Chapter 504: with translation of chapter title
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Our: "At the same time, Shen Qingli was educating the cub."
is a Matches line, not an Original. So we don't need to output 【4】 because it's not an original line? The instruction: "Output EXACTLY one line per item as: 【N】
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Our: "\"No more next time, understand? \""
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Our: "Shen Qingli was really afraid just now that those powerful ones might give the little guy a blow."
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Our: "Xiao Xiao Li nestled in his father's embrace, not really understanding, \"Ah? \""
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Our: "\"You'll get beaten by bad people; Mom and Dad might not be able to attend to you right away, then you'll get hurt. \""
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Our: "\"Ah! \" Xiao Xiao Li raised his little fist, clearly expressing that he wasn't afraid! He would strike back."
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Our: "Shen Qingli practically had a headache, \"What if you can't win? You're so small, they're so big, and you only have one. \""
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Our: "Xiao Xiao Li immediately patted his little belly, little stars faintly appearing~"
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Our: "Di Jin then said to him, \"What's the point of talking back? Just listen to your mother. \""
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Our: "\"Ah~\" Xiao Xiao Li hugged his little hands, indicating he understood."
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Our: "Shen Qingli, however, felt he didn't understand, and had already glared at Di Jin."
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Our: "\"It's not what your father said; Mother is afraid something might happen to you, even if you're very capable, but what if? So unless Mother and Father bring you along, you can't go play by yourself. \" Shen Qingli was truly frightened."
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Our: "\"Ah ya~\" Xiao Xiao Li stretched out his little chubby hand, hugged Mother~"
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Our: "Shen Qingli took him into her embrace, kissed his tender face, \"You see, Mom and Dad just now weren't their whole selves coming over; they just released a bit of aura to scare people. \""
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Our: "That way, even if a villain wanted to hit, they couldn't. You're different—you came over entirely, not something you can hit with just one strike."
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Our: "Xiao Xiao Li sort of understood, but didn't hurt to nuzzle Mother~"
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??? Actually after 【49】 Check, we see a block of commentary lines starting with 【51】 Given the context... These are not Original lines. So we skip.
Given the instruction to be faithful, we should not change meaning. Let's try to translate literally: "Xiao Xiao Li seemed to half-understand, but it wouldn't hurt to guess he was nuzzling Mother~". That seems awkward but literal.
It wouldn't hurt to guess that he's nuzzling Mother.
It wouldn't hurt to guess that he's nuzzling Mother.
Given the difficulty, maybe we should keep a more natural translation that captures the sense: "but it wouldn't hurt to nuzzle Mother~". Many translations of similar lines in xianxia use that. I'll go with that, as it's likely intended.
Thus our translation is acceptable.
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Our: "Shen Qingli gently stroked his back, then looked at Di Jin; although she didn't blame him, she was certain it was because this guy had thrown something once, making the little cub so \"familiar with the terrain. \""
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Di Jin: … – fine.
Our: "Di Jin: ……"
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Feeling guilty, he could only hold onto the mother and child, making a fuss.
Our: "Feeling guilty, he could only embrace Mother and the little one together in a fuss."
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Our: "At that moment, Jiu Li had already returned, leisurely."
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Our: "But he didn't get too close, instead shouting from afar, \"Oi~ We're fine, can we come back? \""
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"Ah!" Xiao Xiao Li jumped excitedly, and Shen Qingli almost couldn't hold him! – fine.
Our: "\"Ah! \" Xiao Xiao Li jumped excitedly, Shen Qingli almost couldn't hold onto him!"
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Emperor's Ash handed the baby to her and gently patted its little bottom, saying, "Your legs are so strong, yet you're not being careful—you'll fall again soon."
Our: "Di Jin then handed the cub over to her, and gently patted the cub's little bottom, \"With such strong legs, you should still be careful, or you'll fall again later. \""
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Our: "Xiao Xiao Li didn't mind, already waving at Jiu Li, \"Ah ee ya~\""
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"Come here." Shen Qingli also called out. – fine.
Our: "\"Come over. \" Shen Qingli also shouted."
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Only then did Nine Li come over hopping, and Little Li waved at it.
Our: "Jiu Li then hopped over, and Xiao Xiao Li waved his hands at it."
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Our: "It jumped into the little guy's embrace, and said freely, \"We've already set things up according to that diagram; what next, what should we do? \""
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"We can go back now." Di Jin looked around, confirming they had indeed set everything up, and it was done quickly. – fine.
Our: "\"We can go back. \" Di Jin looked around, confirming they had indeed set things up, and quite quickly."
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"Can't we watch?" Nine Li also wanted to broaden his horizons.
Our: "\"Can't we watch? \" Jiu Li still wanted to broaden his horizons a bit."
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"Take Xiao Xiao Li back." Shen Qingli instructed. – fine.
Our: "\"Take Xiao Xiao Li back. \" Shen Qingli instructed."
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Upon hearing that, the little one became unhappy, tightly gripping his father's clothes, and cried "Ah!" – fine.
Our: "Upon hearing that, the little guy was unhappy, tightly gripping his father's collar, \"Ah! \""
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Our: "\"No. \" Shen Qingli said sternly, \"This matter is very important; you being here would distract your father and mother's attention, so you must go back with Li Li and wait together with Grandpa, Grandma, and Grandma. \""
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"……" The little one's eyes reddened and filled with tears. – fine.
Our: "\"... \" The little guy's eye sockets reddened, his big eyes filling with a misty haze."
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Our: "Jiu Li was stunned! No, do tears just come and go like that?"
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Shen Qingli never expected him to react like this, already cupping his tender face and saying, "Don't cry." – fine.
Our: "Shen Qingli hadn't expected him to react like this, already cupping his tender face, \"Don't cry. \""
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The little one no longer wanted Jiu Li, instead throwing himself into his mother's embrace, tightly hugging her neck and rubbing against it. – fine.
Our: "The little guy no longer wanted Jiu Li, throwing himself into Mother's embrace, tightly clutching her neck and rubbing against her neck~"
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Our: "Shen Qingli's heart was about to melt from the rubbing; the father and son really are experts at winning her over."
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"Let him stay." Di Jin also said. – fine.
Our: "\"Let him stay. \" Di Jin also said."
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Shen Qingli almost hit him! – fine.
Our: "Shen Qingli almost hit him!"
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Is this a matter of principle? – fine.
Our: "Is this kind of thing principled?"
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Di Jin didn't want to spoil things either. – fine.
Our: "Di Jin originally didn't want to spoil the scene either."
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But, "He just appeared with us earlier; if left below, he'd be discovered, which would actually be dangerous." – fine.
Our: "But, \"He just appeared with us a moment ago; if left there, he'd be discovered, which would actually be dangerous. \""
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Shen Qingli frowned, and Di Jin smoothed her brow, saying, "Don't worry, Xiao Xiao Li won't lose his way; running away should be his strength. Haven't you noticed he's adept at moving through space?" – fine.
Our: "Shen Qingli frowned, and Di Jin smoothed her brow, \"Don't worry, Xiao Xiao Li won't forget; running away should be his forte. Haven't you noticed he's adept at moving through space? \""
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This is a skill he had already shown while in the womb. – fine.
Our: "This skill had already been displayed while he was in the womb."
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Otherwise, how could Shen Qingli have instantly returned from the Boundless Mountain Range to the Hua
Our: "Otherwise, how could Shen Qingli have instantly returned from the Boundless Mountains to the Huaxu Palace?"
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"I'll watch over him." Di Jin also said, and naturally scooped the cub back into his embrace.
Our: "\"I'll watch over him. \" Di Jin also said, and naturally scooped the cub back into his embrace."
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The little one also obediently clung to his father, "Ah~"
Our: "The little guy also obediently clung to his father, \"Ah~\""
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"I'll come along too." Jiu Li jumped back into the little one's embrace, "A Li, don't worry, I'll always be by Xiao Xiao Li's side."
Our: "\"I, I'll come along too. \" Jiu Li jumped back into the little guy's embrace, \"A Li, rest assured, I will always be by Xiao Xiao Li's side. \""
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"Muma~" Xiao Xiao Li had already kissed it.
Our: "\"Muma~\" Xiao Xiao Li had already kissed it."
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Jiu Li also rubbed the little one's head.
Our: "Jiu Li also rubbed the little guy's head~"
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"Here I come." Di Jin looked toward the void.
Our: "\"Here we come. \" Di Jin gazed into the void."
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At the same time, he had already carried the little one over the barrier set up by Jiu Li and the others.
Our: "At the same time, he had already held the little guy and crossed over the restriction set up by Jiu Li and the others."
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Golden mist surged into the barely-there barrier, like a vast net covering the heavens, enveloping the Three Pure Realms.
Our: "Golden mist surged into the barely-there restriction, like a vast heavenly net! Enveloping the Three Pure Universe."
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This net protects the Three Pure Realms from impact and shelters countless beings within them.
Our: "This net protects the Three Pure Universe from impact, and also shelters the myriad beings of the Three Pure."
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Shen Qingli then recalled Feather Jia and the others, and also ordered Emperor Hao and the True Monarch Yuanwu to return to the Taiqing Palace.
Our: "Shen Qingli then recalled Yu Jia and the others, and also had Emperor Hao and True Lord Yuanwu return to the Taiqing Palace."
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Shen Kuo, Zhong Minglan, and others had already arranged the affairs of the Three Pure Worlds and were waiting in the Taiqing Palace.
Our: "Shen Kuo, Zhong Minglan, and the others had also arranged the affairs of the Three Pure World, waiting inside the Taiqing Palace."
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This place is the highest point nearest to Shen Qingli and them.
Our: "Here is the highest point nearest to Shen Qingli and company."
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"Is Xiao Xiao Li not coming back?" Zhong Minglan also asked.
Our: "\"Won't Xiao Xiao Li come back? \" Zhong Minglan also asked."
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"Don't worry, they know what they're doing." Emperor Hao replied.
Our: "\"Don't worry, they know what they're doing. \" Emperor Hao replied."
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"Come, eat some melon seeds." Yuanwu True Lord gave everyone melon seeds.
Shen Kuo only felt this scene was somewhat familiar, but the one who shared melon seeds last time was Jiu Li.
Before he could recall and feel, on the Taiqing Dian, a stream of blue light surged from the void and descended!
Just this light already dyed the heavenly capital of the Taiqing Dian blue!
But if not for them having their Dao eyes opened by Di Hao's talisman, they could not see this light at all.
Therefore, aside from those who knew a bit of the inside story, all beings of the Three Pure Realm continued to live and work in peace.
"Surely we can win?" Shen Yuan felt a bit worried, the enemy's momentum was fierce!
And this is only the beginning.
A stream of white light descended like the sun at high noon.
Gu Laotou and Bai Laoyu arrived in person.
The Supreme Team that had set out earlier was also brought here by them in a single group.
Moreover, rolling white waves and black surges have already broken through the dull chaos and poured in.
Truly coming from all directions, they surround and lock the Three Pure Realm, you know.
At this moment, the obviously vast border of the Three Pure Realm was already crowded with countless silhouettes.
After all, the ten Supremes who came earlier didn't arrive empty-handed; they naturally brought their elite venerables under command, you know.
Now, the elites of Primordial Heaven and Dao Heaven have also arrived, layered out, and they actually managed to block the entire border of the Illusory Vast Realm.
But if they tried to go further, they couldn't; a barrier that seemed nonexistent stopped them.
Gu Laotou frowned, "Tai Li, what trick are you up to again? Didn't you call us here, then make these prohibitions for what?"
These words were actually giving Yuan Shi and Dao Feng a strengthening heart pill, so they'd understand! If this person truly wasn't afraid of them, why bother stopping them from going further?
In fact, those two felt much more relieved!
Not fearing being blocked! But fearing not being blocked, that would really show they're waiting for them to walk into the trap.
Shen Qingli looked at them; none were familiar, all were strange faces.
They were also looking at Shen Qingli, and their gazes were all fiery!
Because this was the first time they saw her clearly.
She, who had fallen from the divine altar, was indeed beautiful and not frightening.
"Your Majesty..."
Dao Feng murmured, then looked at the man holding her hand, standing beside her, and the child in his arms.
This child, he recalled! It was exactly that little fatty he had seen not long ago, this...
"You got married and had a child!"
"How could you get married?"
"You actually had a child, hah!"
Dao Feng only found it laughable! The slightest fear and apprehension in his heart were completely gone.
"If you'd said earlier you wanted to marry and have a child, I could have devoted myself to help you; why seek outside such an insignificant little nobody."
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