Chapter 385: 386. October Summary

October Summary

Throughout October, there were 221.64 in tips. Last month we had 72.29 in tips, totaling 293.93 yuan in tips. The cumulative amount is not enough for 333, so there will be no extra updates for tips this month (^v^).

Encountered some small problems this month.

Because I wrote too fast and kept repeating in constant thinking, it led to the plot in the middle and late October being a bit messy.

Many readers have a point of view when reading my book, which is why I write so many stories about supporting characters, and they keep leaving feedback, hoping to see more of the protagonist and less of the supporting characters.

Some readers expressed strong dissatisfaction by leaving comments like "I spent money to see the protagonist, not other characters," so this caused me to consider whether I should reduce the content of others and increase the description from the protagonist's perspective.

Plus everyone kept adding tickets, constantly updating, writing 20,000 words a day at most, and the average weekly update volume was over 16,000 words per day.

Writing too much and too fast, plus I didn't think through some problems better, caused some lack of details.

I have thought about it carefully now; the rhythm cannot be messed up.

Not messing up the rhythm is divided into two parts. First, I will continue to write according to my method. It is possible that there will be more promotion of other characters and plots than now. I am always telling myself not to be influenced, but the result was still influenced.

This time I will pretend not to see those comments that affect my rhythm.

Second, try to add fewer updates so that I have more time to think about the plot and writing style, making everything smoother and more comfortable.

At the same time, I also need to let games heal my soul. The game I downloaded for National Day hasn't been finished yet; I'm about to get depressed.

Regarding the explanation of the two plots, it was mentioned earlier. I thought about it seriously; it is indeed as everyone said, lacking some more detailed plot foreshadowing and promotion. When there is time later, I will see if there is a way to revise it and fill in the missing things.

But the main body of the plot will not change. If you have read the recent chapters, you will find that some foreshadowing or details must be described by describing other things, or rather, the obvious promotion of the overall plot.

For example, Duofu ran back to Sumuli Island, which is obviously the cause of the "Sumuli Chapter"; for example, writing some background about Imperial soldiers assassinating Luoyiji, this is the foreshadowing for the subsequent "Imperial Chapter."

But if I don't write these and suddenly go to promote the plot, wanting this and that, everyone will feel confused.

But if I write it, some people will say, I want to see the protagonist, I don't want to see this.

So this is the contradiction point, but now I will no longer consider adopting these suggestions; I am not very suitable for the writing method of putting the camera on the protagonist's face.

Gangster stories are actually not easy to write. We always think of many cool plot stories, but that is only a very small part.

Most of the time, gangster stories are dull because they are either doing bad things or just spacing out.

And where are there so many bad things to do?

Most of the time, they are still spacing out.

Besides that, I also encountered some trouble in the writing process, such as the intervention of mysterious forces, which caused many plots to deviate from my previous design.

We like to watch some gangster TV series and gangster movies, feeling they are very exciting, because they take the most exciting part of the development process of a gang, or even multiple gangs, and blend them together.

And these stories are not long; maybe each season is just telling one story, and looking at it as a whole, it just told a few stories.

But novels are different; we can't keep writing "a few months later," "a few years later," so we have to add more stories to promote it as a whole.

I will find a way to add more interesting plots to promote the development of the world.

Yes, it is the development of the world; the whole world is changing...

Some readers asked how much is left of the New Jincheng chapter. Actually, it is already halfway through. Lans still has a few goals to achieve before the second chapter will start.

The New Jincheng chapter is not the end of the Federation chapter, but just the beginning of the Federation chapter. Actually, if someone has a good memory, they will remember that when introducing the environment at the beginning, it was said that the five major families of New Jincheng are just gang organizations with some influence in Likailai State and the southeastern part of the Federation.

But in the entire Federation, they can't even enter the top 10, so this is just the New Jincheng chapter.

How many words can this book write?

Not very clear; I actually don't want to write much, but the story must be told, whether it is a good story or a bad story.

This time there shouldn't be 10 million, no, shouldn't be, shouldn't be, best not! -

Update problem-

The current plan is still to maintain 2 updates of 10,000 words per day until the end. As for whether there will be changes later, becoming more or less, it is not very clear.

Maybe one day when the depression hits, I will update less 【doge】-

Basically that's it.

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