Chapter 396

At that moment, Shen Qingli, who agreed with what Zhan Yuefeng had said, revealed his own plan.

Translation: At that time, Shen Qingli, who agreed with Zhan Yuefeng's words, spoke of her own plan.

We need to keep punctuation? Keep as is.

Tianqing Laozu immediately rejected it, saying, "You can't go. It's not like before; back then, Heaven hadn't yet turned against you and dared to strike. If you go now, aren't you just walking into danger?"

Translation: Ancestor Tianqing immediately vetoed, "You cannot go. It's not like before; back then they hadn't torn faces, and Heaven dared to strike at you, but now going again would be like delivering food to your door!"

We need to keep quotes. Use English quotes.

Shen Qinghuang said, "I agree with the elder." He also objected, saying it's too dangerous, "Unless you bring my older brother along."

Translation: "I agree with the old master." Shen Qinghuang also disagreed, it's too dangerous, "Unless you bring my older brother me."

But need to be natural: "I agree with the old master." Shen Qinghuang also disagreed, it's too dangerous: "Unless you bring my older brother with me."

Let's craft: "I agree with the old master." Shen Qinghuang also disagreed, it's too dangerous: "Unless you bring my older brother with me."

"Nonsense!" Tianqing Laozu snatched his hemp shoe and smacked Shen Qinghuang! He may not strike little girls, but that doesn't mean he won't beat a troublemaker.

Translation: "Nonsense!" Ancestor Tianqing whipped out a hemp shoe and smacked Shen Qinghuang! He just doesn't hit little girls, but that doesn't mean he won't beat a rascal.

We need to keep exclamation.

Shen Qinghuang almost burst into tears…

Translation: Shen Qinghuang almost couldn't help crying…

We need to keep ellipsis.

Zhan Yuefeng, however, was already divining, obviously seriously carrying out Shen Qingli's plan.

Translation: Zhan Yuefeng, however, was already divining, apparently seriously "implementing" Shen Qingli's plan.

Should we keep quotation marks around the word 'execute'? The Chinese term is 'execute', and we will keep the quotes.

Shen Qingli asked, "How?" Regardless, she would still go.

Translation: "How?" Shen Qingli asked for the result, but no matter what, she would still go.

She would also carefully note Zhan Yuefeng's divination to avoid certain dangers.

Translation: But she would also carefully record Zhan Yuefeng's divination to avoid certain dangers.

However, "Great luck,"

Translation: However, "Great luck,"

Zhan Yuefeng was also perplexed by this divination result.

Translation: Zhan Yuefeng was also full of confusion about this divination result.

At least give me a lucky break?

Translation: At least give me something that turns misfortune into fortune?

How could going to Yunhe Island possibly involve no danger? That would be sheer luck!

Translation: Going to Cloud Harmony Island, how could there be no danger, yet it's great luck?

"I suspect that the heavenly secrets are blocking me somehow."

Translation: "I suspect the Heavenly Secrets have been shielding me in some way."

Zhan Yuefeng wants to try again, but he keeps feeling that something is wrong.

Translation: Zhan Yuefeng wanted to try again, always feeling something was off.

But Shen Qingli had already stood up and said, "No need, this is urging me to go right away."

Translation: But Shen Qingli had already stood up and said, "No need, this is urging me to go immediately."

No sooner had she spoken than she vanished.

Translation: As soon as her words fell, she vanished.

She feared that Tianqing Laozu would stop her, and also that Shen Qinghuang would follow.

Translation: Fearful that Ancestor Tianqing would stop her, and also fearful that Shen Qinghuang would follow.

Tianqing Laozu grew anxious, saying, "No! No one can get in—how could you go?"

Translation: Ancestor Tianqing grew anxious, "No! Nobody can get in, how are you going?"

"Don't worry, I'll find a way." Shen Qingli's voice transmission spread in all directions, making it impossible to tell where it came from.

Translation: "Don't worry, I'll have a way." Shen Qingli's voice transmission scattered, making it impossible to discern direction.

Shen Qinghuang rubbed his swollen shoulder and said, "I knew I couldn't stop you, so I let my little sister bring me along, yet you still hit me—now it's fine, but I'm even more worried."

Translation: Shen Qinghuang rubbed his swollen shoulder, "I knew I couldn't stop you, so I let my little sister bring me along, yet you hit me—now it's fine, but I'm even more worried."

"Going might not necessarily help." Zhan Yuefeng said, his face still somewhat pale.

Translation: "You going might not actually help." Zhan Yuefeng said, his face still somewhat pale.

Divining the heavenly secrets consumes a great deal of divine power, even lifespan, even if he is healthy now.

Translation: Divining the Heavenly Secrets, even if he is healthy now, consumes a great deal of divine power, even lifespan.

However, before him lay a superb-quality Yuanlingzhi, evidently left by Shen Qingli to nourish his body.

Translation: However, before him lay a stalk of primordial spirit lingzhi of excellent quality, obviously left by Shen Qingli to nourish his body.

Yunhe Island.

Translation: Cloud Harmony Island.

Shen Qingli spun around at high speed but found no loophole.

Translation: Shen Qingli spun around at extreme speed, finding no loophole.

Yu Jia had already been saying, "This must be a seal that can only be opened from the inside out."

Translation: Yu Jia was already saying, "This must be a seal that can only be opened from the inside out."

"Shall we try tearing it open by force?" Jiu Ying asked, feeling confident in his strength.

Translation: "Shall we try tearing it open by force?" Jiu Ying asked, now full of confidence in his strength.

Jiu Li gave him a white eye, saying, "You think it's an eggshell? That easy to tear open?"

Translation: Jiu Li gave him a white-eye, "Do you think this is an eggshell? That easy to tear?"

"It's not that difficult; I should be able to." Yu Jia said.

Translation: "It's not that hard; I should be able to." Yu Jia said.

Jiu Ying immediately mocked, "Hey, you fat lump, hear me! From now on, you can call me Ninth Lord, and I'll agree."

Translation: Jiu Ying immediately mocked, "Hey, you dead fatty, hear me? From now on, if you call me Ninth Lord, I'll agree."

"You're asking for a beating, right?" Jiu Li thought, this rebellious younger brother hasn't been beaten in a while; he's itching for a fight, wanting to climb onto the roof and tear off tiles.

Translation: "You're asking for a beating, huh?" Jiu Li thought, this rebellious disciple hasn't been beaten in a while, seems itchy, wants to raise hell.

But it also knows now is not the time, after all Yu Jia said he'd do it and just did, already tearing a hole with his bare wings!

Translation: But it also knew now wasn't the time, after all Yu Jia said he'd do it and just did, already tearing a hole with his bare wings!

"Go!" Shen Qingli used the spatial power of the Panzu Stone to shrink himself, pattering in.

Translation: "Go!" Shen Qingli used the spatial power of the Pan Ancestor Stone, shrinking herself, and went in with a "pitter-patter".

Yu Jia exclaimed, "Ah Li, your comprehension is really good—you can fuse with the Panzu Stone this quickly! This isn't something bloodline can help you with!"

Translation: Yu Jia exclaimed, "A Li, your comprehension is excellent, you've already merged with the Pan Ancestor Stone this quickly! This isn't something bloodline can help you with!"

Shen Qingli, now as small as it, felt embarrassed from the praise and scratched his head, returning to normal size.

Translation: Shen Qingli, now as small as it, scratched her head embarrassedly from the praise, then returned to normal size.

The other two were also just released by her from the Yuanling Realm, but looking at Jiu Ying, he already has a head full of bumps…

Translation: The other two had also just been released by her from the Primordial Spirit Realm, but seeing Jiu Ying already covered in bumps…

Obviously, in "this bit of skill," Jiu Li has already accomplished the feat of training his younger brothers.

Translation: Evidently, in this bit of time, Jiu Li had already accomplished the feat of training his younger brothers.

However, Shen Qingli had just barely managed to suppress a laugh when his heart suddenly ached.

Translation: But Shen Qingli had just couldn't help laughing when her heart suddenly ached!

Her face instantly turned ashen, she nearly fainted, her breath became disordered, and she was instantly spotted by the patrolling Hezu guards.

Translation: Her face instantly turned deathly pale, she nearly fainted, her breath became disordered, and instantly she was discovered by the Harmony Clan's patrol guards.

"Whoosh!"

Translation: "Whoosh!"

"Whoosh whoosh……"

Translation: "Whoosh whoosh……"

Among the swiftly arriving guards, there was actually a middle-aged man from the Hezu clan's direct line who carried a divine ring!

Translation: Among the patrol guards that flashed in instantly, there was even a middle-aged man of the Harmony Clan's direct line who carried a divine ring!

It can be seen that the seal and patrol arranged by Heaven and the Mother of Battle this time are extremely tight and thorough.

Translation: It shows that the seal and patrol arranged by Heaven and the Mother of Harmony this time are extremely tight and thorough.

However, encountering someone like Shen Qingli, an anomaly, the guards arrived quickly, but she disappeared even faster.

Translation: But encountering someone like Shen Qingli, an oddity, the guards came fast, yet she "vanished" even faster.

However, the guards, having experience, couldn't help but ask, "Just now there was clearly movement here, yet no one—could it be Shen Qingli?"

Translation: However, the guards, having experience, couldn't help asking, "Just now there was clearly movement here, yet no one—could it be Shen Qingli?"

Last time, Shen Qingli stirred up the Yunhe Realm into extraordinary liveliness, which everyone still remembers, so everyone now knows she has the ability to vanish in place, making her untraceable.

Translation: Last time, Shen Qingli stirred up the Cloud Harmony Realm into being "extraordinarily lively," which everyone still remembers, so they all know she has the ability to vanish in place, making her impossible to catch.

"No." Hezhongchuan, the leader of the Heavenly God Clan, is quite certain.

Translation: "No." He Zhongchuan, the leader of the Heavenly Gods of Harmony, was quite certain.

Because, as a core member of the Hezu clan, he clearly knows that the seal of the Yunhe Realm inherently contains a warning that detects Shen Qingli's aura.

Translation: Because, as a core member of the Harmony Clan, he clearly knows that the seal of the Cloud Harmony Realm itself carries a warning to identify Shen Qingli's aura!

Just now, if the person who entered was truly Shen Qingli, the entire seal would have sounded an alarm.

Translation: Earlier, if the person who entered really was Shen Qingli, the entire seal would have sounded an alarm.

But that aura was all messed up like that, and the seal gave no warning, at least indicating that the comer was not Shen Qingli.

Translation: But that aura was all messed up, and the seal gave no warning, at least indicating the comer wasn't Shen Qingli.

"Step up the patrol! And notify the inner-circle seal guards to watch the points; an unidentified intruder has broken in." Hezhongchuan ordered.

Translation: "Step up the patrol! And notify the guards of the inner-circle seal to watch their posts—an unidentified intruder has broken in." He Zhongchuan ordered.

But they didn't know that while the Hezu clan was guarding against Shen Qingli, Shen Qingli was also being more cautious! She entered this time constantly using the Panzu Stone to shroud herself, achieving concealment, even disguise.

Translation: But they didn't know, the Harmony Clan was guarding against Shen Qingli, and Shen Qingli was even more cautious! This time she entered, she had constantly shrouded herself with the Pan Ancestor Stone to achieve concealment, even disguise.

Just that moment, though, was unexpected!

Translation: Just that moment, though it was sudden!

But Shen Qingli also didn't forget to disguise her aura…

Translation: But Shen Qingli hadn't forgotten to disguise her aura…

Therefore, the more they target her, the more they will be led astray.

Translation: So, the more they target her, the more they'll be led astray.

However, within the Yuanling Realm, several beasts were worried and asked, "Ah Li, what's wrong with you again?"

Translation: However, inside the Primordial Spirit Realm, the few beasts were worried and asked, "A Li, what's wrong with you again?"

"Does the Yunhe Realm restrain you? Why do you always come and seem not to be at your best?" Jiu Li also gave a conclusion from a metaphysical perspective.

Translation: "Does the Cloud Harmony Realm restrain you? Why do you always come and seem not to be at your best?" Jiu Li also gave a conclusion from a metaphysical standpoint.

Yu Jia also thought of a problem that might not yet be completely resolved: "Is the love curse still present?"

Translation: Yu Jia then thought of a problem that perhaps hadn't been eradicated, "Is the love curse still there?"

"Ah?" Jiu Li slapped the bump on little Ying's head, hurting him so he grimaced, "I didn't bring Ji Zhongwen. Ah, bah, that thing, not……

Translation: "Ah?" Jiu Li patted the bump on little Ying's head, hurting him so he grimaced, "I didn't bring Ji Zhongwen. Bah, that thing, not……"

My meaning is, we should have earlier let Di Jin's father arrange for them to meet first, at least solve the curse problem first.

"Not this problem." Shen Qingli had already recovered, "It's fine, Li Li might be right, this place is a bit restraining for me."

That just now was extremely uncomfortable!

It felt as if my heart had suddenly ripped open.

But after she examined herself inwardly, her heart was fine.

As for the love curse, I have to say, the Primordial Thunder Tribulation is a good thing; it basically cleared it out, and now it doesn't affect her much.

With her spiritual power continually self-healing and purifying, after some time it will be able to dispel itself.

But her heart still feels very uncomfortable.

Forget about it, let's go out.

Even if something is off, it's definitely the Heavenly Old Demoness meddling; striking straight at her lair is sure to work.

Shen Qingli eased her discomfort, then went out again with the little beast that acknowledged her, and just then——

It was precisely when Hetian Doumu was seizing Zhong Minglan's body on Penglai Island! However, Hetian Doumu thought, with her realm of beating Zhong Minglan senseless, this body seizure would absolutely be as easy as when she seized Cang Cong, as simple as drinking water.

Almost at the instant she sensed something was wrong! That is, before Hetian Doumu even spoke, she underwent Nirvana.

So, just as Hetian Doumu finished speaking, Zhong Minglan's sea of consciousness had already ignited!

Hetian Doumu's voice suddenly changed, 'How is that possible!'

The Heaven-fighting Mother's voice suddenly changed, "How could it be!"