ongoingTransmigrated to Douluo Continent, becoming the Pope Qian Qianji with the same name. But Qian Qianji couldn't feel happy, knowing he would later be gravely wounded by Tang Hao's hammer and killed by Bi Bi Dong. Just then, it arrived—the Many Sons, Many Blessings System. 【Ding, congratulations host, you have obtained a 100,000-year soul ring.】 【Ding, congratulations host, you have obtained the twin martial spirit Chaos Azure Lotus.】 【Ding, congratulations host, you have obtained the Steel Body.】 【Ding, congratulations host, you have obtained……】 Bi Bi Dong: 「Qian Qianji, let me go...」 Old book: (Doupo: Reborn as Ice Emperor Hai Bodong, Many Sons, Many Blessings). Check punctuation: The system lines: we used "you have obtained". Could also be "obtained". Keep natural. Make sure each line ends with appropriate punctuation: first line ends with period. second line period. third line ends with period? Actually "Just then, it arrived