

But as for whether Peach Blossom Su is satisfied with this work, the answer is definitely no.

This book was started rather impulsively, so the initial creation was also carried out with an impatient mood, to the extent that the foundation was unstable.

Thus, once the speed picked up, it became difficult to slow down again.

If it had slowed down, it would have become watery and dragging, and a whole chapter would have given people the feeling that "what is written is not what they want to read."

So after realizing this, Peach Blossom Su did not slow down, did not make it watery, and certainly did not slack off; instead, every chapter pushed the plot and opened up the world-building, while also ensuring the sense of satisfaction.

At the very least, although the story was fast, every step was paced tightly; it could be said that "there was not a single chapter that did not push the plot."

At the very least, did you not see that the protagonist's personality did not change drastically? At the very least, even at the end, the protagonist remained cautious and steady, patiently developing, yet still capable of a fatal strike at critical moments, right? Whether it was how he handled Jilei Mountain, Xuanqing Temple, or Changsheng Villa, even though the plot speed increased, the protagonist remained consistent throughout, right? Some book friends felt that part suddenly sped up, but there were also book friends who felt the quality there suddenly improved.

As for the character designs being stereotypical.

The protagonist has a total of six women.

Tong Niangzi, you remember her, right? An Chenyu, she is recognizable, right?

Su Ningyu, the little fox pretending to be mature.

Su Mengzhen, no need to say anything, right? Lian Chanxi, the description was on the sparse side, and the recognizability was on the low side.

Jing Shifei, she did not give people the feeling that it was inconsistent with the persona of a big shot like the Vice Palace Master of Xuanqing Palace, right? As for Ling'er and Ying'er, they are also recognizable; Long Miaoyin was added at the end to round out the numbers—at that point, it was no longer about collecting women, but about completing the world.

I didn't slack off, right?

As for the settings. Everything was accounted for, and all the plot holes were filled, whether it was the "Avici Hell," the "Ghost Tower," or things like the "Nine Yin Nine Yang" that were only rarely mentioned in between—they shouldn't have made you feel like it was a "deus ex machina, randomly made up," right?

The logical progression of the Heaven Earth Profound Yellow power system is also reasonable, right? For this book, Peach Blossom Su truly put in a lot of effort.

But upon realizing that the foundation was unstable and difficult to maintain, Peach Blossom Su still tried his best to continue weaving the story earnestly.

This was like building something wonderful within the limits of my ability on a high-rise with an already unstable foundation.

Perhaps you agree, perhaps you hold a dissenting opinion.

But this book is indeed complete, and it had some small interactions with the book *Longevity Starts from a Hunter* to a certain extent, such as the "Distorted Sea" and "A Ting"—these are all things that can be corresponded.

To the disappointed book friends, Peach Blossom Su sincerely says "I'm sorry" to you.

But, I really tried my best.

I really tried my best.

In short, Peach Blossom Su has learned from the pain, and this time I am not in a rush to start a new book; I will spend some time using my own understanding to build the story well, to polish and combine the world, power, character designs, and satisfying points, and then find an interesting entry point to write a story that I am satisfied with.

Telling stories and writing novels is something Peach Blossom Su truly loves to do.

And it is destined to be a lifelong hobby.

Finally, thank you for reading, thank you! Thank you!! (End of this chapter)